[InCase] Alfie chapter 18 [ongoing]

Posted on 16 October 2024, 22:55 by: kikimaru024

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Posted on 10 September 2023, 22:16 by: freeon696

damn Alfie is such a bitch

Posted on 10 September 2023, 23:20 by: Vorin 22

Ah and so continues the self destructive spiral.

Posted on 10 September 2023, 23:42 by: 13rucell

On the one hand, I can kinda get where Alfie's coming from considering where they left off. On the other hand she's being a bitch.

Posted on 11 September 2023, 04:06 by: FishySoldieR

I totally get it, she's been so angry for so long it's impossible to just let it go all at once no matter how good an apology.

Posted on 11 September 2023, 05:33 by: meficrow

If this doesn't end in at least one incestuous threesome, I'm going to lose all respect for Incase.

Posted on 11 September 2023, 17:00 by: omen666

Lesbian incest is the only way to salvation.

Posted on 12 September 2023, 08:58 by: superbontino

@FishySoldieR

Yeah, plus she was so ready for a (long desired) confrontation that Vera's apologies caused Alfie's brain to go in full 404 error.

Posted on 14 September 2023, 17:19 by: Shannon St.Claire

Firmly rooting for Vera at this point. Of the two, she's the one who's shown to have actually had some growth. I mean, yes, Vera was in the wrong on Kupala night and Alfie is justified in her anger but this presentation shows no growth for Alfie at all. She hasn't learned from her fallout with any of her friends, she hasn't learned from the way people have attempted to use her and then blame her for things. She hasn't taken anything away from how people have abandoned her and her mother is the only one to this point who has shown a dedication to wanting Alfie to be happy. Even her look isn't something she deliberately chose; she was going to go to the Big Party as she was and the Goblins just didn't like how she was dressed. At least with Vera, you could see her changing her look back to pants as a function of her being more adventurous again the way she was when she met Derik.

Posted on 14 September 2023, 19:10 by: Drakhesh

Lo and behold, people are still hating on Alfie.
"Oh, Alfie hasn't learned anything"
What was she supposed to learn? That her own mother said to her face Alfie and her father make her miserable? That her own mother practically called her a deviant for sleeping with a woman? Or that her own mother is a hypocrite of highest order, berating her daughter for sins she herself was more than happy to perform - all of which make the apology ring hollow? Because I think Alfie learned that well.
Or should she had learned she cannot trust her so-called friends since they have no respect for her privacy, dragging out her life into the public with *zero* consideration how it might hurt her? Or how she cannot rely on them since even when she tries to make things right, they will first accept it, but then scorn her anyway? Or how she should expect hypocrisy from them when they condemn her for "being a rat" and "scheming" - but having no qualms about benefitting from what she does - since last time i checked, Lydia and Marco were perfectly content with their new elven boytoy. She had learned that as well.
Or perhaps she should learn that she cannot count for a relationship with Ogze, because gods forbid she does anything wron and the goat lady will send her off to the friendzone, because gods frbid someone being imperfect and making mistakes? She learned that too.

She learned all of it. She learned she will always be scorned, and her attempts to fix things are mocked and disregarded. That her own mother is a hypocrite. She's surrounded by awful peopel who project their shitynes on her - calling her a bad friend when it's them that acted horribly.

And oh sure, Vera has had some growth - except Alfie wasn't there to see it unlike us readers. What did Alfie saw?
She saw her mother, who berated her for sleeping with a married woman, being perfectly happy to let a man be intimate with her - a married woman. The peak of hypocrisy.

Seriously, it's like people expect Alfie to be some paragon of empathy and forgivness when all the people in her life do is betray her trust. "How dare you be upset that your hypocrite mother hurt you and your friends betrayed your trust Alfie - stop beign a bitch and accept their horrible behavior!"

Posted on 15 September 2023, 14:10 by: Rubikscube12

@drakhesh actual 10/10 comment. Alfie is unironically emotionally traumatized and people just expect to just randomly get over that.

Posted on 15 September 2023, 15:38 by: Chojiin

I don’t have a problem with Alfie’s reaction, or think it’s unfair. I also don’t have a problem that she’s in a bit of a… spiral.

What I would have a problem with, and what I see too many people do, is stay in that spiral. Too many people marinate in their pain and anger without taking stock of themselves, and improve despite others.

That’d just make her an emo goth. And while big tittied emo goth havlings are hot, I hope she can find a balance to not be miserable.

Posted on 15 September 2023, 19:31 by: Drakhesh

@Chojiin

The issue is (and here I speak from unpleasant personal experience) that you don't just randomly get off the spiral like that. You need help - be it professional help, or the support of people close to you while you try to fix things.

And keep in mind, Alfie tried to fix herself. Even though the whole situation was not her fault when Lydia and Marco forced her to either admit she's promiscuous and be scorned by society or betray her friends, she tried to move past it, admit to her nature and fix her relationship with her friends. And what was the result?
Ogze her it does not matter and outright admitted she thinks Alfie's sexuality is disgusting, her friends seemingly accept her back but mere days later go back to calling her rat and schemer even though the 'schemes' (if you can call setting up one encounter a scheme) benefit them a lot.

It is often repeated a lot that Alfie is a bad friend and daughter - but honestly, what the fuck is Lydia, Marco and Ogze doing to be good friends. because the list of them being shitty people is long. Bizarrely, the closest thing Alfoe has to actual friend is Hana.

Posted on 17 September 2023, 09:42 by: SilverCut

I still hope that some of the other character received some comeuppance for their shitty behaviour. It seems like Alfie has been the only one eating shit for acting out but all the other characters are Karma Houdinis (*koff* a certain elf *koff*)

Posted on 21 September 2023, 23:13 by: smartz118

If any of you guys actually read the previous 17 chapters of this comic, you would understand Alfie's reaction. She was chased off by her mother, and after months and months of trying to discover herself, she discovers that life is complicated and cruel sometimes, and her mother, the very person who chased her off, wants her back, along with a guide who ends up being her boy-toy in tow. Her earlier interactions with different people and asking them questions is her trying to see which kind of life would suit her because at the moment, the people she is with is really not helping her mental health.
@Shannon St.Claire
Even if Vera had some growth, the fact of the matter is that she was the cause of Alfie's problem, and Alfie wouldn't have been in this situation in the first place if she actually been supportive. Alfie has no idea what Vera has been through, and Vera knows nothing of what Alfie has gone through, so why should Alfie take any of Vera's words at face value when all she has learned is that people say one thing and do another all the time, especially her first antagonist, her mother?

Posted on 22 September 2023, 14:59 by: SETHRX7

Ah, alcohol! Once again you will save family relations!

Posted on 28 September 2023, 04:30 by: RuneGrey

I ironically have been here - my relationship with my own mum was terrible until I was an adult - we never got along, always fought, and I wanted her gone from my life.

Discovered about five years later my father had been cheating on her for most of their marriage and she was struggling to keep their marriage together for my sake. People deal with shit in different ways, so I can feel for Alfie and Vera here. Alfie's initial reaction is remembering the rest of the shit she's dealt with, but Vera's clearly changed - I'm interested in seeing how they develop from here.

Not boding great for the amount of sex in the near future, of course.

Posted on 28 September 2023, 04:32 by: Liquid Shadow

@Shannon
https://e-hentai.org/s/b81924dd22/2339474-384 <- This was their last interaction with each other.
https://e-hentai.org/s/a00f6a2d23/2339474-453 <- Alfie's final message to Vera.

What do you think Alfie wants? She didn't want to see her mother at all, but now that she is here she wants the confrontation that has likely been playing in her head on repeat. She wants to finally lash out at her crotchety old hypocritical bitch of a mother. She wants to pay back all of her recent suffering to its source, her mother. The woman that drove her to leave when she should have been a pillar of support when Alfie was struggling with who she was in an oppressively prudish community.

Everything Alfie has gone through has been a direct result of Vera lashing out at her and using her own daughter as an emotional punching bag. Vera has grown and changed as a result of losing her daughter because of her own actions, but Alfie doesn't want that. She wanted to cut Vera out of her life completely, only to find the source of her misery has followed her all the way here. As far as Alfie is concerned, the best thing Vera could have done is let her go.

But now that Vera is here, Alfie WANTS Vera to bite back, to be the same bitch she remembers her to be. She wants to finally fight back against her tormentor and lay into her, but Vera isn't the same woman Alfie remembers her to be, and that is eating Alfie more than anything else could right now. She doesn't want to forgive Vera, she wants payback, to hurt her like she was hurt, and she wants to hurt her even more after seeing her mother commit the same sin she exploded on Alfie over.

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Posted on 04 October 2023, 02:30 by: Sephyr79

Ok, as much as Alfie has been an unstable bitch lately, her trolling her mother over banging Alduin was hilarious.

Posted on 05 October 2023, 00:05 by: Draupnir7

People are so used to seeing a steady dicking or rugmunching smooth things over. Let two fairly decent characters with some depth have a reasonably accurate tense interpersonal encounter.
Vera will get some more dick after, I assure you.

Posted on 05 October 2023, 22:17 by: ronnoc

Props to Incase for almost immediately starting the "smoothing things out" arc in this chapter, I hate it when authors try to artificially stretch out conflict and tension.

Posted on 06 October 2023, 20:11 by: DeepPzizzl

Finally. JUST TALK is here.

Posted on 07 October 2023, 19:08 by: Liquid Shadow

God damn, you cringe-inducing cunts. I want sexy make-up lesbian incest too, but *after* they've had the climactic confrontation that finally resolves the main plot of the story. This is them finally discussing the grievances, misunderstandings, and emotional turmoil that caused the entire story to happen, let it be a serious moment instead of whining about how they haven't started fucking yet.

Some of us actually like having plot in our porn and are here for the story just as much as the sexy pictures.

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Posted on 11 October 2023, 03:24 by: SilverCut

Readers need to remember that Vera underwent lots of personal growth on her journey....but Alfie doesn't know that! The last time she saw her mom, Vera was yelling at her and traumatizing her after catching her with Melly. So there's a lot of anger still on Alfie's side - she doesn't know how much Vera developed and grew because she didn't witness it.

Posted on 12 October 2023, 13:31 by: Eyeless wonder

@Shannon St.Claire

isn't that the whole point of the comic? hate or love it. this is an Alfie comic, not a "Vera" not a "Osha" or any of the other characters. this is her story of figuring out who she is and what she wants, characters are allowed to be confused and honestly again this is her story and it wouldn't be a good one if she was perfect. Alfie is a confuse young adult who knows very little because people are so afraid of hurting her. she has a right to lash out at her mother and she has a right to lash out at the other people in the comic that put her in such a positions to begin with
is she innocent? no, fuck no and that's one of the points

anyone saying what "does Alfie even want?" then you're wondering the same shit she is

we've seen Alfie as a people pleaser, we've seen her as a adventurous and we've seen her as fearful and we've even seen her as scheming and hell we know what she can do with her charm, wit and especially with her beauty(its a comic i know but even the characters in the world clearly acknowledge her physical appeal)

@fuckalfie
that is actually a very fair assessment. Alfie hasn't actually grown, in fact she seems to have gotten worse because the people around her has been worse for her. She tries far too hard to fix everyone's problems

now the simping is done. this story is nearing its end clearly and this direction is actually quite charming. so its a shame so many people find it so frustrating. when its a pretty straightforward story

and heres an actual comment/opinion. Ogze, Lydia and Marco needs some major fucking clarity chapters. those fuckers shit on Alfie for making their lives better

Posted on 12 October 2023, 14:20 by: Necro-san

It almost seems unreal looking at these two and realising they are COMMUNICATING with one another, for what seems like the first time. This is some Jerry Springer shit and I'm loving it.

Posted on 01 November 2023, 18:05 by: Shannon St.Claire

Unlike most of Incase's other work which is either one-offs or short comics solely about the titillation, Alfie has been about character development and has spanned literal years. It shouldn't be surprising that it invites discussion and analysis.

Posted on 10 November 2023, 21:07 by: Imagine_Breaker

Alfie is rage baiting her mom. She's saying the most vile things possible and putting herself in the worst possible light to get a reaction out of Vera, since she can't stand how reasonable and accepting Vera was being. She needs her mom to snap at her so she can retaliate. It's clear that she doesn't believe half the shit that is currently coming out of her mouth and was obviously uncomfortable when the gob bitch called Vera a cunt. It's hard to watch, but that's just because it's great character writing.

Posted on 12 November 2023, 01:26 by: DScy31

Holy fucking essaying. I actually love how invested and passionate people are about this comic and it characters

Posted on 16 November 2023, 02:29 by: Balistik Intsik

Me seeing Alfie update after a long time: "HOLY SHIT!"

Me after reading the update: "Holy shit."

Posted on 16 November 2023, 10:29 by: Jarvis_42

OK, ya, points to the author for a character staying IN character.
She built herself up to be this flaming bitch. She held onto the bitterness toward her mother, kept picking at the wound and nurturing that hate.
Now that she sees genuine care from her mother, the woman she made out to be the epitome of evil, she has no idea WTF to do with that, so she is falling back on bitch mode.
Coming out of that is terrifying, and takes time and care. I hope she does eventually get that, but I am loving the journey.

Posted on 29 November 2023, 15:41 by: BlitzimX

I just realized that almost across the whole comic, this is the first time someone ever said "I love you" to Alfie. I think this may be the shift.

Posted on 30 November 2023, 07:58 by: Colonel Slammovich

She never got that angry confrontation with Vera and the apology and acceptance from Vera means that she never will. Best way of putting it is that Alfie had been building it up inside her head for so long and now that it has happened and it was completely different she realises how much she fucked up. It'll sink in more and either she'll try to make amends or she'll fully commit to burning the bridge.

Posted on 11 December 2023, 00:02 by: Shannon St.Claire

"I totally need to change! I actually WANT to change! Buuuuut I'm pooped so maybe I'll start on the who 'being-a-better-person' bullshit tomorrow?" might be the most realistic moment in this whole comic.

Posted on 28 January 2024, 01:21 by: Notomoe

Alfie poisoned our water supply, Burned our crops and delivered a plague upon our houses!

Posted on 01 February 2024, 03:25 by: Foostini

Good for you, Hana

Posted on 14 February 2024, 14:24 by: DiroMustang

God I cannot stop being amused on how *nothing* ever goes Alfie's way.
Like if she decided to save a poor kid from a thug that kid would end up being a serial killer or something.

Posted on 16 February 2024, 13:02 by: ninesenshi

Great job with how the elf steps in and handles things. After a thousand years of managing humans, that's exactly how good they would be. I also loved `Sweetie, your kid is an asshole'. Perfect!

Posted on 23 February 2024, 22:42 by: goot_

CILLIAN WATCH OUT ITS A TRAP

Posted on 13 April 2024, 08:05 by: resicane

I don't know why people are over-analyzing something that is so basic. This is not complex everyone think it is. The truth is, everyone is a hypocritical piece of shit. Lydia is a hypocritical piece of shit. Marco is a hypocritical piece of shit. That elf gay guy is a hypocritical piece of shit. Almost everyone is a hypocritical piece of shit, and Alfie is the punching bag. If I was her I would just burn the bridges or even bury them. I would publish my diary and go scorched Earth. Because why the fuck not? Everyone is terrible and they corrupted an innocent but curious girl.

Posted on 28 May 2024, 03:28 by: jmaster

Hand injuries are not easy to get by but yeah hopefully it doesn't stop things.

Posted on 13 September 2024, 17:47 by: Muffdiver884

@Imagine_Breaker

The reason for the change in design is the same reason for the 6 month hiatus. He had hand issues bad enough to require surgery. Instead of retiring, he went in another direction to keep drawing.

Posted on 22 September 2024, 13:38 by: The-Kite

@Jarvis_42 I'm only speculating, but the most likely hand injury that could prevent an artist from drawing for so long and require surgery—barring an accident where the hand gets crushed/broken—is carpal tunnel syndrome. It doesn't always require surgery, but in severe cases, it causes intense hand pain, difficulty clenching a fist, and significant loss of strength. Drawing, as well as many other tasks, becomes nearly impossible. Carpal tunnel syndrome can effectively end an artist's career. It's no joke.

Surgery is a common practice for carpal tunnel syndrome, and recovery time is relatively short. However, some pain may linger, and there can be a loss of accuracy and mobility due to nerve damage, especially if the compression went untreated for too long. That said, in most cases, the hand recovers well after surgery.

I believe Incase had a severe case of CTS, underwent surgery, and adapted his style to something simpler and faster to reduce strain and minimize prolonged stress on his hand.

(For context, I'm speculating from experience: I developed carpal tunnel syndrome in my drawing hand and had to simplify my style to reduce the amount of time spent working. Luckily, I caught it early and have managed to avoid surgery through exercises.)

For those who think there's been a drop in quality, please cut the guy some slack. Hand injuries, whether from accidents or nerve damage (like carpal tunnel), are incredibly painful and can cost an artist their ability to draw entirely. Incase may or may not return to his previous style depending on the severity of his injury and how well he recovers, but if he can’t, please understand that it may be a necessary adaptation to preserve his ability to draw. Plus, this new style will likely evolve as he masters a different way of handling shapes and composition.

*edited for proofreading, missed some wild typos there ><

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Posted on 27 September 2024, 01:09 by: kalatkourgin

Incase could draw the rest of the comic in XKCD-style stick figures and I wouldn't care, I just want to see how the story ends, the writing is so good and I've followed for too long to not see it.

Posted on 27 September 2024, 22:25 by: Shannon St.Claire

Sooooooo what I'm getting here is that some of you were either a.) just picked it up around chapter 11 or 12 which was about the point when the style that the latest one changed FROM truly solidified or b.) completely ignored the fact that chapters 1 through 6 look like an almost entirely different style, including just being black & white. I'm guessing you guess MUST HAVE shat actual bricks when he first introduced color in chapter 7 or lost your collective shits in chapter 10 when he did the Voch'khari orgy in a monochome (plus red). How were none of those changes not equally jarring to your sensibilities?

How is it that anyone can follow this particular comic and, with a straight face, begin to take issue with the current style as if the style hasn't evolved? That's honestly the most underrated beauty of this comic: it's a repository of the evolution of InCase's style over the years. He doesn't have any other project that he's worked on that illustrates (almost) all his styles like this one does. It was not 17.5 chapters of one style: it has been 18 chapters of about 5 or 6 different styles, each of which faded from one to the next. Because I've said it more than once: this current style is no different than the last several chapters, it just doesn't have the outlines. Anyone who thinks that the style only just recently changed needs to go back and just glance at the changes in style in chapters 5 thru 12.

"Journal of the Hunter" looks different than "Grimlewd" which looks different than "Room & Board" which looks different than "Melting" which looks different than "The Invitation" etc, etc. "Alfie" is the only one that's been ongoing through each of those projects.

Posted on 24 November 2024, 18:18 by: Katajanmarja

To those who would like to see Cillian seduced by Alfie: Does Cillian really strike you as the kind of man who would risk his new relationship just to get to shag a young drama queen who has given solid proof of her immaturity?

The attractive power of silky skin and nice boobs on display has its limits.

If Incase is capable of including such a scene and making it credible, then he’s a masterful storyteller, so I’m not actually casting a "no" vote. I just don’t see how that would happen, unless Cillian has been lying about his past and attitudes. (True, the revelation that he might have fathered some little goblins would give some support to that possibility.)

The "I would never draw that" prank is just another sign of the author’s great sense of humor. Had the plot progressed this far in late March, we might have gotten a great Cillian × Alfie page for 1st April.

Posted on 22 January 2025, 14:04 by: kikimaru024

InCase update (2025-01-17 / pg87):

I am not stopping the updates, but I’ll have to scale back the effort put into pages for a while because of issues with my hand. For the foreseeable future, Alfie pages will be uploaded in a sketch format.

You can expect two more pages next week, just don’t expect them to be quite finished.

I’ve already posted about my issues on Patreon, but that’s for members only, so I’ll repost the relevant passage here:

“Between the holidays and the New Year’s, I managed to severely overwork my hand.

I thought that I’d learned how to deal with my hand issues, but it seems that I was wrong. It looks like I still have a lot to learn: mainly, how to slow down.

I am slowly getting my hand back into working condition. Right now, I can handle about an hour and a half of drawing each day, which is a big step down from my average of five to six hours before.

I’m going to have to slow down for the foreseeable future. It’s something that I should have done last year, but I just didn’t want to.”

I thought an hour and a half each day would be enough to keep Alfie updated, but I can tell that I won’t be able to make it. Over the last week, I started pushing myself again just to finish this page on time, and that’s the exact opposite of what I am trying to do.

I really don’t want to stop the uploads right now, this close to the end, so I am opting to lessen the time spent on each page. Once my hand is better, I will go back and add color to the pages.

If you’d rather read the end of this story with the level of quality you’re used to, just come back in a year. It should all be finished. Probably. Hopefully.

Posted on 03 April 2025, 05:47 by: Wubstep

This ending, while Bitter-Sweet, is so touching. This entire comic, has been a roller-coaster of emotions. From the highs of happiness and sweet moments. To the drops of anger and sadness. All held together by the steadiness of hot sex and cold truths. Alfie, shows a story that not everything about life, relationships, and upbringing is so black and white. Many parts of everyday life are held together by the good and bad. Yet, like the odds of the flip coin. They are many factors at play that can always play a part of a decision.

Incase, you have created a masterpiece of storytelling. Should they publish this a physical book, I would gladly by at least 2 copies. I hope now that they take this well earned vacation and bask in the peace of mind from making this wonderful feat of literature.

I like to believe that most of the readers who joined this ferry of a story can all agree. We may have came for the hot sex scenes, (and they were incredibly hot.). Yet, we stayed for the grand story behind it. This was a fun trip, so let's enjoy this cruise while it finally comes to port.

Posted on 03 April 2025, 08:59 by: kikimaru024

InCase: April 2, 2025

"Hey, look at this! The last page of the story! Well, there’s still the epilogue coming up – after a break – but this is it as far as the main storyline goes. These two dummies found a way to have a relationship that doesn’t stink. Yeehaw!

I was gonna write more here, but I pulled some back muscle on my vacation and writing hurts. So this is all you get. Expect the epilogue to begin in the first half of May.

See ya!"

Posted on 03 April 2025, 16:01 by: Foostini

Yeah that's a pretty good ending, i can deal with that. I'd always wanna see more about these characters and what they do next but this neatly ties it in a bow.

Posted on 03 April 2025, 19:10 by: anon102938

This is the end of, what, 11 years? Incredible work and commitment.

Posted on 03 April 2025, 22:27 by: Katajanmarja

To me, the ending felt a bit rushed.

For Alfie, it is indeed possible to try to get to know her mother’s new character – provided that they figure out how to make a living in the same place without staying too close to each other. Sure, they might start by adventuring a bit with Cillian, all expenses covered by Ailduin, and come up with more plans, so that might work out.

But for Vera, it is really hard to get to know the new Alfie. Why? Simply because Alfie still does not know herself. She has just taken a major step towards self-discovery, and a constructive one for a change. Is it believable? Hum, borderline.

Modern stories about people who fuck up their lives tend to concentrate on the piling of fuck-ups. At best, they show in an epilogue that total alienation, collapse, and death are quite often avoidable, suggesting that it does not make for a good story to show and explain minor successes in life. I dare disagree. But since there are so few high-quality models, I’m not sure I could fare well with the task myself.

Please do not get me wrong. I do think the ending could have been built better, yet Alfie is one of the very best drama-meets-porn serial-art sagas I’ve read in my life, possibly the best sword-and-sorcery one, and one of those I’ve followed with most interest since my return to western online comics during the latter half of the 2010s. Great character designs, enjoyable art, nice worldbuilding, important themes, a good basic attitude. Interesting story arcs, too, for the most part, albeit I’m not especially good at judging those. This is one of the relatively few long free-of-charge comics that make me feel ashamed for not being a paying customer.

My thanks to the artist. I will be looking forward to the epilogue.

Posted on 27 April 2025, 09:27 by: Cattapratta

Great ending, could'nt have been better!

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