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[有幻草原] ネトラレ勇者の行末:
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[有幻草原] ネトラレ勇者の行末 終章:
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本編:39P
おまけ:8P
表紙:1P

Kino is back in the menu boy's

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最后这小屁孩好像是男主的？

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黃毛的小孩是被魔物凌辱時墮掉的嗎WWW

這結局有夠不三不四 糟蹋第一話的反殺結尾

不如補寫一下 他當初是怎麼殺掉黃毛的都比較好= =

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沒有把女主角殺死 可惜了

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等兒子真的成為勇者 打去魔王城

魔王:我就是你爸!

勇者:不可能!!(震驚

(隔壁棚暗影: 好好喔 羨慕

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N年后
男主：I’m your father
母猪崽种：NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

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啊?還有續篇

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感覺有點太刻意了...

番外篇原魔王的吐槽還蠻好笑的，把主角的穿著品味徹底吐槽。

Last edited on 21 August 2024, 16:59.

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強行續,越續越毀前面

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好奇怪的剧情

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蛤
明明上次報復那麼爽
為啥又畫一個HE收尾

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oh wow a sequel?

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XX Years later in the demon lord's castle

Harry: I am your FATHER.
Miria and Harry's kid(?): NO! ITS NOT TRUE! NOOOOOOOOOO

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这也能he啊

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黄毛都被砍头了竟然还有

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Wouldn't the kid be Carlos's kid? Back in part 1 Miria was already pregnant with him when she was cheating with Carlos while Harry was busy fighting monsters.

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Pg 42. I agree with the MC, her petite form is better.

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Her child with Carlos could be an abortion while she gets raped by the demon soldier.

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来个老哥发个种子呗

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Its obviously Harry's child. The kid has black hair.

Miria has pink hair and Carlos had blonde hair, but Harry, before he became the Demon Lord, had black hair.

Miria's child with Carlos was either miscarried or eaten by the demons.

Also, it seems the former Demon Queen sent Miria away because she was jealous.

Last edited on 22 August 2024, 08:04.

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i am your father！

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這算是NTR嗎？

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最后看来还是放过了前女友

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Not sure if this really needed a sequel, I preferred the ending to the first one. It looks like Harry still had feelings for the girl, and that's why he chooses to let her go. He even apologizes to her during sex; while she never really says sorry or anything unless I missed something. At the end the Luvis(?) the demon queen tells her how she wanted to rip her apart but Harry asked her not to. At the end it looks like she ends up having Harry's kid too. The pregnancy with Carlos's kid probably got aborted because of all the rough sex with the demons.

Sequel should've just been more like the omake showing Harry and the Demon Queen's day-to-day life.

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想不到真的有男主变成魔王后狠狠干她的后续，太棒了!!

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So. basically. Miria still hasn't learnt half the lesson she's supposed to learned? And I'll refrain from full judgement until the translated version comes out but I hope she didn't still value Carlos in some ways over Harry there, considering that guy (and herself) is the one that gets her in this situation in the first place.

Overall, I'm pretty disappointed at this this sequel. I don't mind that Harry still has some feelings for Miria or she was let go but the author should at least have her experience full regret and guilt while working toward atonement (gang raped by demons wasn't atonement, it was just punishment).

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Happy ending?

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看前：好好好，竟然还有后续，让我看看男主怎么狠狠地羞辱臭婊子。
看完：？？？？

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从薄纱一转龟男，作者什么心态啊

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第一步的反轉真的很棒但這最終章真的沒必要，總感覺畫蛇添足了啊~~

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第一部结尾很好了，故事讲完整又留有一丢丢悬念，没必要非弄个续集

萝莉老太婆：牛，有牛啊！（血泪）

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我是真的沒想到這部竟然還有最最最終章XDDD
我永遠記得當初看第一集，帶給我的衝擊感，我雖然也能接受NTR，但第一卷的NTR，真的讓人難受，更別提之後第2集，還描述女角的視角，雖然是典型的NTR欲求不滿路線。
但還是在作者的分鏡還有氛圍的控制下，看得更加難受。
然後時至今日，突然來了個終極結局，其實我也還蠻高興有這種結局的!!!!!
這種互相原諒釋懷的路線，在某種程度上，昇華了這系列作品，畢竟報仇懲罰已經讓女角去承擔了。如果最後在殺掉女角，感覺並沒有太大的復仇感。就是要讓女主，打從心底後悔和反省，這樣才是最大的復仇!!!!
最後男女主互相釋懷之後，女主給我的感覺是非常後悔沒有繼續支持男主，中途半途而廢。 所以離開之後，才有那種惆悵感，這股惆悵感，可以說是最令人感傷。
無能為力改變現況的後悔感。這結局某種程度上來講，還不錯!!!
不知道之後作者會不會突發奇想，再來個後日談。
來描述男女主的孩子，去當勇者討伐魔王，結果是認親大會(?)(話說，女主的小孩究竟是不是男主的?小孩的頭髮是黑色的，感覺就是男主的種?)
這系列沒想到作者有打算再延續壽命，真的出乎意料之外~~

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Part4 be like:

"Miria never told you what happen to your father"
"She told me enough! she told me you killed him"
"No...... I AM your father"

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接著可以出母子本！

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就是男主的小孩，画的和第二集里小时候的男主一模一样

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搞不好男主的小孩長大後去討伐魔王
結果路上再次上演國家派來的黃毛隊友NTR自己青梅的戲碼
接著歷史重演
再來就會是黑武士和路克同心協力的史詩大作(?)

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MD， 这结局不太爽居然放过了臭婊子，，黑化的也太不彻底了，，，对付这种婊子就应该先给糖后给棒槌，，比如放走她实际需要给她加禁制，，让她做恶事才能有快感，，同时加重心理愧疚方面暗示，，，让他以后一直活在，忙碌，害怕，痛苦之中

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神特么因为看多了小柰子魔王结果变萝莉控了😂

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> Sequel should've just been more like the omake showing Harry and the Demon Queen's day-to-day life.
Still a possibility. That omake was hilarious but the author had to do something with Milia first
Harry and Rubis still can have their happy family life
That is until Milia's son grows up, becomes new hero and slays his father

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还不如画嫂子的续篇呢

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This is wack. Miria never apologize other than being spiteful toward Harry while Harry is apologizing Only to Miria even though he should apologize to every innocent human he killed.

There is no redemption spotted at all other than Harry felt guilty/forgiving Miria and goes separate way. This sequel should never happen. It feels worse than typical generic NTR.

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@APC-123 Harry was abandoned by his teammates who were on a quest to defeat the demon lord. A quest that was doomed to fail by Carlos and Moria's betrayal. If anyone should apologize for basically causing the deaths of innocents by handing over the hero to the demon lord, it's Miria.

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Just image Star war music play in back ground.
then Harry said with new Hero: I am your Father.
Hero: NOoooo...

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I just read the spanish translation (I don't know how to read chinese or japanese) and apparently on page 13 she says ''"Kill me now! I lost everything!" "Kill me how you killed Carlos and my son! DEMON!"'', "''I had enough" "Kill me, please"'' (next page demonlord Henry says something like "''You got better after fucking demons, no?''" "''Suck me now"'' ''"If I cum I will let you escape''")

There are some monologue on this chapter that is her saying how she betrayed the hero and should pay for it. At the end of the chapter when she is with the hero's son (probably as she says its his ''how can I say to my son that his father is the demonlord'')(want to believe she stopped being a whore) the son says he dreams of becoming a hero that will kill the demonlord and then asks why the mother said ''"the demon lord isn't that bad"'' (also when she was talking with the ex-demonlord she asks iif she is his espouse and thanks her for taking care of Harry)(there are some ''"I m sorry Harry"'' ''forgive me'' said by the priestess while she is being fucked)

I think the closure to the priestess was ok. Sure she stayed with the warrior who was almost laughing while sending the hero to a suicide mission just after breaking his hearth and probably his only possible reasson to want to comeback alive (to be with his love). Honestly I would like an in between chapter just to show DLHarry going full out against humanity and how his ex-teammates tried to resist but were ultimately captured and slaved.

EDIT: The spanish "translation" has lots of added text that are not there in the original (apparently according to some ai translation bots) so ignore what I said before.

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This was trash, the whore didn't suffer enough, he should've killed her like he killed carlos. Just him letting such a dirty skank slap him and apologize to her *vomits* is a bigger humiliation than any betrayal could ever be. I'll pretend this sequel and the side story don't exist.

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