Cleaning and clearing MTLs one doujinshi at a time

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Who voted 3 star for you work lol ?

Base +5, akinka +1, Celibate_Wanker +14, asdaowbhrfwior +7, Lostalgia +11, kurt303 +6, clovis_486 -6

Japanese (RAW, Digital): https://e-hentai.org/g/3017499/d66f2c730d/
Chinese (Translation, Digital): https://e-hentai.org/g/3018378/d735d689ae/
English (Translation, Digital): https://e-hentai.org/g/3017856/1c56ed923c/
Korean (Translation, Digital): https://e-hentai.org/g/3017802/904b0de630/

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@Commander zero: newly uploaded gallery starts with 0 star, not 5~

Base +45, akinka +1, 悠远澪 -6, Celibate_Wanker +14, Lady_Slayer +39, asdaowbhrfwior +7, Lostalgia +11, Zigns +5, ToaKraka +7, phn08 +6

@OnceForAll : oh thank

Base +5, Celibate_Wanker +14, asdaowbhrfwior +7, Lostalgia +11

@ Commander zero : Probably the MTL user 🗿

Base +6, KeiZis +5, Celibate_Wanker +14, coleccionista903 +6, r2r23 +4, rclone +10, asdaowbhrfwior +7, Forestmage +6, faytT +8, Billy Riley +6

Wasn't expecting to get an actual proper translation of this so soon. You a real one, thanks for the translation

Last edited on 14 August 2024, 17:32.

Base +6, Celibate_Wanker +14, coleccionista903 +6, sporkstab +16, asdaowbhrfwior +7, Lostalgia +11, Forestmage +6, Djsergio1 +6, faytT +8, phn08 -6

Could be a semen demon

Base +9, asdaowbhrfwior +7, Lostalgia +11, forgetful_coder +6, 44inf +6, Chaos1745 +4

Thanks for doing god's work

Base +6, Lostalgia +11, phn08 -6, asdaowbhrfwior +8

I like that mountain of tits on page 18... god's work (͠≖ ͜ʖ͠≖)

Base +22, forgetful_coder +6, Tamashark +6, Lostalgia +11, asdaowbhrfwior +8

Chinatsu doujins are always peak, thank you for your work

Base +6, JillSandwichLi +6, EmiyaKiritsugu +6, asdaowbhrfwior +8, 44inf +6

You guys aren't "cleaning and clearing MTLs" when your quality of work is barely better than MTL if I'm being honest.
Especially when you can't even be bothered to clean and replace vertical ellipsis like on page 7. And on that note, ellipsis are 3 dots, not 4 or 2.
You guys are especially lazy when it comes to fixing the edges of bubbles after "cleaning" them (Page 24 is particularly egregious). Also why take out hearts if you aren't going to put them back?
There's empty bubbles on pages 16, 17, 20, 22, and the white stroke on pages 27, 28 is fucked to name a few issues.

As for the TL, even without checking the raw, it's obvious that it's bad and sticks too closely to the Japanese structure. (Something MTL also does all the time which is why it's so easy to spot.)
You don't use someone's name every time you refer to them like in Japanese. Apart from that, most of the English in this is an absolute trainwreck, littered with sentences that make little to no sense.
There's also nonsensical hyphenations such as ha-ve (pg 5), qu-icker(pg7) .

Base +11, AJubbz +6, flash11 +30, nikgtasa +17, akinka +1, MC Arisato +7, pond39267 +6, ToaKraka +7, Itsukkkkka +3, nomx123 +11, huedoge +26, KJAZZ +6, 44inf +6, and 16 more...

"Proper translation" huh? This uploader has repeatedly been hit with the rough translation tag. I am once again unsurprised to see the comments section glazing an uploader despite horrible English being evident arguably as early as the first page, and DEFINITELY by the second page. Not one of you thought "huh that's weird" and thought to run this simple check: https://e-hentai.org/?f_search=uploader%3AGT22+rough

The errors on display in those galleries betray a severe lack of ability in Japanese. The errors in English both there AND here betray a severe lack of ability in English. Even just one of these is indication enough that the person should not be fucking translating creative media, let alone both at once.

You people really get what you deserve. I have nothing but contempt for all of you.

Base +14, nikgtasa +17, AJubbz +6, MC Arisato +7, Vormik +7, pond39267 +6, ToaKraka +7, Djsergio1 -6, Itsukkkkka +3, nomx123 +11, KJAZZ +6, 44inf +6, hobohobo +36, and 13 more...

im pretty sure that's an elf, and you know what they say about elves.... around elves watch your back

Base +7, Djsergio1 +6, asdaowbhrfwior +8

Your group is ill-equipped with the knowlege to translate properly. Quality slips like @Kyuume mentioned and the amount of grammar issues reading through it convince me that this is MTL shit, covered with sprinkles and force-fed to everyone here.

I can't in good conscience recommend asking for payment with the amount of roughshod, sloppy work this Chinatsu doujin got, and whoever paid for translations should be refunded until your group improves.

Base +7, MC Arisato +7, JillSandwichLi -6, EmiyaKiritsugu +6, phn08 +6, asdaowbhrfwior +7, Refon_S +10, slapforce +6, Crimson13 +8, bigscuba +8, Wohlan Freund +6

I have never seen such dhildish and moronic nasty commenting in my entire life. What a bunch of babies. this is fine good work the translation is fine, the editing is fine. get a life all of you trols.

a lovely work with an even better sequel.

thank you for the work group. ignore the trolls

Base +8, clovis_486 -6, suratkabar -24, PedroBear28 -8