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Chinese version at https://e-hentai.org/g/1695351/efac0a5ae8/

you're translating from another TL so you make the same mistakes that they do, but you're also getting things wrong that they got right

004
OG: とあるダンジョンのためモンスターレンタルで春馬からルシファーを借りた
TL: In order to get pass[sic] a certain underground city, I used the character borrowing function
ED: idk where you were going with the character borrowing function but for a certain dungeon he borrowed Lucifer from Haruma through a monster rental (從春馬那邊借到了路西法)

OG: 春馬はいつもこれを間近で…
TL: Haruma has always stared at these and...
ED: he's imagining Haruma always getting to see her rack up close...

005
OG: 見ての通りだ
TL: As you can see
ED: she's saying that she's doing exactly what he sees

OG: モンスターはパンツはかないのか！？
TL: Does[sic] none of them wear panties at all!?
ED: he's specifically talking about monsters

OG: い…いいから出ていけっ二度とこんな…
TL: J-...just leave me alone and get out...
ED: missing last half of line. it's present in the Chinese TL though (別在這個樣子...)

006
OG: こんなのッ我慢なんかできるはずが…ッ
TL: What the hell...usually I can endure this...but...
ED: to be clear he's talking about expectations not usual occurrences, which is also in the Chinese TL (本來應該可以的)

OG: ほら揉んでいいぞ
TL: Here, rub this
ED: she's allowing him to not telling him to

007
OG: まだ出すなよ？出すから私の中に出せ
TL: Ain't cumming yet? If you're gonna do it, cum inside of them
ED: she's telling him not to cum so he can finish inside her. the Chinese TL has this too (還不能射出來喔？要射的話要射在我裡面喔)

OG: 限界まで勃たせて私を楽しませろ
TL: Make sure you're as stiff as a rock till you cum
ED: the second half is rewritten, the Chinese TL has it though (給我勃起到我滿意為止)

008
OG: 出すなと言ったのに…
TL: I told you to do it inside...
ED: she told him not to cum yet. the Chinese TL has it though (都說不能設出來了)

OG: じゃなくてっ…
TL: I shouldn't have done that...
ED: this is a change of thought. the Chinese TL was misleading (不該這樣的...)

OG: 今ならまだ…何もなかったことに…っ
TL: Before...something really happens...
ED: since nothing's happened yet (趁現在...還没有發生什麼事情的時候)

OG: 腰が．．．抜けた．．．
TL: My waist...is losing strength...
ED: hips

etc

telephone translations should get autotagged rough tl imo

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