https://www.dlsite.com/maniax/work/=/product_id/RJ01240570.html
https://www.pixiv.net/artworks/121265938

mtl trash (comment too short)

Base +6, Nofxex +6, Potats +6, JDhentai69 -6, YuzuJuice +11, Accdump +6, Asdfle8 +7, vageenaj +6, jaidendeck -9, CocoaRobbins +6, Neoses +6, reloadere +9, animadversion +6, and 10 more...

Honestly I take bigger issues with the typesetting than I do the MTL in this case. Like, the English is actually readable here where so many others can't even manage that, but you still need to learn to center your shit and resize text to keep it in the bubble with space for padding. Hell, expand the bubble if you need to.

Base +18, reloadere +9, JDhentai69 +6, MagicalJuko +6, fuckmewitharake -7, Colonel Slammovich +6, luzup +6, Caerion +6, Cocassu -7, Jago97 +6, qwertyuiop231 +6

The MTL is actually fine for the most part, but not centering the text or letting it leak outside the speech bubble really is a mistake.

Base +6, onlyregistere +15, Caerion +6, Tormentagedon +9, Cocassu -7, Jago97 +6

The story is so cute.

Base +6, Tormentagedon +9