003
OG: 俺は取島ルイト現役の警察官だ
TL: "I'm an active police officer"
ED: missing name

005
OG: そんな…！
TL: "Son'na...!"
ED: this is just romanized

OG: 急に飛びついて来ないでくれる？
TL: "Could you please not jump and come close to me?"
ED: missing first part of line

006
OG: １か月言いなりになれば解放してくれるんじゃなかったのか．．．？
TL: "1 month...wouldn't I have to let you go if you did as I said...?"
ED: wrong speaker

OG: 翌朝
TL: N/A

007
OG: 目覚めはどうかしら？
TL: "How are you waking up?"
ED: she's wondering how Rui's awakening was

OG: もう絶対に元の生活に戻れないような身体になっちゃえば諦めもつくんじゃないかって思ったのよ
TL: "I feel like you'll never be able to go back to your old life. I thought that if you became a girl, you might be able to give up."
ED: she's saying that if Rui became unable to return to her old life then she would accept her new body

OG: この娘が例の子？
TL: "Is this girl your example?"
ED: she's asking if Rui is the girl Mizuki mentioned

008
OG: すごいわ！投薬だけなのにＢカップくらいに育ってる！
TL: "That's amazing! Even though you only took medication, my size has grown toabout[sic] a B cup size!"
ED: she's talking about Rui

OG: 依頼通りＨカップくらいでいいかしら？
TL: "Is it okay to have an H cup as requested?
ED: she's asking if she should make Rui an H cup

009
OG: もちろん正規の手段ではないんだけれど♥
TL: "Of course, it's not the official method ♡"
ED: she's saying it's not an established method

etc

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So I guess we’re never getting a good translation of this now.

Which is maybe okay. This story kinda pisses me off - it’s just a series of increasingly bad things happening to a good guy, with no justice for any of the perpetrators. The cherry on top is the betrayal by his wife, the one for whose sake he was putting up with all this for in the first place. It’s not even that believable - his wife was kidnapped by these people (or others affiliated with them) yet she apparently doesn’t believe they forced him to do these things, and doesn’t seem to have a problem with these girls?

Last edited on 24 April 2024, 21:23.

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i really like the feminization in this but man the abusefest is just not for me
like at least have the (guy) be enjoying it in the end or something lol like most other femdom ntr story

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Just by looking at the images, I could tell the plot took on a downward spiral on part 2. Having it translated is good I guess, but ooh boy....

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Hope there's eventually castration

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Part 3 please

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Part 2: https://e-hentai.org/g/2898262/15141ec218/ (you are here)
Part 1: https://e-hentai.org/g/2852684/6b43ecbc16/

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>eh, too abusive for me
>eh, too much suffering for me
>man, the story sucks, at least get him to come around to it
>look how they massacred my boy
>NOW DRAW HIM GETTING CASTRATED

Two types of people. :D

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His wife must have secretly hated him

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Fucking faggot brained artist, fuck this faggot artist.
You could have made a good story here where he puts these bitches in prison forever and goes home to his wife only to find out he needs her to be his femdom and it turns out she enjoys it, but no you had to write this shitty faggot plot instead, fuck you Niello KYO I hope you get raped by a pack of wild nlggers.

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