Actually cleaned this doujin and did proper typesetting. The translation is still a shitty MTL that I went through and proofread for grammatical errors. Still needs a real translator to come through and translate this into English. I don't know enough Japanese to do it on my own so I'll include the cleaned files (I didn't clean the sfx because I'm a lazy SOB) if someone else wants to take this one on.

you know what, it may be MTL, but i at least appreciate the attempt to proof read it in person.
there are more then plenty who don't even bother

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Furthermore, one can appreciate the honesty of having it tagged rewrite. Also, love the shib, excellent artist, thank you.

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This is some high quality Crow content, and I appreciate the honesty.

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Is this what you call "Hate-Sex"? Cause it certainly looks like it if you played the main story.

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Now I wanna see the prequel

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