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I think this version was proofread more than the other one? I'm honestly not sure... I'm too lazy too do a really in depth comparison to tell for sure what the absolute difference is.
Even then, you'd need someone that knows Japanese pretty well to look at the Raw to see if this version is improved over the other one in any real way.
The text seems to be overall the same, just compacted into less pages and with alterations here and there... but I can't really tell if it's genuinely better or not.