credit to the translator and the person that brought decensored version

I think you should change Tankoubon's cover & index from Chinese version, at least to Japanese if not English.

Answer: Because I think it will be more appropriate version for this entry, which isn't the Chinese translation version and doesn't mean to target Chinese audiences at all. As I implied above, English version is the most appropriated one for this translated English version, if you don't have that you should go with the original Japanese one instead.

Last edited on 18 July 2024, 08:17.

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Is there a specific reason for that? I can switch to jp version but why?

Edit: ok, I think I understood what you meant, JP is like "defaut/original" version, while CN one clearly state it's a CN translation. Got it, thx!

Last edited on 18 July 2024, 09:53.

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The bubble with "I said it's too much!!" on page 196. the !! is kinda getting clipped

Also why is this not using the full res of the Chinese one?

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thx for feedback I'll change that

I don't understand, I took CN version as basis for doing the typo, the resolution is the same. CN one is 1280x1817, so is this one. I haven't done that much compressing, format is already jpg originaly. Can you be more specific?

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I was looking at https://e-hentai.org/g/2411219/4c8923a5b2/

Where the res is 1443 x 2048

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Ok thanks, and fck. I got the CN version on N H, and they probably use a grabber to get all the pictures, that's why the the res is the same as the gallery but not the same as the file. And also why is that? Why resolution in gallery is lower than the torrent one?

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The resolution you may be seeing is resampled one, and N.H always downsamples their images as well... one should never download anything from there if they care about quality and having original files. N.H gets all their stuff from here anyways, so might as well use the stuff from here.

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That's an usefull tip for me, thx!

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You should redo this gallery with proper resolutions and tell everybody you know to stop grabbing raws from NH. I don't know who recommended NH as a raw source to you to begin with but now that you know, spread the best practice.

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Did you get all doki doki because she's so kawaii?

Welp, there goes my boner.

Whoever translated this, read that line again and then ask yourself wtf you're doing

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I wish the TL of early chapters got fixed. Its readable for the most part but then you have chapter 1 and "My oppai feel kimochi", "Shigokuna - WONDERFUL" and other "funny" translations, page 19 that makes completely no sense. There are some other small errors or weird phrasings here and there but first 20 pages are definetely the worst.

P19

TL

>So this is your boyfriend.
>Well? No He was actually just pretending to be someone else.
>Seriously? How many boyfriends do you have Noriko?

JP

> 彼氏さんってあのチャラ男とこ - Is this boyfriend that playboy guy?
> ちがうよあいつはフっちゃって別の男 - No, I dumped that one, this is a different guy. (Im not sure if this is correct, but I assume Fucchata is shortened Furarechatta)
> Seriously? How many boyfriends do you have Noriko? Third sentence is ok

Suddenly that makes lot more sense now. Then right after that:

TL

> This is your Big Brother isnt it?
> Nn no I dont know who he is... he's just hot.
> Introduce him next time

???? She doesnt know who he is now? Amnesia? How do you introduce someone you dont know?

JP

> この人お兄さんじゃないの？ - This is your Big Brother isnt it? - TL is fine
> 違うよ二人が知らない男イケメン - Nno, its just a hottie you two dont know
> 今度紹介してくれよ - Introduce him next time. - TL is fine

Its just one wrong sentence but it completely breaks the conversation.

P61

> Im Gonna Squirt

Speech bubble points towards the guy and JP says Dasu (so just "cumming") . Guys dont say theyre gonna "squirt" when theyre cumming

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@harkoz : Give me all the corrections in comment with page ref, text, and substitute text, that you find really necessary and I'll make the changes and upload them in the few days coming, since I'm not the translator I haven't touched anything.

"> 彼氏さんってあのチャラ男とこ - Is this boyfriend that playboy guy? " you mean "your" instead of "this" right?

@vivendicrust : It would take to much of my time to redo everything, so unless I find some kind of magic solution at some point, no

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This book has got to be cursed or something. Translated twice and both times the editors grabbed downsampled raws from NH AND refused to correct their mistake.

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I randomly opened pg.13 (for comparison purposes with other releases/raws) and noticed there's text missing on the very first dialogue box.

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Kurumi is perfect

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This translation is a joke. It reads like a 14 year old megaweeb fanfiction author from 2003 did it.

Using words like "kawaii" (except mispelled as "kamaii") and "kimochi" in place of their equivalent english words/phrases is super cringe and ultra-weeby. And that's just the stuff I distinctly remember; there's more.

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