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[Jay Naylor] It's a Mom-Off! [Ongoing]

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Posted:2024-03-05 16:34
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File Size:46.42 MiB
Length:19 pages
Favorited:1293 times
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Average: 4.64
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Posted on 05 December 2023, 21:12 by:   RobDollar    PM
Score +224
...Is this a thing? Women competing over who's the most fertile? I thought this is what shoes and purses were for.
Posted on 06 December 2023, 00:21 by:   pommygranite    PM
Score +156
After his Cottonwine cuckverse how can anyone be surprised that Naylor has some very 'odd' views regarding women? I just find it strange that he's not making this competition explicitly racial.
Posted on 06 December 2023, 01:00 by:   Andry SilverFang    PM
Score +57
HERE TEAM SAMANTHA 🤍🤍
Posted on 06 December 2023, 01:31 by:   gray edge    PM
Score +96
so billie did have penny's child.
Posted on 06 December 2023, 01:51 by:   WilliamJButtlicker    PM
Score +593
I don't think this has anything to do with his views on women so much as it is an excuse to draw impregnation porn.
Posted on 06 December 2023, 12:07 by:   Muffdiver884    PM
Score +49
Does she even take care of her kids? Or does she put them up for like foster homes or ship them to academies after they stop being cute?
Posted on 06 December 2023, 12:56 by:   robert971    PM
Score +14
Are samantha and mike in a relationship now?
Posted on 07 December 2023, 00:14 by:   backlash3906    PM
Score +69
Now that's responsible GB hosting.
Posted on 07 December 2023, 02:21 by:   Laser_angerman    PM
Score +56
@Lord Dashwood
Then go away? Its impregnation porn simple as.
Posted on 07 December 2023, 18:30 by:   Arcanine813    PM
Score +58
@robert971
Mayhaps? Their last foray together they both seemed to enjoy eachother's company, so they seem to be casual. (Plus Mike referred to Samantha as his girlfriend in penny's Problem, so they must've been back together for a while) Honestly it's nice to see them together again bc they're pretty cute. I think that golden brown kitten in the first page is his too, it don't got the doggy nose. :o

I'll admit I was hoping for the Penny x Penelope comic, but we haven't seen Samantha in a while, so I'm cool with it even if pregnancy itself isn't my thing fetish-wise.
Last edited on 15 December 2023, 16:24.
Posted on 08 December 2023, 04:03 by:   GalacticInquisitor    PM
Score +202
People remember this is porn logic right? Things only make sense when you remember this is an excuse for porn to happen.
Posted on 08 December 2023, 06:15 by:   Xiggy4U    PM
Score +40
Wait a minute. The first two of Samantha's three kids don't look like her or Mike, so they're not Mike's kids. We know the third one is Mike's kid, both by looks, and because we saw that baby at the end of "Samantha and Mike" (2018). But we also saw Mike get her pregnant again at the end of "Rekindled" (2019), via magical inception-vision, and we never saw her have that baby. So that must mean Samantha is already pregnant in this comic, and just doesn't know yet. That's really funny.
Posted on 09 December 2023, 10:59 by:   Arcanine813    PM
Score +27
@Xiggy4U
Considering Samantha's sexual escapades were exclusively dogs while she was with Priscilla, those are likely those dogs kids, especially since she was pregnant at the end of her very initial comic. Also us seeing her never having the actual baby doesn't mean Mike's child never happened or hasn't happened yet, especially since that's clearly a kitty alongside the two dogs.
I think Rekindled is an expanded comic based off the image set, not that it nullifies one or the other (especially since when payed attention, some of the dialogue in the comic is similar to the ones in the image set, not entirely, but still). They're basically the same event, Rekindled is just an larger version of that event.
Posted on 19 December 2023, 00:59 by:   WilliamJButtlicker    PM
Score +56
Is anyone else getting a little stir crazy waiting for this thing to update?
Posted on 23 December 2023, 17:16 by:   Ginkei.    PM
Score +43
Glad to see that cat again.
Posted on 05 January 2024, 17:41 by:   Ivellios86    PM
Score +35
I swear some of you get off more to being mad at a porn artist than the art.

Y'all the kind of people that just hate fuck or something?
Posted on 05 January 2024, 17:51 by:   KhanJr    PM
Score +54
Ladies LOVE my vas deferens
Posted on 05 January 2024, 19:54 by:   LordGr4    PM
Score +198
Damn you could bottle the cringe and drizzle it over pancakes.
Posted on 05 January 2024, 21:30 by:   FakeFx    PM
Score +144
On the one hand I despise the implication that these women are having children, not because they want to have a child to raise, but because of some competition or social status.

On the other hand, impending gangbang and creampie porn.

Eh.
Posted on 05 January 2024, 23:11 by:   Rubikscube12    PM
Score +60
This is a top tier unintentionally hilarious script. Her describing the gen alpha tiktok kids cock fucking destroyed me
Posted on 06 January 2024, 17:56 by:   HZivai    PM
Score +59
@Ivellios86
You're not going to fuck Naylor for defending him lol

The art is fine, however the writing, characters and plot are not. You can't deny it.
Posted on 07 January 2024, 01:10 by:   BlueRoses23    PM
Score +37
I'm predicting that one of them will end up with twins and the other will throw a fit about it, because that is very much how women act. /s

p.s. I wonder how Billie would feel knowing that her "very good friend" was calling her a fat cow behind her back.
Posted on 09 January 2024, 23:56 by:   viewers101    PM
Score +26
I would rather get more of the Cottonwine Cuckverse.
Posted on 10 January 2024, 04:41 by:   Sovann    PM
Score +4
Eeerrmmmm.... WHAAAT?!
Fertility and birth rate/pregnancy number rivalry?! What the actual flying freak??? Either Jay is desperately lacking ideas with sense, or he's losing his marbles....
This is ridiculous A to Z, down to the T!
Posted on 10 January 2024, 22:08 by:   Arcanine813    PM
Score +37
@Sovann
The patrons voted for this actually. if ya wanna blame anyone for giving us a stupid 'plotline', blame them for voting for it to be drawn.
Posted on 05 February 2024, 20:44 by:   Lord Dashwood    PM
Score +5
@Arcanine813: Unless the idea itself came from a patron, it's still Naylor's fault for putting the idea in the poll to begin with. And this concept smacks too firmly of Naylor's fetishes for me to believe he didn't come up with it himself.
Posted on 06 February 2024, 02:15 by:   HZivai    PM
Score -5
@Arcanine813
Subscribers do not participate in the construction of the script or the creation of characters, and their suggestions are not accepted by Naylor either. Blaming the patrons for voting for a plotline instead of blaming the author for creating and offering it is highly unconscious.
Posted on 06 February 2024, 12:56 by:   Rubikscube12    PM
Score +58
"You smell so fertile."
Unmatched rizz. Absolute ladykiller
/S
Posted on 07 February 2024, 06:39 by:   HLR3    PM
Score +42
Don't know why the hates, I saw women fighting over brand purses, brand shoes, brand cups. Women, at various points in history, also do funny shits to highlight their fertility, and considering the baby boom era happened, is it impossible that some women compete over their fertility? nah, probably extremely unlikely today, but it a fucking fictional story, so take a chill pill and get a chuckle from the premise.
Posted on 16 February 2024, 22:31 by:   Calic86    PM
Score +24
Idk what it is about Naylor that turns people rabid. Every comic of his is rated 4.5-5 stars, the comments are reenacting the Gombe chimpanzee war, but the most support I see tipping in his favor is "it's fine, kinda hot tbh." Either I've never seen his platoon of strategically deployed cock-suckers, or y'all got a beef with him with a source I cannot comprehend.
Posted on 19 February 2024, 03:00 by:   HZivai    PM
Score +12
@HLR3
I don't think it's hate, that's a strong word for something as irrelevant as a porn comic. For now this comic is relatively calm and timely for a simple erotic story. But you have to admit that Naylor's comics are not well written and his messages are not exactly positive. You don't have to go back far in time to find the vast examples, the comic above is proof of that. In Vision Quest the protagonist fucks and impregnates his friend's mother because he is offended that he is not the only one who fucks his friend's sister. And at the end of the comic, instead of showing regret for his selfish and immature attitude, everything remains that nothing he did was wrong, when any thinking person knows that is not the case. So, generally, the criticisms of Naylor's plots and characters are mostly valid.

@Onyxia1986
And that normal stories are not good either, that says a lot.

@Calic86
Well, first of all that is an argumentative fallacy. Just because you have a good grade does not mean you are good. This happens everywhere, there are plenty of examples. I'm sure that the vast majority of people are least interested in these comics is their story.
And from the looks of it, there are several staunch Naylor defenders on this site. I don't know why, I would like to know his points of view, but they limit themselves to voting for comments or offering poor arguments that clarify nothing.
Posted on 05 March 2024, 17:50 by:   Ivellios86    PM
Score +40
@HZivai Sure but I also don't care. It's porn, I don't read it for the plot unless that plot is particularly good and then IDC about the porn, I'm after a good story.

It's pretty simple.
Posted on 06 March 2024, 05:16 by:   HLR3    PM
Score +47
@HZivai
I agreed that Naylor's cast of character is not a well adjusted bunch and a lot of them are pretty twisted, however, he is hardly the only one that have twisted characters in their stories. I get the point of the criticism coming at him, but it is so weird for people to expect their porn to be all happy go fuck, braindead, rainbow land; especially on this site of all site. In fact his stuff is pretty tame compare to a lot of shit I seen in this place, to take your example, in Vision Quest, yea, the dude fuck the girl's mom to get back at her for riding the whole town, is it shit move? sure, but revenge fuck in porn is a thing and a pretty damn common thing; in some other stories, he would be mindbreaking both of them and pimping them out, here, he is just showing where she got her slut genes. I don't know if her being his friend's sister is a bad thing; people dated their friend's sister is a thing, and the relationship can be good or bad, overall it is a neutral thing honestly. Her mom being pregnant wasn't known to him, and honestly that more of a punchline than a plot point, considering the gallons of cum that enter uterus in porn that result in no pregnancy. Him recognizing that his dick can lead him astray is a hell of a positive realization for a porn story. I am not sure what kind of karma you expected to befall him for having consensual sex with the mom. He committed a faux pas, in a world where cheating is a hobby, not a crime. Hell, having karma not slapping shitty characters is not uncommon in regular stories, and it is certainly pretty damn common in porn; so I don't know why people would expect it here.

I get the bad tastes from Naylor's story, I get the cringed, but I really do not get the vitriol that people spew at him for relatively tame edgy dialogues and characters. Porn of all place should be the least expected place to have mentally adjusted characters, imo. I am seriously weirded out by people who goes to porn and expect morally virtuous characters.

I do want to ask for clarification whether you meant well written for a story or a porn story? Because I am pretty sure the bar is pretty damn low for porn, and Naylor's stories are no where near that. Fucking hell man, there is a some mad man dropping pretty badly drawn and written main Disney cast porn on here for years, and I don't see the same level of disgust as I see for Naylor, granted it could just be the differences in the number of people reading, but who the fuck hate read/jerk porn story.
Last edited on 06 March 2024, 05:34.
Posted on 09 March 2024, 23:38 by:   GalacticInquisitor    PM
Score +114
Oh god it's happening again. The comments section is switching to an essay section.
Posted on 17 March 2024, 18:18 by:   th0usandeye    PM
Score +41
Lmao look at these comments bro why are furries like this? Writing the iliad to argue over some goofy porn
Posted on 03 April 2024, 16:46 by:   greyEAX    PM
Score +39
I still don't understand why people are so weird about Jay Naylor and read like weird racial shit into his writing or assume he has weird views on women. His characters all have different views, because they're, you know, characters.
Posted on 05 April 2024, 18:44 by:   hurrdurrjim    PM
Score +13
I approve of based chauvinist Naylor. Bitches and whores!
Posted on 05 April 2024, 18:52 by:   gostchiken    PM
Score +47
Y'all need to go outside.
Posted on 05 April 2024, 19:05 by:   Sovann    PM
Score +28
Okay... So this particular (and VERY PECULIAR) story is over. I'm only wondering what WEIRD stuff, Jay will create next...

Ah, what the hell... Mewtwo fucking Delia Ketchum's brains out, impregnating her, and -ultimately- becoming Ash's stepfather. Much to Team Rocket's GREAT terror.
THERE! How ya like them apples?
Posted on 05 April 2024, 19:17 by:   TikTikKobold    PM
Score +9
Whenever I read a comic like this, I have to wonder "what the fuck is going to happen to these kids?"

Like, knowing that their mom is a total slut who doesn't even care who their fathers are has got to be like... child abuse, right?
Posted on 06 April 2024, 07:44 by:   Laser_angerman    PM
Score +24
PFFFT People really be overthinking a porn comic script!
Posted on 06 April 2024, 07:46 by:   RobDollar    PM
Score +6
@TikTikKobold
I wouldn't mind seeing a story where Rachel's kids...

https://us.rule34.xxx//images/3832/a6dad3764d0679bd09f200449a595a93.jpeg

...help her get the wake-up call that she so desperately needs, and she starts to pursue what she might've had in Tommy.
Posted on 06 April 2024, 22:14 by:   Maroot    PM
Score +25
yea....the dialogue in this one is hilariously bad, it's wonderfully stupid that only the most contrived of porn plots would produce, i kind of both love and hate it for the cringe factor alone.
Posted on 07 April 2024, 14:30 by:   redragon1990    PM
Score +1
will jay ever return to original life or cottonwine?
Posted on 07 April 2024, 20:27 by:   GalacticInquisitor    PM
Score +12
He did say on his patreon he'll be returning to cottonwine. Who wants to bet it will lead to another political debate?
Posted on 08 April 2024, 02:05 by:   HZivai    PM
Score -12
@HLR3
You talk to me as if I have a hard time differentiating reality from fiction. Could it be that you can't analyze a story in depth?
Fiction does not have the objective of being able to enter areas where reality cannot, that is just one of the characteristics that the many types of fiction that exist have.
The rape fantasy is too questionable and debatable to be used as an example now.
There's a reason I put so much emphasis when I say "Jalen's friend" and it's not to refer to Pepper. Remember the young coyote who helped Brook get the trainer's video? Well, that boy's name is Javier, he is Pepper's brother, he is Sophia's son and he is also Jalen's friend. Do you see it now? Jalen not only fucked Javier's sister even though they were not dating, but he also fucked Javier's mother to get revenge on Pepper. Anyone who does wrong deserves condemnation, even if it is implicitly because otherwise it only reinforces that action. But why would an author make someone who does evil look good? The mere fact that Jalen fucks his friend's mother is immoral and that he did it just to get back at someone else only makes it worse. Jalen acted badly and not only was he not condemned for the work, but he was rewarded.
You say that readers are not passive agents and that they can judge the author's messages? As far as I've seen, almost all of the comments regarding that episode support Jalen for fucking a MILF and for screwing over his "girlfriend." Either they don't read the text boxes or they are unable to understand them or see beyond the background.
In any case, after you gave me such a passive response to the hypothetical situation I posed to you, I doubt you can understand what I'm criticizing.

I didn't say that Naylor didn't have a variety of plots in his work, I said that they don't have the complexity or intensity that Naylor says he wants them to have. Most of them are absurd and full of holes and plot conveniences.
Readers' tastes are subjective, quality depends on other factors.
State your arguments as to why you think it is due to the Law of Triviality.
I still don't understand why you insist on the "vitrol" thing.

@GalacticInquisitor @th0usandeye
For me this is more entertaining than the comics themselves XD

@greyEAX
"Tell me you didn't read Better Days without telling me you didn't read Better Days"

@Laser_angerman
Maybe, but the one who also overthinks too much when writing his comics is Jay and it still doesn't turn out well.

@redragon1990
Naylor already said that he abandoned (for the second time) Original Life due to lack of ideas (no surprise).

@GalacticInquisitor
If he was able to transfer his "philosophy" to his MLP comics, you have no doubt that it will be the same as it always was.
Posted on 18 April 2024, 14:30 by:   Novaelik    PM
Score +21
People trying to dig up political drama in porn is why western porn has become so boring. Get out.

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