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[mdo-h] Twin Pinks (Futanarikko no Sekai 5) [English] [q91]

[無道叡智] ツインピンクス (ふたなりっ娘の世界 5) [英訳]

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Posted:2024-07-06 17:16
Parent:2969566
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Language:English  TR
File Size:10.16 MiB
Length:8 pages
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Posted on 06 July 2024, 17:16 by:   q91    PM
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===== General Notes =====
Source: https://e-hentai.org/g/2952013/a407ee3555/ (Image 003-)

===== Translator Notes =====
Any grammatical corrections are welcome.

===== Editor Notes =====
There were some inconsistency in the artwork. Some font colors appear to be misused, and even the skin colors of Momo 2.0 and Ai are switched on page 5. The font colors I could easily fix (unless it was Ai who said all those lines on page 2), but the skin colors? Sadly out of my field of expertise.

Images are also cropped, cleaned and down-sized about 40% to the same dimensions.

===== Update Notes =====
Fixed some grammar on page 2

===== Comment Notes =====
@eladav: Yes, it's meant to say "take care", not "care care". Fixed.
Posted on 30 June 2024, 00:08 by:   AriesWarlock    PM
Score +28
Thanks for the translation. Good to see translations for older futanari works.
Posted on 30 June 2024, 01:27 by:   sm1240    PM
Score +61
I do wish mdo-h did more with this story
Posted on 01 July 2024, 04:15 by:   eladav    PM
Score +6
on page 2 she says cure twice, isn't that supposed to be "take care"?
Posted on 06 July 2024, 18:25 by:   W1slicer    PM
Score +48
A lot of these word choices make zero sense.

Example: Persecuted does not mean the same thing as bullied, dominated, etc.
Posted on 15 July 2024, 07:28 by:   vsundae    PM
Score +33
here's some grammar fixes:
outside of speech bubbles for moans, please use periods at the end of sentences.
p2
"put your mind into it" -> "put your mind to it"
"such an docile-looking" -> "such a docile-looking"
p4
"my body can't go disobey" -> "my body can't disobey"
p8
"change school" -> "change schools"

and here's some more natural word choice suggestions:
p3
"to be doted..." -> "to have some fun too"
"what's with it's..." -> "what's with that size? it's fuckin' huge!"
p4
"when this happens..." -> "when this happens to the other me, I appear."
"scalding" -> "burning"
p6
"are~?" "are-are~?" -> "oh?" "what's this?"
"is this your first..." -> "is this your first time getting fucked?"
"sing with..." -> "moan for me! louder!"
"pestered" -> "violated"
"ai's being..." -> "ai's become her bitch..."
p8
"somehow..." -> "what the heck... happened here!?"
"if you get involved..." -> "if anyone gives you trouble again, I'll-"
"ano..." -> "um..."

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