The whole point of the mask is to hide anything under the eyes to make them the sole focus of your sight that's what it's exciting about it. For 3 pages we get that but after that her face is either sideways or her eyes are hidden/not drawn, so what's the fucking point?
His previous works are infinitely better.
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