来月は『彼女は狙われている』～セックス編～の最終話を投稿させていただきます。

今月もご支援いただき、本当にありがとうございました。

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感觉又水了一话，不过下一话总算是最终话了

绿毛龟这下彻底玩脱咯

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下個月這篇的最終回, 希望不要是這系列的最終回阿

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氣氛都烘托到這了，能不能索性讓陽菜子這個碧池徹底墮落，跟之前沒睡過的男人都補一輪算了，什麼鄰居啦小屁孩啦同學啦電車癡漢啦婦產科惡醫啦都輪一輪，給男主有講竟猜看誰是爹，猜對了孩子跟他姓，繼續送老婆給別人弄懷孕

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这不男主射爽了，女主被干爽了，基友干女主也爽了，三赢（

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真的被牛走咯，嘻嘻嘻嘻嘻嘻

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等总集篇好了。。这系列多的我有点收集不过来了
话说现在是真的做了还是妄想？

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急急急，都发展到这个地步了不分手我不认可！破都破了，可不要给我来个绿毛龟妻子真心出轨普通结局收尾，狠狠地分！

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Jerking off to the work? That's baby shit. I'll be jerking off to the salt in the comments here.

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ストーリーも絵もすげぇ劣化している。。。
多くの批判があるのにこの路線で突き進むのはよっぽど太客の特定の支援者がいるんだろうな。

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@Orion9137
what a chad

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looks like that's a wrap folks. Guess all that's left is what's Yuichi's move after all this.

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Man, I hate this series. There are no likeable characters in it anymore. I can't even root for Yuichi anymore. He deserves to suffer. Fuck, man...

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懂些日语，大致说下剧情：
1-开局就是男主自述自上次刚田发视频的日子已经过了近两周，男主由于视频中女主坦白不会主动和男主说分手，如果男主知道这件事的话就会和男主分手；男主就抱着侥幸心理觉得只要装作不知道这件事，
女主就会一直和他在一起（男主对女主偷情的事情完全没生气，反而是怕女主离他而去；内心各种挣扎痛苦）；
2-后续就是在学校刚田和女主在学校各种play，女主还责备刚田说好不在学校play的（底线滑坡）
3-后就是冬假两周后，男主生病一直卧床，这期间女主每天来送抚慰品，男主心理感到安慰，觉得女主还是爱他的；但是（悲），在这期间，刚田也每天给男主发送他和女主的无套视频，在连续10天的交配
后， 刚田提出要和女主接吻，女主以接吻是男女朋友之间才会做的事情为由拒绝了，于是刚田提出要和女主来一场为期一周的温泉之旅，并立下豪言壮语要在这期间取得女主的接吻许可
4-男主看视频得到消息后，激动下楼询问母亲，女主今天有没有来送饭，母亲否认，并确定昨天就没来了（悲）男主得知后立马给女主打电话，被拒接，刚田回复在一周的温泉旅游期间女主的手机为他保管，
而 且这期间他不会再给男主发任何视频，只会在之后告诉男主有没有取得接吻许可
5-第七天，刚田让男主来一双面玻璃旅馆，后面就是各种doi，这期间展示女主的各种顺从，对刚田的关心（男主内心各种痛苦挣扎）最后接吻，边do边接吻，然后要求女主跟他成为男女朋友，女主一开始坚决
不同意，男主此时也是为了挽回希望开门挽留，谁知道打不开门（黄毛的阴谋）女主最后没撑住（给我撑住啊！混蛋）同意了刚田男女朋友的要求；男主也射了一裤裆，并且悟出这就是终极的ntr,终极的绿帽
体验（蚌）后续就是几天后被女主叫出来了，且看下回分解

写了一堆，说说我自己的看法：
作为一个资深ntr战士，阅览众多的ntr小说漫画游戏，阳莱子系列一直是我的心头好，我也早早的在两年前一直赞助追更这个系列到现在，阳莱子系列是极-极少数完全凭长篇幅，慢进度，重内心细节刻画的男主视角pov手法进行创作纯nts/ntr漫画，这点甚至nt00和众多古早韩漫（韩漫以前ntr很多）都没有做到；尽观阳莱子这一系列，作者让众多黄毛在阳莱子的阴户前徘徊了近两年（badend与秘密系列除外，作者说过是这个不划入正篇）可以说阳莱子系列在NTS（不知道的可以去搜索）这条道路上走到了极致；
那么走到极致后呢？各种套路玩尽之后呢？作者就NTS撩拨人心的创意枯竭之后呢？无可避免的出现了刚田这一角色（我一开始以为会是早期的小孩哥，后面想想小孩哥无法耽起大任，年龄小，辈分低，天生攻击性与侵略性就低了一截），再结合作者早期的作品与作者的网名，还有pixiv中收藏的各种ntr素材（蚌，仿佛看到我自己）这个系列走到阳莱子恶堕这一步就不难理解了，那么恶堕之后呢？我不知道，但是我也希望他能继续更新下去，作为一个追了两年多的读者，对这个系列确实有挺深的感情（要不然我也不会写那么多了）市面上这样的作品实在是太少了
说了那么多，无非是今晚更新后第一时间看完之后也确实破防了（蚌）可恶！你妈的作者！还我阳莱子！给我好好的更新下去啊！
当作写读后感了，能看到这的大家就当个乐子

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I feel the NNT keeps making Genki's penis bigger. Either that or it's an art inconsistency. Also was Hinako aware of Yuichi being behind the door?

@baconpie I feel you. Everyone just feels deplorable. Was really hoping Yuichi would have snuffed the problem when he had the chance 🫤

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On one hand, this story has been dragged out for far too long and it would be best for everyone if the author moved on to a fresh work. But on the other hand, these comment sections are just too good.

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小孩哥和学长哭了，明明是我能先来的，我们哪里比不上这个比😡

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After doing a machine translation, all I can do is laugh. This feels more like dark humor than anything. Yuichi gets his ultimate despair ejaculation, Genki seems like he gets Hinako and gives her a necklace as a sign that she's his, and Hinako likely ends up pregnant and becomes a housewife.

Don't know why there's a 5th chapter. Feels like things can be wrapped up in one chapter. Well, if the end is near, I can say that this has been a roller-coaster of a ride over the past 2-3 years. Feels like it was heading somewhere unique. I look forward to their next series.

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Wow, another month until this shit ends, I have no words for this, I don't know if it's a reference to the first chapter of the arc or not, but what Yuichi says when he cums that it was the best orgasm of his life, is Something that Hinako said was going to happen, that she told him at the end of telling him the story, I have two options, that it was all so that Yuichi would have the best orgasm and in this way she would still be the Hinako that she was supposed to be, a chess master, but I don't know if you could smell that Yuichi was in that room, I think it's more that she has seen that they have taken her heart, which for her was the last thing, very typical of Japanese history, the heart and the kiss is the last thing she takes, and that's why she's going to tell him everything that's happened and break up with him. I don't know if Yuichi will convince her to stay with her, but most likely she'll end up like Hinako's mother. That is, cuckolding him with consent and the other being a cuck all his life, or he will end up with him and that's it, I don't know which of the two is more likely, but damn, I wanted this to be the last chapter so that he wouldn't stretch the gum more, but no, it has to make us wait another week to see the conclusion of the series, which does not give any sincere clue as to what it could be, for Yuichi's sake I did feel a little bad for him before, with this already I don't feel bad at all, but it still makes me angry how bad and manipulable Hinako is or apparently is, I did have some faith even after the previous chapter that it could end even if it was somewhat good, with this chapter I no longer know What to think and the author to make it even worse the plot is good, so it makes me abandon that hope but there is still something left, I want the last chapter to arrive now to see what Hinako tells him and see how she explains everything he tells her. has made yuichi.

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"I was playing with you all along, teehee! I told Genki to do all those things! Did you like my acting? You really thought he stole me!" Won't even make this better at this point... Just make the next chapter a fucking epilogue where yuichi is a giga cuck taking care of some other dude's kid. ~_~

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The visuals look kind of bland aside from the rimjob which was great and we can feel how much Hinako seems to enjoy it. Still no real love, just raw sex again and again without much spicy stuff. The kisses may be the end for Yuichi sadly.

I do hope the translation will bring some spice around revelations, secret stuff and clues on how the sex arc will end (no idea if it's the final arc or not). We need more stories in this universe.

Overall it's kinda sad, Yuichi is even less likable as he's doing nothing proactiv and not much progression from Hinako and Goda, lots of images for not much cool stuff. We do see the sexual stuff more clearly but that's it. Bring back sniffing and being a slut !

Baconpie, please saves us ! Do you have a discord by the way ?

I hope NNT will give us some Hinako's secrets chapters to give more kinky stuff and revelations, even chapters like the blowjob one was great.

Last edited on 31 July 2024, 19:44.

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Yeeeeaaahhh... to anyone still hoping for a "4d chess maneuver" your out of luck. Yuichi seemed euphoric when he got his nut and Hinako wrapped her legs around Genki. Nothing is ever 100%, but their relationship is done.

I do wonder why Hinako texted Yuichi afterwards. If she's with Genki now, there's no reason to do a formal breakup. Hinako could allow Yuichi to see her have sex, but Genki kinda does that already. That's why I believe the chapters should've been merged. The epilogue being stand-alone is interesting, but what else could they do aside from show Hinako being pregnant.

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Bitch this is stupid
NNT made the monkey have a third leg for penis it's disgusting

Btw Yuichi at some point did try to stop it but monkey blocked the door so he got stuck inside and could only watch.

Last text message from Hinako is "Sorry Yuichi, I've got something to tell you".

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@Narc69 I am feeling like devil's advocate now, but even if chances for Yuichi x Hinako relationship to survive are small, I will list the reasons why they aren't 0% (even if - I repeat- there are small)

1. This author proved many times that he doesn't really care about sense. People and his fans are seeing much more depth in his works than he himself, he can pull asspull and it wouldn't be shocking
2. Most important: he personally said that "he loves stories with bitter-sweet ending when heart comes back but body doesn't". He already pulled it in his other netorase story about the wife with her ex.
3. In that story he also pulled it "as deep as he can" just to make "ending full for forgiveness, but she was pregnant with other already"

I dont want to argue that it will have "happy" end, I am just listing the reasons why I wouldnt be shocked.
If someone wants good netorase story (without ending in NTR and withour author making recycling of the same images) -> there is Yumi/Somethign is lose in her head from nt00.

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Comments from 4chan
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Really messy summary
At a cursory glance, Yuichi doesn't act. He sits there and mopes and plays ignorant to the daily life with Hinako.
During Winter break, Yuichi fakes being ill and stays in his room for a week, watching more footage of Genki banging her, convincing her to kiss him.
He manages to make her kiss him and proves it by dragging Yuichi to a hotel to watch it.
Yuichi views Hinako fall in real time, and she professes her love to Genki at the end of their session.
Yuichi fuckin' nuts in place and sobs that he's lost entirely.
The final 2 scenes is Hinako finally sending a message to Yuichi saying "I'm sorry. I want to talk." and then the preview panel with a To Be Continued.
Out. Fucking. Standing.
Also, NNT announced that next chapter will be the last one for sure. Something about this chapter being cut a bit short, but yeah. Another month of this.
>>8129361
Smaller details
Hinako and Genki have sex at school right behind Yuichi's back. Yuichi is fully aware of it but still says nothing. Plus, she accidentally leaves a cumtrail on the seat, showing that she's slipping hiding things now.
During Yuichi's fake illness, Hinako brought him food and left it with his mom. The mom notes that Hinako looks miserable, guilty even.
Genki stole Hinako's phone and refused to send Yuichi any footage for a week while he convinced Hinako to go for the kiss.
Yuichi is put into a one-way mirror room to watch the whole thing go down. And Genki put something heavy in front of the only door out of Yuichi's confinement to prevent him from trying anything.
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Oh no LMAO
OH NO NO NO NO NO
This guy is literally setting up a fucking 4D mind game elder god-tier acting Hinako reveal right at the very end where she actually knew everything since the storm chapter and asks the cuck how his orgasm felt
Fuuuuck me this might actually stay NTS for some god forsaken reason
>>8129361
using browser translation, it seems like he says last chapter of the sex edition, does this not basically confirm that hinako beats the cock and they move past this?
>>8129379
>>8129389
Now this is what I call cope lmao
>>8129401
I can already see it in my minds eye lmao
>ABLOOBLOOBLOOBLOO HINAKO CHAN ABLOOBLOOBLOO IM A LIMPDICKED KEK ABLOOBLOOBLOO
>...
>H-Hinako-chan??
>...fu...
>*HEAVY MOUTHBREATHING*
>ufufufufufufufufu
>Hinako turns around and has the smuggest grin of all time on her face
>UFUFUFUFU YUUICHI-KUN~
It's such a retarded fucking reveal that I can see this cunt doing it.
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On the one hand I respect an author who clearly has a defined path in his head where this would lead to. When the author mentioned that he was going to begin a sex arc, and even before that when there was the announcement of a blowjob chapter most readers were thinking that there was going to be a twist or the "4D-chess" cope. Where most people were very vocal about their distaste towards chapters 1-3 was that it was being set up to deviate from the unusual premise and dynamic of MC and Hinako where she was in control at all times, but appeared to be a facade that shattered in chapter 2 when she monologued about getting defeated by Gouda. It was disappointing for a promising series to fall into the usual route of many NTS to NTR works and it felt boring and anticlimactic. It was then reinforced in chapter 3 when it was revealed that she dropped all pretenses of the NTS play and just cheated for 3 whole months. All of this by the way was because we saw in Chapters 1-3 that Yuichi was not enjoying this at all. No mention of boners, no mention of pleasure, no cumming.
Until now.
The gamechanger here is we finally get Yuichi blowing his best load seeing his girlfriend make out and get mating press'd by Gouda while he's in the cuck chair. This can now go one or two ways:
1. Yuichi accepts his masocuck status and is okay with Hinako sleeping around and even escalating it with other men, more hardcore play et cetera
2. Yuichi gets post nut clarity and realizes he is being emotionally manipulated by physical pleasure and confronts her and asks her to stop the NTS play and just be a happy couple
Those situations might happen but I have reason to believe that it won't. Here's why. During the chapter 3 hot tub cuddle, Hinako says that she can't accept a cuck arrangement with Yuichi anymore and that regardless of whether he likes it or not she's gonna break up with him. She mentions that explicitly to Gouda who was asking her to be his woman. Now some might say that's part of the NTS 4D chessplay to tease him into having the emotional destruction so the pleasure of seeing her get reamed live is amplified.
Here's my counter
NNT the author said the ending to She is Being Targeted will be different from his other series. If you read NNT's previous works, they all involve the cuck willingly or unwillingly continuing the play and the relationship. In fact, most of NNT's other endings are neutral to "good" endings. I believe NNT means that She is Being Targeted will have Yuichi experience the ultimate pleasure of being a cuck, but will be broken up with by Hinako in the end. She will be the one to walk away and he will forever be unable to chase the high because he will become discarded as part of the NTS play. Hinako has no reason anymore to do it for Yuichi's pleasure, so she has 0 reason to keep it around. Remember that she is not a sadist, as per her monologue in chapter 2, and if she has discovered the pleasure of cock independent of Yuichi being there, she will not need him in this relationship. I believe when the author mentioned this series having a different ending, he means that this is the first time he'll explicitly make a BAD ending
>>8129416
I forgot the other crackpot theory about where this can go but this depends too much on the author remembering he set up this storyline in the beginning. It's also a possibility that Hinako thinks she fell for the cock and starts dating Genki, only for it to be revealed that he's sent as an agent of the chatroom where they were passing around her voyeur pics in. Seeing as he's the MC's best friend he was in the best position to steal the girl and make her fall for the cock, when she breaks up with Yuichi, Genki pulls a bait and switch and passes her over to the rest of the boys in a gangbang that calls back to the original gangbang panel in the prologue.
>>8129416
That shit would be anticlimactic as hell ngl
>>8129419
The way I see it salvaging the ending to remain NTS hinges on a lot of assumptions
>Hinako should be aware of being secretly recorded in Chapters 2&3
>Hinako should be aware of when Genki started to spill their sex friend arrangement
>Hinako should be aware of when Yuichi starts to become suspicious so the actions described here >>8129414 are intentional and not her slipping up because she doesn't care about NTS anymore
>Hinako should still love Yuichi
>Hinako should derive pleasure from Yuichi's pleasure
and those are a lot of loose ends to tie up nicely if it really is the finale next month
>>8129421
Its not like this story has good writing kek
Genki literally became some bizarre sex god mastermind that even sets up cameras because ???? This could easily just pivot into Hinako providing an Oscar-winning performance all the way
You can flip the observations either way. You might argue that Hinako only called Yuuichi now to break up with him because Genki conquered her. I argue she only called Yuuichinow bbecause he FINALLY ejaculated
>>8129379
I dunno. I still hope for a bittersweet happy end though.
>>8129384
Yeah I expected a confrontation at the start of the chapter. can't believe he managed to sneak in another cliffhanger. honestly respect.
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From the first chapters Hinako kept telling Yuuichi that one day she will have cheating sex with someone with a big dick and will fall for the dick and that this will give Yuuichi the greatest, most pleasurable AND most depressing orgasm ever. Well, that has finally happened. Will this all turn out to be Hinako's plan? Who knows. But Hinako's repeated mentions during the start of their play of how she will one day lose to a big dick and make Yuuichi reach the ultimate pleasure is the only reason I still have a tiny bit of hope.
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Can we agree that if the ending of Hinako keeps it NTS then Netorase Club is also NTS?
>>8129449
Why would you ever compare these two?
>girl fucks another guy because her bf asked her to, he asks her out, she says "no way lol I'm only doing this for my bf" with digust written all over her face
vs
>girl fucks another guy behind her bfs back for half a year, every day, doesn't report and stops having sex with her bf
>>8129457
There's one schizo who has a vendetta against NTS Club for some incomprehensible reason and he's been trying to get it "banned" from the general forever.
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Next Chapter,
Hinako confronts Yuuchi, turns around and shows her baby bump with the necklace Genki gave her. Tells Yuuchi that she has completely fallen for the dick and breaks off with Yuuchi and admits to all the cheating she done behind his back, Yuuchi crys and beg to not break up and reside his lover position to Genki.
Time skip Yuuchi is now just another misserable cuck fapping to videos of Hinako get railed by her new lover the sex god Genki.

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I commented how awful it would've been to have Yuichi erect behind his phone, despite actually losing his GF in the process. To my surprise, Yuichi is nutting to the one thing Hinako always teased him into; Goda is cold. Blocks Yuichi inside of that tiny ass room while HInako now messages him in front of the mirror. Dirty move but Yuichi... Man, Yuichi what the fuck. Least amount of balls on a man imaginable. He did what I realistically feared and just let things go. Such a pushover, and then consecrates his loss with a no-hands nut on the floor. The mother didn't pick up on anything too, just saw that she felt "guilty".
*sigh*
NNT saying that he could've gone on for another chapter, but will make the next one the last is... a thing I guess. If he does 4D Hinako and has a retrospective on how Hinako mapped this whole escapade out, it'll feel like the worst. If she just breaks up with him, it could've been a text and left it at that. Don't burn another 300 pages through text messages, again. Or, if this is some long-drawn out confession to truly loving Goda and asking Yuichi's permission to let this "NTS" play continue, despite we and Yuichi knowing full well that she's not into him anymore, then it'll feel like a slap in the face across everyone.

All in all, this is truly the hate read of all time.

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If anyone is willing to talk about the serie, this chapter and all the what if/alternatives chapters/whatever NTS/NTR over discord, here is mine : flopflop5979

NNT had a gem created from his hands and it feels like he went in different direction, I'll still trust him till the end tho. I was hoping for a grand final for the sex chapters but it kinda fell flat, good stuff but all the build-up was top tier

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Wow, this one is just kind of... bad? I had low expectations, but it's somehow worse than I expected. The art is extremely rough and the writing only lessens in quality with every chapter - I can feel myself losing a braincell with each piece of dialogue from Goda I read. None of the characters are likeable or interesting anymore. Goda is and always has been a terribly written mcguffin of a character who's gotten shoved into the generic NTR antagonist archetype. Hinako is completely ruined and has done basically nothing this whole arc aside from moaning and crying. I used to like her earlier on, but she's just unredeemable and also laughably generic at this point. I'm not taking the whole, "She's gotten in over her head", thing to heart because it's such a lousy excuse. Yuichi is... fine, I guess? He's just there I suppose. I'm not a fan of him turning out to actually enjoy all of this sexually. Boring and overdone.

I've seen this same sort of ending copy and pasted through several other NTR media, and the amount of convenient hentai logic we needed to get to this point is crazy. The ball was dropped as soon as the sex arc began, in my opinion. It's all felt rushed, underwhelming and confusing. The comments I've read about the direction this series might've taken have been genuinely more interesting than the actual plot. There was so much potential here. But, you know, in the grand scheme of things this never really mattered. It's just a hentai manga, that's all. You're meant to get off to it and then go on with your life. It's just upsetting to see something like this fall flat on its face at the end. It honestly kind of sullies the rest of the series for me, back when it was pure NTS.

I do actually like some parts of this still, yes. I'm a sucker for mating press scenes, especially with leg lock, so my wish for that has finally been granted. I enjoy the kiss finally being taken, however the crying is still a major turn-off, like seriously. I think I'd hold all of this in far higher regards if she stuck with some semblance of her actual personality throughout this. Apparently she confesses that she loves Goda during the (very likely impregnation) creampie, which is again extremely stupid in context, but hot out of context, which is really all I can ask for at this point.

No clue why we're still waiting on a final chapter. I've got no hopes anymore. It's 100% going to be your average, "I love sex from this random asshole more than literally everything else in life" type of ending. Pregnancy, breakup, the whole shebang. I'm sure it'll be drawn out, too. Personally, as a hardcore NTR fan who loves the dark and emotional aspects of the genre, I was extremely excited when things started moving on to actual cheating. Unfortunately, I think the story reached its point of no return once Goda was introduced as an actual rival. Not in the good way, either. I feel like there's dozens of aspects that could've gone better, been written more interestingly and explored deeper. I feel like the start of sexual acts itself could've been a good turning point, à la "There's something loose in her head", wherein we could've continued the NTS through a more intimate analogue. Hell, I would've been more than happy if the author took a break from this story, drew something else for a few months, then came back to this reinvigorated.

I don't know, I'm just typing nonsense. I know for a fact that I'm not going to care about any of this by even tomorrow and I'm probably going to forget about this series altogether soon after the final chapter. Sometimes you've just got to yap into the void about your disappointment, though.

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first of all Kudos to @baconpie, they were able to predict Nnt plot for this chap almost 1:1

After 3 chap of lackluster Goda Arc Nnt finally was able to give us a somewhat decent Ntr scenes. Yuichi fought "well" but alas the Gum Gum dick was superior. Yuichi had his best Cuckold ejaculation maybe the best ejaculation period and probably his last ejaculation if in the next chap we get Hinako Yuichi break up.

Three possible prediction:
1) As Yuichi has fallen now like Hinako and has finally succumbed to his dark tendencies (copium x95) we finally get a 'gotcha I knew U were there behind the glass' from Hinako continouing with reminding him that she finally fulfilled the promise between them from https://e-hentai.org/s/c6696f0034/2806062-101 and that she had to box him in a no win situation to finally make him fall. Goda arc finshed with Yuichi and Hinako still remain together but more true to their kinks, Goda get a dildo for hire treatment or maybe he finally gives up after realising that he was played hard.
Apologue of Yuichi enjoying his cuck life and Hinako bring random partners to fuck.
2) All the above is the same but Goda becomes a side lover or main lover with condition of Yuichi still being with Hinako as a cuck bf or a toy
Apologue of them all 3 going at it with Hinako "Harem" ending.
3) What's coming is a straight confession from Hinako or both maybe but Less likely from Yuichi. (No sike its a prank bro here) The ship has sailed. Hinako's pregnant and has trully fallen. Yuichi cried but has no choice but to let her go. Tear from Hinako flows as she sees Yuichi going away but wipes it as soon as her phone rings.
Apologue: Hinako and Goda are going out now, Many months later Hinako comes face to face with Yucihi but this time she greeds him as a mere fellow classmate. Yuichi build up some courage to reply but before he could She hears the call from Goda and runs towards him. Now 2 options here: Goda still send some sex tape to Yuichi which he can't help fap to or Yuichi has finally accepted the reality and is now trying to move on.

The End.

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And thus, Yuuichi has fallen into darkness not with a bang but with a sad splurt. Well, I mean he did try to stop them but oh the NTR plot door had to be there. Yuuichi tried but in the end, he can't escape the NTR MC syndrome, that is - be a weak, useless pushover. The NTR gods are laughing at the despair.

The writing was hilarious though, I'll give NnT that. Yuuichi wallowing in despair and being the personification of cognitive dissonance. "I came here to stop them でも..." too many buts and it's not even Hinako's. It's like NnT saw that Yuuichi is getting likeable and he's like "not on my ntr watch" and proceed to make him the most insufferable cuck ever. At this point, you might as well push him down too and creampie him next to the Hinako.

"I gotta stop them...! HOWEVER..."
"I went up to try to stop them... HOWEVER..."
""I pushed the door to break it open... HOWEVER ..."

Almost wanted to gouge my eyes at that sequence.
I liked this series but the writing is a despair ridden mess. I feel worse having to read this chapter. Well, what happens next? Is Yuuichi gonna kill himself? Will he murder Hinako for being a slutty slut? Is Genki-kuns dick gonna extend even further like Sun Wukong's rod?

Oh boy, what a ride this has been... it's just like any ride I take on the fairground - starts good and at the end, I'm a vomited mess.

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Some of these comments are huffing copium. Let's be real here, there's a very high chance of break up and the author resetting the story.

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I never thought that a doujinshi with poor art but an excellent storyline would end up as a doujinshi with both poor art and an even worse storyline.

Despite being a doujinshi with potential, including its characters and plot development that showcased the writer's cleverness, I always overlooked the weakness in the art.

Now it has become a doujinshi with poor art, poor plot development, and poor characters.

If this was the plan the writer had from the start, I think they missed the mark at the final turn and buried their own work with their own hands.

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@Allera2. Looking back at his other work, I do agree about the bittersweet endings. I just feel that Yuichi and Hinako drifted too far apart, especially due to Yuichi's inability to confront Hinako or Genki. All that leading to Hinako instinctually choosing Genki.

I will say that Hinako going through all that and still not giving verbal confirmation on a relationship with Genki gives just a faint bit of hope.

I'm still pissed though. Probably one of the few NTR mangas that just upsets me greatly. This, Chitose, and Girl in the library have done immense damage to my psyche. Don't know how NTR enjoyers can power through them. More power to them I guess.

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The most effective NTR has the reader invested in the characters and upset when they ultimately lose. Unfortunately, Hinako was good bait for NTR, making the NTS even better since we thought she wouldn't. This could still be an NTS ending but these last chapters put a bad taste in my mouth.
Frankly, the Genki chapters are my least favorite anyways. Whether it was rimming, eating her out, blowjob, and so on, it was always unsatisfying.

Side thing, did anyone else notice that NNT drew Genki with significantly more muscles than before? He draws him bigger with every edition. That full frontal even makes him seem taller than before too.

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我只替大屌青梅小孩哥不值，明明是我先来的

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Finally some kissing after months...

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English speaking comments are crying and upvoting comments about how nothing can save this now. Comments in JP are hyped and glad with the chapter, hoping for a full 5D chess reveal next month. Im leaning more with my JP friends this time. USA guys, it had "netorare" in the fucking name stop crying.

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disappointed it went from nts to ntr. hopefully the next series clearly defines the genre ahead of time instead of falsely giving a sense of security

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盲猜结局是怀孕ed吧，看这第四篇没有说有在继续喝避孕药，估计是要牛走了。但也不排除最后来个大反转，说是这些都是阳菜子安排好的剧本。（不大可能吧） 娱乐猜测，勿喷，如有不同想法欢迎分享~ 还是希望作者能继续做下去这个系列，或者开一个更好的系列。

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so-called superior genes yet 4 months of creampies and she remains unbred?

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@ rapola
The author did not refer to the work as NTS.
The author has added the NTR tag from his first work until now.

This work was not changed from NTS to NTR.
In the work, Hinako predicted NTR, and initially only started NTS. As a result, it became the predicted NTR. The author's previous work was also NTR.
Hinako consistently predicted NTR to Yuichi.

There are only three people who say that this work was changed from NTS to NTR without planning.
1.A person who cannot read properly
2.person with paranoia
3.People who have read works that have not been properly translated into Asian languages

@Cannar
you are right
Everything happened as Hinako predicted. As Hinako said, the two eventually fell together. Now all that remains is whether Hinako can be with Yuichi.
Having sex with Genki and loving Yuichi, Two people can love even if they are not lovers. Now Hinako can only love Genki or have sex with other men.
Of course, HInako did not say that she would repeat the depressing pleasure to Yuichi.

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@rapola
Eclairer usually uses translation tools to speak (KR to EN), so their diction and grammar will usually have issues here or there that will need to be parsed to be understood.

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I just checked out the english translation from kusso's patreon. Man, if NNT pulls a "Fufu, it's all an act! Did you enjoy it? Awww, cute, now strip and lemme clean you up" in the next chapter, that's going to be a total shitshow. There’s no way Hinako could make up for the betrayal and pain she inflicted on Yuichi my boi. And I'm saying this as someone who used to think this series should stick to NTS. I just can't accept an NTS ending at this point. We're already knee-deep in hard NTR, so NNT better stay true to that and not pull some stupid 4D chess move in the next chapter. My hope for them to reconcile died back in episode 2 when she actually fucked Genki and hid it from Yuichi.

Plus, what's even the point of that 7-day hot spring fuckfest if we don’t even get to see what happened there? Goda could’ve just fucked Hinako's brains out during their 10-day winter break to get her permission for the kiss, like, "Yo Yuichi, here's the 10-day nonstop fucking we did during the winter break. I also got her permission for the kiss. Let's meet at the love hotel this Saturday." Why waste like 50 pages on that shit only for Goda to say, "Nah, I'm not sending you any pics or vids, lol. I’ll just let you know once she’s cool with kissing"? NNT better make a side story chapter for that because it sure is a fucking waste of everyone's time.

Seeing NNT's subscriber count plummet by 20-30% with each new chapter drop, only for it to bounce back to its original numbers shortly after, is absolutely hilarious. People are literally losing their minds and turning into otters in real time because of this series, and I can’t believe I’m also turning into one, fuck. NNT sure is the GOAT.

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translation doko

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贤者时间的一点看法
整部作品的走向很有趣。在之前，女主是完全凌驾于男主之上的主导位置，她可以通过自己的精心设计，保证整个“ntr游戏”的进行，在并没出轨的同时，让男主体验被ntr的感觉，满足男主的xp
而在真正出轨做爱之后，女主的统治地位完全崩塌了。她意识到自己无法抵抗欲望和诱惑，因此这个所谓的“ntr游戏”彻底失控
我被撩动和刺激的点有两个，其一就是女主自认为可以把控结果翻车被逐渐蚕食的统治丢失。另一点在于，男女主不断进行危险的“ntr游戏”试探结果最终自食恶果。女主对自我把控的自信和男主屈从欲望对女主的默许是游戏进行的前提（事实上女主会不断进行这种ntr游戏是因为男主很喜欢并且没有真正的拒绝）。

所以结局无法避免的会导向俗套ntr的结局（目前来看）。
显然男主是无法打破现状的，男主是极端软弱的，诸如分手，戳破谎言，大战黄毛等等都不现实。他甚至没法拒绝被ntr。
女主呢，在这种“媚药鸡吧”（笑）的设定下，她也没法夺回统治地位。
黄毛。黄毛只是工具而已。
所以无论是女主彻底堕落，还是男主原谅女主，两人解放天性继续搞ntr，都是并不新奇的结局。
想写出新意打破僵局其实有很多方法，比如女主觉醒克服欲望再次获得统治地位，或者搞个什么大黄毛ntr了小黄毛，消解这种“欲望困境”
但显然“新奇”并不代表“涩情”，很容易会丧失作品的涩涩程度。
作者应该还是会按以往的经验选择“受孕＋原谅”的结局吧

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Man, I can't focus on these recent chapters because of that pointy ass nose whenever the perspective is even slightly angled. It's making this half as enjoyable than it should be for me.

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不管结局是受孕后原谅并还在一起，还是被彻底牛走，我都感觉有点虎头蛇尾，因为这两种解决都太平常了，我期待结局有个意想不到的展开

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😭能不能学nt00老师啊。先给我们画个好结局你再去画坏结局

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再等两天就可以看到最终结局啦，首先唯一可以确定肯定会哭，男主也会哭，其他的看作者是走奇葩反转还是一黑到底了

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总感觉要是女主真雌堕了就落了下乘，估计最后又是普通ntr怀孕典中典，要是有反转啥的来点乐子就好了

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妥協的最後接著中出 好棒...

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啃完英文版，各位放心，居然真给作者圆回来了……

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刚买完一大批同人志被作者的玩法所折服，所以去看看作者还有什么其他好创作，结果cien告诉我除了if以外女主真被这个蹦出来的刚田给上了···
这不就失去原本nts/ntr play的意义了么，那种“假设”带来的刺激感和女主纯爱拷打的优位完全消失殆尽，变成了非常地摊输给压力怪竿役，的难怪cien上那么多日英老哥破防
咱就是说不一定要给这对奇葩鸳鸯什么美满结局，就算一如既往以吊胃口结束、从此不再有这个系列也罢，或许他起草性爱篇的同时就已经犯下了这个错误
LS还有说最后圆回来的，说实话很好奇，刚田批也透了，炮友威胁也成了，这种经典不利下怎么圆回来一时还真想不到，天降半挂创思刚田？
是说本来是求个背德的刺激的，结果还是被背刺了的感觉，牛果然是诱人又危险的双刃剑啊，还是去看看ntl缓解一下紧张好了

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