I learned how to hide tags because of you. Not all AI gen stuff is bad but I am tired of this spamming me every week.

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Obviously this is an alternate timeline(s) where Ben and Gwen are already horribly inbred to begin with, which is why:
1) Ben calls the first Gwen "sister" and then "cousin"
2) They both repeat themselves page after page like they have brain damage and/or short term memory loss
3) Gwen has at least one extra digit on each hand in several pictures.

What attention to detail!

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Gwen is better with an anonymous male (the reader).

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Last edited on 27 July 2024, 18:07.

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I liked your selection of Ben as the male protagonist because of what it implies of their relationship. The story is interesting and sexy. Your Gwen models are very good. I think one of the complaints is related to the text repeating in various panels where it doesn't seem to belong. For example, in panel 2 and 3, Ben says exactly the same thing. Another example is that in panel 7, Ben repeats the same thing as in panel 8, but in panel 7 it doesn't make much sense. Another example is that panels 13 and 14 have exactly the same dialogues. I didn't mind this last case because I thought of it as alternate takes of the same scene, but you can see the point. I don't have any complaints, but I would have loved one or two final panels with the closure of the story, with Ben 'convincing' all the Gwens to live together. Aside from that, I like very much your ideas. Thanks for sharing!

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