Hey guys. This is the english translation for the complete edition of There's Something Loose In Her Head. This is a remake of the first 30 chapters of NT00's series.

Original English Gallery: https://e-hentai.org/g/2418769/f0086b379f/

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2/24/23 - Chapter 1
2/28/23 - Chapter 2
3/30/23 - Chapter 3
3/31/23 - Chapter 4
4/07/23 - Rest of Delusion 4-2 Added
6/01/23 - Chapter 5 and 6
7/01/23 - Chapter 7 and 8
8/16/23 - Chapter 9 and 10
9/02/23 - Chapter 11, 12, and 13
10/01/23 - Chapter 14 and 15
11/05/23 - Chapter 16, 17, and 18
12/02/23 - Chapter 19 and 20
3/02/24 - Chapter 21, 22, 23, Epilogue

Also great news! NT00 says chapter 2 will be released by the end of February so it'll be out in a couple days!

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god bless you.

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i really wish that he kept the small areola from before it's so big now

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Tag 'story arc'

>Requires a minimum of ~75 pages or 4 chapters, whichever comes first, within a single gallery.

https://ehwiki.org/wiki/story_arc

29 pages, one chapter IS NOT FUCKING ENOUGH to justify the tag.

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@Pseudo-Nim
I guess the uploader is banking on the fact that there would be at least 600 pages by the time nt00 finished remaking the first 30 chapters
but yea I sort of agree that he need to wait for the rest of the chapters to get remake before putting the tags prematurely. We never know what would happened. What if nt00 died next week and no more upload came?

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is it being released in parts?

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@Pseudo-Nim

Whoa, sorry about that, I understand the tagging is serious business here and I definitely did not know about that requirement, haha.

@viltras

Yup, definitely did that prematurely, but yeah I for sure think it'll reach the criteria soon.

@bonerdragon

Yes, NT00 is writing these out chapter by chapter. Since this is a remake of the original 30 chapters, he might be releasing more than 1 chapter per month. (There will be 2 chapters this month)

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I WANT TO GET OFF FROM MR. NT00's WILD RIDE

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Wow I gotta admire the fact that now that his art has improved he went back to redo his first part of the story.

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Wait, why's he remaking it? Is he planning on changing anything??

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@iGetTurnOnby2D He's making the timeline clearer and IIRC giving more context for Yumi's backstory. The ending will not change, though. He's pretty much just refining the original story.

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@Hurray456 was there even a definite ending? Last upload for the latest chapter was the December chapter and a IF version.

How does it even end? And does the artist plan to end it? O_O

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@BlitzZ21

The series technically only has 30 chapters with a definitive ending, the uploads kind of screwed it over by not keeping his chapter numbering the same and just releasing them as is. The last chapter is where Haru and Yumi have lots of raw sex and confirm their love for each other and then she asks if he’d like to have her sleep again with someone and he doesn’t answer and then it has a title drop. Everything after that is up in the air canon wise since technically it’s all bonus material of dubious canonicity. Of course we can expect it to be canon (except the IF route from Christmas) for the most part but technically NT00 can come out and say any or all of it is not. This includes 99% of Jin stuff, the development of Yura, and the most recent Christmas releases. Once again uploads on here and elsewhere put everything together and make no mention of the actual canon series ending so it makes sense you didn’t know that.

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If it inspires the artist to make more of his animated stuff with Yumi too, I'm in.

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The reason for the remake is obvious, I can't think of a good story, and there are people who want a sex scene between a senior and Yumi, so they try to catch supporters by adding scenes to the old story. Because I know NT00 is not easy to make money without Yumi. NT00, you really knows how to make money. Two years would have had enough time to make a complete version.
at this time, going to make a complete version? Would you have thought of making the complete version if it wasn't for the end of the year fuss? NT00, you really great.

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Yea the updated art is nice and all but not really interested in art without a story. Already know what happens. I'm basically just waiting to see how the author recovers from his last chapter fumble. This is nice to look at but it's like eh.

At best it gives more material for people doing rewrite/alternate sequels or whatever like that one that got released recently was decently done. People got interested in this author because his stories were interesting. The art being nice is a bonus but nice looking hentai girls are a dime a dozen. Its the narrative of who she is that gets the dick hard and makes the heart skip a beat.

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This is basically vanilla... CRINGE... I really can't get off to "delusions" since in the back of my mind I know it didn't really happen.

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^ literally why the series is popular is because it's at its core something vanilla learning and yumi depicted as more than a street walking thot. Problem with ntr is it fetishize destruction so you'll never be satisfied no matter how many series end in it, since the final and complete form of destruction is death.

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I thought you'll use the nipple piercing version lol

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Actually yeah, looking at the untranslated release it would seem that the delusions should have the nipple piercings and the non-pierced versions are just bonuses.

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@Z556 @Kileraa

It was originally nipple piercing in the delusion, however NT00 said he made a mistake with the layers so it’s actually supposed to be no piercings in the delusion and piercings as the bonus.

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@steveyolo80

Ah, that makes sense.

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What is complete edition ?!

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ok ok ok, so this is the remake right?

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Hey guys, chapter 3 just came out and chapter 4 will be out in a few days. Due to being busy with some stuff I won't be able to get translations out. I'm still planning on translating but will probably get them all out at once in May. Sorry about that, see you all then!

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The art is so much better he has really improved a lot

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Still busy but screw it, you only live once, so I translated chapter 3. Chapter 4 should be coming out tomorrow!

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Please update the torrent

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连发！最高！

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Giga chad translator

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wasn't this supposed to be a remake telling more about her relationship with her senpai? why is she already with jin?

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@steveyolo80 are you gonna be translating chapter 4, too?

@RodrigoRGM she's not, that's part of Haru's delusion.

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@Hurray456

Yep, just uploaded chapter 4.

My thoughts on the remake are that I really appreciate the slight changes NT00 have made, while also showing his improved art to make all the old Yumi CG even hotter. Though I definitely feel less excitement since the overall plot points are largely unchanged and I know what's coming, I'll be looking forward to his christmas chapter (ch24 in the old version) and perhaps all the Yura stuff either remade as official canon or just continuing from the events of last Christmas.

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damn it i just want to see this faggot get completely cucked and forgotten, he doesn't deserve shit

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I'd say its likely he redoes the second half too since it's free money. It was obvious the part he got pooped on was making more story since his art just keeps improving but the story deteriorated for months, and frankly the art is the easy part but he did craft a great story for a long long time. He should have continued that mina story it seemed like he let ideas from that spill over to yumi since shes so wildly popular just using her instead was likely to make the sales. I can imagine most of these artists dont make that much so any profiteering they can do is likely to happen. Mans gotta eat.

Still kinda salty about the meme way he ended the story.

Tbh he should leave the yura stuff as alternate as opposed to official canon. The first story ends on a better note for him to make the yura stuff canon hed have to continue writing it in a way that doesnt leave a bunch of the fan base sour over trying to go halfsies.

All I wanted was to see yumis internal dialogue and for it to end vanilla lmao.

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@valesauce He did say he wanted to continue drawing Mina stuff, so there's that at least.

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This way hotter if it went true ntr without delusion part.

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Clearly she's not the only one with something loose in their head...

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NT00 just added the rest of the 4-2 Delusion scene as he didn't finish it in March. Looking forward to chapters 5 and 6 the end of this month.

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Kinda surprised at the slow releases given that he has the base of the art and the entire story finished. Unless it's just deliberate end of month releases for like patreon ticks.

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NT00 released chapter 5 and chapter 6 will prob come at the end of April. I’m really busy with school atm and will post both April and May translations at next update at the end of May.

NT00 also said May will probably go back and do Mina chapters so we prob won’t see ch 7 and 8 for May.

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>C’MON HONEY PUSH! PUSH! YOU CAN DO THIS! I CAN’T WAIT TO SEE THAT BEAUTIFUL DUSKY FACE LOOKING AT ME!
>C’MON! YES! YES! I CAN SEE IT! IT’S, IT’S
>...
>what
>What?
>WHAT. THE. FUCK.
>THIS IS A WH*TE BABY! WHAT THE FUCK! YOU BITCH! YOU LYING FUCKING CUNT THIS IS A WH*TE BABY WHAT THE FUCK HOW IS THIS POSSIBLE YOU WERE ONLY SUPPOSED TO SLEEP WITH TYRONE!!!
>YOU SCOOPED UP SOME OF MY CUM DROPS?! BECAUSE YOU WANTED A CHILD WITH THE MAN YOU LOVE? YOU TREACHEROUS CUNT!!!! I KNEW I SHOULD OF GOTTEN THAT VASECTOMY!!! I THOUGHT IT WAS SUSPICIOUS THAT YOU ARGUED AGAINST IT BUT I FIGURED IT WAS FINE BECAUSE I NEVER HAD SEX WITH YOU!!! I NEVER THOUGHT YOU’D STAB ME IN THE BACK LIKE THIS!!!
>OH MY SCIENCE, I’M RUINED!!! YOU’VE RUINED ME YOU STUPID TWAT!!! MY WIFE GAVE BIRTH TO A WH*TE BABY!!! AND A BOY TOO!!! IF IT WAS A WH*TE GIRL I COULD AT LEAST LOOK FORWARD TO GIVING HER UP TO TYRONE ONCE SHE STARTED MENSTRUATING BUT I CANT DO THAT WITH A WH*TE BOY NOW CAN I??? IM GONNA BE THE LAUGHINGSTOCK OF THE KEKOLD COMMUNITY NOW!!! THEIR GONNA THINK IM A FUCKING NAZI RETHUGLICAN NOW!!! THIS IS THE WORST DAY OF MY LIFE!!!
>GIVE ME THAT WH*TE BABY RIGHT NOW IM GONNA BREAK ITS FUCKING NECK!!!! I’M GONNA SMASH THAT WH*TE FUCKING BABYS FUCKING SKULL UNDERNEATH MY MY RICK AND MORTY FLIPFLOPS!!!! GIVE IT TO ME YOU LYING NAZI CUNT OR ILL CUT YOU A NEW HOLE IN YOUR FUCKING THROAT!!! GIVE IT TO ME YOU BITCH GIVE IT GIVE IT GIVE IT!!!!! IN THE NAME OF JEFRE CANTU-LEDESMA I'M GOING TO FUCKING KILL IT!
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Absolute legend

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where is the greater development that senpai would have in this version? why are we already with jin's part?

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Alright guys, just posted Chapter 5 and 6, will try and get the Mina chapters up in its respective gallery as fast as I can. Enjoy!

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Japanese (RAW): https://e-hentai.org/g/2550388/f78f2ce1bf/
Chinese (Translation): https://e-hentai.org/g/2543898/42f03e2fbd/

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@steveyolo80 As always you're a bro, thanks for the work!

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Question , did NT00 ever finish this ?

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@Uggadolem
No problem, hope you guys enjoyed it!

@kampfer91
He finished the first 30 chapters and this gallery is the remake/complete edition for the first 30 chapters with updated art. So far the story has stayed largely the same as the original. Now the story did continue after the first 30 chapters but nt00 decided to do the remake before continuing those chapters. Hopefully he still continues that Yumi series after the last Christmas chapter after this remake but that’s up to NT00.

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@steveyolo80 are you also going to translate the Mina chapters? Not requesting for you to do that since you're already busy as it is, just curious.

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@Hurray456

Yup, just uploaded the new chapters! Enjoy! And here's the link to the gallery.

https://e-hentai.org/g/2569935/b4aeb95960/

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Good work for this translation!
There is a point I don't get with this version: why Jin seems to have had sex with Yumi in pic 58? Is it just a lie?

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@tsoda
yep that chat with slight tint of purple is just a delusion of Haru

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rip megane senpai

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Chapters 7 and 8 are uploaded. Enjoy!

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Thanks for all the hard work as always man.

That o face at the end us terrible lmao.

Is it just me or are these releases kind of underwhelming? They're nice touch ups to be sure but maybe since theres no story to accompany it theres nothing to be felt. On top of it the pace is really slow too. I'd rather he continue either this story or mina.

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@valesauce

Yeah personally the excitement levels for me as a reader are definitely way less than when we were getting chapters of Yumi and Jin, with the constant feeling of “wtf is going to happen next”. It’s the nature of the beast I suppose, since we’ve already seen the story once so unless something new is happening it’ll feel like this. Also NT00 is being very faithful to the original, which is fine as I think the story itself is good, just that we probably won’t see new story developments until he finishes this and goes back to continue the current Yumi story.

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Is it just me or NT00 gave Yumi a weirdly shape pointy chin.
On the other hand her breast and belly keep getting better and better

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Yea man i really hope he doesn't fuck it up. That last Christmas release was so sketchy and half baked like he seemed to want to appease both crowds and kind of flopped building it up too much for too long. That 2 pages he did with yumi and sena was so weak. Think it's better to just leave the pink delusion scenes with the extreme stuff and let the canon stay wholesome. True cucks can feel cucked by the denial of canon ntr anyway I figure. Idk maybe that's too much. Either way these feel similar of its maybe 2 or 3 pages at a time. I dont remember how much content the story had monthly I didnt follow it until the story got near the end and it felt serious. Hope he finds his stride again. Honestly he seems to be doing good with the mina story. I still think some of the after story from yumi and Jin scenes belonged in the mina that one kind of fits better for the more ntr elements since the girl is less vanilla and sets the tone that their relationship is gonna involve other guys fucking her cuz she likes being a slut. Shes literally yura. Maybe all the yura content should have been mina content but he didn't wanna let yumi go cuz of how hard she blew up, people straight up frothing for more I remember that August to November of just tease lmao. Either he can start to pour his creativity into mina and let yumi properly die down otherwise hoping the time off does him some good I cant imagine that kind of pressure by the fans for so long.

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anyone having the new video？

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@254leo The bathroom blowjob right? Check Kemono it's there

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Rereading this remake after the original and I’m so glad NT00 chose to do this. If you read this comment and have some time on your hands go reread the original all the way up to the Xmas finale. It feels like the NTS play got way too out of hand and things went wayside. You can attribute it to anything for an agenda, but rereading it rationally has the culprit be a mix of everyone. Yumi seemed genuinely into the sex with Jim and grew to enjoy it more and more, meanwhile Jin grew more confident and cocky and pushed Yumi more and more and she fell for his tactics, meanwhile Haru regressed in his characterization and grew more dependent on NTS vs originally where he enjoyed it but also enjoyed being lovey dovey with Yumi. The development of Yura really messed up Yumi because even though she’s just pretending she’s still invoking all the NTR aspects of things and playing as a slut and realistically doing that long term has some stuff bleed over unintentionally into the regular interactions with Jin and that caused her to develop a big liking for being with him (sexually ofc not romantically YET). If you’re a big NTR fan or didn’t care about the couple then all of that is good but otherwise the development was poorly done and really showed how stressed NT00 had become.

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Hey guys so chapter 9 is out and chapter 10 will be out in another day. I am on a trip right now and sadly did not bring my tablet for editing. I will very likely release ch 9 and 10 in about 2 weeks once I’m home again. But yeah it seems like the chapters so far are really following closely with the original (mostly just updated art and slight dialogue changes) and Nt00 is picking up the pace to finish the Complete Edition so we might get new Yumi story stuff next year! Super excited for that, but yeah I apologize for taking a bit longer, as I normally can TL and release the same day or a day later, but I’m still dedicated to this series and can’t wait to see what Nt00 cooks up next!

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No worries bro enjoy your trip!

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After page 24 dude should have sent those pictures to her friends and family and repost it on some social meda.

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Any new live2d？

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Hey everyone, finally got out chapters 11, 12, and 13. I really appreciate NT00 making a new scene and IF scene for this month. I can't wait for the complete edition to be finished this year, and hopefully some new Yumi content afterwards! Also, I really liked how he tied in Mina into the story. Anyways, hope you guys enjoy!

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Re reading the first half reminds me how trashy yumi let herself become. Even while she knows jun is scum shes still getting in the shower and fucking him. It goes without saying her self esteem is so shot that by the time she meets haru shes willing to do anything to get and to keep him, including degrade herself even further for his fetish that she herself induced in him.

@nikushoku that's the improper way to look at it because the second story quickly degrades because the author was supposed to move on to mina but yumi was such a huge cash cow with people screaming for ntr in his dms that he eventually caved. I understand a mans gotta eat but it's clear he wanted to leave the story or at least take a break. Fact that he did the reboot says he tried to do it half way cuz it became to big for him to feel comfortable just letting it go. All these chapters are doing is leading to a huge disappoint when he tries to continue it and at minimum half the fans will be upset at how it goes given they waited another 2 years or longer for it to continue. He should have let the story end at yumi nts teasing haru rather than going all the way and having it degrade both of them, and it's clear that his ideas for those later chapters were all meant for mina. Hes even starting to Inject her into the yumi story so its very clear hes been wanting to write about her the whole time since her relationship with that dude who likes her was a lot more up front with less bs. Mans gotta know when to let go and stop letting rabid fans control you cuz all you do is trap yourself.

It's a total porn fantasy that she always had her guard up and her heart was reserved for the quit guy who was nice to her before she became the hottest girl on campus. I've dated a few girls who had a similar "backstory" where she let herself cave to some douche in her past while pretending she didnt like it and all she ended up with was a freak obsession with being degraded. Like she literally couldn't maintain a relationship if you werent being toxic to her. Its misery for anyone mentally healthy cuz you just become an actor trying to cater to someones self induced brain damage, and you grow feeling resentful and isolated cuz you know she doesnt actually give a shit about you. Yumis supposed to be the fantasy that anything about her past she uses it as a positive in a real relationship with a guy who treats her good like being proactive about being his sexual fantasy but I've never seen it exist myself. Shes basically taking everything senpai wanted from her and giving it to haru, including using everything he taught her sexually to please haru instead, or even going as far as doing it with random dudes for him to watch since he has that fetish, induced by her ofc so it's sort of a fitting penance for her that she doesnt like it but does it for him anyway with a porn smile for the camera. Her framework for a relationship taught to her by senpai was even if it feels degrading, do it for me anyway so I can feel good, and that's exactly what she ends up doing with haru except without his asking for it. I wonder if it's also her way of getting back at senpai to make him feel like a clown that all his effort all he did was train her to serve someone else, someone he obviously doesnt like or respect. Its even more pathetic how much of a simp he becomes when he starts to realize even though shes a slut he gets to fuck she isnt really that into him.

Last edited on 03 September 2023, 03:01.

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So from what I understand, the part in pg 338 where it says it is a "What if the truth was never told", is not a delusion, but instead a split timeline?

So will the author do 2 separate timelines from now on perhaps? The full creampie timeline, and the condom timeline.

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@EHCASUAL
Yes, it’s basically an alternate timeline but based on chapters in the past, it’s likely a one-off thing. Normally we’d have Haru’s delusion but here Haru’s not aware of the situation/has not met Yumi again so a delusion scene can’t work, but the what-if scenario does. Also, from a logistical standpoint, it would be a lot more work to keep up 2 separate timelines, rather than just a chapter-by-chapter basis. (Nt00 did almost do an IF route that continued off the IF scenario where Yumi had raw creampie with Jin in the last Christmas chapter but scrapped that idea because A. Probably way too much work. B. People hated that it would be true NTR that would not even be canon but part of an alternate timeline)

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It's good we get to see more of Yumi's inner monologue in this revised version of the manga and not only Haru's, although the latter is still more prominent.

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@steveyolo80 where are your nt00 Uncensored pictures from?
is it from patreon?

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@yasou90041
Yes, NT00’s patreon

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Guess its to satisfy his screaming ntr fanbase who also likely make the bulk of his donations.

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Any idea when will the next chapters come out?

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Just got chapters 14 and 15 out. Like the new pic to Jin that is apparently canon now, stolen from megane-senpai haha. Looking forward to the chapters next month with Christmas with Jin. Enjoy!

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I was expecting this to be a little more fleshed out... I remember asking myself while reading the original how exactly did Haru and Yumi even hook up, they have zero organic interactions it's only sexting (Well only Yumi kek), eventually it all just happen so suddenly I'm confused because the whole situation between them feels so dumb (Love at first sight) considering the kind of work this is about.
That said, Yumi is full blown whore that will fuck senpai for either literally nothing or crumbs about Haru or maybe she's just fucking stupid. Doesn't help that Haru has for half of the entire ride this "well shit I missed my shot but I guess free porn from a hot chick isn't that bad either" attitude and then becomes a massive cuck.
I wanted to some changes in the reboot I wanted to see how exactly did Yumi just became like that and how Haru eventually turned the way he is, I don't need a scientific explanation I just wanted some dedicated time to see them transform if with not a detailed explanation at least a convincing one... Right?

Well, this new version is exactly the same shit but extended,... Like if you could describe something so easily in a couple of sentences but someone else has to write an entire paragraph about it.
With this new version I feel nothing for Yumi anymore, seriously she's still either dumb as a brick or secretly a slut once again, yeah I could care less about what is going anymore because the author wants me to get invested in these characters but everything they say or do it's so fucking illogical. This isn't a nukige or my 20 pages average NTR doujinshi I'm here to read about some good story, heart wrenching NTR and decent drama instead every chapter I'm just more and more confused about what the fuck are these characters trying to do... Except Jin I can understand this dude and I respect his hustle. To make things worse this is the supposed "better" version. They are exactly the same, they are not unlikable I just don't really care about them.
This is why I enjoyed when someone uploaded this "Jin's director cut" of this story, now that's something I can care for. No unnecessary drama, nonsensical characters, illogical developments, pretentious plot, etc. Just a dude fucking around stealing a chick nothing else just the bare primitive brain off medium.

Even to this day probably the most I've enjoyed from this manga was when Yumi fucked the fat nerd, that was some wonderfully crafted degradation + NTR. But everything else has been a miss for me.

I've read that the author is just trying to please, somehow, his entire fanbase and this is why the story is exactly the why it is nowadays, well shit once again NTR buxx strike again, huh? Who knows maybe he just need to hire a writer.
I know this is on me why keep reading this but I honestly kept waiting for the chapters to improve now I think I'm done. If I want to fap to Yumi or NT00's sexy gals I can just watch the animations he has been making.

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@Yukipo~

So I wanna preface this by saying I largely agree with your points that this remake has been lackluster in that pretty much 90% of it has remained the same as the original. Also thanks for shouting out my Jin's Director's Cut haha that was a fun little project I did like a year ago. Anyway, the remake really could have improved many aspects of the story, like more character development or worldbuilding, You would think there would be more new story content in a remake, but I think at this point even NT00 wants to get this over with, as just 2-3 months back he announced he wanted to end remake this year. I think it's a combo of him still needing time to make updated art but also any new story scenario/sex scene would require even more new art and with lack of fan excitement, he's pretty much just rushing to end it this year.

Okay on to the character development. I will defend NT00 a bit here as compared to other doujins limited by 20 pages but also just plain bad/formulaic writing for NTR in general, Yumi and Haru do make sense and have good explanations to support their actions (though this is also to be expected in a series going on 1000 pages). Though I will say maybe 50% of this is often actually under the surface and requires some inference/digging deeper to understand Yumi and Haru, and is also why I think NT00 is actually a pretty good writer because he understands his characters (obviously he's not at the tier of actual writers but he's a hentai artist so give him a break)

Let's start with Yumi - most people think of her as a dumb slut at times because she just fucks random dudes just to get advice on how to ask a guy out. My argument is that many readers often forget that Yumi herself is a character that has low self-esteem and for all the sexual experience she's gotten from senpai, still is lacking in navigating social relationships and underestimating her own worth. Look back to the drinking party and we see she's alone in a corner, pretty much has no friends. In many ways, she often mirrors Haru in that she's not that confident in herself and from Senpai's influence, actually has warped views on sex, probably thinking of it as more transactional/not that important since she has it all the time.

Even in this chapter, her thoughts were "relieved to see that Haru had gotten excited from her body" not even fully aware of her own beauty because just a short time before, she was a nerdy, unconfident girl before Senpai made her into his image of a hot girl. She also really does believe in the whole "the one" for her/ soulmate idea, and once she finds out Haru is that guy that saved her, she pretty much puts him on a pedestal while she herself still doesn't feel her own worth, explaining why she's willing to do this sex acts with Jin and Senpai because in her mind, sex is just transactional and not that big a deal compared to the thought of making Haru hers and experiencing true love, so she does things that seem wildly absurd to us, makeing us think she's a slut that likes sex, but in her mind, it's a small/noncomittal act that will bring her closer to her soulmate. Also her naivety with transactions/social relationships + her not thinking of herself as high worth allows Jin and Senpai to constantly take advantage of her.

One other point about Yumi that is very subtle is that her first sexual experience was basically being raped by Senpai and then always in a sexual role where she's not in control. Contrast that to this chapter, when she thinks "something broke loose inside her" when she's sending pics to Haru, basically she feels that she's in control now in that it's her choice doing these things, as well as later providing material for Haru by having sex with Jin, makes her feel more in control of the sex she has, perhaps satisfying a cognitive dissonance she's had from not being in control of it before.

The previous point also mirrors the reason why Haru himself gets into the cuckold fetish. Quite literally it's written in the text but that mental shock from being cuckolded by Senpai really did have such a big impact on him that he gets turned on by it instead. This also makes sense psychologically/as well as in real life because he develops that fetish as a way to TAKE CONTROL BACK from having this girl that he actually connected with stolen by Senpai. Instead of feeling such anger/pain, it turns into pleasure, by thinking he himself is the one facilitating the cuckolding.

Also, I agree with the point that it doesn't help Haru acts like a massive cuck for the entire series. He really does have low self-worth cause even from the start, he doesn't think a girl as beautiful as Yumi would give him the time of day, and the cuckolding by Senpai probably also fed into his own idea that he's not as attractive or as worthy as other guys like Senpai since he's not pulling all these girls and taking all these pics after having sex with girls. Though I will give him credit that he at least got the guts to ask Yumi out, and also with the previous Christmas chapter, realizing that his relationship with Yumi is more important than only focusing on his pleasure.

Alright, sorry for my spiel, I just really like the series. It's obviously imperfect and the remake really could have been MUCH better if there was more character development/worldbuilding but at this point, I think a majority of the readers as well as NT00 himself wants this to be over and hopefully we get more development with actual new story next year.

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I wonder if Sena will still appear in the remake version or if she will get retconned out of existence?

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At this point I'm more looking forward to fan-made stuff on NT00's images.

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@steveyolo80, you're making a valid point about Haru developing a cuckold fetish as a way for him to feel in control. It's basically a coping mechanism for him to preserve his ego and to avoid facing his own feelings of inadequacy.

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Hey guys, October update with Ch16 is out with more parts either tomorrow or the 31st. I'm a bit busy this week but will try to have all parts out either Friday or Saturday!

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Take your time, the new NTR developments deserve your utmost attention, it’s peak!

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@Nikushoku
Yes, some slight story changes/additions from this month, basically what I thought the remake would do for ALL chapters but at least we got it here. Almost done, look forward to it!

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caaaaac?mefisa akzka) sajkxza; saaczka klaaoadx

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Hey guys, October chapters are out, please enjoy!

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Wow, the translation paints an ugly picture for fans of Haru and Yumi, but Jin/NTR fans are feasting with this one. Yumi no longer feels like just a naive girl being manipulated by guys like the original but feels like a tsundere who’s fallen for one guys dick and uses it to leverage another guy she actually has feelings for. The interactions between Jin and Yumi feel much more forbidden and borderline romantic in the remake right off the bat versus the original which only had things seems to spiral out of control after the canon end. I am really looking forward to the Yumi X Haru scenes in the future because it seems like Jin is even better at sex than Senpai in the remake.

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I read the description on the orignal gallery was a DeepL machine translation. Is this also the same?

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#16
I don't understand Yumi's reasons why To have Jin move in and out 5 times?
If Yumi's reason for doing that is to take a photo and send it to Haru That way I can understand.
But it's not. this is a plot hole?

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I've seen the comments from other galleries, and looking at the comments here, I'm not really seeing what everyone else is seeing. All NT00 did was take all the scenes that took place during Christmas in the old version and put it together to make the timeline more coherent. Nothing really changed from the original besides the fact that we can see how Jin convinced Yumi to forget about the "5 thrusts" deal, and the correct sequences of events. I think the main difference I see is that we can see Jin use 2 condoms instead of one like the original, but I think that change was added to make things make more sense since they clearly had sex more than once during Christmas in the original as well. I think since NT00 lumped all the Christmas scenes together and made it one single chapter, people think that there's suddenly more of a focus on Jin when that's clearly not the case.

Also, I don't see how Yumi is acting any differently from before either, and as far as I'm concerned it still looks to me that she is very much being manipulated by Jin, always using Haru as an excuse to push things further. Yumi makes it clear here that she thinks Jin probably knows what he's talking about since Haru has been responding more quickly than usual.

I feel like people are still hung up over the developments that happened near the end of the original version and projecting those feelings onto these new chapters.

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@Hurray456
I have nothing but respect for your ability to look at the translation, look at all the comments on other galleries, see an almost unanimous consensus amongst us and then go “no, you’re all reading it wrong here’s how you’re supposed to read it”. I mean the Patreon, the galleries, the forums, and even the subreddits all looked at the remake and came to a general consensus for a reason. In the original there was always this invisible wall so to speak between Jin and Yumi and it was obvious that for her Haru and their developing relationship was all her main focus. Here that wall is blatantly not there. In lip service the focus is still on Haru but there’s obvious chemistry building up between the two that didn’t exist in the original until the latter parts but here we can all see it clear as day. Here Jin feels less like an accomplice and tool for Yumi to get to Haru and more like a simple sex friend helping her hook up with another guy. That dynamic change may seem small, but it’s actually huge and creates a feeling of NTR that was nowhere near present in the original. You’re focusing too much on the actual scenes and ignoring the dynamic and characterizations between the two, because there’s a borderline intimate connection with tsundere romantic undertones between the two whereas in the original it was very much originally a transactional thing on Yumi’s end and a begging feel on Jin’s. Lots of NTR fans are chomping at the bits with the remake and for good reason because the NTR feel is heavy heavy.

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@Nikushoku
I'm not seeing the supposed "tsundere romantic undertones". What exactly is that shows Yumi acting any more tsundere than she did in the OG? Where are the romantic undertones that are present here and not in the OG? If anything, during the BJ scene, she seems more irritated towards Jin in this version than the OG. To compare, in the OG, when Jin asks if she'll have sex with him again, she says "Absolutely not <3", emphasis on the heart at the end of her dialogue, hinting that she's open to the possibility. In the remake, that's completely gone and changed to "don't get your hopes up, idiot".

As for their dynamic, you mention that there was more begging from Jin's side, yet in the OG Yumi is the one that actually initiates everything. She already had a good relationship with Jin, and used him as a way to get closer to Haru (so yes, you're correct on this point). From there, I dunno, it feels more like she's willing to do whatever Jin asks because of all the gaps. For one, in the OG she gives Jin a handjob straight off the bat, whereas here in the remake he has to beg for it. The Christmas outfit scene is largely the same, except in this remake we see the lead-up to it, which honestly doesn't really change anything about their relationship. Then we get a new scene in the remake showing Jin losing his virginity, filling in the gap between the previous scene and the bed creaking scene (I'd argue this is the reason why NTR fans are loving this because we're just seeing more of Jin and Yumi). Their dynamic in this scene... isn't really any different from any of their other interactions, in either the OG or the remake. Yumi sets clear boundaries, Jin pushes further by using Haru as a justification, and then Yumi obliges. We don't see this specific interaction happen in the OG because it just skips straight to Jin pounding her on the bed, but how exactly would they get to that point in the first place? The implication was always there, seeing what actually happens only confirms it. It's a bit harder to compare the doggystyle scenes since we don't hear dialogue between them in the OG, but it's interesting to note that she's smiling in the OG and not hiding the fact that she's enjoying it. Total opposite with the remake.

It's pretty clear the remake shows that Yumi finds Jin a pain in the ass from the start, whereas they're actual friends in the OG. Does she try to hide the fact that sex with Jin can feel good? Yes, but she does the exact same thing in the OG. I'm not exactly sure where you see the "sex friend" thing here in this remake, and your previous comment about Jin being better at sex than Senpai sounds like pure projection.

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I wonder if Sena will appear in the Remake or if she is gonna get retconned out of existence? A precedent has been set already with the glasses dude being retconned.

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@Hurray456
I agree with you for the most part, but you are missing some key aspects that differentiate the remake from the original which lead the remake to feeling more like Jin NTR post story then Jin's scenes in the original.
First off, Jin is antagonistic here from the beginning, going for Yumi through Haru. This sparks immense NTR flags, because now every interaction between Jin and Yumi is essentially Haru's "fault" since he connected the two of them. In the original, Jin was Haru's friend and one of two people that helped Yumi provide Haru with fapmat, initiated bay Yumi on purpose.
In the remake Yumi makes a mistake and is "blackmailed" into dealing with Jin, like she was with Meganbe-Senpai in the original. However, in contrast to Megane in the original here Jin keeps his influence and thus garners way more scenes than in the original version. Also, we know he's actively trying to make her his in the remake, this wasn't part of the original, only was revealed post story.

However, I think the bigger difference, leading to the heavier NTR feeling is Yumi's portrayal during sex. We see a lot more of it and while In the original she was pretty much expressionless, here we can see her enjoying herself and are being told about it through JIn. In the original, whether she liked sex with Jin was up for interpretation, here it's very much clear that she was into it quite a bit. The justifification of doing it all for Haru therefore isn't as believable anymore.

I'm totally with you though that there is no more chemistry, maybe even less, between Yumi and Jin than in the original. The only difference is we see more of their interactions and the enjoyment Yumi definetely also had in the original is way more openly portrayed.

I actually like this change tbh. It was weird seeing Yumi sleep around in the original without liking the sex and the scenes are simply way hotter. I'm not really worried about Jin NTR, more worried about Haru becoming even more of a passive cuck and a portrayal of him being unable to satisfy Yumi during sex like Jin was shown to do now.

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Good translation as always. With each new chapter though the story is painted in a worse light. This time yumi cones across as straight gutter trash like yikes. No wonder her self esteem is in the dirt. I'd honestly rather see more lovey scenes between her and haru. Honestly my favorites were the ones where she teased his fetish. Her sex with jin is always shitty but her teasing haru is always sexy. Sucks nt00 appeasing ntr fans for the bag but that's how it be.

And Jin is now a straight up faggot. It makes all the nts shit kind of bull. Like from here it would be better to end the story at the first part and have her at best stick to teasing haru, but it's pretty obvious he deserves better than her and she knows it.

Like what honor is there in taking back control by taking advantage of someone who loves you? Its sick and shes sick if there was even a hint of that angle for her.

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Thanks for the translation. I am a Jin fan so I may be biased but I didn't really notice any drop in the writing quality, it's pretty much the same as OG (well one could argue a remake should be better than the original or else why is it even getting made, but anyway) plus what @Hurray456 said. I did find the dialogue in the new delusion scenes kinda bad but it's Jin's delusion now so at least it makes sense in context.

My biggest complaint with the chapter, which I also had with the OG as well, would be that the hot christmas outfit sadly gets discarded instantly again. I guess I will have to wait for the ultra thin condom chapter near the end to be remade.

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@Hurray456
It’s mind boggling how you read this and argue against the obvious and overtly showcased NTR vibes. Majority of readers feel it and look at the comments elsewhere and you can see them either praise it or complain about it. This isn’t us just projecting like you claim, this was intentionally done on NT00’s part. He’s not some two bit writer who can’t invoke general moods in scenes and it’s obvious that was what he was going for here. The tsundere comes from the fact that she keeps insulting him but ultimately caving into his requests and enjoying it, just like you’d find any other tsundere in manga or hentai doing. That’s once again an intentional act on NT00’s part because he wants to add ambiguity to the dynamic between Jin and Yumi instead of making it much more obvious that Yumi’s sole goal is Haru. The OG had sexual scenes with Jin always be hampered by Yumi’s obvious distaste of Jin coupled with her in her tone and actions which makes her cave BECAUSE of wanting to do more for Haru’s sake but here the ambiguity is intentional in making us wonder: is she doing it for Haru like the dialogue overtly states or was the overwhelming pleasure she is obviously feeling the reason why she went further? And once again that is intentional on NT00’s part. You’re reading too much into the OG and projecting what happened there here, you gotta read this on it’s own as the new canon and work from there. And doing that it’s obvious that the NTR vibes are obvious and in our faces and that NT00 is doing it on purpose.

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@nikushoku see for me yumis distaste for jin enhanced it. It showcased she was willing to fuck a dude she didnt wanna fuck and was kind of disgusted by to please her boyfriend, and her feeling good was due to seeing or knowing it was gonna get him off making it a sort of twisted conflicted pleasure mixed with disdain. Having it insinuated she may be ntsing him for herself even a little bit ruins the whole story now shes just a selfish whore using haru wanting to feel in control of someone taking advantage while also being a disloyal slut. Completely ruins it for me. Before she was show as an idiot now shes being showcased as a whore.

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I'll just add that in the remake, just like original, we've never had confirmation that Yumi is having sex with Jin because she likes Jin or because she likes having sex with him, but that it is all for Haru. Even if everyone thinks she's just a whore, until we get actual confirmation from a line from Yumi, she's only been doing this for Haru. In the remake, Yumi seems to be irritated/dislike Jin more because her lines of rejection are more concrete (no more hearts) and even if we say she "caves in/is being tsundere because she keeps accepting Jin's demands" I agree it's only giving "NTR vibes" but does NOT mean Yumi actually has changed her character into liking Jin. Also, Yumi feeling pleasure from sex is nothing new, it's been done in original and I think what's giving off the most NTR vibes is when Yumi is obviously in pleasure/orgasming/Jin's line about Yumi cumming from sex but again, DOES NOT make her a whore or actually liking Jin, agreeing to things for the sex. Now NTR vibes? Sure. But like the court of law, this is innocent until proven guilty and until Yumi herself actually says she's fucking Jin for the sex, instead of 100% for Haru, we can't make the leap/assumption.

One line from the original that perfectly encapsulates Yumi / her relationship with sex is from the original CH26 when she said "Sex with no love...without any kind of romantic feelings...[Is] just a mere physical act that leaves only a slight hint of pleasure." So yeah we've seen many times Yumi has orgasm / gotten pleasure from sex with Jin or Senpai but even so, it largely means nothing to her. And sex with Haru / the one she loves is much more fulfilling and in turn the later netorase play with Jin is largely for Haru.

Anyways, besides my take, I think everyone is getting a little heated in the comments. I'd argue it's cause of NT00's great writing and because even Netorase itself is such a fine, delicate line we've got people passionately arguing "This is def more NTR" vs. "Nah, Yumi def 100% loves Haru" and whatnot. That's honestly prob expected with a netorase work (much more complex than normal NTR) and we should all be looking forward to more Yumi, and we should have discourse but try to keep it civil, after all we all like this series even if we have different views.

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It's funny to see you guys trying to interpret each other. Anyway, the ending this story is still the same 🤣🤣🤣

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So Jin, as a virgin, managed to make her go all crazy like that... He must be some kind of living sex god, lol.

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Man this story really brings out the Text Wall builders huh.

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@steveyolo I think it's more cuz the story should have been ended ages ago before and let them have their ending i n peace and just move on to mina. Also if you waited to get actual confirmation from a girl irl you're more likely to end up raising someone else kid when she gets caught and says "I promise its not how it looks". Maybe you're arguing not to look at subtext or context and take everything as is in a story because it's not real life but the writing is literally banking off of ambiguity as well as the genre in general.

The tsundere stuff does sound like a bit of projection but i can see where hes coming from. The bottom line is no one but ntr cand wants to see yumi enjoying sex with jin. That chapters been done and over with and seeing it rehashed and given more detail is to me just dumb because I dont like ntr bait even if i know the ending(he could pull a 180 anyway he has that choice) since he ended yumis story on such a bad note.

Frankly this makes me expect spectacular scenes when she starts to get with haru which means I'm more likely to feel disappointed if he doesn't deliver. I didn't follow the story closely before so there was less waiting for me. The main thing I like about this story is her tease and devotion to haru even if hes got a fucked up fetish to still do her best to be a good woman to him. Her actual past is all reasons not to like her but his fetish is reasons to accept it and possibly make the best of it. Idk maybe I'm fucked in the head too but its hotter the idea that shes faking enjoying the sex with another dude because acting that way or telling him she likes it turns him on. Its completely a different thing before they're together.

It's like shes making lemonade out of lemons saying well I hate that I'm a slut and these other guys are terrible but I can make my boyfriend happy this way. That's what gives her a sense of redemption is using who she is and who she was to his benefit, his enjoyment. Thats why it was so hot when she studied and prepared on her own to give him a rimjob and anal which were presumably both firsts for her, but still teasing him using his fetish that it might not be etc.

The other issue is they don't show enough of her inner dialogue to give readers better clarity so they're left to decide for themselves and faith is the realm of the naive. She probably envies haru for keeping his innocence while hers was taken advantage of. She would be no better than the senpai if she hurts him in any way. Also even in the sequel there just wasnt enough focus on their relationship or what they did as a couple. Jin took way too many chapters and now seeing jin like this makes him look disgusting. Her disgust for him should be palpable but not only that she should have been the one to put a stop to the nts play with him herself. Just makes no sense unless her self esteem is so in the gutter she can't say no, in which case shes gonna end up going too far cuz haru cant stop asking for more and she can't say no. Like it's up to the writer to give twists to the story that it doesnt just end up at its logical conclusion. Tldr his last fuck ups are compounding to his reboot because he never fixed them.

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@valesauce

Hi valesauce
There's no point in talking to someone who already worships NT00. They're not going to understand anyway.

Yumi has already been given a taste of sex by her senpai before she even had a relationship with Haru, and she's a will-less bitch who can't even keep to the standards she sets for herself. Even when she vows not to have sex with him, she'll do it at the slightest temptation, and even in her relationship with Jin, she can't seem to keep anything straight.

And she's a bitch who justifies everything by blaming others. Writers and fangirls try to justify Yumi's behavior, but it's just bullshit. Is Netorase a Netorase who has no standards and lets a little flirting get the better of her? She's just a cheating bitch.

Don't try to understand these bitches, writers, and freaks. They're just a bunch of idiots who justify their ridiculous behavior with a few words. Netorase is a mutual agreement. But this bitch Yumi doesn't make agreements with Haru, she just provokes him. The agreement is with Jin.

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@akdisjxhdl

Oh hey, I was wondering when you’d be back, last I saw you Nt00 was threatening to block you off his Patreon page.

Besides calling other readers “bitches and freaks” you really should go and touch some grass. I don’t care whatever your views are on the story, but have some common decency and respect for others. We are all just readers of his work here and like I said almost a year ago, if you hate and criticize NT00 and the story so much just don’t read it. We don’t need your toxicity and name-calling here.

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My freedom to do whatever I do. Say a lot of shit.

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Hey everyone, just uploaded chapters 19 and 20. We're close to the finish line now! The final chapters will be at the end of this month to complete the complete edition, and hopefully NT00 will provide us with more new Yumi content next year!

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That multiple choice smells like NT00 is gonna do a split timeline again.

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@EHCASUAL

I'd anticipate this leads to a one-off IF scene in the next chapters. Very unlikely to be an actual split timeline if NT00 intends to continue new Yumi content from last Christmas. On the off chance that this does lead to that though...yikes.

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Yeah, not sure how I feel about that multiple choice thing. Even if it's to lead to the IF scene from last Christmas, the timeline wouldn't add up anyway, so it's a weird decision either way if that's what NT00 is intending.

On a different note, I think I prefer the OG version's scene with Yumi lying in her bed. I liked her outfit. Shame NT00 decided to remove it. The OG version of Yumi with the condom in her mouth was better too, with the more messy hair.

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Thanks for your work!
There's a small typo on page 563. It says "Yuma" instead of Yumi.

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@cathodex2

Thanks for the catch! Will fix it right away!

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So this "Present Day" is a continuation of the previous work or still in the beginning for their relationship (before hotel scene when Haru watch Yumi and Jin).

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@Holy_f**k
It's still in the beginning for their relationship, not a continuation of the previous work.

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this is more story than cheating NTR creampies that I keep being baited by.

i will never understand cuck perspective NTR like this, I only care about the corruption aspect from the female

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"Even if everyone thinks she's just a whore"

@steveyolo80, people who think she's a whore clearly haven't been to college or something similar that exposes you to people hooking up with one another, because she would be considered tame when it comes to the amount of sex partners she has had, namely senpai and Jin.

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@forgunia just because it's a norm doesnt make her not a whore. It just means college is full of whores, dumb whores.

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@valesauce spoken like a true incel

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She doesn't need to have sex with anybody since she only needs the pictures. She could fake them over and over again using dildos, just like she did in a photo. You guys are deluding yourselves. "She is not a whore, not until I see her gargle 100 dicks at the same time. If she doesn't, then she is not a whore." Come on, dood... The girl has sex with everybody when she doesn't need to do jackshit. And in the last chapter, when Jin only needs to thrust 5 times, why would you let him even do that? You need the pictures, not the sex.

It's NTR; it's made for girls to love sex; they are fictional characters that love sex more than anything in the world. Why do you guys expect something different? There is no logic here; it's a fucking NTR for people who love this shit.

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@Ravna3

Most of the idiots here don't know that.
There's no point in telling these idiots when they refuse to acknowledge what's right in front of them.
They're just voting for negative scores, asshole lol.

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I need the continuation of Mina-senpai's instead of this. We already know how this ends already anyway. I'll try to hop on his patreon, probably he will listen.

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Yea agree mina was more interesting and a new story. And she was a slut because she wanted to be not because she didn't know how to say no. How she fell in love with her version of haru would be a lot more interesting than seeing this slop revision.

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So, uh, any info when those new chapters will be translated?

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Is this still being worked on?

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@steveyolo80
You alright mate?

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any idea when this is going to be updated? or if it even is? @steveyolo80

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Sorry for the wait everyone but the final update is up and now the Complete edition is completed. Been really busy with school and life but glad I managed to finally complete the translation for this. Just wanted to say it's been a journey and thanks to people that read my translations and supported NT00 for this masterpiece.

Anyway, so NT00 posted this for the plan going forward: [Mina senpai is focusing on the story, Yura is focusing on omnibuses that stimulate Haru's propensity]. I guess this means we will either get Yura content or Mina content. For February it was Mina content and for March It will be Yumi/Yura content. I think I'll post my own separate galleries for both. Hope 2024 has been going well for everyone.

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Damn son adult Yumi is hot. Can he make a sequel with married Yumi? Still NTS ofc

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@steveyolo80
Thank you a lot for translating the entire series!

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@steveyolo80
You're a hero as always and have been the sole driving force behind my continued enjoyment of NT00. Thanks a bunch!

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Thanks for always translating this stuff for us!
I must say though that I don't see the point of this remake. If he was going to go through the effort of making this, then he should have just continued the original or made something new. I'm guessing Yumi is his most popular girl and he wanted to milk his supporters for a year?

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So let me see if I follow, the true ending of the story is they get married and have a child and don't engage in cuckoldry any further. It's only the IF ending where they kept it going. Right?

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@cathodex2 @Uggadolem
Thanks for always reading!

@MariSetogaya
Yeah, I wouldn't go so far as to say he was milking it but it was always his plan even before to remake the original 30 chapters with better art, better characterization of Yumi, and streamlining of the story. I will say that the only downside was that many of us thought that would mean more new content or new plot points but we didn't get much of that besides taking away the glasses senpai and less focus on Sena. Also slight shift in character for Yumi so that instead of being pretty indifferent to fucking other dudes in the original, she's more hesitant to do that and more focused purely on Haru. The better art is the main takeaway but not much new story content for the year. At least now going forwards we are getting new story for either Yumi or Mina which I think are both good.

@Tripuru
That's correct. And I also think the new Yumi content will fill in the timeskip gap from last Christmas leading to the Epilogue.

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I liked the author going back and cleaning up some plot points, some other NTS/NTR works suffer from constant NTR-baiting and events that never get brought up again that while hot because we like to see the fem-MC fucking, they can sour the experience and bloat the story in the long run("She is being targeted" series with it's 2000+ pages). Also Mina-senpai looking like that and having such a small role on a NTR story should be a crime hahaha.

Turned out surprisingly wholesome in the end, so wholesome in fact that the way Yumi's first relationship started feels kinda out of place in hindsight. Awesome work, amazing translation by @steveyolo80 too.

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