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I'm going to say what we're all thinking: those look more like orcs than goblins. I know that Tolkien originally used goblin and orc to reference the same creature when different races where speaking about them, and in fact hobgoblin referred to the Uruk-hai, but in the modern lexicon goblins are usually tiny, and orcs have become another word for a creature more similar to the old trolls. Now the big guy in the beginning; the one referred to by the girl who was saved on page 005 as an orc, looks more like a troll. When I hear "raped by goblins", I don't think of creatures bigger than the MC. I think more of the tiny creatures from Goblin Slayer and the like. I could accept if the one that first fucked Sara in the beginning was just an abnormally large mutation of normal goblins, but when he's surrounded by them later on and they all look bigger than he is, it just feels weird to me.

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Would have been much more enjoyable if he wasn't just outright stripped of his gear, he needed those tight pants torn up.

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Look, kid, I am not going to judge you how you go on about getting yourself a boyfriend (female (male)), but couldn't you have at least taken his anal virginity yourself?

Pure amateur.

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Pg56 first dialogue bubble says "Sara" instead of "Fiona".

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chin chin also means beg?!?!!? what were the Japenese cooking...

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Oh man I loved this I hope we get more from this artist like it! :D

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I agree with the comment at the end, the MC was not shown to be any kind of brat, the opposite, he was shown to be fighting a lot for the girl he loved, so the "correction" was not even a correction, it was just rape, i felt bad for him, especially at the end there, that beast boy was the one who deserved some correction, a shame it didn't happen tho, but i guess it is what it is tho...

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This one made me a little sad really. MC was trying to better himself for the girl he loved. I would have liked to have seen a little revenge at the end. I eel like that's missing a lot. I know the point of these is to have the MC broken, but just once I'd love to see the MC get revenge.

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Pages 57-58 went crazy

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Absolute perfection, my goodness.

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感觉好棒🥵

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