Sorry for the very bad quality. If i download the high resolution version. It downloads very slow (about 2 weeks) due to it being a torrent file. I'm sorry again and please. I don't take criticism very good so please be kind.

it looks like you used the downscaled Chinese scan and rewrote a good amount of it

001
OG: そ、そうですか…
TL: This! finally!
ED: she's coming to an understanding

002
OG: ごめんカヤ…ちょっとだけこうしてていい
TL: Sorry...But can yhou give me a hug?
ED: he's asking to stay like this for a little while

OG: まぁ…ちょっとだけなら
TL: If it's just a hug..
ED: she's okay with it if it's just for a little while

003
OG: 当たってるんですが…
TL: I said this...
ED: she's talking about it touching her

OG: 当ててるからね
TL: I did it on purpose!
ED: he's agreeing with her observation

OG: そんな悪びれもなく…
TL: WHy are you like this
ED: she's talking about how unapologetic he is

004
OG: その…シてあげても…
TL: Sensei...You know.
ED: she's talking about how she'll help him out

OG: うぅ…そんな嬉しそうな顔しないでください
TL: No! don't show that you're happy about this!
ED: to be clear, she's talking about sensei

005
OG: 脱がしますよ？
TL: Do I have to take it off?
ED: she's telling him that she will take it off

006
OG: 強すぎ…？すごいびくびくしてますが痛くないんでしょうか…
TL: N/A
ED: erased

OG: は、初めてなのでよく分からないですね…
TL: N/A
ED: erased

OG: あっ…亀頭いじられるのいい
TL: the gloves are covered in pre cum!
ED: he's talking about how it feels good when she touches his tip

etc

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>doesn't know english
>translates
what a piece of garbage

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For us to be kind to you, you need to be kind to us first. And there is only one way you can do it. Stop posting garbage translations.

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Kaya deserves better than to be a generic NPC villain

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