Raw: https://e-hentai.org/g/3095657/c014b4913f/
Original artist:
https://www.pixiv.net/en/users/72293319
https://www.dlsite.com/maniax/work/=/product_id/RJ01278419.html
https://ci-en.dlsite.com/creator/10748
https://skeb.jp/@deodorantsword

@uploader you will post each story separately or will update this one as you go translating?

Base +6, UnusedWaterbottle +6, BlueFast +12

Gonna leave it as incomplete

Last edited on 21 October 2024, 05:58.

Base +2, Klaus trognitz +6

If that typesetting speaks any volumes about the quality of your translations (assuming it'snot just a slapped together MTL), please don't. It'll tank the chances of an actual quality translation coming out, and the only ones happy will be those morons who clamor that it's "better than nothing at all".

Base +6, Klaus trognitz -6, boxer666 +6, BlueFast +12, MakiKawaii +6, teresa . number1 -2, hotpiscok +7

@uploader

I agree with @doodadad. Please leave it to the professionals. The typesetting is abysmal and makes it near impossible to read. I’d much rather stick with looking at the plain untranslated version than have to read it like this, even though the English makes sense. I imagine someone will be commissioning a professional translation group on here soon enough, so for now just let it be please. If anything, you can just make these for yourself to enjoy alone instead.

Base +6, boxer666 +6, hotpiscok +7

alright i get it, i am in fact not an experienced translator as you can tell, if anything i'm basically just a guy who happens to own photoshop and a work that they really like so i can understand the comments, any tips on things i could improve on? only the typesetting?

Base +2, Kratas +7, Formularium +6, J_Dawg +9

Even disregarding the typesetting, the english itself often sounds weird, like:
"One wish, anything, I will be making come true"
"I would like to sniff her farts" (Why would he say "her" when talking directly to her)
So make sure to do some proofreading.

Base +24, BlueFast +12, hotpiscok +7

More than doing proofreading, if you can't translate yourself and are doing things entirely through machine translation, then don't upload it. Like someone else said above, feel free to do that for your own enjoyment, but the instant you drop that on this site, that'll be the defacto English version across this and all other scalping hentai sites.

Base +6, hotpiscok +7

@doodadad

Yeah... i've realized, i actually didn't know that this site worked like that and didn't know that it would spread to other hentai sites as well... so i do apologize, i wanted to delete it but then also realized that i couldn't so...... yeah... I'll just leave this here and actually wait for a proper translation. Sorry for my lack of knowledge before uploading this gallery, again if i could i definitely would prefer to take it down.

Base +3, hotpiscok +7