Okay so I decide to fix my mistake by commissioning a translator from Fiverr to do the translation while I’ll do the redrawing. I hope this fixes most of the problem and if it's not good enough just remember that you can still wait for the official translation to come out. Also, I recently found out that somebody sent my old translation into ***** so does somebody know how to delete it? Translation by @aditkun redrawing by Potatotickle21

>Japanese Script
>Uploader:This is my first time doing a fan translation and to be honest some of translated word might not be fully accurate as I was using a Ai translator. But still I put a lot hours and effort editing the speech bubble so I hope you enjoy it.

Amazing.

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Tagging rough tl based con OP's comment.

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The Japanese Script Title section is not meant to be used as a description. I suggest putting what you have to say in your comments or not at all.

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>Japanese Script Title
>The original title in Japanese script, if applicable.
Bro enters an excuse for MTL instead.

You know the uploader comment section exists for this, right?

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I'm going to disagree with the previous comments, I don't recommend using the uploader comments box. I recommend deleting the gallery followed by yourself.

Also compilations like https://e-hentai.org/g/3048862/3ee2d1e882/ break the rules.

It's okay to just lurk, you know?

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Single best upload all week man, you nailed with with this one dude. You have a real future ahead of you.

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"i hope you enjoy it" how about go fuck your fucking self!!!

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>But still I put a lot hours and effort editing the speech bubble so I hope you enjoy it.
I wonder what garbage you started with, or if you bothered to do that for 1st one only, because now it's incomprehensible gibberish starting from 2nd one
Please don't "help" by uploading garbage. Everyone can use AI to quickly translate stuff to a bit more comprehensible level than moonrunes. By uploading this you aren't helping, you are a nuisance.
Please stop.

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Just keep AI shit off this site please.

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I think... You should generally only use MTLs as a rough guide to assist in localizing the text. It'd be a lot more effort, but if you got at least 3 MTLs from different sources, you could likely deduce the actual intent of the original Japanese sentences, which would leave you in a better position to fill in the speech bubbles with sentences that are more coherent, though technically less accurate. I bet a beefy LLM could actually help with this as feeding it the rough translation and a written description of the panel that holds the sentence might give it the context for a pretty decent localization, though you'd need an uncensored LLM that wasn't afraid to write smut.

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Ill give you credit. It's more readable than most AI (but that's a low bar), but please for the love of god. re-read this yourself before uploading it. Because while it's better than most and I can sortof understand what is being said quite a few pages are just word salad.

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>Adding a comment on the Japanese script section.

Clearly you can't read Japanese nor English

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Okay, so I've been getting mixed reaction between hate comments and genuine advice since I'm new to translating. But I have to admit the first two pages were kind of bad and hard to read because the program I’d use was a mix between Google Translate and Scan Translator, sorry about that. If you hate this, you just wait for the official translation or read something else.

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"since I'm new to translating"
Let's be real, you're not translating. Google or whatever crap software you're using is.
I understand wanting to read untranslated things, but if you are oathbound to post dogwater MTL at least have the absolute minimum decency to NOT tick the checkbox that outright says, "By a proficient human translator (not machine translated)". Is that so hard?

"If you hate this, you just wait for the official translation or read something else."
People are pissed because they showed up excited to read this, and got whatever this is. Leftmost peak of the Dunning-Kruger effect.

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Look i hate machine translation as much as the next guy but no one has uploaded this yet in english. Stop complaining and pay a translator or better yet just ignore it.

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@Mrfriend53009 : You fail to see the real problem. 10 years ago with no MTL tools and an Internet more about socializing with a pseudonyme this very motivated guy would have had to go inside a translation group to find people in order to translate a dojin. Eventually he would have learned everything he needed and stayed the time he wanted... That's how it used to happens.

Right now with MTL, people doesn't need to go to group and try translating stuff directly. They are met with a lot of angry people that know ( for a reason ) that it's really bad. The highly motivated new guy is now quite sad that hours of work didn't led to appreciation and now decide to stop investing time into it. We lose a potential editor, translating groups are still empty, we get shitty translation, and everyone is unhappy.

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@ART65 bold of you to say that when we had guys like laruffi in the past

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Well this is what you get for treating "ai bros" equally. At best they just shit up everything around with their lot effort garbage.
Nothing against using "AI" tools to assist translation, especially if you yourself can ascertain if it's good or not. But it's not the reality of how the "aI" is being used in translation or image creation. It's always just a lot of low effort garbage.

Reading comments...
i'm glad that it only took people 10 years to understand how allowing low effort garbage into the same space under the same rules as what caring & enthusiastic people, can lead to the latter losing motivation.
Geeh fast thinking here guys. Maybe in the next 10 yeas ryou'll discover that allowing plagiarism makes artist lose motivation or something.

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Other Language or Version
Japanese digital
Japanese
Chinese digital
Chinese digital, decensored
Spanish digital
Korean digital
English digital, You are here!
English digital, incomplete
English digital
Russian digital, translated by Tasya-san

Series part : お隣さんは闇組織に肉体改造された元正義戦隊メンバーでした
Japanese digital
Chinese digital
Chinese digital
Chinese digital, decensored
Korean digital
Korean digital
Spanish digital
English digital, translated by RedLantern
Russian digital, translated by Yamuu
French digital, translated by pape245

Series part : お隣さんは闇組織に肉体改造された元正義戦隊メンバーでした2
Japanese digital
Chinese digital
Chinese digital, decensored
Korean digital
Spanish digital
English digital, translated by RedLantern
Russian digital, translated by Degrad
French digital, translated by pape245

Series part : お隣さんは闇組織に肉体改造された元正義戦隊メンバーでした4
Japanese digital
Chinese digital
Chinese digital, decensored
English digital
English digital
Korean digital
Russian digital, translated by Tasya-san

Series part : お隣の双子は闇組織に肉体改造された元正義戦隊メンバーでした
Japanese digital
Japanese incomplete(?)
Chinese digital
Korean digital, translated by Team Edge

Last edited on 22 March 2025, 15:39.

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I come in here seeing this tagged as translated into English, only to run into low tier MTL garbage that barely looks like English.

Why yes... My disappointment is immeasurable and while my day isn't ruined outright, it's definitely worse off because of said disappointment...

Look fam, I have no issues with people using MTL for private use. If you want to cause yourself a stroke, go for it, it's your life. However, don't share the garbage all over the Internet. If I wanted cheap MTL for a doujin, I could very well do it myself, as could anyone with 1.5 brain cells in their skull. It's that easy these days.

Seriously...

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pretty shit translation

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@Potatotickle21 you still don't fully understand our problem with AI stuff. It's not an actual problem that you have uploaded this here - the problem is majority of stuff is untranslated, and uploading ANY translation - even garbage MTL one - DECREASES the chance for proper translation. Proper, as in from someone who knows BOTH japanese and english as sufficient level. And not everyone wants to work on something that is already translated in some way - because they simply can work on something new, rather than clearing up after you.
The biggest bottleneck is, and always was, actual translation. There's simply not enough people that a) know japanese, b) know english good enough (translation itself can be a bit rough in english itself, as long as source material was conveyed accurately - this can be edited by someone who uses english better than the translator) and c) want to translate porn.
What you did is you jumped over the biggest obstacle and got your hands on "translation" that you proceeded to edit into release. If this was actual, proper translation, i don't think people would have minded somewhat rough typesetting or lack of redrawing SFX. Hell, it would probably be piss easy to find someone willing to edit and TS it for you, or help you with TS if you want to do it yourself.
You are not the first one that got that eureka moment and thought "i can do semi decent job with TS, i have photoshop and can use a mouse, i know enough english to make full sentences, and AI is good enough, i'll just release stuff and people will be happy". No, they won't be, because as i said before, this is not an actual translation. What you ended wiith is english script that RESEMBLES translation. You can have better or worse MTL, but in general for comics it's shit - because you don't have enough data. It won't scan images, it won't understand context. What could be considered acceptable for lets say article (because all the context is IN the text being translated) completely fails here. Plus japanese isn't really working well with MTL. Stuff like german > english would probably go much better.

I understand you want to help. I understand you think it's unfair and frustrating that you spent time on something and people tell you it's shit and you should stop.
But as i said before, you are not helping here. You are wasting your effort and resources. Everyone can get MTL for personal use of something new. It's not rocket science. You want to really help - learn japanese. If your english is good enough, try editing. Join a group looking for novice typesetter and learn there. Learn how to redraw shit, you'll be hot stuff too. Commision a real translator. Run a H@H node. Buy raws or translation behind paywall and upload them (not necessarily from here). There are a lot of ways you can contribute if you want and people will be grateful.
But for the love of God, DO NOT UPLOAD MTL.

It's not that people here are a bunch of elitists jerks that want to hate on newbies, gatekeep knowledge, and bathe in attention from community. It's just the fact that your good intentions resulted in this still fresh work having LOWER chances of getting proper translation now that before. That's what people are angry about.

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Appreciate the hard work but this isn't fit for upload yet. You're gonna have to take this bak to the editing room to make this readable.

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Straight to the excluded uploaders list with you!

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Man, number 4 came out before a proper english tl. Sad day

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MTL poetry is legitimately worse than it being in a language I can't read.

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>Okay so I decide to fix my mistake by commissioning a translator from Fiverr to do the translation while I’ll do the redrawing. I hope this fixes most of the problem and if it's not good enough just remember that you can still wait for the official translation to come out.

Good God you really have NO idea how any of this works, do you? There HAS NEVER been an "official translation" of this series. The group that did the last parts (RedLantern) aren't an "official" outfit, they just know what the fuck they're doing and care about outputting a quality product, very much unlike yourself. The last two chapters were commissioned by someone who gives a shit about quality, and hates getting snipped. I sincerely hope this leads to him not commissioning the 3rd chapter and this is all anyone gets to see of this in English. This is the quality the community, if you can even call it that at this point, deserves.

Being a hobbyist, or "unofficial," isn't an excuse for outputting trash. It's a cope.

Fucking Fiverr, Jesus Christ.

>Also, I recently found out that somebody sent my old translation into ***** so does somebody know how to delete it?
You fucking can't. Anything you put on this site (that isn't a duplicate, forbidden or DMCA bait) can't be removed not only from here, but from nhen as well since all they do is scrape the shit resampled version from this site. In fact, the cool lawsuit they're embroiled in right now is BECAUSE there's no user uploads there, and inshallah it'll fucking kill them and scatter the dumbest coomers into the wind so we don't have to hear from them ever again.

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You guys are thinking too hard about it

What if, get this,some people just purposely doing bad mtl because it's fun watching you people spergs about it, this is the same mtl spammers from before no?

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@SmileGate
if that was the case the uploader wouldn't be responding with dumbass comments.

This was a legit effort (if you can call it that) from a tard who didn't lurk before trying to contribute.

Rule #1 of all online communities: fucking lurk more before posting. If you are nervous or unsure about posting something, then you haven't lurked enough, so don't post it and go back to lurking. It's that simple.

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I'm going to be nice here.

You clearly actually care enough to try to make this better. For whatever reason, you decided to use Fiverrr. I'll give you the benefit of the doubt and assume that it's because you have a really bad financial situation and you just went with an unknown translator on a budget.

Please, please, /please/ do not do this. As others have pointed out, all you do is make the peopel who are interested in translating, less likely to do so, because they only see the language tag, and not the "rough translation."

People aren't mad at you because the translation is low quality-- not entirely because of that. People are mad because you don't really get why what you're doing is an issue. If you were dropping an absolutely dogshit translation, but were actually earnestly trying to deliver something and trying your hardest to use your knowledge of Japanese, people would be mad, but at least appreciate your spirit. They'd point you in the direction of where to find editors, even probably give you advice on where to look to get more Japanese lessons and ask you to try again in the future.

But using AI, or comissioning a translator from a source that doesn't have the reputation here, or we can actually verify as being good at translation, or god forbid, used AI themselves, all it shows is that you don't actually care.

Being more pragmatic, why are you doing this? For clout? All you are doing is dropping a terrible project on us.

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@Gespens

To be honest, I don't really care about clout or attention. There are two reasons why I did this one I really liked F.W.ZHolic work and two I wanted to try something new so I used one of F.W.ZHolic’s works to test out translating and posted it here to see whether you guys think it's good enough or not. Thinking about it now I probably shouldn't posted or translate F.W.ZHolic work for a first-timer and should have done a lot more research, but I’m thankful for the advice whether it’s hateful or helpful I don’t think what I say anymore would pleases or satisfied you, as you already made up your mind at this point. Since I saw the consequences of my actions there is probably a 60% chance this Doujinshi series is ruined and might never get a translation in the future so I’ll just disappear and never return back.

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Stop whatever you're doing or planning to do, you're just making things worse for everyone. Putting you into the excluded uploaders list.

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@Potatotickle21
You don't even brother replacing the A runemoon, eat dogshit u pathetic excuse of dipshit!

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>I wanted to try something new so I used one of F.W.ZHolic’s works to test out translating and posted it here to see whether you guys think it's good enough or not.
Don't test in production.

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I know how long everyone had been waiting for an English TL of this, so when I saw the rating, I already knew T.T

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I'm not a translator, but I commission translations of things i like, lots of them.

As a general rule, I wait 6 months after the raws come out to commission something, giving other groups who might move faster than my commission process time to release a TL. the Raw for this was uploaded on March 19th.

This was on my list, and I was literally sending it to the TL group when they let me know this translation exists.

The thing is, while this sucks, it is technically better than nothing. I release 5-10 things per month, and I'm not going to waste one of those limited releases on this when it technically already has a "translation"

So for me, I can unequivocally say, that this MTL took this work from having a release next month to having a release never.

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@Potatotickle21
Read ValacBroker comment!
Well done dipshit potato! do us a favor and oof yourself pls

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Think about what you have done to the community, if you still truly "feel bad" about this whole mess, go pay a professional translation service and fix this garbage you have create, then don't ever come back.

Come on man, are you even speaking English? The fiver guy you hired are not any better than MTL

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english harassers and their sacrosanct language, """funny""" to read

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@Potatotickle21
Don't ever comeback! shitty translation!

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@valacbroker
Or you could still just translate it
Especially since #4 came out and people really enjoy the series, there will be more people coming back to see this one in the future

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I don't remotely support what uploader did, but other people using a shitty machine translated upload as an excuse to go "LOL, NO PROPER TRANSLATION FOR ANYONE NOW" is just blind spite towards totally unrelated people who did nothing wrong, and doesn't actually solve anything. If anything it just makes things worse by ensuring machine TLs are treated as "valid" entries by going unchallenged. Just downvote and negative comment machine TL uploaders into oblivion and carry on regardless.

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I'm just some guy but I think you did a wonderful job on this! Thank you so muc!

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