This thing was a real pain in the *** to translate. But that's because I'm not very good. :P Anyway I plan to finish translating this manga, but I need some reviews. I'm pretty sure I butchered translating this thing, but I'm hopeful I did some things right. If a fellow translator could comment on how I did I would really appreciate it. Here is the link for the Japanese version: https://e-hentai.org/g/24464/c3a9028ba2/ Also if you non-Japanese reading viewers can comment on how my dialogue is, I'm not to confident about it either, I would be very grateful. But please use CONSTRUCTIVE crtisicm. Thank you and enjoy!

I really like Azuki's stuff. Thanks a lot for translating this.

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Thank you to everyone for commenting. :)
@BluMeino Great job getting the first two done! :)
@black65 Yes this is the second half of the Equation of the Night.
@Zorlock Thank you very much! :)

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My advice:

Read this: https://e-hentai.org/g/274869/052c6b9d43/ and go here http://www.unblessed.net/guide/main.html

If you don't want to edit it yourself, you can hand the script off to another person to give it a good thorough work-over, but I am glad someone's attempting it.

Edit 11/17: I'll do editing for you, if you want. Just PM me with a full script to download.

Edit 11/18: Finished chapter 1, kind of lazy and delayed because of other things, but I think I can get it out by later tonight.

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thanks 4 the translation. finally someone is doing this one.

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this is the continuation of the immorality version manga? ok hen-toy and thanks for the traslation is good

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Thanks for translating this. It's been like forever since the first part was translated. Grammar and whatnot seemed OK.

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Excellent work! I don't know how accurate your translation is, but the dialogue you've given is good, as well as the grammar. Nothing kills a boner for me faster than bad Engrish writing in a hentai manga. Looking forward to more of your translations.

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thx hen-toy !!! nice work! ! cant wait for u to translate the dickgal series at the end of the manga !!

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