Raw: https://e-hentai.org/g/724241/2af566a9f7/

The lyrics translation of ORBITAL BEAT is based on the Commie release of Symphogear G, and Symphogear wiki, slightly modified to fit the flow of the story and panels.

This is some great editing and typesetting all around based on initial impressions. There is one minor problem I wanted to point out for you. The Japanese text is still present under the English text on page 2 (first page of the actual manga). Everything looks great otherwise. Keep it up! I would also recommend maybe making some sort of page for credits maybe? While it is nice to include in the uploader comment, the credit would "follow" around different uploads if it was attached to the actual work itself.

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Thanks for the suggestions. I don't know how the page 2 got passed me. I've added a rudimentary credits page now.

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My compliments to the chef. That's the kind of wholesome, intense, passionate yuri you just can't find these days. In spite of a perfectly-silly premise, Kirika and Shirabe's love truly drips from every page like water from a soaked raincoat post-thunderstorm. Truly immaculate typesetting, too.

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