remove the mother tag, there is no incest

Base +7, Zooasaurus -6, Fuckhat -6, ScrawnyJohny +6, MarsTheGod -15

002
OG: 大澤久美３４歳
TL: "Kumi Osawa 43 years old"
ED: wrong age

003
OG: ふふふ全くもう
TL: "Hehehe, they so funny"
ED: she's laughing but she's not saying they're funny

004
OG: これ以上を望むのは贅沢というもの
TL: "There's nothing I wsant more than this family."
ED: completely made up, she's recognizing her privilege

OG: それは
TL: "That's"
ED: this isn't just "that's", it's a connecting phrase

005
OG: マスクしてても美人とわかる
TL: "She was beautiful even though she wearing a mask"
ED: tense is wrong, and they're saying they can tell she's beautiful even with a mask

OG: ぷー子ちゃぁぁぁあぁん
TL: "Come one, rub it."
ED: completely made up, this is her name

OG: 気楽な気持ちで始めたのに
TL: "I'd started it with usual feeling"
ED: "usual feeling" makes no sense

OG: で揉んて
TL: "Shake it!"
ED: this isn't about shaking

006
OG: そんな時に限って思わぬ出費が重なって
TL: "Spending money for nonsense makes our money went out quickly"
ED: completely made up, she's talking about unexpected spending

007
OG: やっているうちに大勢の男性から褒められるのが嬉しくて
TL: "While I was doing it, a lot of men were praising me"
ED: missing her own feelings

OG: えっ？そう？
TL: "Huh?"
ED: missing second half of line

OG: コレが私の天職なのかもしれないと思うほどだった
TL: "It was enough to make me think this might be the time to make second child"
ED: made up, she's talking about streaming

010
OG: この前ヒロ君の部屋で遊んでる時
TL: "one day, when I'm playing in Hiro's room"
ED: he's talking about a day in the past

OG: これはぷー子ちゃんの部屋だって！
TL: "This is Puko-chan's room! Puko is his[sic] username she use when streaming"
ED: the note isn't in the original text, it's mentioned on page 5 in one of the bubbles you rewrote

011
OG: 子供のクセに何言い出すの？へ…変な言いがかりやめて頂戴！
TL: "And top of that you're a still kid. Stop doing weird stuff"
ED: she's telling him specifically not to say anything weird

012
OG: オバさん素直ですね
TL: "Be honest Auntie"
ED: he's not telling her to be honest, he's commenting on how her reaction is honest

013
OG: ベッドの下とかベタな隠し方
TL: "Great way to hide it, like under the bed right?"
ED: he's not calling it a great way to hide it, he's saying it's an obvious place to hide it

etc

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003 "they so funny"
003 "it started to feels boring"
004 "my husband is kind, and seriuos hard worker"
004 "can't be tell to"
005 "she wearing a mask"
005 "come one"
005 "more bolder"
006 "My husband and my son doesn't know"
006 "I'm thinking about to stop it"
006 "makes our money went out quickly"
006 "one more times"
007 "the time to make second child"
009 "that kid little bit forgetful
009 "things to do more here"
010 "I feels like"
010 "his username she use when streaming
011 "And top of that"
011 "you're a still kid"
012 "what I means"
012 "you're face blushing"

Base +38, Fofotron +17, Coledas Ukgent +15, shinnt +20, Aristoplato +11, mugen_darkness +9, incogna777 +10, user in a cup +6

LOREM IPSUM LOREM IPSUM

Base +7, likeyouknowwhatever -6, mugen_darkness -9, eiramart +6, Hann0225 +7, Pheromir +11, senfmann +6, incogna777 +10, Cambot +6, FrankCunt +6