Man, this translation is ghetto lol.
"Shiho, you're popular, in the moments of great struggle, at school!?" - p.16
"Say such cute things ... I say that when you are cute, Shiho!!" - p.23
And then so many words cut for no reason. Could really use some QC.

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@Zinbieel - look who uploaded/translated it. Yeah.

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Meh. Not really that interesting.

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It actually is a nice doujin with beautiful design if you leave out the poor translation.

Writing "big brother" instead of "Onii-chan" is a no-go.

And really confusing is the f*cked up use of question and exclamation marks.
Exclamations are ended with a question mark and questions ended with an exclamation mark, this is messed up.

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