Work-in-progress update for 4th Chapter of the series as requested. Please help with suggestions in comments. :)

For full chapter 1-3, just search "FEFanatica" on e-hentai/***** and other sites. Thank-you.

kek now we have AI slop in doujinshi section

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Thanks dude, this is great

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AI goes in misc

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Hope to punish her anus hard!

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"I didn't even get off with yours" Bitch, that is advanced stupid to say.

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Hi. Here are my suggestions: While the protagonist is dealing with Aqua, each page is interspersed with memories from other universes, where he tells us how he learned even more about submitting to get anal, vaginal when he sincerely loved the person, blowjobs, etc. The final 5th chapter could be more ambitious in terms of crossovers (the most loved and known animes, games, etc. to satisfy everyone). And then before part 6 to close the only love story that matters to him.

1) One Piece: With Robin and Nami before Rem and Ram, he learned to satisfy two women at the same time.
2) In Bleach with Yoruichi, he learned to dominate a woman much too strong for him who didn’t want anal but only vaginal and he won in the end.
3) In Fairy Tail, he tried to be more subtle about the feelings of others with Erza whom he seduced in a more classic manner and she, like Rem, fell in love but he didn’t.
4) As a side note, he explains in DBZ before being killed by Vegeta, he still appreciated visiting Chi-Chi, feeling lonely without Goku, and might have even gotten her pregnant, and before she gave birth he left because he just wants Aversa, then died because of Bulma and all that.
5) In Naruto, a single panel for Hinata, Sakura, Temari, Mei, Tsunade, because the women and girls taught him that most of them don’t have to be for or against anal, they just feel lonely. He accomplished the events with Naruto up to Kaguya but made sure behind the heroes’ backs not to kill her and seduced her anally, she reminded him of Aversa but only physically.
6) Jujutsu, he learns with 3 women at the same time, Nobara, Maki, Miwa.
7) Overlord: Manages to get Albedo, Shalltear, Lupus, he learns not to steal women from guys more powerful than him and it’s cruel because before dying he was tortured first.
8) Attack on Titan, he gets Mikasa, Ymir, Annie (because they are very different), the first world where his fire power doesn’t work, so he had to manage like Eren.
9) Hunter X Hunter, his fire power, thought to be nen by other humans, he is recruited by the Phantom Troupe and gets the 3 girls from the Troupe, killed by Kurapika later.
10) My Hero Academia: He gains greater endurance and learns to pace himself, with Rumi who is always hot, he also gets Nemuri and Giant Lady, Rumi kills him turning to the side of villains out of jealousy, she was in love, her tanned skin and hair reminded him of Aversa and that’s why he seduced her, you could dwell more on her and him fighting evil and “having fun.”

Throughout the universes, even before Echidna, he had already understood that even if it was illusory, he preferred to be with women who reminded him of Aversa. You could subdivide all this to extend the series for another 4 chapters. Regarding the personal story, I have ideas for the conclusion but you shouldn’t do it now, just talk about these adventures of other love and unfinished sex stories for him or ones he missed. And each time conclude the following chapters with his reflections, 1 to 2 pages for each world and 6 for the love stories. If you want to discuss with me, I would be delighted. I hope you will consider my ideas.

And if you want and people are interested, I have full scripts that I did for similar stories in order to create several crossover volumes (let me know if you want to discuss it). And above all a complete story for elden ring (in the same style as your anal isekai), besides when I saw that you did ranni I was happy but when I saw that it was an anecdotal page I I became sad.

Last edited on 06 August 2024, 10:39.

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I disagree, he should just focus on the useless goddess this time around. It's even in the title, this arc should be about the protagonist (and Echidna) getting revenge at Aqua, she was built up a lot as the sort-of main antagonist for the last chapters, and a main antagonist needs proper attention so the story has a proper pay off. Imo if he keeps cutting to other characters in the middle of it, it would just break the flow and be too unfocused, he wouldn't be able to fully develop the scenes enough for none of them.

Personally, I love when Aqua gets punished and humiliates herself after being too cocky, so you're already off to a pretty great start.

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Hi Skitter77.
I agree with you on the logical progression of the story, and I would have said the same thing generally. But as said in his last page he wanted ideas of just about everything. And I wrote what came to me, you know in the comments ideas to please, because basically it's still doujin erotic and parody, the ideas that I threw out are like bonus pages to make it last or exploring what ifs in the past, traveling between universes before the grand finale of the real story, which I see as a romantic redemption, although messed up, it's a slightly crazy classic that always works well. But on a perfectly plot level of course I follow you and I would have things to add and you probably too. Thank you for your insightful comment.

Skitter77
and you know I wrote these snippets of scenarios of what we can think of the isekai protagonist in accordance with what we see of his personality. Hero Isekai Love Anal (HILA the true hero of anal isekai LOL don't you think is a great name LMFAO)

Last edited on 06 August 2024, 18:42.

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i'm looking forward for the rest

make her do anal scenes and then do a blowjob with his dick just out of her asshole

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I think after Aqua, we should go back and explore what MC did in other worlds that were mentioned and shown but not properly explored. For example, DBZ, One Punch Man, SAO, etc.

I think a good setup for a plot is the MC goes back to one of the worlds he explored previously and we'll see flashbacks of everything he did. However this time maybe spice it up by having MC fuck other characters he didn't get the chance to fuck the first time.

Examples I can think of:

(Tatusmaki from One Punch Man)

(Emilia from Re Zero)

(Other 6 witches of sins from Re Zero)

(Anyone from Kirito's harem)

On a final note, I think it would be funny for MC to return to previous worlds and have characters recognize him as someone who has died.

Last edited on 21 August 2024, 22:26.

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嘿!太棒了!我也想提一些建議!!!
1.我也想看看女性們的內心話，或是女人們為了尋找主角經歷過的橋段
2.更多Super power!!!!!
3.我喜歡看MC跑出去玩，被欺負後，帶著女性們回來打霸凌者
(google translate, sorry, I tried my best)
Hey! That’s great! I wanted to make some suggestions too!!!
1. I also want to read the inner thoughts of women, or the stories they go through to find the protagonist.
2.More Super power!!!!!
3. I like to see the MC go out to play, and after being bullied, he comes back with the women to fight the bully.

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What about Aqua make MC shrink into a tiny man and anal vore MC, MC can explore Aqua intestine and find way out.. Thats really a hard core suggestion.

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want to see ntr please

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Hi syx...
I agree but precisely, this is a bit what is done each time by the MC when he goes into the universes hence Lamy6001's suggestions for even more with a scripted and useful touch for the MC.

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ai的智商和水平还是离智障太远了，大辟谷效应犯了

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Thank you for your work. Please continue. It is very enjoyable. Sorry for lame english.

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This AI work is crazily great

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I just thought of a funny idea. In the DBS universe different from DBZ. There is also Kale and Caulifla to fuck. Then they fuse to become Kefla, because he wonders if doing it with a fusion gives double the effects during sex.

Last edited on 03 November 2024, 17:17.

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This is pretty good.

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