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What did gyarus do to you to deserve this?

rough grammar

p.4 hitpot
p.4 togehter
p.5 boyu
p.7 tongues
p.8 dicks
p.9 im
p.9 despite what you're saying that you're still
p.9 cuming
p.11 untranslated
p.15 im cuming

rough translation

Page 3
TL: nil
JP: なんではだけてんだよ・・・
Intent: missing

Page 3
TL: Her name is Jinkuuji
JP: 神宮寺アン
Intent: Actually her name is Ann Jinguuji

Page 3
TL: And I'm the lucky guy she called over
JP: それをいいことに俺を呼び出しまくってる張本人だ・・・
Intent: This makes 0 sense. She's using him to get something out of (WHAT is revealed later). She didn't just... randomly pick him to come over lol

Page 3
TL: nil
JP: おじゃまします
Intent: missing

Page 3
TL: She has the biggest tits in our year.
JP: クラスメイトの巨乳ギャルだ
Intent: Made up. "She's a gyaru classmate with huge tits."

Page 4
TL: Oh, thanks.
JP: そっか・・・ありがと・・・
Intent: The "oh" is so confusing here. "Right/I see... Thanks for that." She's responding to him being nice enough to not get her out in the cold.

Page 5
TL: And now she uses me to satisfy her desires.
JP: 今では完全に性処理要員扱いされている・・・
Intent: This is missing the HEAVY emphasis used in JP to indicate she basically uses him as her personal sex toy, and that's pretty much ALL she calls him over for.

Page 6
TL: The smell of her sweat
JP: 甘い香水に混じった女の子の濃厚な匂いが
Intent: No sweat references here. You're also missing like 80% of the line.

Page 6
TL: nil
JP: 吸っちゃダメ
Intent: missing

Page 8
TL: push it deep
JP: 入口から奥までピストンして・・・
Intent: Fuck me deep and hard...

Page 15
TL: nil
JP: いいよ出して
Intent: missing

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Other Language or Version
Japanese digital
Korean digital, translated by 팀 오바참치
English digital, You are here!

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@Fatesifaeve

English? Really?

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how could you do this to peak fiction......you monster

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It's been said before, and I'll say it again, if English is not your native tongue, DO NOT translate into it. Translate into your native tongue, otherwise the result is gonna be rough as fuck.

Of course that assumes this ISN'T MTL, and I think that might be a generous assumption...now no one else is gonna translate this.

Navishii: thank you, sir.

Last edited on 28 March 2024, 10:43.

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I'm halfway done translating this... Will post mine either way.

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the least harlot girl in the area Lol

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