raw: https://e-hentai.org/g/3071762/07cdd8faa4/

I'm also taking comissions
scdnhtru@gmail.com if interested

Forget Dragon Age: Veilguard offering top scars and vitiligo. These are the character creation options people really want.

Last edited on 29 September 2024, 14:06.

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This is amazing, 5*

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this is some real good shit, hope the sequel is on par with this if not better

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P4
"Is that really a video game" -> "is this really a video game"

This was the only outright noticeable error but this kind of context fail is very common in mtl so I'd appreciate it if someone who is better at Japanese than me could compare with the raw.

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hope the author will build this series well

Also i found that the raw used here was much lower quality compared to the pixiv of MGS comics, which has some pages for preview.
Maybe not every site has the real raws, for example dlsite has total file size of only 21mb
I guess the MGS store should have better raws, here ----> https://books.mgstage.com/detail/denc-530/
altough its a guess and maybe this work will see more versions with different censoring (less destructive at least)
I uploaded a screen just to show this version quality ( notice wrecked edges caused by bad scaling and the blocking ) and on the left the one from pixiv.

https://i.ibb.co/DtkYxcq/worldpen.png

Last edited on 16 December 2024, 09:55.

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I hope the other chapters get translated as well. This is already great but Ch 2 and 3 are even better!

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