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New to TLing doujins, critiques are much appreciated!

Thank you for translating this wife (dress) doujin

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Whoaaa thank you for translating Nekko's work. Are you planning to TL any other of their works?

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For sure, I'd like to do a lot more, but I also need to pace myself to not burn out on it. Started on the Mutsuki one which will take a bit, and the Kazusa one he just released today is so, so incredible, but will be a massive amount of work to clean and translate. I'm not confident I can make it all sound natural in English, but I want to try to slowly chip away at it while working on others.

Ahhh, looking at it with a fresh set of eyes. I realized "shudder" has a much more negative connotation than I intended. I wanted to vary the word I used for "biku" (and that last "zoku") based on the context and size of it, but I couldn't think of anything more intense than "shiver" other than that. I'm hoping my intention with it at least got through, rather than giving off a sense of revulsion from her.

Last edited on 27 October 2024, 23:59.

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