002
OG: ユミさんは誰にでも興奮しちゃう変態さんだからねお仕置きだよ
TL: "Since you arouse everyone around you, this is punishment"
ED: she's the one getting aroused

004
OG: 乳首だけじゃ足りない…
TL: "Rubbing my tits isn't enough..."
ED: specifically nipples

008
OG: まだまだ我慢だからね？ユミさん
TL: "You can still endure, right, Yumi-san?"
ED: he's not asking if she can, he's telling her she has to

011
OG: ま〇こいつも切なくなってるスケベな雌犬です♥
TL: "Because I'm a slut who's[sic] pussy is always horny"
ED: she's not giving the reason for wearing the chastity belt, she's talking about the effect of wearing the belt

012
OG: そうそう立ってじゃなくて犬みたいにしてね？
TL: "That's it. Do it like a dog does, okay?"
ED: missing middle of the line telling her what not to do

016
OG: セックスしたい
TL: N/A

021
OG: ピストン早い…っやばっ…いぎゅっ
TL: "You're thrusting so fast...Oh god..."
ED: missing end of line

OG: ま〇こうねって…いつもと違う…
TL: "My pussy is being twisted..."
ED: wrong speaker, made up line

023
OG: 犯〇れてるみたいでしょ
TL: "It feels like I'm raping you"
ED: missing end of line, he's responding to her

OG: そこ…膣の奥たたいて…っ
TL: "I'm hitting the deepest part of your inside"
ED: wrong speaker

Base +38, dankestdungeon +24, Fofotron +16, hobohobo +36, Scumbini +48, Entroop +6, Arago12 +6, Aristoplato +11, Tomsod +8, Vengos +6, Th3 Sl0th +6, wootwoot123 +6, cutegyaru +29

Ch 1 https://e-hentai.org/g/2747902/81dd46fc78/

Ch 2 https://e-hentai.org/g/2782127/d503b09943/

Ch 3 https://e-hentai.org/g/2823871/afd05734c0/

Ch 4 https://e-hentai.org/g/2865829/3dda6a4c41/

Ch 5 here

Ch 6 https://e-hentai.org/g/2891928/366034ae19/

Base +10, VelvetDream +7