There's garbage MTL, and then there's whatever the hell this is. This is on another level.

EDIT: Apparently this coomer forgot he already did this book four years ago…

https://e-hentai.org/g/1625980/320e98931c/

That other translation wasn't great, but it's still better than this one.

Also, what's with the second account…?

Last edited on 02 March 2024, 13:15.

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at IngmarS ok first of all i lost the email and password to that account, second others complained about to old one translation so i used ichigoreader witch both from what i hear and what i have seen it is really good i could have cleaned it up but i decide not to, and although you say this translation bad it is more readable than a lot of light novels and some manga's i have read, and if you have such a good MTL'er than do your own translation of this and don't clean it up so we can see how good it is i sometimes see two to four versions in the same language of some books so it won't be a problem

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If by "more readable" you mean "the sentence structure is generally grammatically correct" then sure, but that doesn't really change the fact that half the text is utter nonsense with no connection to what's happening.

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This was like trying to read with a head injury my god

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why translate something already translated, but poorly?

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What would compel you to upload a version that's even worse than the first attempt? Are you actually illiterate?

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"and if you have such a good MTL'er than do your own translation of this and don't clean it up so we can see how good it is"

This is such a poor gaslighting attempt to make others translate this for you.......

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Two pages in and gender pronouns aren't being used correctly, which is common for unedited MTL. The dialogue reads as though the speakers are reading lines from two different scripts, further not helped by the pronoun abuse. The only reason to read this version is if you don't have a translator yourself, or don't want to set yours up. By the uploader's own admission: "i could have cleaned it up but i decide not to". This feels, regardless of what they meant to imply, that they don't care about the quality of their translation. In short, you're better off enjoying the original.

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pg. 12- She makes 20 gallons of milk?

...the human body contains ~16 gallons of water.

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Adding Rough Translation tag: uploader title, comment

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