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[Fakeryway] In the House of McCloud

Western
Posted:2024-05-13 03:14
Parent:2917388
Visible:Yes
Language:English  
File Size:4.31 MiB
Length:18 pages
Favorited:368 times
Rating:
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Average: 4.47

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Posted on 13 May 2024, 04:24 by:   Muffdiver884    PM
Score +55
would be anticlimactic but I would love for the whole series just them being absolute shits to each other, while fantasizing about each other.
Posted on 13 May 2024, 08:41 by:   hentailover223    PM
Score +53
yikes...

borderline ready to have hate sex
Posted on 13 May 2024, 16:32 by:   Loki The Flameshield    PM
Score +25
Man, Krystal sure did become a naggy bitch.
Posted on 13 May 2024, 16:45 by:   Charliechan25    PM
Score +30
I wonder who will break into submission first, either Krystal becomes a mellow mama or he'll become a momma's boy
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Posted on 13 May 2024, 17:08 by:   Tonythekat    PM
Score +42
A naggy bitch? More like an absolute Karen.
Posted on 14 May 2024, 01:54 by:   shtzandgiggles    PM
Score +31
I'm... I'm too invested in them reconciling to masturbate to this
Posted on 16 May 2024, 02:28 by:   lurphysmaw    PM
Score +52
Dealing with a psychic Karen sounds like the ninth circle of customer service hell.
Posted on 16 May 2024, 03:53 by:   nodegama    PM
Score +13
at this point krystal will be fucking bill before we can se fox on action
Posted on 19 May 2024, 04:48 by:   Ducommun    PM
Score +12
I hope the sequel is therapy.
Posted on 19 May 2024, 15:54 by:   Hitman1826    PM
Score +11
Moar.

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Posted on 20 May 2024, 14:55 by:   storm shadow-210    PM
Score +1
Okay so what exactly is going on with this family here? Putting aside the fact that Krystal was raised on a planet with customs and culture that should make her a little more laid back, I can't help wondering. Did Krystal actually see what her son Marcus was daydreaming about from page 6-9?

Marcus admits that he isn't a telepath nor does he possess any mental powers like his mother, but one would think that Krystal would be able to see what goes on in his head. Marcus did say Krystal was capable of as much. This plot feels awkward with a son having lewd sexual fantasies about his mom and her doing the same with her son. It makes the actual events feel jarring, not to mention the "sweet home Alabama" undertones it implies. I really can't Tell what Krystal did and didn't see in Marcus' head because Krystal's internal monolog on page 14 almost implies she knew or could hear what her son was thinking based of the choice of words on display. If I'm wrong here then don't hesitate to let me know your interpretation or reading of things.

Gotta say this whole story feels like total downer for any Star Fox fans. Out of all the numerous endings available Star Fox Command, only a handful of them were any decent. Only a select few actually had happy endings where Krystal and Fox reconciled their relationship and feelings. The ending where Fox and Krystal settled down and had a family was one of the better endings in my honest opinion. So seeing Krystal have her relationships seemingly fall apart after she finally had them all mended fells icky.

I can only pray that the author/artist brings Fox into the sequel to this if they do plan to make an follow up comic. Or if that isn't in the cards maybe we can have Krystal and Marcus cope with Fox's absence with something more wholesome. Maybe have the comic show Krystal recount how she met Fox or things she learned about his family like James McCloud or even Fox's mother Vixy Reinard, who according to comics published by Nintendo was killed by Andross in a bomb meant to take out James.

Seeing some hint to their family getting on track to being healthy again would be nice. Anything but seeing Fox's wife cheat on him while he's not home, Fox getting cucked, or Krystal getting reamed by a whole room full of dudes. All of thatbstuff has been done to death by now and there's barely any content with Fox and Krystal being actual lovers.
Posted on 25 May 2024, 22:34 by:   robergalargaa    PM
Score +13
This gonna get a sequel?? nice art anyways :)

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