The art is not perfect, but it's alright.
As for the ideas and sex positions, it's all I ever wanted to see, it's like a dream come true. Bush, lactation and dovefucking are so rare and underrated.
Good job!

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^^ totally agree. I love how the author was creative and unique and didn't follow the usual yuri formula i.e. cunnilingus, tribadism. There's never enough attention paid to breasts despite how nice they are drawn. Dovefucking and nipple play is so underutilized its a crime.

Base +6, aceofspades123 +6

Really well done and creative. Does anyone know the name of the artist tho? The twitter account mentioned in the last page doesn't seems to exist.

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Hello!

This is the artist who drew this doujinshi: https://e-hentai.org/g/3069440/c1e7e8cee8/, and my Twitter username is: https://x.com/yukiart83?t=jcKCl-B0H-E55AcblOTPWA&s=09

I hope this helps!

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Hello and thanks a lot for sharing your work with us, Yūki! Solid work for a first yuri (females only too, hell yeah) doujinshi!
Best of luck with your career, really really cute art and the story was fun ❤️

@BigPP: Yūki on pixiv (pixiv.me/yukiart_83 or PID 37742594) as mentioned in the afterword.
If you don't want a Twitter/X account to see NSFW/sensitive media, use elongator and keep your peace of mind without getting into any social media (or paying Musk): github.com/FixTweet/FxTwitter
Hope this helps you as well!

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@43883 This doujinshi doesn't have that much of a story, but thank you for the compliments and the support!

I'll probably add buff Lumine in the sequel (if I plan on making one) masturbating and watching Miko and Ei having sex.

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why is this tagged as rewrite? i'm a bit confused, yo.

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@E Pluribus Eunuch There was no option for what I'm going for, so I don't know how that works either.

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