This is great. Some very few spelling mistakes but the character of Hisato really looks like the original. I wish her boss (Kamezo Gouzo/President) looked more like he does in the manga but we can imagine he just got a haircut I guess. A pregnant ending would have been welcome too.
Otherwise would you consider doing some of Takeda Hiromitsu's other works? Maybe some Sakurama Hosaki/Ranger Pink with Ranger Red-San? From here: https://e-hentai.org/g/2470352/98800b3672/ and here : https://e-hentai.org/g/2136609/a4076d6bee/
There is endless potential.

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无敌了宝贝

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really good story, good work

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我嘞个武田弘光啊

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Wow, your 14-year-old brother, who’s just discovered hentai, found your CivitAI account and thought he was an artist now. He wanked away the last of his brain straight away, and then he had the brilliant idea that he was an author as well.

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