Hello!
Thanks for watching my first take on a doujinshi fan-translation! All text-cleaning, translating, proofreading and editing were all made by me. This took a lot of my energy, but it was definitely worth it!
Of course, there may be some errors I may have made and not noticed. Comments would be greatly appreciated! Anyways, I look forward to doing more of these!

original:
https://e-hentai.org/g/2834768/ba6e94e726/

Japanese (RAW, Uncensored): https://e-hentai.org/g/2834768/ba6e94e726/
Japanese (RAW): https://e-hentai.org/g/2827749/83829e672a/
Chinese (RAW, Uncensored): https://e-hentai.org/g/2834766/e8ea6b4dca/
Chinese (RAW): https://e-hentai.org/g/2827754/1fcd9fe028/
Korean (RAW): https://e-hentai.org/g/2881032/99efba2ffe/

Base +45, kumoning +6, firedragon89 +14

If you're really going to do more translations please use the original sized images for editing instead of the ones downscaled to e-hentai's standard viewing resolution. The originals are at 2079 x 2593px not 1280 x 1818px. Unfortunately a very very very very popular beginner mistake.

I admit redrawing on this work isn't easy, but the blurred redrawings don't look good.

To the good thing. The typesetting looks fine. Just the font for moans , after looking at the RAWS, wouldn't have been my choice. A good beginner font for moans is SF Grunge Sans in my opinion. You could also take a look at fonts in the handwritten category on sites like dafont.com. With a bit of searching you can find nice looking ones there.

So, if this sites translation police doesn't rip your translation apart future uploads will de welcome.

Base +21, decidua +20, goya_dechi +6, viseurahh +6, bagiaaa +14, Ice_Cream +13, Sylphvine +6, SomeMan -6, Alphasekai +6, Brego1 -6, firedragon89 +14, A.Kasuga +6, BigPerv666 +8, and 4 more...

She crouched down to give him a blow job but got mad when he didn't get it, hahaha.

Base +7, AhKai +6, Alphasekai +6, Brego1 +6, firedragon89 +14, Vormik +7, 14EMB +6, yonidark +6, ComplexSavior +6, Budda001 +6

>Parallel shot where the girl is getting the fucking of her lifetime and creampied, in contrast to her love interest being unaware, looking for her or doing something mundane.
God I love this trope so much, even more so when the artist makes it all artsy and shit.
Pure SEX.

Base +20