Hey, I don't know what you're trying to do and I don't want to be fundamentally mean to you, but there's nothing good with what you just posted.
Gamefriend already maintains a post of this Western and it's of much better quality.
You hardly put any tags, plus on one side you tag it in English and on the other in Japanese.
And the biggest mistake is that all the content is mixed.
You may want to participate, and that's fine ; but there is no point in copying others and doing less well.

https://e-hentai.org/g/3146222/eefd83d86c/

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The other gallery was removed it seems.

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有汉化就好了

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之后呢，下面的在哪看

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@CalmMax

Sad panda needs a hug.

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