Perfect timing xD

I don't understand his playing hard to get but then all of a sudden asking her to play with herself in front of him :/

EDIT: Translations seems really off the mark in places. Most jarring had to be when she calls him "babe" lol But there's a few other bad spots, too.

Base +1, nipponica +18

What a shit tl, damn.

Base +6, negro 457 +6, molenewe +6, Mandraken +6, oneer +14, Potato252729 +6, nya75 +7, Forgunia +15, nipponica +18, abrickhouse +6, Cragath +7, thangio +6, Gabaw +6, and 2 more...

This translation gave me a stroke.

Base +6, starlyte8 +6, oneer +14, Potato252729 +6, nya75 +7, xd464 +6, Forgunia +15, nipponica +18, abrickhouse +6, Diamond Nova +7, Cragath +7, thangio +6, Gabaw +6, and 5 more...

very bad....

Base +6, oneer +14, nya75 +7, Forgunia +15, nipponica +18, Cragath +7

Butchering Hyji's work like that is a goddamn crime.

Base +6, thangio +6, Gabaw +6

This stink of MTL

Base +6, USSR-Hitman +7

001
OG: 灰司
TL: "Gray Master"
ED: this is the author

002
OG: 前回まで
TL: N/A

002
OG: N/A
TL: "And so, the tale of mama and her son, entangled in a web of passion, unfolds in the sultry heat of a July evening."
ED: made up line

OG: 望
TL: N/A

OG: 菜穂
TL: N/A

OG: 夫
TL: N/A

006
OG: N/A
TL: "Consistency is key, my friend."
ED: made up line

011
OG: ジュン…
TL: June 90000
ED: this is sfx

012
OG: お母さんにその気があればいつかお母ちんから誘ってくるはず
TL: "If your mom's got the hots for it, she'll definitely invite you someday."
ED: he's talking abou this own mom

OG: 、、、だけど
TL: N/A

014
OG: 僕から行かない限りお母さんから来ることはない
TL: "I'm the one who has to go to you after school, or else mom won't come"
ED: nonsensical TL

OG: それを見ながら僕もオナニーしてみたいっていうかｗ
TL: "I mean, it's not like I wanna jerk off while watching that!!"
ED: he says the opposite

015
OG: へへっｗ
TL: 7 7
ED: these aren't numbers

018
OG: 番うわよ！あんたが、あっ
TL: "Watch out! It's coming this way!"
ED: made up line, she's not warning him about anything

019
OG: いや！これ腰浮いちゃう！クリにっあ！
TL: "No! My hips are floating! Right on the spot!"
ED: she isn't saying her hips are floating

OG: お母さん気に入ったみたいだねでもまだバイブ動いてないよ？
TL: "Looks like mom's into it. But is the vibrator still not working?"
ED: he's not asking about it not working

etc and a lot more rewrites in between

Base +38, Menasws +4, JayGray7Ten +7, Vivi1993 +22