Rough translation:
Raw：マジだ、完全にのびてんな
your translation: Seriously, they're really slacking off.
actual translation: You're right, they completely passed out.

raw: 手マンで潮噴かせて叩き起こすかｗ
Your translation: Let's just creampie them to wake them up. Haha!
actual translation: Let's wake them up by fingering them and making them squirt. Haha!

Edit: Since you don't have the textless, I assume this is translated from the chinese gallery?

Base +6, dankestdungeon +24, Maxer123 +6, Bubblejum +6, Coledas Ukgent +15, Anvill -6, IS IRIS +8, Sweet Breaker +7, Appriser +6, darkwing42 +53, Fr33sh00t +6, SomeLazyDouche +7

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Base +6, Coledas Ukgent -15, KaguraMutsuki -6, Lucicici -6, Anvill -6, abemu -6, ShinShin Kisaragi -6, Fr33sh00t -6, Cadavrus -6