"End..?" :´(

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umm...
Negatives--
Is this the complete version of the title?
It seems to be missing alot of pages!
The story just jumps around that Byakuren-sama character. It does not actually finish a scene...
The story/plot does not flow with the text.
Such as, the 'surprise', what are they talking about? Is this a rewrite?

Positive--
The artwork was amazing!

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http://www.doujinshi.org/book/356606/Byakuren-sama-no-Ossharutoori-ni!/
RAW: https://e-hentai.org/g/282900/27192b9161/
Portuguese Translation: https://e-hentai.org/g/290001/b82dc0c79c/
Russian Translation: https://e-hentai.org/g/527562/44bd526236/
Vietnamese Translation: https://e-hentai.org/g/736936/a0b916bf0f/
Chinese Translation: https://e-hentai.org/g/294465/0e241237ec/

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The plot is jumping around various characters close to Byakuren, pretty much raping her entire temple's inhabitants
The "Surprise" is just a running thing with Kogasa, her schtick is that she has the power to surprise people and loves doing so, so she looks for new ways to be surprising, and she's often portrayed as kind of an airhead who can be easily manipulated by convincing her whatever is happening is a Surprise

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