@EloquentOrc Well, it always has been in the proper sequence. It was released as if on somebody's twitter timeline, with one pic being "oops, forgot this one". This is just chronological order, which is also a "proper" sequence, just not the one the artist originally intended. These are very much also not the original captions.
Source with captions: https://www.pixiv.net/en/artworks/84249118
FarkyMac is right, this is a rewrite compared to the captions on the Pixiv page. It can't even get the timeline right (the last picture is the morning after, not multiple days later), which is the only part that's readable in English to begin with lmao. If it was based off of one of the other translations then it might not be this TL's fault, but it's still a rewrite as it currently is.
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