Breed the elf

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1. You need to level your pages. Your colors are faded. Quick guide: https://ibb.co/p4JVk67
2. Why is your text in light grey instead of being black?
3. None of the handwritten text is translated. Why?
4. There's a bunch of other issues with the translation, namely weird phrasing, lack of punctuation, and typos. Get a proofreader to help out.

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#1: https://e-hentai.org/g/2446222/da364fdc73/

#2: https://e-hentai.org/g/2682607/28e16e3ae0/

#3: <-- You are here

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003
OG: いいの？忙しいのに、ごめんね
TL: You sure? You're so busy, I'm sorry
ED: he's checking if it's ok despite her being busy and apologizing

OG: いえ、先生の方こそご無理なさらないで下さい
TL: No, please don't be too hard on yourself, sensei
ED: she's saying he needs to take care of himself as he's busy too

OG: それでは
TL: Well then,
ED: this is a concluding phrase

OG: はーい。お互いあと少し頑張ろうね！
TL: Yes~, let's both work a little harder!
ED: missing detail, for just a little longer

008
OG: ちゅぱ音最高っ…
TL: Blowjobs are the best...
ED: this is specifically about one aspect of them

009
OG: てっきり次は胸で…と言われるものとばかり
TL: I thought you were going to use your chest next...I thought you would say that
ED: this makes no sense given the speaker

010
OG: うーんもったいない…悩む…
TL: Hmm...What a waste...I'm worried...
ED: he's not worried, he's split between two options

OG: 服のサラサラ感が同時に…っ！
TL: And the dryness of the clothes at the same time...!
ED: not dryness but a different sensation

011
OG: 服が擦れすぎるといけませんので
TL: Don't let your clothes rub against it too much...
ED: wrong speaker, missing final particle

014
OG: …面と向かって指摘されると
TL: what's a facade and what's not
ED: this isn't about a facade, it's about being called out directly (face to face)

etc

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