This is my first translation.

Surprisingly readable for a first attempt, but there are many questionable phrases used like "Do you understand what does it mean right?".

I can't comment too much on the accuracy of the translation because my Japanese is still beginner level, but the following English needs a bit of work or minor corrections

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"This time, let's take a break until tomorrow noon" would work better as "This time, let's take a break until noon tomorrow", but looking at the raw, despite how literal your translation is, I feel like in English it would be more akin to "Let's take a break until this time tomorrow afternoon"

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"I just finish cumming" should be "I just finished cumming"

page 10
"You let your doggy made you cum" should be "You let your doggy make you cum"

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"It still sucking me in" should be "it's still sucking me in"

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"All for myself? Do you understand what does it mean right?" should be "You do understand what that means, right?"

Base +6, wikishonen +6, andystevens1997 +9

@red death68 Thank you very much for your feedback.

Base +6