[Black Pharaoh] JL Forsaken Souls (Ongoing)

Posted on 31 December 2024, 18:42 by: BlackPharaoh

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Posted on 26 March 2017, 02:52 by: imanidiot42

Shit man, this looks like it's gonna be soooo hot!

Posted on 01 April 2017, 12:33 by: Lolstudio

"The raw bliss.... of my cook"
That's some fine cooking.

Posted on 01 April 2017, 16:42 by: greekmikef

This a great stuff but why Zatanna is muted while she is abused? She could moaning in pleasure and she could say a long "yyyeeessss" while she is transformed with the cock in her ass.

Posted on 01 April 2017, 23:19 by: skyller

@ greekmikef: I'm assuming the tentacles or whatever he put in her mouth is preventing that

Posted on 01 April 2017, 23:31 by: BlackPharaoh

@Lolstudio You're right, that's some fine cooking. My bad, english isn't my fist language, so, some typos might escape my autocorrector, I think it's the moment when i must say: "Sorry for my bad english" .

@greekmikef she had to be gaged, otherwise she might use her powers to stop the attack, and that would have made this a very short story, but you'll see more about this in the next page.

Posted on 02 April 2017, 03:24 by: MegaBlueRed

Keep up the good work, love it so far.

Posted on 02 April 2017, 06:18 by: Thuzadin

Mmmm, demonic transformation~

Mmmm, demonic transformation~Hooves, please! :3

Posted on 02 April 2017, 19:44 by: BlackPharaoh

@Thuzadin Not everyone will corrupt the same, some will have paws, talons demonic feet, etc.. Originally she was going to have hooves, but at the end i discarded them, al least for her, Power Girl on the other hand... Anyway, you can see the original design in this link: http://blackpharaohcomix.com/corrupted-zee/?age-verified=1b2fb10f54

Posted on 04 April 2017, 10:26 by: greekmikef

Well you are right but from the moment she is already corrupted and under her new master's control, she can accept her new form and identity and endulge in her lust, consumed by it.

Posted on 04 April 2017, 16:06 by: BlackPharaoh

@greekmikef Don't worry, she will

Posted on 04 April 2017, 16:55 by: Malkovik

Just amazing. You're making an exceptional corruption comic. I agree that variety is the spice of life, so making slightly different transformation according to the character (hooves/no hooves, etc) is a great idea.

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Posted on 06 April 2017, 05:03 by: shittingass

I wish my dick was this powerful. :'(

Posted on 06 April 2017, 07:31 by: Thuzadin

Love it irregardless. Dominating and corrupting would be heroes and heroines into demonic servants and sex slaves is my kink! ;>

Posted on 06 April 2017, 19:16 by: Kunavang

please make more i love it^^

Posted on 07 April 2017, 02:02 by: jehovahwitness

dude , can you post this at least twice a week , we only get 52 pages a year.... and the content is not too much in each page.
pretty please

Posted on 07 April 2017, 04:05 by: BlackPharaoh

@jehovahwitness I plan to do so eventually, right now i'm trying to catch my pace that's why i'm only posting once a week for the moment

Posted on 13 April 2017, 03:10 by: TwistedGoggles

Batman, quick! Use your Demon Repellent!

Posted on 13 April 2017, 04:13 by: JMV_Nightwalker

This looks promising, and I like what Is see so far. Loved the weird tentacle gag. It seems to suddenly disappear though, did it fully go down her throat I wonder? Maybe some kind of parasite not just transforming her now, but having a lasting effect.

Posted on 13 April 2017, 05:35 by: comp239

Great comic so far!

Posted on 14 April 2017, 08:57 by: Thuzadin

Nightwalker-

I'd imagine it's some sort of seed of corruption / small piece of his essence with which he infused Zatanna with, and then her actions and desires feed and nourish it, allowing the corruptor to warp and shape her, mind, body and soul. :>

Posted on 17 April 2017, 16:23 by: Ficfactor

They should have run when they saw Vigo on the wall.

Posted on 17 April 2017, 21:05 by: Dunccan54

Great comic and great job dude.
I like your style and I wanna access to your website. But it seems to be down. Can you confirm that or the problem comes from my pc ?

Posted on 17 April 2017, 21:37 by: BlackPharaoh

@Dunccan54 I'm glad you're liking what i've published so far. about my website, apparently from time to time the site can't be reached everywhere. I check it several times a day for comments and never caught it down, so be patient, it's online and i'm posting some sketches and illustrations unavailable here.

Posted on 20 April 2017, 11:23 by: Thuzadin

I guess there's two cooks stirring her pot now, rather than the single cook from earlier. ;)

Jokes aside, sweet stuff! Keep' em coming... FOREVER!

Posted on 20 April 2017, 13:35 by: jehovahwitness

damn cooks keep coming :'D.

blackpharaoh , i already messaged you on facebook , did u receive it ?

Posted on 20 April 2017, 16:18 by: BlackPharaoh

Damn those cooks keep appearing, in the next upload, it will be corrected, and i made a find and replace in my document so hopefully in the future there will be no more cooks with they culinary invasions. @jehovawitness, i still don't have a Facebook page but i do have a new Twitter account, and there i did get a message which I replied

Posted on 20 April 2017, 17:18 by: Thuzadin

This black baptism better bring some additional changes, Pharaoh! Changes, such as her feet turning into demonic hooves? :>

Posted on 20 April 2017, 20:43 by: BlackPharaoh

@Thuzadin There will be hooves, I promise

Posted on 21 April 2017, 16:54 by: Dunccan54

I tried access to your website at different hours, i think is maybe unavaible from France :(

Posted on 21 April 2017, 17:30 by: BlackPharaoh

@Dunccan54 Maybe is your internet provider, Because The hero that is helping me with the text corrections is from your beautiful country

Posted on 22 April 2017, 05:28 by: and2d88

Great work Pharaoh. if you don't have plans for green arrow, consider the thought of making a tg with him, making a trio of nightgaunts.

Posted on 22 April 2017, 17:19 by: BlackPharaoh

@and2d88 There are plans for him, not what you are suggesting, but he will be important for the next chapter.

BTW I know many of you desire more pages every week, those will come. In fact page 13 and 14 will be published the same day. Also if you like my work and wonder if i lost my crayon box or if i'm colorblind, there's a new section in my website where i'll be posting full color illustrations periodically. http://blackpharaohcomix.com/portraits-of-corruption/

Also you can get to see some previews for future pages on my Twitter account @BlackPharaohCMX

Two more pages as promised, and three to go to finish chapter !

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Posted on 04 May 2017, 03:15 by: Kledvger

Please corrupt Green Arrow, make him worship demon cock.
That would be fun.

Posted on 04 May 2017, 05:10 by: jehovahwitness

i just realised the spell reads "Mary turn into a horny slut" ...
oh my XD

Posted on 04 May 2017, 14:25 by: BlackPharaoh

Alright my fellow connoisseurs, Ollie's fate will be seen in the next page. No there will be no rule 63 (I'm sorry) It might look a little disappointing at first, but i will be a major plot changer in the next chapter which will have major consequences. So stay tuned for next week's page

Posted on 10 May 2017, 06:56 by: Thuzadin

Will he be an incubator for the parasitic corruption and spread it on, or merely be killed off as to enrage the black canarie and draw her in? :>

Posted on 10 May 2017, 15:36 by: BlackPharaoh

@Thuzadin A little bit of both, without giving away to many spoilers. The parasite will help the antagonist spread his influence, and yes Black Canary will be involved.

Posted on 11 May 2017, 22:28 by: nellybrume

just perfect, you're a great artist and story seems great, just don't go to quick with corrutpion :-P

Posted on 11 May 2017, 22:58 by: BlackPharaoh

@nellybrume I know, i've been too fast with the corruptions, but trust me some rewriting is been done with the rest of the story, for example, 4 pages were added to this chapter, it was originally faster, 1 page corruptions. Now some more pages will be added down the road where it matters most.

Posted on 13 May 2017, 23:04 by: succubusl0v3r

Wait, *male corruption?!*

Is this actually happening?

Posted on 14 May 2017, 09:13 by: Colle17

looking forward to seeing more of this comic and will other female heroes will be corrupted looking forward to seeing what happens

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Posted on 16 May 2017, 07:30 by: Solipsist

Constantly reminding us that she's being corrupted, corrupted...Oh, yes, anyway, I'm corrupting you -- is not exactly top notch writing. You may want to phase that out of the narrative. It's more cringy than anything.

Posted on 16 May 2017, 16:54 by: BlackPharaoh

@Solipsist well it's a corruption comic, so... sometimes corruption happens, even the writing can be corrupted that's why it had so many typos, and sometimes i got carried on by the corruption stuff.

Thanks for the heads up, it certainly wasn't something I was aware of, and I'll dust off my dictionary and search some synonymous to correct these pages and future ones.

Posted on 17 May 2017, 22:11 by: Cazalunas

Loving this comic so far. Keep with the great work!

Posted on 24 May 2017, 05:20 by: BlackPharaoh

Ok guys i've open a Patreon page. But before you flip out and start preparing the pitchforks and torches I want to guarantee you that this comic will remain 100% free. No censorship or SFW versions to hook you up for the nudies, nothing like that. The content will remain as you ‘ve seen it here. In case I decide to upgrade my work, you wont get a diluted version, you’ll get the real deal.

So if you decide to support my work at this link https://www.patreon.com/theblackpharaoh You have my utmost gratitude. And if you are enjoying this story here, on my website or on the other pages, come and say hi, your support means a lot to me and my work you will always have my gratitude.

Posted on 24 May 2017, 21:28 by: MegaBlueRed

I can't wait for Chapter 2 and I joined the Patreon, good luck getting more support.

Posted on 26 May 2017, 17:26 by: BlackPharaoh

@MegaBlueRed you are my hero thank you so much

Posted on 20 June 2017, 16:40 by: akb568

Anything new?

Posted on 26 June 2017, 02:06 by: BlackPharaoh

@akb568 Right now, the comic is being published first on Patreon, BUT it will return here un July 14. If you can't wait, here's the link https://www.patreon.com/theblackpharaoh

Posted on 26 June 2017, 11:39 by: akb568

Thx! Can't wait_(:з」∠)_

Posted on 17 July 2017, 09:47 by: CorruptedEnjoyment

I'm loving these, but, uh...it's a few days past the 14th now. Has there been a delay? Or a change of plans?

Posted on 18 July 2017, 20:27 by: BlackPharaoh

There was a small delay, but we are back.

Posted on 26 July 2017, 22:19 by: Ficfactor

Last panel: Well, THERE'S your problem.

Posted on 27 July 2017, 17:36 by: jin21

A pregnancy and birth scene would make this gold ...

Posted on 03 August 2017, 09:25 by: Sauseur

The new victim is here !

Posted on 17 August 2017, 07:37 by: JohnShepard45

Love this comic! One of the best in artistic style and juicy corruption!

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Posted on 17 August 2017, 10:23 by: kyuubikuroneko

I love it. Keep doing those great works

Posted on 23 August 2017, 02:42 by: makuroe

It's beautiful, I am looking forward your works!

Posted on 30 August 2017, 05:47 by: Mekoruu

Hi BlackPharaoh, been following this closely for a while now! Absolutely love it and am considering supporting your Patreon but just wanted to ask about your website; I've never been able to access it since it does not connect. Is it blocked in some countries? Thanks!

Posted on 30 August 2017, 06:21 by: BlackPharaoh

Yes, it looks like it's a problem between internet providers and my hosting service, in short I'll migrate my page to another provider and I hope this resolves the problem. Meanwhile what's been helping other users with the same problem, it's a VPN

Posted on 31 August 2017, 03:27 by: hoyle

can't wait to see what happens next btw keep up the good work @blackpharaoh

Posted on 05 September 2017, 20:36 by: BlackPharaoh

Starting this month, expect a new page every five days

Posted on 11 September 2017, 02:01 by: advert

lol, check out the hank hill ass in that bottom panel on page 29

Posted on 15 September 2017, 16:38 by: Sauseur

To fast, i needed to see Kara to be corrupted little, to see "how she's be catched" .

Posted on 15 September 2017, 21:51 by: lordoftheuniverse

Aw, we're skipping corruption/transformation now? That's way less fun. :-(

Posted on 16 September 2017, 00:50 by: BlackPharaoh

Don't worry, those two corruptions will still be seen

Posted on 16 September 2017, 17:18 by: Solipsist

@lordoftheuniverse
From the point of view of story-writing, you don't want the same structure repeating itself with the same punchline. We already saw 2 heroes being corrupted one after another in one scene. Doing the exact same thing on the following scene, would just seem like it's a trivial first-dish that should prepare for you something much greater -- because, surely -- there's no way the standards wouldn't be raised?
Going by what Pharaoh just wrote, there is something to wait for, and that's why Pharaoh skipped the process of the 3rd corruption. It will be mixed up with something that follows, or bring about something more absurd.

Remember, peeps. Too much repetition will result in a bad time, m'eh? A way to usually break the cycle, yet somewhat do the same thing, is to have a heroine actively corrupt a group of citizens, and create their own network of minions. Having the demon corrupt every single hero can get a bit stale if yer not careful with it.

Posted on 21 September 2017, 04:17 by: corelee

@Solipsist You forget that his isn't just a story, this is porn. You do the porn before thinking about story. But it's also completely up to the artist and his patterns, his actual audience, were just leechers.

Posted on 21 September 2017, 23:55 by: Solipsist

I was actually talking about it from the point of view of porn. You gotta mix shit up to make it a bit interesting, although I can't say I am too sure how this one will go down, myself. I was using stuff like Dinaranger as reference. Even if people get corrupted, you mix up how it gets done.
For an instance, after seeing the process of corrupting these two characters from start to finish, having the same prep-time to show how the demon does the exact same thing to another girl, can be boring by now. We saw the trick already.
That's why some authors usually mix it up. Let's say, now that you have a larger group of corrupted girls, perhaps you can do something really big with them? Like take over the system, lock everything down, and screw the male heroes in such a way that they fuse together into some form of unholy eldritch abomination. That's not really the same thing anymore, right?

But, again, I have no idea where Pharaoh wants to take this thing. I can't say I expect some sort of a huge twist. As you said, this is porn.

Posted on 25 September 2017, 10:04 by: Thuzadin

It'd be nice to see the process of changes, like the tail beginning to grow out and its tip gaining a spaded shape. The elongation of fangs, the tongue or when it splits into a forked one. Toes melding together into hooves, the shape of the bone changing, and so forth. Sprouting claws.

An organic strapon or some temporary ''growth'' could spice up the lesbomancy as well. Perhaps transform, corrupt or even gender bender some of the males rather than killing everyone because they've got a dick.

Posted on 25 September 2017, 11:03 by: MitchellTF

*sighs* I confess, I have trouble getting into this comic. I mean, I'm fond of corruption/transformation, but this one tends to lack dramatic tension, since...well...the bad guy has no weaknesses whatsoever, and any woman he touches is essentially completely powerless. And then they become a dickslut.

I second liking the transformations, though. I also kinda feel like this is the work where it could use being 'not the heroes'...since, really? Their personalities don't matter. 'Cause they will just end up dicksluts.

Part of it, however, may be a weird thing I have. For some reasons, I find corruption by a male figure more...squicky, then corruption by a female/herm figure.

Posted on 30 September 2017, 18:54 by: Ficfactor

I love the latest page showing that the TF is more than just skin deep and aesthetic. She's literally become a monster.

Posted on 05 October 2017, 17:42 by: Solipsist

I have to agree to that, seeing how the demon corrupt everyone has made the process become pretty dull. MitchellTF has put it pretty well, I just don't agree with the importance of having "tension" born from the antagonist having weaknesses, or the heroines being somewhat immune. At least, I think that's not the most important issue to focus on when it comes to this work....
As I said before -- The process cannot just repeat itself and expect equal results. We can't just see the same thing happening and be expected to feel equally about it as we did at the first time. The process needs to be expanded and somewhat altered, instead it's just being repeated. Instead, I feel like the same thing has happened for 30 pages.

I at least can say that it's unfair to expect an insane amount of variety within a mere 30 pages, that's usually the general amount of pages a single doujin has. But on the same note, it's kind of silly to have so much plot-movement within such a short period of time. For the very least, if the plot cannot be planned out effectively, I can at least hope the transformations will become more absurd as time passes. The focus does seem to be about instant-gratification.

Posted on 10 October 2017, 19:13 by: lordoftheuniverse

Having a character escape only partially transformed, and dealing with that, would be good, too.

The split mouth/cheek design feels so weird with it not being used or addressed in any way. Would love to see... something with it. No idea what, but it just feels like an odd design choice at the moment. Or maybe I'm missing a reference to something.

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Posted on 28 October 2017, 17:16 by: theCircle57

When does Barda or Scott come in so I can make my "Mega-Rod" or "Mother Box" jokes, respectively?

Posted on 31 October 2017, 14:56 by: BlackPharaoh

Barda and Mister Miracle are still a little far away, but definitely will be in this comic

Posted on 31 October 2017, 22:38 by: OrinMidwinter

Have you seen yellow sign?

*My dying words can not be Hastur Hastur Hastur*

Posted on 05 November 2017, 10:53 by: kain11

The English is only getting worse.

Posted on 05 November 2017, 15:29 by: theCircle57

@BlackPharaoh

Great! Looking forward to making those puns.

Posted on 10 November 2017, 22:26 by: MitchellTF

@Solipist.

Pretty much. One of the issue is "Dickslut" is not one of my fetishes I like. Demons, I like. Dicksluts? Not so much. The big problem, is that there's very little scenes now where the characterizatoin of people shine through. The first 15 pages were quite good, but after that, it's just "Super Villain fucks the Justice League". None of the dialogue is really memorable, and a lot of times it's being played for Drama. "OH MY GOSH! THEY GOT X!"

Except there's no dramatic payoff since we've seen it before...and, we're not here to see if the Justice League can win. It's been made clear that "Nope. The heroes are doomed. All hail Dickamon, lord of Sluts." What's worse, is even the transforations are mostly off-screen, and have little...difference to them. Only reason I check it out, is that it's the only thing updating right this sec.

Posted on 11 November 2017, 21:25 by: Nystic

Calling Batman 'only a man' is just asking to get defeated by him.
Every time someone dismisses or underestimates Batman because he has no superpowers they end up regretting it.

Posted on 15 November 2017, 08:36 by: Ficfactor

Diana, you baka!

Posted on 15 November 2017, 10:16 by: OcheHitry

I am reading this because of a story

Posted on 15 November 2017, 20:28 by: spork4313988

No torrent update?

Posted on 16 November 2017, 06:11 by: exVerniy

it's nice, just a little bit short

Posted on 18 November 2017, 06:49 by: freddone

Web site down again ?

Posted on 19 November 2017, 19:03 by: BlackPharaoh

Yes, but this time I'm migrating the site to a new server, so hopefully this problems will end soon

Posted on 20 November 2017, 09:09 by: freddone

glad see you back

Posted on 25 November 2017, 11:47 by: TinyCard

Batman will be winner，right？He is Batman!

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Posted on 30 November 2017, 09:07 by: Thuzadin

Last blowjob? Bullshit, he's got many more in his future... BECAUSE HE'S BATMAN!

Posted on 04 December 2017, 21:01 by: lions_bears

Thanks for posting BlackPharaoh.

There are some good stuff in there, good corruption and great artwork overall.

I have to ask, for the people that have critique this, the 'lack of tension' and dialogue not being memorable, what do you exactly expect for free porn? You're not exactly critiquing an Oscar caliber film. For what it is, the value that we are getting (free), what do you expect?

Posted on 05 December 2017, 08:19 by: Solipsist

Lions, I'll be frank.
That was, and still is, one of the most redundant and misguided mentalities that plague any website that provides "free content". There are several reasons, but for this specific project, the reason is extremely simple.

The author is personally involved here.
The moment people see that, discourse can open up within a heartbeat. And it's all basically just to tell the author, what he can possibly do better. Otherwise, you also have the opinion that there cannot possibly be any C&C in writing forums, because "it's free, what do you expect"? C'mon, man. People liked this thing enough to want to make it work better. It also doesn't help that he has a pateron, and actually wants to get more financial supporters.
From my point of view, if he is actually looking for more supporters for his work, it also makes sense to worry about the quality that he is providing. Hopefully if he'll get enough data from his audience, he might also evolve his work to a better standard. And not because "if he wants money he should do better", but because: "if he actually wants to get more fans, here are some things I think you can do better" -- Because right now, it's mostly just showing zombies that got taken down in 1 shot while repeating the word 'corruption'. That sort of instant-gratification is nice at first, but gets old pretty quick, and he didn't really change how he does things. I mean, it's fine to keep having heroes fall within 1 second, fine, but at least escalate the way they fall, or how they end up. Make it more violent or more perverse, instead of having the exact same thing. For an instance, someone is actually resisting the corruption? Maybe that ego-boost is false, and she ends up aggressively riding that monster while thinking that she somehow gained control, and now she "demands that he gives her more of that demon juice", as if it was ever her choice to make.

Long story short,
There are way too many reasons to "critique / complain about free stuff". And this particular project received actual data from the audience, because the audience actually cares about what this guy makes, and wanted to tell him what he can possibly do to make it better, if anything.

Posted on 05 December 2017, 10:00 by: kain11

Garbage. Utter. Garbage. The same sort of transformation each and every time. Let's have some modicum of change with each dude and chick at least.

Posted on 05 December 2017, 14:54 by: TheBoys

I was here for the tag gag, i'm quite into BDSM but I prefer the woman to be silence, drooling, moaning and feeling helpless as she can barely make a sound because she is being gaged ( duct tape, parasite, adhesive, etc.) No matter how they comment on Zatana transformation, you should just know that I like it. The only thing I don't like regarding her transformation was Zatana wearing fishnet and I personally hate fishnet. I also agree with some guys from above that we need various transformation forms, girls with strong mind who can resist the corruption but it is only suppressed and slowly make her into the monster's slave ( maybe a parasite was put in her mouth to wash her mind but she got helped and broke free but can't talk as her will, or being stuck in her ass and can't be removed though having tried many times, pulling it out will just only make her more horny....) then finally she is totally corrupted and become the insider that no hero can predict. This is just a personal opinion. Thanks for your hard work.

Posted on 05 December 2017, 16:00 by: Ficfactor

Good work on making us wait for the page turn. It's nice to see people take advantage of their format.

Posted on 06 December 2017, 07:54 by: lions_bears

@Solipsist

I understand your points and I respect what you mentioned. And I absolutely agree that feedback is important to help the creator improve. However there's one thing that I mentioned is, it's porn. Not an Oscar award winning movie. He is not writing this to get a Pulitzer prize.

If you're browsing this gallery for great literature, you're looking in the wrong place. Every porno pretty much ends the same way. If you don't know, I can give you a hint.

The artwork and action is probably what I look for which Black Pharaoh does a solid job at. It really surprises me how people are critiquing it.

At the end, I'm ok to agree to disagree.

Posted on 08 December 2017, 23:43 by: Solipsist

@Lions,
If we abandon the angle of "giving the author C&C", your argument that "this is JUST PORN, what are you even bothering to argue about" is yet another tired mentality that I do not understand. You're basically saying we should be happy with anything we can possibly get. Are you seriously thinking like that?
The standards for porn are definitely lower in terms of narrative. But I challenge you to go watch a porn film in which a girl jumps on some guy's dick for an entire hour, without changing any angles or anything. Just a straight shot of her cowgirling that dick for a whole hour, no change.
According to you -- "hey! it's just porn! Who gives a damn!"
While we're telling you here: "And we find it to be boring! Do something else!"

Because if we take your mentality even further, why even have dialogue? Pft, a story? This is porn god damn it, we just need pictures of tits and vaginas.
If not, and you actually need "a story", where's the limit? Because right now, you're pulling a stickman-argument by assuming anything we're talking about here is "demanding a gallery of great literature", when people were just talking about why they like corruption, how they like to consume it, and why variation is important in porn.
I think you overreacted to the input here, but I'll give you the benefit of the doubt that some of the arguments that at least I made, tried to elaborate a basic opinion a bit verbosely. But calm that trollbait, yo.

P.S: And, yeah. I agree that Pharaoh is kicking ass with his material. It feels like he got most of his grounds covered, and has very little to change.
But oddly enough, that "very little" segment is overtaking most of the work here, which makes it all the more awkward. It genuinely feels like there could've been very minor alterations or changes in perspectives when it comes to how the doujin was made, and it would've come out as a solid 10 instead of a 7 or a 6.

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Posted on 11 December 2017, 09:33 by: BlueDye

@lions_bears

Sure, it's not trying to win an award, but the comic is very boring because the transformations are repetitive and the characters could be interchanged and you wouldn't be able to tell which one got corrupted. Supergirl and hawkgirl get corrupted the same exact way, if you swapped their roles you wouldn't be able to tell. Whenever a character gets corrupted now I roll my eyes because I know how it'll turn out. Honestly, if the dialogue was google translate tier, I wouldn't care if the art alone worked and I could get off to the art. But the art is boring. I read the dialogue to make the art more exciting, but it doesn't help.

So 1, you have boring art and 2 you have too much story, which overshadows the transformations due in part to them being repetitive and way too fast.

Posted on 15 December 2017, 08:00 by: Thuzadin

DON'T YOU DARE KILL OFF BATMAN. CUCK HIM, SURE. BUT HE iS BATMAN! :( T-this is immersion breaking!

Posted on 15 December 2017, 10:54 by: l4chuga

@48: Yikes! That was some straight up Necromorph shit right there.

Posted on 15 December 2017, 13:53 by: Ficfactor

Finally, we get to see the split mouth in all its horrific glory.

Posted on 15 December 2017, 20:03 by: Raziel20XX

You put Batman in a situation where he doesn't have all the answers and can't save the day?

Did you not get the memo?

Posted on 20 December 2017, 09:11 by: Thuzadin

Woop. Justice League are here. Seems we get to see Batman survive and the ''partial'' transformation many were asking for in Diana, possibly if they take her out of that creepy metamorphosis pod.

Posted on 21 December 2017, 10:05 by: luxtia

Great! I thought this gonna be demonic transformation, but it seem it gonna be alien transformation.

Posted on 23 December 2017, 01:54 by: mrtyler603

Pretty sure that is the crime syndicate and Martian man hunter. I am sure Faust lex luther and black Adam are 3 of the the guys that showed up and they are not apart of the justice League.

Posted on 26 December 2017, 22:08 by: tonyxxx

The cock-block crew arrived and ruined the party.

Posted on 31 December 2017, 11:38 by: theCircle57

@tonyxxx

They did carry back one of the most powerful female superheroes in DC who was just recently corrupted by the bad guys. What could possibly go wrong?

Posted on 05 January 2018, 21:09 by: MitchellTF

....Okay. SO, they 'rescue' Diane after she's already been exposed and looks like shit...and the Bad Guys can REGENERATE FROM HEAD EXPLODY!

Posted on 10 January 2018, 19:03 by: Ficfactor

Do it Batman. Slap that ass.

Posted on 15 January 2018, 08:04 by: BrainPain

Oh boy, I'm getting flashbacks to The Batman Who Laughs.

Posted on 15 January 2018, 22:31 by: zeleste

the batman that fucks

Posted on 19 January 2018, 04:11 by: BrainPain

That we shall see.

Posted on 20 January 2018, 06:03 by: s919

Do it Batman. Slap that ass.

Posted on 20 January 2018, 15:34 by: theCircle57

Why does Wonder Woman wear a robe over the costume she wears out?

Posted on 21 January 2018, 02:22 by: jimbo_extreme

Wonderwoman and Batman are rogue and nobody knows

Justice League is fucked.

Posted on 25 January 2018, 07:07 by: bearonfire

It's over for the League now that Bruce and Diana are...whatever it is they are

Posted on 25 January 2018, 15:12 by: BlackPharaoh

Haven't you heard the Martian? There is no Justice League. ;)

Posted on 25 January 2018, 18:47 by: Hopfrog

"The Perfect"? This bit of dialogue seems incomplete.

Posted on 26 January 2018, 03:18 by: BlackPharaoh

That's how Greg Rucka Called Wonder Woman's lasso. The Perfect.

Posted on 26 January 2018, 03:29 by: jimbo_extreme

Get ready for some sweet corrupted lasso bdsm. I'm so ready

Posted on 28 January 2018, 23:05 by: Hopfrog

Oh, my bad, then.

Posted on 05 February 2018, 15:35 by: skyller

I really hope batman and wonder woman gets corrupted from each other but still retain their sense of self even if twisted and decides to fight evil with evil.
That would change from always that same ugly guy...

Posted on 20 February 2018, 16:55 by: Neeckin

I feel like the plot is getting kind of muddled

Posted on 21 February 2018, 08:36 by: BrainPain

Not that I want to see her here, especially considering that I'm not entirely sure how far in the timeline (and in which timeline) this takes place (for example, whether or not Dick Grayson is old enough to be the Nightwing), but I'm kind of wondering if Raven could resist this corruption entirely.

Posted on 25 February 2018, 06:41 by: bearonfire

Damn it, go back to the Bats and Diana Black Canary already got her screen time.

Posted on 25 February 2018, 12:39 by: theCircle57

If weird pupils can get a tag, weird mouths should too.

Posted on 26 February 2018, 01:28 by: hatepie

I like corruption as much as the next guy, but the complete physical transformation makes it difficult to tell who they even used to be. They all look kinda the same after.

Posted on 05 March 2018, 12:19 by: 百丈怀海

印黑
老法
sequence error
老黑
印法
correct order

Posted on 17 March 2018, 18:43 by: Da Bomb

This comic started with the first transformation being pretty good and then from there on out it dove off a cliff. It feels like they just instantly corrupt and into the same thing over and over, I honestly have no idea who is who anymore. The best thing I can hope for now is some mutual corruption between Diane and Bruce.

Posted on 20 March 2018, 07:13 by: Bhaal29

ASSUMING DIRECT CONTROL

Posted on 20 March 2018, 09:02 by: Solipsist

@Bomb,
Honestly, rather than "they transform into the same thing" (case in point: Dina-Ranger is a series in which most of the characters transform into the same gimp-suit attire, and it's a great corruption series), I'd say my main grief with the direction of the doujin, is its heavy use of one template.
They always go from "You shalt never defeat me with a penis!" to "I live to serve this penis!" within 4 or so pages. Every single time. We're seeing self-contained sex scenes that don't stretch out too far, which is great for short-running stories that want to keep the hype up, but in the long run, it just becomes trite and baffling since we're mostly "just" getting 4 pages of sex that don't go anywhere. That's basically porn-4koma...

At this point, I'd rather Pharaoh would just release whole chapters, or at least build the story with actual chapters (i.e: 20 pages) in mind. Because right now, even if the story is technically built with "chapters" in mind, it sure doesn't seem that way. As I put it, that porn-4koma truly seems like Pharaoh tries to put something 'interesting' in every page, rather than build up for it.
I guess that's one of the issues with relatively new artists and Patreon, huh.

Posted on 26 March 2018, 16:33 by: lolpoop1

I like the specific permutation of tags for this comic a lot. What are some other hentai similar to this? Corruption/slave et cetera, sure, but moreso the same vibe as this

Posted on 31 March 2018, 08:03 by: Solipsist

I don't really want to be that snarky, but #69...
"I will never submit to you, monster!"
I am willing to bet in 2 pages, in #71, she'll already be calling him daddy.

Posted on 03 April 2018, 01:37 by: Hopfrog

...Falling asleep over here with the Canary/Supergirl tapes.

Posted on 05 April 2018, 08:06 by: hermit20

I think the most boring part about this, is just watching the "bad guy" have no problems what so ever... also betting he gets away with all of this scot-free with nothing stopping him or killing him. Of course if this was the current DC universe, Dr. Manhattan would have just instantly erased him.

Posted on 10 April 2018, 13:50 by: luxtia

Hmm.. this development got boring lately, all corrupted heroine lack uniqueness. Add some spice and drama....This start to lean into dinaranger setting

Posted on 10 April 2018, 14:38 by: Neeckin

I really wish the bad guy didn't look like a mass of Uroboros. Would have been better if he was like, an actual monster or corrupt them by giving the girls a part of himself

Posted on 15 April 2018, 06:49 by: Gleonomis2

@Neeckin. He is giving them a part of himself... If you know what I mean

Posted on 20 April 2018, 06:20 by: Njorde

Now just dont be stupid and ruin it with a happy ending.

Posted on 20 April 2018, 10:03 by: Smiling_Jack

"I'm fine!" says the woman who has her combat panties down and fingering herself in the middle of a briefing room.

Posted on 20 April 2018, 22:08 by: Ghizghuth

I agree, a happy ending would be the worst possible ending, and it happens ways to often that a corruption/mind break hentai is ruined by an unneeded, worthless happy ending. It just ruins the point of the mind break, or corruption. Otherwise, a very nice hentai ^^

Posted on 25 April 2018, 08:15 by: luxtia

a true happy ending is, when everything is ruined and irreversible. It's a beauty thats someone can't fix. Bad ending is when everyone turn into good people, after sins they ve committed

Posted on 25 April 2018, 09:17 by: Nurse Bimbo

Is it just me or it's this villain Slaneesh the symbol seems like his chaos sign.

Posted on 25 April 2018, 14:10 by: theCircle57

I just realized that if there's an Anti-Life Equation, this guy's the Pro-Life Equation with all the sex he spreads and when you notice how everyone is more lively and vibrant after getting touched by him.

Posted on 25 April 2018, 20:40 by: MitchellTF

Nah. He's also part of the Anti-LIfe Equation. The Anti-life equation isn't "Death"...it's "A life of complete submission". IE...it's Ultimate Mind Control.

Posted on 26 April 2018, 04:24 by: Da Bomb

Are we really about to get another 6 weeks of exposition

Posted on 30 April 2018, 21:08 by: anglican

By saying that the entity that corrupts the DC women can absorb their power might be away for the writer to kill him. He did fucked Supergirl and he might be vulnerable to Kryptonite now. I don't want a happy ending either but I am hoping that after this Batman would take care of those corrupted women's need if you know what I'm saying.

Posted on 20 May 2018, 07:01 by: Kledvger

I hope Supes gets corrupted and becomes addicted to demonic cock <3

Posted on 31 May 2018, 08:09 by: Jables5

At least it's better than the stuff Pegasus used to shit out. It's a 3 from me.

Posted on 03 June 2018, 09:01 by: BrainPain

Supes is either about to die or go full Injustice.

Posted on 05 June 2018, 22:30 by: LeFrenchguy

@Page 82 :
*Voice of Senator Palpatine* : "DO IT !"

Posted on 06 June 2018, 05:13 by: darthwesker

its just me feel sad about“I refuse to lose you”？
its pretty strange when you read a porn comic to feel sad

Posted on 11 June 2018, 03:02 by: hatepie

Gotta love how every male superhero is suddenly a massive jobber, even superman.

Posted on 11 June 2018, 03:09 by: hoyle

Just wondering @BlackPharaoh but how many characters are you planning on doing?

Posted on 11 June 2018, 12:35 by: getlower

This is good stuff, hope to hear you soon for the second chapter

Posted on 20 June 2018, 13:27 by: Neeckin

I mean at this point I hope it is a total bad end with everyone getting corrupted

Posted on 20 June 2018, 23:47 by: BrainPain

@Neeckin that would be incredibly boring and anticlimactic.
I wonder if Mr. Bad Guy here is capable of experiencing fear...

Posted on 30 June 2018, 04:50 by: bearonfire

This is exactly why they should have never made Superman so powerful in the first place. Everyone always goes hard on kryptonite or supernatural power bullshit. Also, unless author pull something out his ass the ending is pretty much locked into place at this point. If the most powerful member of the JLa can't even take on one of this guy's minions, what chance does everyone else have?

Posted on 30 June 2018, 05:41 by: Jason_6787

Kind of sad to see superman die so easily, feels like there could have been an interesting story with redemption or something of the like. Now it feels like there isn't anywhere else to go from here but down.

Like there's no possible victory for the heroes, fucking SUPERMAN is dead, and was killed in like 2 pages. So why the fuck would we bother to read this anymore? I personally have no interest in reading as your "SuPER CoOl BlACk PhArAoH" OC just has everyone rollover and lose or die. Which is a fucking shame, because I wouldn't fucking be here if I didn't like corruption stories, and I'm sure most other people here share the same feeling. To be honest, I always expect the villain to win in corruption stories, but most of those stories don't involve this degree of weird snuff shit, and most of them take a little bit longer with the corruption to give the semblance of a feeling that the protagonist can still win/escape.

Pharaoh you need to get to the fucking point faster, or move on to something new. You've written yourself into a corner and continue to do so. The only twist you can make at this point is, "Oh look batman wins" which I don't know if that's better or worse than the current direction to be honest.

Also fuck this garbage harem bullshit, this dumbass OC Villain is trying to become like "all powerful" or some other contrived bullshit. Yet your trying to tell me he doesn't want ANY male superhero minions? Fucking doubt that shit my guy.

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Posted on 30 June 2018, 10:31 by: tonyxxx

Some of the reactions here are quite intriguing, what are you even getting out of this if you rooting for a good ending or redemption? This is clearly a corruption/degradation fantasy, if you find that anticlimactic or a turn off you might not be the target audience for this.

Posted on 30 June 2018, 13:57 by: knucklesluigi

Woah, Superman's corpse and shriveled up dick kind of scared me a little there, but it's kind of nothing compared to that Buta no Gotoki game where the kid's dick gets guillotined off.

Posted on 30 June 2018, 16:52 by: Jason_6787

@tonyxxx
I wouldn't be following this comic if I didn't like corruption fantasies. This comic was amazing and is still pretty good.

But when there is no opposing force (Superman for example, because even the Black Pharaoh said "The greatest of us, and we can't even give him a proper burial") it just becomes kind of boring.

It doesn't feel like there is anyone left to stop the villain so I guess he just wins and everything is now predetermined with no twists or turns left. That being said Black Pharaoh could still pull something out of nowhere but it will probably feel like a cop out.

All in all I wanted the villain to win, but with superman dead I guess he already has and he appears to have done it incredibly easily. Not really any stakes left.

Edit: WOW would you look at that, it's been about a year and half since I made this comment and Pharaoh is still writing himself into the exact same corner he was then, I really hope Pharaoh can make this story have a satisfying conclusion, but I doubt that will happen with the direction this comics been going for a while now. The worst part is we AS THE READERS don't even know IF the antagonist OC has some kind of weakness. Let alone the fucking heroes, where all they're doing at this point is waiting to die in a hole in the ground I guess.

Maybe it's not my place to say, as a reader. But Pharaoh with the quality of your art you should find someone to write the stories for you, if this is what one of your typical comics ends up looking like.
Because it feels like all the work you put into the visuals is wasted on a bad narrative. And the visuals are REALLY GOOD my man, they're done quite well!

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Posted on 06 July 2018, 05:09 by: bearonfire

Not that my opinion actually matters lol, but I would have liked to see more involved corruption process instead of the insta-loss, insta-corrupt stuff. That's pretty much it. I don't really care about Supes especially since he's just fodder in this comic.

Posted on 06 July 2018, 16:16 by: Neeckin

Well after superman now I guess Billy is gonna get insta killed. Unless Lex pulls out some kind of deus ex this is going to be a slow march to everyone dead or corrupted.

Posted on 12 July 2018, 06:39 by: blacktoti

Please Shazam No!!!

Posted on 18 July 2018, 08:14 by: TheKnightlyMinstrel

Fankly put? This entire fucking thing is stupid. It'd have been hot if it were like... dramatic. Instead it goes like this:

NArrative: OH TEH NOEZ DE POWAH IZ UNSTAHPABBALE
A hero: NEVAH FEAH I CAN DEFORT DA BADGUIZE
Narrative: NO U CANT LOL BECAUSE LOL UNSTAHPABBULL

Please, for the love of the Man Emperor of Mankind; and all stop signs in the galaxy- CEASE AND FUCKING DESIST.

Posted on 18 July 2018, 14:37 by: lilili986

l wait for a week,and it just passed Captain Marvel's story.Mary could make Shazam to billy's body,than this two succubus can play so hot with him and drink his power dry after it.I hope there are more details about this play in the following story,just like supergirl's story.P.S. tkanks to the BlackPhaeaoh again

看到“黑法老印”，不知道作者懂不懂中文或者干脆是国人？但还是用中文写了，这算是大事件了吧，不考虑先杀闪祭天？果然让良心闪被虐很不忍心呢，笑。原本还很期待沙赞和两魅魔的细节呢，比如强制恢复正太身等，结果直接结束了，不知后面有没有像超女一样的闪回呢。神力女孩、星火、媚拉会不会有戏份,还有反派们怎么样了？反派女里也有毒藤女、哈莉、紫星石呀。绿灯过五必团灭，要不让紫灯魔改一下把绿灯军团团灭了吧，“爱情”对“意志”，也很有搞头呀。以上是个人意见并不是指手划脚，作者意志最大，如果说错了希望作者大大不要生气

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Posted on 19 July 2018, 03:40 by: Neeckin

Billy didn't even get to do anything, they might as well have just walked up and shot him in the head

Posted on 24 July 2018, 07:33 by: LunaticOcean

coooooooooooooooooooool

Posted on 24 July 2018, 23:20 by: three_iron

I'll admit I am curious to see how this all ends, if it's anything other than the world pretty much ceases to exist. Will be curious to see what Mary Sue move or McGuffin works into play. Outside that, the fact that all the females look alike once "changed" and Supes and Billy are just tossed aside without really much story and as if they were trash ... really makes the whole thing trash.

Posted on 25 July 2018, 15:27 by: testiculus

Can't wait to see the new corrupted look of Vixen... and of Fire and Ice even if I'm not familiar with those two girls.

Posted on 25 July 2018, 19:24 by: l4chuga

Is that... Plastic Man in the back?

Posted on 28 July 2018, 19:22 by: BrainPain

If they end up somehow killing Plastic Man (let alone, effortlessly) I'm going to flip a table.

Posted on 29 July 2018, 15:31 by: benderik12

Very good gallery 55

Posted on 31 July 2018, 05:20 by: hermit20

@BrainPain Of course they will, because they already killed Superman and Shazam like it was nothing. Unless some Dues Ex shit is pulled their universe is done for. That and this "being" that started all this is just the Author's stand in for himself as an OC.

Posted on 31 July 2018, 06:54 by: crimsonfucker007

I'm amazed how you came up with this story and the art work is spot on

Posted on 31 July 2018, 11:51 by: Anon_3.141

@hermit20 It is Plastic Man we're talking about here. Plastic Man is the king of Deus Ex Machinae. Only one better than him is Franklin Richards from Marvel, or Molecule Man (A guy who literally reconstructed the Marvel Multiverse one time). (I'm not going to count The One Above All in this, because counting TOAA is cheating, though the Sentry is fair game.)

Posted on 02 August 2018, 11:18 by: BrainPain

@hermit20 yeah I agree that the author is just stroking his egopeener, but there still are tables that need to be flipped.

Posted on 02 August 2018, 14:54 by: Anon_3.141

@BrainPain And if anyone were to flip those tables, it'd be Plastic Man.

Posted on 05 August 2018, 13:50 by: Solipsist

A last-minute flip, though, is one of the worst things you can do at this point. A deus ex machina achieves nothing, and corruption-stories tend to prefer "bad endings".
And that brings us to the original point of: "these insta-kills, 3 scene developments aren't really satisfying". Even if the author would go for a "good ending", it'd require a build up. Setting up expectations, and creeping towards it. And we all saw how much Pharaoh dislikes that.

Posted on 06 August 2018, 01:25 by: Raziel20XX

Don't you DARE make the solution to all of this be BATMAN.

Posted on 09 August 2018, 17:37 by: Anon_3.141

I agree, Raziel20XX. Plastic Man needs a chance to show off his glorious mastery of the Deus Ex Machina.

Posted on 17 August 2018, 00:21 by: TheCaptn

@hermit20 Won't Superman be fine though? They left him in space where he'll eventually be hit by sunlight. BvS (Comic and movie) have him regenerating from 99.99% death that way. Not to mention that's a classic villain F-up I'd expect to occur that'd give us a resolution.

Posted on 18 August 2018, 06:13 by: all41

Should have turned the men into monsters.

Posted on 20 August 2018, 05:41 by: hermit20

@TheCaptn Superman is super dead. They sucked out his soul. No amount of light is gonna bring his soul back since it's being digested by a demon.

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Posted on 20 August 2018, 11:45 by: Raziel20XX

It says something that we're reading a hentai, and my biggest concern is the artist Mary-Sue'ing Batman... AGAIN.

Posted on 20 August 2018, 22:52 by: l4chuga

LOL... Not even 100 pages in and most of you have your comic geek pants hiked up. Let the man work and critique it after.

Posted on 25 August 2018, 11:48 by: BrainPain

Well, I mean, all the elements are there, but it's just not fun. It feels... empty.

Posted on 25 August 2018, 14:56 by: Acefighter159

Oh, god, I just realized, the villain is technically a black pharaoh monster. We're reading Mary Sue fanfiction. That explains a lot.

Posted on 31 August 2018, 15:47 by: jimbo_extreme

I don't see why anyone would expect a good ending. Regardless of who's left alive in this universe and what they can do.

We're talking about an artist that loves corruption, making a character based on their pen name to corrupt the entire DC universe. Do you really think this will end well?

Posted on 07 September 2018, 04:37 by: PoorWhiteTrash

It's starting to look like only Detective Chimp can save the world.

Posted on 09 September 2018, 19:13 by: Acefighter159

I'm gonna try to talk a bit about why this comic doesn't really work for so many people, because I have a spare half-hour and this comments section is maybe being read by its creator. And honestly, there's a fair bit of potential on display (the artwork is okay and the concept has some mileage); it's just the execution that's messy.

- Quantity over quality. Way too many corruption scenes, which are supposed to be the appeal point, just get skated over with no real resistance. Which I thought was the point, to show them trying and failing to fight it off. I see a lot of people being happy about the Wonder Woman scene because frankly, it's the only one in a good while that hasn't had the lady be converted into an identical cock-munching succubus the moment someone jams it in.
- The story is too fucking dark. Corruption's supposed to be dark, yeah, that's the point, but it's supposed to be dark and sexy. There's nothing sexy about the world's greatest hero being drained of life in an incestuous snuff rape scene. It's hard to masturbate to a story when multiple characters the audience no doubt actually likes are getting gratuitously and ignominiously murdered. Which brings me to the next point:
- Bad handling of the male cast. A lot of corruption stories seem to have trouble with male characters, since having them partake in the same antics as the female cast would be gay or something. Most just don't feature them at all. Ones dealing with established universes tend to either write them out or add a genderswap element (some of Lemonfont's work does this). This story shows a good example of what happens when you don't do that; the audience gets attached and then gets disappointed.
- Too much story focus when the story is not interesting. The intrigue here is a fucking flatline because every single battle with the Mary Sue antagonist has been a grievous rout. Look at Dinaranger; there are plenty of points in that story where you kinda believe the protagonists could make it out. If the story were just a pure fuckfest with no plot except an occasional bit of contextual narration, this wouldn't be a problem, but it's not.
- The villain fucking sucks. He's a slab of boring nothing who is uber-powerful because of reasons. All his dialogue is cliche posturing and could belong to literally any overlord-of-the-week. If he had some humor to him or some kind of clever plan, or if he was just a silent monster, that'd be one thing. As it stands, he's neither interesting enough to deserve the focus he gets nor minor enough to be merely the instrument of corruption.

Posted on 12 September 2018, 16:34 by: bearonfire

I'll laugh if Plastic Man saves the day.

Posted on 12 September 2018, 22:34 by: tjackson41

@ Acefighter159 ----- Hmmmnnn? i love your assessment, you are saying what a lot of us here are thinking, but are not actually saying it....however if i may digress a bit, i disagree with the point you made about BlackPharaoh's Artwork, his artwork is superb in my opinion, and extremely erotic beyond measure, and yes, Many of the heroines corruptions are a bit rushed...yes true, but i love corruption, and turning from good to evil with serial corruption(s) are always a turn on to fans such as i......To me? i also agree that in addition of the heroines already corrupted? the hottest corruption that has taken place so far, is a corruption that hasn't occurred yet .... (WONDER WOMAN) Her's is hot because she actually has been corrupted, but she doesn't know it yet...(so has BATMAN) So we are watching her slow transformation to the dark side occur (slowly)....but that's the key to a great corruption, slow and steady......but the hallmark of many GREAT corruption stories isn't in how many heroins get corrupted...But HOW they are turned....and to me? the HOTTEST OF ALL? are the ones who get turned slowly, & the ones who fought the strongest....then the payoff is the greatest when they finally get converted.......... This is NOT a criticism of BlackPharaoh ---- but an observation only...LOVE YOUR WORK BlackPharaoh!!! ..... from THEANTJACK

Posted on 24 September 2018, 08:47 by: Thuzadin

The villain is just the self-insert OC of the author, this is his power fantasy. Gruesome and bland is it is, we are just the audience.
But yeah, its gotten really boring and gruesome. If Batman fails to figure something out or dies, the author proves himself to be a massive ¤#%"%!

Posted on 24 September 2018, 22:14 by: BlackPharaoh

Haven't written here in a long time, but that doesn't mean I haven't been seeing these comments. This has to be the most critic forum where my work is being published (at least by me) and that's great, believe it or not many things have been rewritten because of some well valid opinions I've read here (Even if many of you think the contrary) sadly I'm not that good of a writer, which is why I like to read what people is liking and what they aren't. But at the end It will be impossible to please everyone, because everybody has an idea of where they want this story to go or how it should have been written or drawn. So at the end I have remember why I did this and it was because it's something I wanted to see. Is it my power fantasy? Well that's a ludicrous accusation. Haven't you seen around? All the content of this site is someones power fantasy. (and believe me I don't see myself as the Black Pharaoh I'm writing, we only share the name).

Is the villain a Mary Sue, bland one dimensional asshole? So far he is, and believe me when I say I've been trying to correct this since the first time it was pointed out, but a compelling villain is perhaps one of the hardest thing to write if you don't believe me just take a look at almost all superhero movies villains. This of course doesn't mean he will stay on the path he is right now. I'll do my best to make him better. more compelling. My biggest mistake was making him so OP, that he became a walking Deus ExMachina.

Will the story remain this dark and gritty? No it wont be like this the whole time but there are still some ugly stuff coming up. This is just the opening salvo of the whole story I have planned, many people have asked me how long it is. I can only tell you it's several hundred pages long, so there's still a lot to things to come. Which means that even when many of the biggest male characters have been unrightfully discarded there are a lot of lesser well know characters that will step up to the challenge.

About Batman... Well, I wont lie to you, half of you want to see him chewed and spited up to finally put to rest the Uber OP Batman. And some others want him to Mary Sue his way out of this one, so as I said before, not everyone is gonna be happy with this one, hopefully my limited writing skills will allow me to give him a satisfactory participation.

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Posted on 25 September 2018, 14:54 by: yuvrajsingh

Absolutely stellar & in-awe storylines! Thank you.
Get Batman and Wonder Woman corrupted and back.hard with creampie...lots and lots of it! ;)

Posted on 29 September 2018, 07:21 by: PoorWhiteTrash

Are you going to include Danny the Street?

"Ok, someone fuck that bollard."

Posted on 30 September 2018, 21:44 by: Leen

and with this we know they are fucked if the demons can reform then what is that world going to do. time for them to raid superman fortress get rid of any data on dimensional travel and take items that allow it and leave that world because it is SO fucked

Posted on 06 October 2018, 23:38 by: Smed2012

Only way this will end satisfactory is if someone manages to get a signal out to The Spectre.

Posted on 08 October 2018, 08:27 by: MitchellTF

Thank you for reading, BlackPharoah. That said, I feel like part of the problem is...I don't think this story really has the 'meat' for being a 'couple hundred' page story. Especially with your limited writing skills., as you've said. It's interesting as fetish porn, but it's hard to move beyond that. But, at the least, you're aware of your mistakes. Which puts you above a TON of other writers.

Posted on 15 October 2018, 11:26 by: Babydick69

Oh my god here goes another 3 months of exposition. "Let me tell you what happened to the Justice Leageu tower" 3 months later and "and thats what happened" 1 page later "let me tell you what happened to gotham" you've got to be kidding me. Story telling 101: dont TELL me what happened SHOW me. Maybe take your time with Gotham but leave out the narration from Bane and let the characters hes talking about my guess catwoman Harley Quinn joker let them interact and slow down the corruption scenes show more detail I'll forgive the quick corruption scenes with John John's exposition but I dont want another 3 months of quick corruption scenes. that narration from John John's was fucking brutal because it hurried up all the corruption scenes, the corruption scene with zatanna super girl hawk girl and especially canary were perfect! Use those as a template and take your time with corruption I want to see these girls struggle with going to the dark side, not want it then slowly want it/transform and loving the transformation that's hot. Besides that I love what I reading so far this has really given me something I never knew I wanted if I wasn't in school I'd be a patreon member for sure. Also I read the big bad corrupted guys voice in my head as general grevious voice and I dont know why also its without the coughing. Thank you from making this comic it is amazing keep it going.

Posted on 16 October 2018, 16:23 by: PoorWhiteTrash

Bane broke the bat. Just send him against the bad guy and kick back and have a beer.

Posted on 27 October 2018, 15:47 by: Kokachin

The art is solid. The writing is uneven. Sometimes pretty OK, other times not so much.

I'd have recommended ten 20 page stories over one 200 page story. Or five 20 page stories and two 50 page stories. You get the idea. If you wanted them in the same setting, they could even be connected but self-contained. Say, a couple of stories where some heroines (or villains) are corrupted, then a larger story that brings the first true clash between the combined forces of the heroes (sending them running with losses.) Finally another 50-ish page story that features round two, ending in the villain's defeat or ultimate triumph.
Writing isn't easy, but you learn by doing. Unfortunately tackling one massive project can become pretty unmanageable; mistakes snowball, and carrying a narrative gets pretty difficult.

Don't get discouraged, but maybe scale back on the size of the projects. Like I said, you learn by doing. Yet by taking on too big projects too soon, it's harder to sit back and reflect on just what that project taught you.

Posted on 11 November 2018, 05:20 by: Hopfrog

Is this dead?

Posted on 15 November 2018, 06:03 by: Dark-Seeker

Hi, your work is amazing !! I think you're missing page 107, that should be the end of chapter 5. Because it goes from 106 to 108 (beggining of chapter 6). Please check it out. Thanks !!

Posted on 15 November 2018, 06:27 by: PoorWhiteTrash

Page 110 - Is there a Terminator in Olympus? Because that would actually be pretty cool. There was a superman/Terminator crossover back in the day so it could work...

For the fall of Gotham... if the mighty Sixpack, Bueno Excellente and Dogwelder can't stand them what hope has humanity?

Heh heh heh Bueno...

Posted on 15 November 2018, 08:07 by: hermit20

@PoorWhiteTrash

Considering the design, I imagine that would be Ares. And if our bland antagonist was dumb enough to let him live. Ares could cause a good bit of hell. As he feeds on conflicts and war to which he gains his strength.

Posted on 26 November 2018, 18:15 by: Raziel20XX

I'm already bored with this... and it's a hentai comic.

Posted on 01 December 2018, 06:32 by: Mekoruu

I originally had a lot of hope for this series, with its amazing artwork and seemingly strong start. However, at this point it just feels like the artist is going through a checklist of every available female character and corrupting them, whilst wiping out male characters through laughable and honestly pointless encounters.

Dragging out this one-sided conflict and ticking off every available character in the universe is just boring, and without any stakes or much of a struggle in the storyline, there's little motivation to keep up with the plot besides the decent visuals. It also doesn't help that spelling mistakes are not corrected upon each upload, and it really pulls it down in terms of plot quality.

I don't mean to be rude, but the whole Black Pharaoh antagonist feels like an excuse to self-insert yourself into the universe, and corrupt each and every heroine ever imagined at the expense of a more engaging story that matches the aesthetic quality. Instead of giving us a captivating story that respects the roots of the universe, we are watching on the sidelines as your personal avatar effortlessly takes down every hero and heroine without consequence; it's getting tedious, if not already for most readers here.

I understand it's all just fantasy and porn, but the outstanding corruption stories out there also focus on the struggle, the fight back. Without placing any emphasis on a meaningful resistance, without giving the audience the hint of a possible comeback, what is the point in engaging with the story? The whole fetish revolves around the fact that the protagonist(s) or characters involved are teetering on a fragile scale, on the verge of being transformed into something devious, something sexual or sinister, or perhaps being saved by a final act of desperation (which can even lead to a double-back into falling harder). If everything just falls at the slightest touch without providing the reader with a taste of anticipation or rising despair behind the act, you lose on a lot of buildup and tension in the plot.

We all want our heroes and heroines to fall into delicious darkness, but it is the buildup, the tease, the foreplay and the journey towards the inevitable end that gives us gratification and enjoyment out of this genre. Whether or not the characters are actually turned (but they usually are anyway), it is the process that intrigues us the most. You wouldn't skip a 3-course meal and jump straight for dessert; you want a balance of all the elements that combine into one delicious experience.

Sorry if this is long-winded or too harsh, but I really respect your artistic talent; just what story elements we've been given so far has been disappointing.

Posted on 05 December 2018, 22:24 by: tjackson41

@Mekoruu ..... Wow!!! I Actually agree with everything you said

Posted on 06 December 2018, 18:10 by: chaotik74

Ok. 1st off I DO agree with the whole "mary sue" argument going on. that beiing said, there are some GOOD things going on here, sort of, in terms of the author's development.

1.) Babs lasted long enough to hit the button. it wasn't just insta-corruption

2.) the Flash is still out there somewhere as a wild card. do NOT underestimate the Speed force, particularly if time travel gets involved.
3.) they left Superman's dessicated body floating in orbit near a yellow sun. with a little help, it's quite possible he could come back from that.
3. ) the whole "there's no coming back" bit has been boasted, but not tested. Villians ARE known for being foolishly arrogant.
4.) remember what i said about time travel? you ALSO have mages of impressive power level, including faust..who as i recall is perfectly capable of seperating/slicing up souls (somehting the good guys don't generally do) combine that with some time travel, and you'v e got a good recipie for a Chrono Trigger event.(best video game of all time. look it up. basicly, you travel in time to just prior to the moment of death, replace the original body with a clone (with enough life/soul energy to sucker whoever is eating them) and take the still-living original back to your present. Viola! instant ressurection with no paradox.) Heck, Mxyzlplx is probably capable of doing that himself..and WOULD, since the Pharoh is breaking all his toys.

the point is, there IS potential within the present story for a turnaround, should the author desire it.

Posted on 07 December 2018, 02:27 by: Sannio

Time Travel is the worst trope. I place it right up there with Deus Ex Machina and how Superheros never stay dead. If there is a fight back arc or hero turnaround I hope none of these apply.

I remain curious and hopeful to see where this narrative goes (hope Catwoman has an interesting fall and TF) I think the biggest detractor here is simply in release. While I appreciate BP is pretty consistent in the updates - one page at a time is very frustrating. I am speaking for myself here, but I wouldn't mind waiting more than a few weeks for a multi-page release with a fully realized corruption sequence per character or a full complete backstory exposition so we get those out of the way in one go....

Posted on 10 December 2018, 06:46 by: Raziel20XX

You wanna dictate the release date, pay the man.

Where the narrative goes? I bet he kills some more heroes and corrupt/fucks some more heroines. On a scale of 1-10, how close am I?

Seeing the problem here?

Posted on 10 December 2018, 13:00 by: Stonewall Jackson

@BlackPharaoh

What the hell is going on with Barbara's glasses? One moment she has them on, then she has them off, next they are on again. Besides, wouldn't turning into a demon cure her eyesight for good?

Posted on 25 December 2018, 06:41 by: Xer0-san

Well, there's a curveball. let's see how long it lasts.

Posted on 31 December 2018, 07:51 by: KromeDome420

@Xer0-san 1 whole page

Posted on 31 December 2018, 23:08 by: hermit20

Ugly Bastard the Antagonist: "How do you even have the hopes of beating me when my power is infinity+1?"

Posted on 01 January 2019, 08:22 by: PoorWhiteTrash

Credit where it's due though, the creator has actually shown Spoiler as being more effective and useful than any of her canon portrayals.

Posted on 02 January 2019, 01:28 by: foobart

He's a fantastic artist, but he needs a writer. This is a colossal waste of talent.

Posted on 05 January 2019, 15:59 by: Neeckin

I don't want to drag on this comic again, but here we are with Ivy on the cusp of shaking things up, of adding something different. Only for that to get swept aside the page it was introduced and lead to the same transformation as always, with hyper oc gloating about how great he is.Im sorry, the art is great but after all this time the same 5 page sequence has gotten old.

Posted on 10 January 2019, 15:19 by: Thuzadin

Only Batman can save us and this comic, but something tells me the author hates Batman, and won't allow him to stand in the way of his unstoppable power fantasy. =P

Posted on 10 January 2019, 17:18 by: sionnix_

Made an account just for this.

1) Typos

There are errors every other page you upload. Here's a review of just the 5 most recent pages:

tunnel that *toke* us below the river (page 123)
the error of your *way* (page 122)
chemicals s (page 121)
what we didn't *knew* at the moment (page 120)

Considering you upload one page every 5 days, I don't think it's too much to ask that you conduct some basic proofreading to correct these glaring errors.

2) Boring plot

Every single subplot with a female character is literally the same thing over and over again, at this point I could probably recite your villain's generic dialogue myself.

Ivy fell far, far too easily. What is the point? Every female he acquires adds to his power level, you've literally written yourself into a corner where all your villain can do is curbstomp and gain exponential power increases with every succubus he adds to his stable.

This comic has great art but its overall quality is REALLY brought down by the writing.

Posted on 11 January 2019, 02:26 by: threats00

this is getting old... was only here for Wonder Woman corruption... story is becoming redundant.

Posted on 15 January 2019, 09:03 by: Gleonomis2

Artwork 9,5/10 (if not straight 10) story started strong with 9/10 but now its probably around 1,8/10 every single panel seems the same nothing exciting happens

Posted on 15 January 2019, 15:03 by: Hot544

Man...this stuff is just depressing. Oh don't get me wrong, the art is the best and so are the corruption and sex scenes but I really just don't like the "villain is so OP that nobody can stop him and the world is doomed" kinda story. But seeing as his one of those Eldritch abominations, can't help it I guess. Great comic though.

Posted on 15 January 2019, 17:06 by: PoorWhiteTrash

"Fresh meat"? There's probably a "Spoiled Meat" gag you can make with spoiler :D

...ok, ok I'm going.

Posted on 21 January 2019, 04:52 by: yuvrajsingh

Yeah,man only here for our iconic WonderWoman! And that coverpage with batman and hers! Well i like them both, so i guess that's the ending? That cover page? So many questions but so many paths the story is leading to...

Posted on 21 January 2019, 05:49 by: Xer0-san

Steph gets denied, that's a first here. I'm looking forward to seeing her starving for eldritch cock.

Posted on 25 January 2019, 17:10 by: babblingfaces

I'd love to see Batman get turned into another of the villain's succubi (yes, TGed and all that). :D

Posted on 07 February 2019, 21:38 by: foobart

He's starting to change up the transformations. That's a positive. Catwoman gets turned into an actual catwoman. Sexy.

Posted on 10 February 2019, 05:51 by: PoorWhiteTrash

Page 129 is an absolute work of art.

Edit: I mean, obviously, it's by an artist. But it looks great.

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Posted on 11 February 2019, 23:36 by: danielwain

You could make the whole thing take place on a meta plain. Let's say in the mind of a fan who is conflicted about the sexy heroines and has an internal struggle over whether to keep them pure as beacons of morality or give in to his desires of seeing them tainted. The Black Pharaoh is the embodiment of this desire and it's winning. Could also explain why the heroes don't really stand a chance, the fan doesn't want his pure image to win. It's not amazing, sure, a few people might find it cheap with the whole dream-like scenario, but I think it would work a little bit better, I believe. But maybe that's just me, I could get behind something like this, others probably not. Indeed, can't please everyone.

Posted on 01 March 2019, 15:38 by: Hopfrog

LOVE the rolled-up panties on p.132 - amazing touch.

Posted on 06 March 2019, 04:59 by: MitchellTF

Huh...finally going back to the Wonder Woman arc.

But, yeah. I have some issues with this as well, I confess. It has the same issues as the Shinra-Kun Fallen Stars story. The villains have SO many ways to convert, and it's completely impossible to resist. Furthermore, any time the heroes start to 'win', they get pulled back.

https://e-hentai.org/g/1214349/8c62fc12c8/

The only difference, is that the other takes time to set up characters, while this uses pre-existing...and, the other keeps things going longer, with more varied corruptions and design. But neither is dramatically satisfying...which just leaves the sex and TF.

Posted on 10 March 2019, 16:17 by: Rockdude12

What are the ladies in this are?

Posted on 11 March 2019, 17:30 by: PoorWhiteTrash

In the latest page - is Diana topless in panel 4 and then wearing something in panel 5? Or is it just a close fitted sheet? Not a criticism, it just wasn't clear to me!

Posted on 16 March 2019, 01:00 by: Edgy Robin

Personally think that a bitter sweet ending might work best. Most people probably exoect the Mary Sue antagonist to just steamroll everything and win. So it'd subvert expectations a bit. But it also wouldn't just be 'hahaha the hero's win'

Like, there's still some pretty op shit exists that coukd be used, ie doctor fates helmet as well as some op characters.

Posted on 16 March 2019, 08:00 by: PoorWhiteTrash

I'm still hoping Sixpack and Dogwelder somehow save the day.

Also, after my last question I see now it's another fantasy sequence and she's not kept her clothing straight in her own mind! Makes sense.

Posted on 25 March 2019, 07:36 by: TheKnightlyMinstrel

I too hope Sixpack and Dogwelder save the day.

Posted on 05 April 2019, 07:25 by: Xer0-san

Suicide Squad, looks like we're getting demon Harley.
Hopefully one more like Timm's than the fucking movie.

Posted on 06 April 2019, 01:20 by: Claudio1

Good art ...

Posted on 06 April 2019, 03:16 by: SurviveDragon

The art gets worse and worse.

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Posted on 10 April 2019, 10:58 by: keroke

i want shazam

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Posted on 15 April 2019, 15:21 by: PoorWhiteTrash

Should have re-directed the nukes at Blüdhaven. It's pretty much used to that shit by now.

Posted on 22 April 2019, 12:20 by: C5QX

求汉化，，

Posted on 22 April 2019, 15:22 by: MitchellTF

...*Sighs* It's been three months...and nothing of real interest has actually HAPPENED. (Yes, the villain is corrupting more people, but there's no real increase of tension).

And Wonder Woman's corruption is taking FAR too long. I mean, a slow burn is nice, but this isn't actually GOING anywhere. She's been standing there fantasizing about sucking cock for three months. We're just waiting for her to burst, and it makes all the OTHER heroes look worthless.

It's not so much a slow burn, as it is "Waiting for the guy bit by the zombie to turn".

FOUND IT!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1-XprjlATEo&list=PLDb22nlVXGgcljcdyDk80bBDXGyeZjZ5e&index=29

This is a GREAT video that explains the issue with the story. They wrote a "Pure evil" villain, without the charisma to make him fun...and paced a Hentai Doujin as if it's a more...standard story. It's also hurt by, even more then some hentais, the "sex all the time"...though the Gotham arc started to get decent.

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Posted on 25 April 2019, 06:11 by: Xer0-san

Page 143, is that supposed to be Diana's wild untamed bush as thick as the Amazon rainforest, or the corruption slowly spreading from her crotch?

Posted on 30 April 2019, 06:40 by: Yboss

Suddenly Psycho Pirate's mask? It's like I'm really reading DC's comics

Posted on 30 April 2019, 06:52 by: Thuzadin

Lol, he's now roleplaying Darkseid.

Posted on 30 April 2019, 18:25 by: PoorWhiteTrash

Hey, someone out there is hoping for a Grandy Goodness sex scene.

Posted on 05 May 2019, 14:03 by: fightbos

seriously stop teasing and jumping around so much with the story

Posted on 10 May 2019, 04:14 by: PoorWhiteTrash

Endless surprises here...

Posted on 10 May 2019, 08:37 by: Xer0-san

Well now it feels like shit's actually gotten real.
Can't decide if I want Death to show up here or not.

Posted on 10 May 2019, 22:57 by: fightbos

How many more characters are we dragging into this lmao

Posted on 15 May 2019, 05:07 by: werefox22

Can't believe they also brought in sandman

Posted on 16 May 2019, 06:47 by: Xer0-san

@fightbos
Any guy that seems cool and any girl that gives the author a boner, looks like.
I'm not going to be surprised until he cracks open the gates of Limbo and brings out Brother Power.

Posted on 20 May 2019, 06:33 by: MitchellTF

I dont' understand why so much focus is given to the villain gaining power...Since at no point have the heroes managed to even mildly inconvenience him.

Posted on 20 May 2019, 17:10 by: PoorWhiteTrash

...actually, that's kind of what we wanted to see happen to him in Identity Crisis.

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Posted on 21 May 2019, 01:45 by: Hopfrog

P. 129 There's no way Deathstroke would ever die that easily. Especially to a henchman.

Posted on 21 May 2019, 09:42 by: earthjade

Agreed. This is just getting dumb in terms of the power of the bad guys.

Posted on 25 May 2019, 05:50 by: PoorWhiteTrash

Whoohoo! Deadshot! Got that classic "suicidal Deadshot" vibe. That is a fun page.

Posted on 25 May 2019, 15:18 by: testiculus

With some luck those two hellbitches at least grabbed Harley before the explosion...

Posted on 26 May 2019, 04:04 by: Acefighter159

Who's the greatest hero in the DCU? Superman? Batman? No, it's Deadshot, because he just saved us ten pages or so of D-list supervillains being raped into skeletons.
The worst hero, though, is Deathstroke, whose 90% of his brain he has control over apparently didn't include the ten percent that tells you shooting Supergirl might not be an effective strategy.

Posted on 26 May 2019, 11:37 by: PoorWhiteTrash

Hey Captain Boomerang is easily C list.

Posted on 31 May 2019, 19:09 by: MitchellTF

....
Best. Fucking. Decision. In the god damn COMIC.

Posted on 05 June 2019, 20:37 by: sirpo

"Putin on screen" da

Posted on 06 June 2019, 01:43 by: MitchellTF

...Why. Why would they put it on screen. THEY KNOW WHAT IS GOING TO HAPPEN. And, oh joy...that was just used to kill off the guys, because they would get in the way of bitches getting fucked by the BLACK PHARAOH.

Posted on 15 June 2019, 08:37 by: PoorWhiteTrash

"all his glory."

I'll be honest. I expected more discarded fast food containers and mountain dew bottles.

Posted on 20 June 2019, 15:45 by: MitchellTF

So...in 155 images, which updated over the course of one image per week?

What's actually happened that the heroes were able to have anything to do with? Main cast. Not the miscellanious. Oh, and discount the original plot, so...Let's say, since the heroes arrived at the Villain HQ?

Posted on 23 June 2019, 17:23 by: cozzy121

this lack of plot progress will probably last for a few more months before the artist will give up, blaming criticism of the lack of plot progress.

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Posted on 05 July 2019, 17:13 by: JACKPIUPIU

damn………

Posted on 11 July 2019, 12:01 by: Matthew W.

You made sexy DC bitches boring. Congratulations.

Posted on 21 July 2019, 21:43 by: foobart

This stuff is my kink, it's drawn really well, and the author still managed to make me bored of it.

Posted on 25 July 2019, 07:41 by: Pyr00tje

He'll stop when there's no more DC girls to corrupt, I'm sure.

Posted on 31 July 2019, 10:11 by: holyteal

One of the laziest ass work ever done just to milk the patreons. I don't know how people can support that fraud.

Also, try to open page 4 and compare it to the latest page in term of quality, it's really night and day, he is probably drawing that comic while taking his morning dump nowadays.

Posted on 04 August 2019, 04:58 by: z415214820

就没大神翻译一下嘛- -每次看一页。都无脑机翻。看得我蛋疼啊

Posted on 08 August 2019, 15:37 by: three_iron

I get all the complaints about the plot being stagnant, boring and predictable because it is ... I don't get the praise for the artwork. It's OK, but really kinda generic. Even before transforming they all look the same, and then after transforming virtually all twins. I guess if his Patreons are happy and paying for it then whatever ... but seems like the effort has been getting shoddier and shoddier the longer it goes.

Posted on 12 August 2019, 09:29 by: TwistedGoggles

At this point its gotten so samey. I'd rather have the succubi appear on the news and drop a sick wrestling promo to those still not corrupted.

Succubus: YEAH I GOT SOMETHING TO SAY TO YOU PRUDES!

I'M GONNA GIVE YOU THE BEST DAMN HEAD YOU EVER DID SEE!

AND THIS SUNDAY- AT THE LAST KINK STANDING MATCH AT SUCCU-SLAM- I'M GONNA TAKE YOUR ENTIRE COCK!

I dunno, it'd be fun.

Posted on 12 August 2019, 16:50 by: PoorWhiteTrash

"He's gonna stick it... where?"

"Oh you didn't know? Well your ass better call somebody!"

Posted on 17 August 2019, 03:47 by: MitchellTF

...Not only the other prolbems...but, the latest 'corruption'...is so BLATENTLY rapey? I mean, he is explicitly raping her, when she is explicitly immune to his magic powers...

Yeah. It's...yeah. Especially since it's ONLY his magic powers that make them want it. It's...yikes.

Posted on 20 August 2019, 05:09 by: Morgan_Maximara

This had so much promise but very quickly went off the rails. The villain is so freaking powerful that you have to look to beings like Darkseid, the Time Trapper, Nekron and his Black Lantern Corp, and Dominius to find beings that would have any chance of winning against him. And that is assuming the World Forger doesn't figure this reality is a lost cause and chucks the whole thing into the Dark Multiverse (assuming it isn't already there) where it will eventually fall apart. That is assuming his brother, the Anti-Monitor, doesn't show up and wipe out the reality.

Posted on 20 August 2019, 15:34 by: Oddball

Right now your villain has the most generic personality possible and limitless unstoppable power.

The women get corrupted to the point where you can't even tell who they are anymore.

If you actually did something to make the badguy lose, or at least take a mast hit. We could then see what he does when things aren't going his way. Does he panic? Loose his cool? What?

Maybe having him hurt could also slightly loosen his grip on the women, letting them shake the transformation just enough to let them lok ebnough like their old selves that you can tell who is who, and we should actually see them struggle with their corruption some.

Posted on 20 August 2019, 23:20 by: Ermanarich

So, Harley got herself enslaved by a monster. I wonder what Mr. J will say about that. Afterall, he doesn't like his toys to be taken by someone else.

Posted on 24 August 2019, 15:26 by: lag85086

The demon is too strong in this story, and it seems he will get stronger.
It's off-balance.....

Posted on 28 August 2019, 14:22 by: MitchellTF

Mr. J will likely die like a bitch...as if you notice, any 'male' character? Dies like a bitch. And with some BRUTAL gorn.

*nods to Lag* There's no dramatic, or personal tension to the story.

Posted on 31 August 2019, 11:21 by: nick012000

I'll point out that the villain of this story is basically Amazo, but with more rape. And the thing about Amazo is that he also gets the *weaknesses* of the people whose powers he copies - and he's copied Superman's power, which means that he's now got a weakness to Kryptonite.

And one of the leaders of the Resistance is Lex Luthor. Who is now teamed up with Batman.

Posted on 31 August 2019, 16:01 by: PoorWhiteTrash

Major Spoilers! Nice.

Posted on 31 August 2019, 19:59 by: Hentailover696969

On 171, why is Waller bleeding in the first panel, and then the blood is missing on the immediate next panel?

Posted on 02 September 2019, 08:31 by: Yboss

Waller corruption? Do not want thx

Posted on 02 September 2019, 20:09 by: cozzy121

I can't even tell which corrupted female is which

Posted on 03 September 2019, 23:40 by: Hopfrog

Please don't have Waller get naked...

Posted on 08 September 2019, 09:03 by: tonyxxx

Can't believe there's 8 chapters already, epic work my dude.

Posted on 08 September 2019, 14:54 by: afnalk

这标签是怎么回事，总能看见这本子，标签不对头

Posted on 09 September 2019, 21:11 by: Dairo_Goodboy

The corruption is hot for the most part but the transformations are really bland for most part and a downgrade from the original design. Not only that but the villain has 0 charisma while Batman and Luthor are weirdly well written it makes me root for them to beat his ass in the end, even though I'm usually all for the bad endings.
Anyway good idea but lackluster execution.

Posted on 12 September 2019, 15:01 by: floyd7barber

this is amazing

Posted on 16 September 2019, 18:00 by: three_iron

Now the already iffy proofreading is getting as lazy as the artwork. The comment from a while back saying "bet he's drawing this on a tablet while pinching off a morning turd" is seeming more and more accurate. People pay for this? This coulda been something but too much ambition and I think greed got in the way.

Posted on 24 September 2019, 06:01 by: cody1o3

This was pretty good when it started, just gone downhill all around since then. Shame.

Posted on 28 September 2019, 00:25 by: fightbos

Everytime it's about to get good you jump to a different scene... It's a bumpy ride this comic, not in a good way.

Posted on 03 October 2019, 23:26 by: leddis4

This entire comic is let down by the fact that Bad Guy (I forget his name and I don't care enough to look it up again) is an insufferable villain sue.

Every single event in this story has been.

Superheroines: "Let's fight Bad Guy!"
Bad Guy: "HAHA NO I AM INVINCABLE."
Superheroines: "Oh no we've been raped and corrupted!"

Superheroes: "Let's fight Bad Guy!"
Bad Guy: "HAHA NO I AM GREETEST."
Superheroes: "On no we are ded."

Interestingly enough this isn't the first superhero porn story starring some idiotic and barely tolerable invincible unstoppable bad guy.
But it never ceases to be tiresome.

Posted on 04 October 2019, 03:33 by: foobart

Who the hell is paying for this?

Posted on 04 October 2019, 04:35 by: Yboss

Behold! The Batman Who Shags

Posted on 04 October 2019, 14:03 by: MitchellTF

Oh. Look. After a hundred damn pages, they FINALLY bring up the Trojan Horse thing again! Of course, since Batman was basically the closest we had to a gorram PROTAGONIST...yeah...

Shinra-kun is better at this.

Posted on 04 October 2019, 15:15 by: PoorWhiteTrash

Maybe he isn't a trojan horse! Maybe he's just one of those Sapiosexuals.

Posted on 15 October 2019, 21:11 by: BreedingGod

Still boring as all hell!!

And dude, the villain is the LITERAL DEFINITION of a Mary Sue! You pretty much handed us the guillotine for it with the story's progression.

And the heroes (both male and female) lose WAY TOO easily for this! Superman's death I can accept because magic has been confirmed to be a weakness of his! What I WON'T accept is a story that revolves a Mary(or in this case Gary) Sue fucking heroines and villainess and turning them into his own succubi harem army easy as pie and repeating it! You might as well have shown us Zatanna's fall repeatedly as if we were stuck in Doctor Strange's timepockets!

Hell even the beginning has a bit of a problem. Zatanna CLEARLY showed she had no free will of her own at all. therefore you goofed at the very beginning.

End of the day, this is a TERRIBLE story and just seems to appear ONLY as an excuse to please patrons! Individual images with no story? No problem as it's just those single individual images and you're fulfilling the patron's desires. But this...well I'll leave it to comic book guy from the Simpsons

Comic Book Guy: "WORST. STORY. EVER."

Oh, and for those of you who are even THINKING about negativing my comment, take a good look at his story and you'll see what i'm saying is the truth, the whole truth, and NOTHING but the truth.

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Posted on 20 October 2019, 11:38 by: kain11

"I guess you are right" said the stilted and very clearly non-native speaker's attempts at dialog.

Try using some colloquialisms. The writing in this reads like a google translate script.

Posted on 20 October 2019, 14:05 by: Solipsist

...What's wrong with "I guess you're right"? And asserting MTL is really over the top.

Posted on 20 October 2019, 14:48 by: superman prime lyh

Yeah, I didn't see any problem in this sentence

Posted on 20 October 2019, 19:26 by: MitchellTF

And now Enchantress is putting the two corrupted people together...oh, joy. This can't end well.

Posted on 22 October 2019, 01:14 by: fightbos

The problem is normally it would be You're, not you are. Unless you're putting emphasis on "are" you generally use you're.

Posted on 24 October 2019, 04:54 by: three_iron

That Wonder Woman face on page 185. THAT FACE

Posted on 24 October 2019, 05:31 by: MitchellTF

...So...who wants to put money down that Enchantress is corrupted?

Posted on 24 October 2019, 22:49 by: fightbos

Looks like the consistency of art quality is going down as well now...

Posted on 28 October 2019, 07:15 by: Yboss

Oh shit now Batman x Luthor?

Posted on 05 November 2019, 05:07 by: Anon_3.141

@BreedingGod And maybe some of us want that? You ever thought of that little possibility?

Posted on 05 November 2019, 17:20 by: tonyxxx

" this quack WILL screw the Titans over, metaphorically and LITERALLY."
Don't threat me with a good time.

Posted on 05 November 2019, 22:40 by: Hardlizard

@BreedingGod If you want it to stop then you’re free to leave, no one’s keeping you

Posted on 08 November 2019, 16:44 by: Anon_3.141

@BreedingGod So, you complain about terrible writing and Deus ex Machinae, but then you go and be a hypocrite, making your "ending" be a Deus ex Machina? Some people enjoy porn for the porn and fetishes, rather than the stories, you know. Could the writing be better? Yes, it could. Is the way you're going about critiquing the writing the right way to do so? No, no it is not. If you want the writing to improve, don't just say "this is bad, why would anyone like this shit". Instead, say "this isn't as good as it could be, and the things that could be improved are [aspects 1, 2, 3, 4, ...], and to improve them, the creator could consider doing [potential methods of improvement 1, 2, 3, 4, ...]".

Posted on 09 November 2019, 21:58 by: cozzy121

@BreedingGod you keep on doing what you're doing son, this shit storm should be called out as such at every opportunity

Posted on 12 November 2019, 22:53 by: Anon_3.141

@BreedingGod The Deus ex Machina, and thus hypocrisy, in your "ending", is using Guts at all. I know about Guts, and that he's basically the an alternate version of the Doom Slayer, but using him to end the events of this comic so immediately is an example of a Deus ex Machina. If the person making the comic wanted to end it, they have other ways they could go about it, without relying on "Guts the Overpowered Demon Slaying Machine of a being".

And again, since apparently you're too busy hating on the porn to have noticed this bit of my last comment: Some people enjoy porn for the porn and fetishes, rather than the stories.

Posted on 16 November 2019, 19:49 by: MitchellTF

Breeding God? I hate this comic too...but they're right. Guts would be a Deus Ex Machina, as he is an outside force with no connection to things. He is, in a very real sense, an "Act of God". (As, the originally meaning was, after all, that a Greek God would come down from the heavens and instantly resolve the plot)

It's not that Guts couldn't do it. It's that Guts coming in and resolving it is dramatically unsatisfying. I mean...it's still at least a solution.

Also...

Wait what. Faust...murdered...wait what? His PENIS taken away? WHY ARE WE ONLY LEARNING ABOUT THIS NOW? HOW IS THIS RELEVANT?

Also...is it just me, or is the comic getting almost explicitly sexist. (With the "Soririty Bitches" line.) I know Faust is the BAD GUY, but...

I mean, I like a good corruption TF as much as the next guy...but this is just BAD corruption. The corruption ultimately comes down to 'a deep dicking', every time. The story itself simply isn't interesting, either, which makes it just comea cross as BORING. I mean, we get pages and pages of exposition, which never seems to GO anywhere.

Posted on 24 November 2019, 04:42 by: BreedingGod

@MitchellTF well it wouldn't be. How? Enchantress uses a little magic who-ha to summon a demon killer to fight him. why? because magic, don't question it.

Posted on 24 November 2019, 08:04 by: MitchellTF

Breeding GOd, I feel like you aren't LISTENING to the reason people are calling it a Deus Ex Machina. It's not that it can't be justified. It's that it's dramatically unsatisfying.

Imagine, for a moment, if the 'resolution' was that "They pray, and The Presence comes down and solves everything." As he's the canonical god. It's JUSTIFIABLE...but it's an 'outside' force solving the plot. It's just as annoying as having a villain who resolves everything. You're LITERALLY using a Joe Quesada quote to resolve it. It could just as easily be resolved by Batman discovering in the book "Oh my God...he's weak against CONDOMs"...and beating Black Pharoah over the head with a condom.

I did mention the original thing, right? IN Roman, when the Gods were considered real...a play would LITERALLY be resolved. By the Gods coming down from heaven...literally on a rope, and then just waving a hand to resolve everything.

This is similar. Guts, to the DC universe, is a 'God'. He has power far beyond them. You're just fighting a Mary Sue with another Mary Sue. (THe only difference is Guts 'earned' it....'earning' your strength doesn't make you not a Mary sue.) It's like saying "Bring in One Punch Man." "Bring in Golden Requim".

Ironically? I HATE THE FUCKING COMIC TOO. "We would be death". Guy isn't even proofreading. Pisses me off, 'cause the guy has good art and good designs. I love his one-shot commissions. He just seems to have gotten lazy.

I feel like you are not, however, willing to listen to anyone's arguments, because you seem to have a hard-on for Berserk. Which is an awesome comic. But, you could just as easily say "Bring in the Doom Slayer".

*rubs forehead* I'm dealing with some RL issues, that makes me a bit more...finicky. I also confess, I take it badly if I feel someone is ignoring me.

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Posted on 27 November 2019, 00:02 by: J0J0nnes

Lex Luthor: "The has an idea of where we are, but luckily can't pinpoint our exact location."

*Literally one page later...*

Corrupted Oracle: "Master, I managed to pinpoint their exact location."

Man, what's even the fucking point anymore?

Posted on 27 November 2019, 06:03 by: BreedingGod

@J0J0nnes hate to break the news to you but this idiot ain't targeting where Luthor is...it's where the Titans are. outcome we all wish? well if the characters have any brains, then...

Titans: "Oh screw it. We know this is going to end badly for us. We QUIT." *And they leave to the phantom zone for good away from this shit*

Posted on 28 November 2019, 08:31 by: MitchellTF

Breeding god the reason I got anxious was because you seem to be misunderstanding what I meant by Gary Sue and Deus Ex Machina. And honestly? With how Blackie is written he’d use his dick to open a hole into the phantom zone.

Posted on 29 November 2019, 16:07 by: batpoop

Really bringing in some solid characters

Posted on 30 November 2019, 11:00 by: kain11

You're making money off of this. You need an editor. Maybe someone to help you storyboard. Some of your art is good. It'd probably be better if you didn't have to worry about all the other moving parts of it. English is obviously not your first language, you're making mistakes that a native speaker wouldn't make. Find someone to look it over once or twice before you send it out. It's just really bad and it takes away from your work.

Posted on 30 November 2019, 17:33 by: Kivonovik

Wally can't win in any dimension.

Posted on 01 December 2019, 09:42 by: firecloud42

I hate that writers f up a speeder...I fail to believe he would be slow enough to be beheaded

Posted on 03 December 2019, 08:37 by: BreedingGod

@Kivonovik hate to burst your bubble, but that's Bart Allen.

@Firecloud42 You said it. talk about axing people off in the most laziest way possible. and besides, if they were at the ruins of metropolis, why hadn't the Gary sue thought of looking at those spots? Why does he need people like catwoman, harley quinn and Batwoman if they won't offer anything special? If he does get Donna Troy, then wouldn't this make his quest for wonder woman pointless? And why didn't batman speak to lex about that episode he had in the medstation? Don't you think that'd be important? and if he was infected, wouldn't he-

Austin Powers: "Oh no. I've gone crosseyed."

and...i'm just gonna say it...

.....TEEN TITANS GO IS A BETTER PARODY THAN THIS!!!! Yeah! I've said it! I said it!

Posted on 04 December 2019, 03:34 by: dakkonsol

Need more death by snu snu :D~

Posted on 04 December 2019, 07:21 by: three_iron

You know this whole thing is going to end with a 4th wall breaking rant from the BLACK PHAROOOAAAHHH telling all the critics to eat shit and die or some such. LOL

Posted on 04 December 2019, 09:00 by: AMonkey

I don't care how bad this is, I can't wait for each and every new page.

Posted on 05 December 2019, 02:42 by: BreedingGod

.... @BlackPharaoh ... I'm calling BULLSHIT with your latest comic. I don't care if she's a demon, there is NO WAY IN HELL IN ANY FUCKING SHAPE OR FORM SHE CAN GET CYBORG LIKE THAT AT ALL!!!! STOP THIS RIGHT NOW, GO OVER WHAT THE FUCK YOU'RE DOING AND THEN YOU'LL SEE HOW YOU FUCKED UP FROM DAY ONE.

Well guess what, magic or not, it'll take more than Cassie wrapping her neck around Conner to do him in. When last I looked, it's MAGIC weapons and/or Kryptonite weapons or a red sun weapon (or just the red sun) to beat a Kryptonian (and before any of you say it, I'm fully aware Conner is a part kryptonian clone, that still means he has some powers, such as super strength). @BlackPharaoh, do us all a favor and a) quit writting this shit excuse of a parody or b) do some actual research and go over the plot, storyboard it, realize what won't work at all in any shape or form and quit OPing your Deus ex Machina

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Posted on 17 December 2019, 01:12 by: MitchellTF

besides the obvious...is it just me or is the GRATUITOUS Gorn just...really disturbing? I mean, even if I COULD fap to this (I can't...)

...It's really hard to fap when there's just HEADS EXPLODE EVERYWHERE!

Posted on 17 December 2019, 07:49 by: kain11

Get an editor.

Posted on 18 December 2019, 18:56 by: cwise

Personally I just treat this like I do with the Batman and Robin 97 movie - not related to comic characters and something on it's own who happen to resemble them - then it becomes more enjoyable. Worst case, just say it's part of the dark multiverse where characters make the opposite choice of what they would normally do.

Still, if this guy beats Trigon... Surely the endgame is not "bad guy beats everyone no contest"? I come to site for story dammit!

Posted on 20 December 2019, 01:48 by: llsyo

NICE WORK!

Posted on 24 December 2019, 02:35 by: chuliao

Looking forward to the end

Posted on 24 December 2019, 04:39 by: knucklesluigi

Pg 201 Okay looking at that hand on the second panel, I am now convinced that I'm not as bad of an artist as I thought I was.

Posted on 24 December 2019, 14:58 by: MitchellTF

...It's also weird hwo non-Genre Savvy they are, despite the villain's power being SO GOD DAMN BLATENT.

"Anyone who talks to him, sees him, or in any way has contact with him is infected."

Posted on 24 December 2019, 16:39 by: Ficfactor

Some robotic corruption would be a nice change of pace.

Posted on 28 December 2019, 19:31 by: MitchellTF

PIty the robo-TFs are mostly off-screeen...or mostly just 'circuitboard veins'...

Posted on 31 December 2019, 14:16 by: Yil58

The author has no clue what an outer god is. Trigon would be crushed immediately.

Posted on 04 January 2020, 04:40 by: DJjames

Let me save everyone some time. Read the first 30 pages and stop. Everything from there is just either bad fanfiction or repeats of what you already saw. Decent art, but awful writing.

Personally it's not my thing as it's so dark and depressing. I'd like to see the reverse, of like a hero fucking villains onto their side or something, that's just where i lean as I'm not into the "and the bad guy killed everyone and wins" type of stories as life sucks enough as it is that it's not my taste to get it in fiction too. Plus you don't see that too often. A hero reverse corrupting villains with a good fucking. It'd be something fresher, at the very least. , i can at least appreciate these types of stories if it's well written or has really high quality art, neither of which this really has in my opinion

The story is just one sided and dark. Every interaction starts with half the normally op characters in the DC universe just being brainwashed at it's mere presence and the rest driven insane or fucked/killed by the brainwashed ones. That's literally it. That's every interaction. Bad guy enters room, all the women become brainwashed dick holes, and kill everyone else. The end. Not my thing, and even if it was that kind of writing is boring as fuck.

Posted on 04 January 2020, 04:57 by: Oddball

This comic needs John Constantine coming in (possibly with the backing of Spectre and Phantom Stranger) and just completely fucking this guy over.

Posted on 04 January 2020, 05:01 by: Neeckin

Oh wow a shield put in place by Trigon specifically to stop the big bad. Good thing that takes a whole panel to bypass and means nothing

Posted on 04 January 2020, 07:44 by: PoorWhiteTrash

This page: "Never!"
Next page: "Ok, Now!"

Edit: Alright, alright, page after next.

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Posted on 16 January 2020, 21:21 by: cozzy121

so this is what death by a thousand cuts reads like...

Posted on 20 January 2020, 05:49 by: hermit20

It's not even interesting corruption. Starfire looks like just one of his background demon thots. What is the point? The author could have ended this shit show a long time ago, but I think he just enjoys the wank material for himself.

Posted on 20 January 2020, 06:03 by: UnderhillTH

I have never seen so much hate for a comic in all my life. DAMN.

Posted on 20 January 2020, 07:34 by: Mekoruu

@UnderhillTH I think it's because a lot of people like to browse the corruption tag, but this comic keeps reappearing as the author uploads page by page.

For real though, would appreciate it if artists would upload chapter by chapter instead. This method seems like a cheap way to promote themselves, and it becomes especially obnoxious when a fair amount of people dislike their work.

I can see it's still going on the downward spiral of self insert OC just unjustifiably wrecking through everything without consequence. Is the artist taking so long to finish it because they jerk off after completing each page?

Posted on 22 January 2020, 06:11 by: secretb0x

@Mekoruu you are kinda right, but isnt his fully fault (even i also agree that he should post by chapter), is more the fact that, for some reason the corruption tag seems lacking in new addictions, specially in doujin translations of such tag, i dont know if some site got the rigths for doujins or something like this, but i noticied a down on the this tag for few weeks, when something new (that isnt this comic) shows up is something western or sometthing not-translated

about te comic itself, i may be a low number but i kinda like this type of corruption, but i agree that story should be more quicker or at least the posting would be by chapters and not this 1 by 1 boring posting

Posted on 24 January 2020, 18:03 by: Ruffles821

Dont listen to all these haters man I have been following this comic since day one and it. Like your other stories, is one of my favs. Keep on doing what you are doing my man

Posted on 30 January 2020, 06:32 by: GaySwedes

Yes Megan do a battle of minds with the eldritch abomination who's obsessed with mind break
I'm sure it'll end well

Posted on 01 February 2020, 12:05 by: Acefighter159

Do you know that one scene in The Good Place where Ted Danson's AI helper girl is broken and he keeps asking her to give him a file, but because she's buggy, she gives him a cactus instead, and when this keeps happening he just asks her point-blank four times if the thing she's holding behind her back is the file or a cactus, she claims it's the file and definitely not a cactus, and then she hands it to him and it's a cactus?

That's the vibe I get with this comic. Every time it shows up, I check it to see if it might improve, and then it gives me a cactus.

Posted on 01 February 2020, 14:51 by: BrainPain

At this point even Darkseid would be pissed.

Posted on 12 February 2020, 10:41 by: J0J0nnes

So, because everything in this comic kinda blends together after a while, I kinda forget. Did Constantine show up yet? i feel like he could pull something out of his ass that would help stop our tentacle mustache twirling Gary Stu of a villain here.

Posted on 13 February 2020, 00:14 by: Kurisu_Makise

I honestly thought this was a pretty good comic at first, but it's definitely gone downhill. There's literally no build up to anything any more, it's all "you'll never break me" then 2 pages later they're some mind broken slut, rinse and repeat for every conceivable character ever. This isn't corruption, this is bullshit.

Posted on 16 February 2020, 17:52 by: Tyranus666

Ive enjoyed this every step of the way because, well, I enjoy an OP villain every now and then. I like how characters are broken and enslaved etc.
That being said, Im getting bored of this rather quickly. I feel like the story has just...disappeared and now we are faced with corruptions for the sake of corruption.
While I will happily fap to corruption porn all day, I am getting more and more disappointed in this work. Perhaps it might've been better to focus on this of the OTHER COMIC YOURE WORKING ON rather than try to make two comics at once? Oh well. Ill still keep reading this because its always a good fap.

Posted on 20 February 2020, 06:21 by: TheKnightlyMinstrel

Until Dogwelder defeats this bad guy it'll not be a good comic.

Posted on 20 February 2020, 19:51 by: cozzy121

Any chance we can get the "ongoning" tag changed to "never-ending"?

Posted on 01 March 2020, 00:05 by: Acefighter159

Unbeknownst to Cyborg on pages 201-202, he has just sealed his doom. The Mia Dearden Red Arrow is canonically HIV-positive, so the Black Pharaoh and his minions should drop dead of AIDS in a few years. Press F to honor her sacrifice.

Edit: Whoops, turns out that's actually Emiko Queen, who doesn't have AIDS. Clearly, we need to find Mia so she can save us all.

Posted on 16 March 2020, 07:51 by: Pyr00tje

Don't worry guys. This isn't never-ending. It'll run dry once there's no heroines left to corrupt.

Wait... What if he's waiting for Ladybug?

Yes! Ladybug and Cat Noir will show up, she'll throw up her yoyo and undo it all!

Posted on 16 March 2020, 11:05 by: greekmikef

I concluded that only Jack Norris can save the universe from this villain.

Posted on 16 March 2020, 17:17 by: PoorWhiteTrash

It needs a crossover.

Squirrel Girl could fuckin' have him.

Posted on 20 March 2020, 21:48 by: Fadoseun

welp shit....

Posted on 22 March 2020, 15:31 by: fightbos

Hey look, more characters! This story was surely lacking those!

Posted on 31 March 2020, 06:59 by: TheKnightlyMinstrel

226 Pages and Dogwelder, the Hero of the Story; has not shown up. Disappointing.

Posted on 08 April 2020, 06:05 by: Astrium

Meh. The whole thing. Meh.

Posted on 12 April 2020, 04:56 by: kieyzo

Sweet mother of azarath . this comic is still going and its been damn near a whole year since he started. dude take a tip from marvel and dc . know when to call your comic quits. i stopped reading this crap after page ten. and from the comments ive read(dear god there's lots of them)your not getting any better. theres 330 comments besides the hundreds above me that are probely saying what im saying or worse. stop now ,you have people that were once liking your work hate it. just thought id drop my 5 cents of peace here. later.

Posted on 12 April 2020, 16:52 by: PrinceJonathan

@kieyzo
This has been going on for a year? Feels like it's been longer.

Look on the bright side though, at least we didn't have to pay for it. Yay Piracy!

Posted on 13 April 2020, 06:26 by: kieyzo

@PrinceJonathan your right and i rechecked and the first comment on this comic was posted back in 2017. so no its not one year. its 4 long boring yrs that this "comic" and i use the term loosely has been going on. this abomination has more pages than the average comic book and is the twice as long.

Posted on 14 April 2020, 16:09 by: PoorWhiteTrash

The complaints about this going on forever have been going on forever. I'm sticking in out of a) morbid curiosity and b) the hope that Dogwelder does show up and weld some dogs to people and maybe Sixpack smashes a bottle in someone's face, but what's bringing back the folks that don't like it? Not having a dig, just curious!

Posted on 16 April 2020, 05:35 by: three_iron

The porn parodies from Axel Braun are more faithful to comics canon than this guy is.

Posted on 16 April 2020, 06:52 by: Thuzadin

So many pages dedicated to have Raven struggle, only for having nothing for he transformation. One page she's about to get started, next she's 80 % complete.
Also, those are the dumbest horns I have ever seen on a demon.

Posted on 16 April 2020, 11:08 by: fightbos

27 pages if "breaking" raven, she ends up not breaking but giving herself up for no reason at all, then she gets transformed in one page. What the actual fuck?

Posted on 16 April 2020, 16:40 by: Oddball

The author has stated he has a "well charted plot" for the series.

I'm just sitting here thinking "There's a plot?"

Posted on 16 April 2020, 19:54 by: tonyxxx

@fightbos "giving herself up for no reason at all" Yeah, no reason at all, except her own father bailing on her.

Posted on 19 April 2020, 12:56 by: fightbos

@tonyxxx uhmm when has her father EVER done anything positive for her? Why would she suddenly give a shit? She has been avoiding him all her life, doing everything she can to not be associated with him. It makes no sense.

Posted on 20 April 2020, 05:03 by: BreedingGod

Well guess what? Judging from the previews, it looks to me Constantine's screwed and will literally be a meal to Zatanna in the same way Supergirl axed off Superman

@unlikelypanda negative my comments all you want. It's not gonna change the fact this idiot has no idea what he's doing.

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Posted on 21 April 2020, 00:50 by: Acefighter159

@PoorWhiteTrash Sadly, the second Dogwelder perished in Sixpack and Dogwelder: Hard-Travelin' Heroz #6, sacrificing his life to weld the Dog Star back together. He was too good for this world.

Then again, the sheer brokenness of the continuity here means he's probably okay. But either way, it has already been established that Mia Dearden is the entity we need to save the world.

Posted on 22 April 2020, 02:10 by: foobart

I'm perfectly serious: I think this comic has literally cured me of my transformation kink. I'm bored of the entire concept, now.

Posted on 24 April 2020, 07:25 by: anotherSkyrimer

It's YOU! AL DU IN, I know you, but why did you become a woman?

Posted on 28 April 2020, 14:52 by: PoorWhiteTrash

"Mercy! It's rude to talk with your mouth full!"

Posted on 28 April 2020, 20:48 by: unlikelypanda

@BreedingGod I'm pretty sure you're a troll, so I shouldn't feed you, but you seem to really want my attention. So, here's why I negative your comments.

With every page that's uploaded, you make a comment to say how bad this comic is and how the author should do something. What do you hope to get from this? You hope the author will abandon the comic and have the gallery deleted? You hope he'll rewrite and redraw the whole thing, maybe invite you to rewrite it for him without breaking DCU rules? What will satisfy you? If this gallery disappears, will you celebrate on how you commented him into submission and he learned his place? Other than stroking your own ego for pointing out "someone is WRONG on the internet!!", this accomplishes nothing. Pages still get uploaded, people still flock to see them - whether because they like it, out of habit, curiosity or boredom, maybe to see how big of a trainwreck it can be, I don't know. But you change nothing. At most you've become part of the bizarre entertainment this gallery has turned into.

So I'm voting you down for the same reason you're whining after each and every page that's posted. What do I get from this? Nothing. At most, if more people do it, your comments may be buried under the viewing threshold, no one will read them, you'll get bored and move on with your life, and if I at all remember this was happening, I'll take a second to mentally celebrate that "we downvoted him into submission". It's out of boredom, routine and curiosity. Other than that, nothing, it's completely futile. It's the same you're doing.

tl;dr: You whine, I downvote, pages get uploaded just the same, everybody shrugs, you whine more, rinse, repeat, life goes on.

Posted on 29 April 2020, 05:54 by: Greenson

celebration for 233 page
xd

Posted on 30 April 2020, 06:47 by: TheKnightlyMinstrel

Here's to hoping Six Pack and Dog Welder 1 and Dog Welder 2, along with the Dog Star save the day in the next chapter!

Posted on 30 April 2020, 07:21 by: MarXeechi

Oh no a porn comic on a porn site isn't a great piece of literature. You don't say

Posted on 04 May 2020, 05:19 by: Technomagus

Five whole pages? That's a generous lifespan for a Male character here.

Posted on 04 May 2020, 08:14 by: Hahahacker

Oh god Johns stepping in, everyone’s fucked.

Posted on 04 May 2020, 10:17 by: earthjade

So as of pg.234, the big bad now has the head of a ripe turd. At this point just throw Earth into the Phantom Zone and end the story.

Posted on 06 May 2020, 03:51 by: BreedingGod

@earthjade Or better yet, just have Zatanna wake up and realize it was a vision and nuke the house easy 1-2-3, but NO, the idiot who actually thought this was a good idea will keep going. Mark my words

Posted on 08 May 2020, 08:03 by: Yboss

Constantine and the MAIN MAN? Finally some good characters

Posted on 12 May 2020, 10:28 by: master6377

I love this series so much, great story and amazing artwork which is why its a shame the art dosent focus on the girls transformations much, i would have loved to see each part of them as they are corrupted.

Posted on 15 May 2020, 15:24 by: bananers

Is this clown still crying (on a site like this even) this much about a comic he can totally ignore? Maybe go get some help for your stockholm syndrome, kid. Because it isn't healthy to be this addicted to something you clearly dislike so much.
And there's a lot of irony in you calling someone else a dumbass, but everyone knows you don't have the braincells to understand that simple fact. You don't even get the fact that you keep bringing attention to it, which is literally the only thing that matters.

Posted on 16 May 2020, 07:13 by: pepancho

Black lanterns now?

Posted on 16 May 2020, 17:46 by: Hot544

Lol. Darkseid is part of an alliance. Just send him to earth and watch how shit gets done.😂

Posted on 18 May 2020, 03:26 by: bananers

You can't cry "pot, kettle" when I'm not even crying about the comic and when that was my first comment on this. But it's no surprise that you don't get something that simple considering you're so insecure that you started crying like a little baby about downvotes like they actually matter. You're an insecure fucktard who has no idea what he's doing. Just take a good long look and know I'm speaking the truth, the whole truth, and NOTHING but the truth, prove me wrong. It also says a lot about you when you can't even come up with an actual argument to defend your bullshit with, but that's way too much for your 5 brain cells to handle.
And thanks for being stupid enough to literally prove my point. Did you get help for your addiction to this comic yet? Do use those 5 brain cells for once in your life, and don't respond in half a day again. That's just flat out pathetic, but it's clear that that word describes you perfectly.

Posted on 18 May 2020, 23:42 by: bananers

Timezones don't change anything about you checking this every single day, so no reason to bring up irrelevant excuses. Or are you so handicapped that you forgot that you literally made 2 comments in less than 24 hours? Literally addicted to a comic you hate, and once again proving that you're so stupid that you don't even get that.
And you aren't tearing anything a new one at all, the fact that you think you're doing that when literally nothing is changing is just flat out pathetic, but like I said, pathetic is a word that describes you perfectly.
Also couldn't even prove me wrong at all, if anything you did the opposite, so thanks for for admitting that you're a hater who can't handle being an insecure fucktard and that that truth hurts him. But that's what happens when you're such a mentally handicapped hypocrite that you think that your opinion is fact when you can't even back it up.

Posted on 20 May 2020, 05:33 by: three_iron

Well, the arguing in the comments may be more entertaining than the comic itself. Also, does anyone want to make a side bet that Breeding and Naners are the same guy? A similar level of vitriol, a similar style of hyperbolic statement. At the time when others have sorta stopped bothering to argue with BG, up comes a BlackPharooooooah white knight to fan the flames anew. I know, silly right, it's just a shitty porn comic to bilk patreon peeps.

Posted on 21 May 2020, 15:03 by: PoorWhiteTrash

Not having a soul doesn't seem to have slowed Ann Coulter down.

Posted on 22 May 2020, 08:28 by: SPDspd•

黑灯门把手？

Posted on 24 May 2020, 10:22 by: duanzensai

I'm not be able to read Constantine line without hearing Matt Ryan's voice.

Posted on 24 May 2020, 17:01 by: Capi duffman

The moment Constantine and Lobo die I'm out, I had enough of this villain sue, and either the villain sue wins, or somehow bats and Wonder woman will prevail in a corrupted way, there is no suspense anymore.

Posted on 27 May 2020, 06:44 by: sope9

ignore the comments, read the masterpiece

Posted on 28 May 2020, 18:54 by: zigmut

Another Deus Ex Machina to save the vilain ?
(i hope not, but I'm afraid that's what's going to happen.)

Posted on 02 June 2020, 09:31 by: fightbos

So is the comic ending now? Constantine rekt him it seems. Unless he is now immune to magic as well?

Posted on 02 June 2020, 23:45 by: BreedingGod

@fightbos I wish. No, as I said countless times, Zatanna will play Constantine for a fool and do him in almost the same way Supergirl did Superman in and this will go on and on and on and on...

Posted on 04 June 2020, 15:00 by: PoorWhiteTrash

I know it ain't gonna work an' all, but this whole sequence Constantine has been totally badass.

Posted on 04 June 2020, 17:25 by: lag85086

Maybe he will die and batman will be a new boss

Posted on 04 June 2020, 18:53 by: apopp

@PoorWhiteTrash I don't see a significant difference between how the MC and Constantine are portrayed. All Constantine has done is show up with overwhelming strength and attack the MC without difficulty or conflict, and if its like all the other diversions the story has taken its likely going to end immediately.

Posted on 05 June 2020, 01:26 by: fightbos

Breedinggod can you stop talking out of your arse ty, you don't like the comic then don't come here. Simple as that.

Posted on 06 June 2020, 19:30 by: ThePokeManik

WOO fkin do it Constantine fk him up!

Posted on 08 June 2020, 05:03 by: hermit20

Time for Constantine to die like a cuck because the author sucks at story telling.

Posted on 08 June 2020, 06:06 by: chaotik74

To be fair, at least Constantine did SOMETHING before being vanquished.

Posted on 08 June 2020, 09:45 by: shaidar0

@BreedingGod looks like you called it.

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Posted on 08 June 2020, 11:07 by: fightbos

"look at me john constantine and despair" and why exactly would constantine do that? He's busy killing the bad guy. Go away woman.

Posted on 08 June 2020, 11:16 by: earthjade

If John dies, WE RIOT.

Posted on 08 June 2020, 16:10 by: hatepie

Annnnnd the first serious threat to mary-sue will be discarded within 5 pages.

Posted on 10 June 2020, 15:33 by: mohammadodst123

Power Rangers crossovers

Nyarlathotep the Clawing Chaos
He are complete monster

Posted on 10 June 2020, 21:35 by: BreedingGod

@fightbos it's like I said, BlackPharaoh has no fucking idea what he's doing and i'm not trolling anyone. I'm doing my job and tearing this a new one.

@hatepie Try page and a half

@shaidar0 damn straight I did.

And for the people who want Constantine to end this, I'll wrap it up:

Constantine ignores the demon and frees all the souls and after he and the restored Zatanna kill the demon's ass, they restore EVERYTHING to what it was and made absolutely sure that nothing like this EVER happens again. The End.

Posted on 12 June 2020, 07:24 by: james088

Nope.....the story is broken...no way constantine, who is an expert in the area of demons will fall for a crappy trick like that

Posted on 12 June 2020, 09:42 by: mohammadodst123

Oh No
😱😭😢😥😰😨😧😦

Posted on 12 June 2020, 11:43 by: Nostramo

Damn it Constantine, ya fuckin simp

Posted on 12 June 2020, 13:30 by: Hahahacker

And of course he goes out like a bitch, F.

Posted on 12 June 2020, 15:02 by: PoorWhiteTrash

Shoulda copied Mad Hettie and hidden his heart somewhere.

Posted on 12 June 2020, 15:49 by: Redphantom41

Yeah im calling bullshit on constantine not finishing the spell he would've saw right through that

Posted on 12 June 2020, 17:07 by: cerbererp

I laughed. Constantine is like : "I'm goin' to kill ya, you ******* ! Oh, wait : there's my girl. Don't move, I'll be back in a sec'".

Posted on 12 June 2020, 20:56 by: Jason_6787

Yup, and there he goes lads. The Mary-Sue hero who was winning for Mary-Sue reasons, has been killed. It just keeps fucking going doesn't it

Posted on 12 June 2020, 21:10 by: egamer557

Constantine litterally knows she has no soul right now WTF WAS THAT BULLSHIT

Posted on 12 June 2020, 23:23 by: BreedingGod

See? I TOLD you morons this would happen!

@BlackPharaoh, you're an idiot. Constantine would NEVER be THAT stupid

Posted on 14 June 2020, 10:48 by: pxdexuezu

that is not what constantine will do

Posted on 15 June 2020, 06:55 by: computermastermind1

Just watched Justice League Dark and hate how easily Constantine went down. Keep giving us that cactus, BP.

Posted on 15 June 2020, 17:35 by: poz

I just knew Constantine would die like a retard.

Posted on 16 June 2020, 04:25 by: melekain

you know
at this point, i wish it just ended with constantine actuality killing the main dude

this.. this is dragging out for too long and you just can't really enjoy anything because it legit all comes down to the same plot, just with different characters.

Posted on 16 June 2020, 06:03 by: MasterJaba

I can't tell if I hate this or Dragon Ball Multiverse more at the moment. There's no reason there should be 245 pages of this shit. Have the overpowered fucking OC just win and end it.

Posted on 16 June 2020, 12:27 by: fightbos

Jokes on her, constantine can use magic to survive without a heart, he is going to fuck her up then finish the job.

Posted on 16 June 2020, 14:56 by: Yboss

Don't worry, John gots this

Posted on 16 June 2020, 15:28 by: sirpo

"I was going to save you" Then why the fuck did you stop?

Posted on 16 June 2020, 16:08 by: PoorWhiteTrash

"Hey, John, remember when you got my Dad burned to death?"

Posted on 16 June 2020, 22:58 by: Magic Rainbow

I like bad ends, but can you please end this

Posted on 17 June 2020, 00:25 by: Kurisu_Makise

Lol I don't even know why I keep coming back here. This shit clogs up the corruption category when it should be under retardation.

Yes, I'll just stop killing the boss because this demon chick who I literally know is being controlled right now has shown up. Is there a way to block this comic from showing up in my searches? It's clearly not going to end any time soon.

Posted on 17 June 2020, 09:19 by: Colonel Commissar

Look how this guy massacred my boi John.

Posted on 18 June 2020, 10:52 by: MarXeechi

Don't mind me I just come here for the comments.

Posted on 20 June 2020, 06:02 by: EscapedDreamerD

Regardless of the meaning comments that dislike this comic wholeheartedly enjoy it.

Posted on 20 June 2020, 17:55 by: lag85086

Looks like all male heroes will die and female heroines will become demons as its servant.
Bad end

Posted on 22 June 2020, 00:01 by: Hopfrog

Man, this just keeps going, doesn't it? And the longer it goes, the worse it gets - both the art and story.

Posted on 22 June 2020, 00:10 by: Hahahacker

Well this has grown far too boring, too much focus on the predictable uninteresting plot, I’m done.

Posted on 24 June 2020, 13:08 by: mohammadodst123

Dark Multiverse

Posted on 24 June 2020, 15:56 by: lag85086

Finally, batman is back

Posted on 25 June 2020, 01:20 by: tammygirlz

Delicious empty treats

Posted on 28 June 2020, 14:55 by: fightbos

So if it's not batman... who is it?

Posted on 29 June 2020, 18:30 by: Rivers544

Don't know why he still continues this. His "Inner joke" comic is much more interesting and something you can actually fap to.

Posted on 04 July 2020, 05:09 by: Oddball

Now if the writer wasn't a total failure and actually cared about characters other than his big Mary Sue villain, we'd learn that dying was all part of John's plan. A plan that somehow involves either Satan and the armies of hell or Death and the rest of the Endless.

Maybe both.

Posted on 08 July 2020, 18:20 by: MitchellTF

We don't hate it because it updates. I like plenty of stories that updates. We hate it because it has consistent slow, and BAD updates. Heck, despite not liking Marmalade Mum...I enjoy Feline Fascination. I enjoy the Succubus Nun story. I enjoy plenty of art-sets, manga, and that Wild Girls thing.

The issue is it's taken what seems like a year, maybe two, for the story to actually PROGRESS.

Posted on 09 July 2020, 07:14 by: yuvrajsingh

Love me some Diana and Bruce. Thank you wish you make a solo colored comics of them in future.

Posted on 12 July 2020, 11:54 by: duanzensai

Lucky Batman

Posted on 16 July 2020, 07:15 by: 402629210iuni

有没有大佬翻译下

Posted on 24 July 2020, 15:16 by: PoorWhiteTrash

"This belongs to me now. So I'm going to destroy it." ~Donald's victory speech, Nov 2016

Posted on 24 July 2020, 17:43 by: mohammadodst123

What if Nyarlathotep in my hero academia & Inuyasha

Posted on 28 July 2020, 12:35 by: Kurisu_Makise

"This belongs to me now. So I'm going to destroy it." - Author writing this comic instead of giving it an end

Posted on 02 August 2020, 06:01 by: a853654343

我们正义联盟真是太厉害啦

Posted on 07 August 2020, 01:27 by: Maryu

I will Wait for More my friends. Thanks.

Posted on 08 August 2020, 22:09 by: babblingfaces

For what it's worth, I'm curious about where this Bruce transformation's going. Here's hoping some TG's involved. :D

Posted on 12 August 2020, 09:12 by: 1176937081a

伏拉夫入侵e站啦，👴🏻🌿了

Posted on 16 August 2020, 07:20 by: TheKnightlyMinstrel

It has been 17 pages since I have seen a lack of Dogwelder, Sixpack, and Beuno Excellente. 17 more pages of our truest and most powerful heroes not saving the day, I am disappointed. But I keep looking on in the hope- no, the dream that one day Dogwelder shall weld a dog to the demon's corrupting cock and prevent it from doing the deed- while Sixpack and Beuno Excellente insure that it's evil influence is dulled by Beer and awful Mexican Sterotypes...

Posted on 16 August 2020, 17:45 by: MitchellTF

The problem is, in a very real sense...Black Pharaoh doesn't know how to PACE a plot...like...

Pretty much EVERYTHING from when batman arrived, to the current Wonder Woman corruption arc? Is meaningless. And the Cyborg scene gave the game away.

Batman is secretly a demon. Probably a Trojan Horse Avatar of Black PHaraoh. Oh joy.

...Lemonfont handled this trope in LITERALLY ONE PAGE.

Posted on 20 August 2020, 06:19 by: three_iron

... ANOBODY? ANOBODY! :: dies ::

Posted on 20 August 2020, 07:22 by: nalak1

Hmm wondering from comments and such. I feel like this would have worked better as like a demon plague. So instead of the OP demon god thing cherry picking lovecraft references and such at points because its cool you just have the thing get out. You still have heroines and villains going against heroes and getting corrupted and what have you, but at least some of the slower and duller elements can be ditched that way.

Posted on 21 August 2020, 03:39 by: BreedingGod

Okay, for those of you who keep disliking my comments even though they're 100% true and said people CLEARLY never bothered to actually look at the problems this shit has, well this clip sums it up for you guys: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=z_TWPFQG93k

"If your pal Aquaman is still alive..." we all know what that's code for: he's gonna be a gonner.

@BlackPharaoh seriously, how stupid are you? You've spent WAY too much time showing us the same damned thing! Just end this comic right now! Honestly, if there was a guild for parody writers, you'd be permanently banned from it.

Here we go again with this dumbass refusing to check his grammar and/or spelling. It's "Arkham" you moron! And why target other prisons when you clearly wanted Gotham? @BlackPharaoh your story telling is about as successful as building a skyscraper out of wet toilet paper!

New page, new asspull. You wanna fill me in on when the fuck Batman told Lex about his condition?

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Posted on 31 August 2020, 14:52 by: lw123789

@BreedingGod... Dude... we need to talk... You have a problem. Seriously, why does it matter so much to you ?

Posted on 31 August 2020, 18:01 by: doteiji

Okay, I have been reading this comic since probably 2 years already, and never commented on it, but i think its time to go down the rabbit hole. I honestly don't know why i keep coming back. I guess i just like to see the world burn.

I liked the art, and the concept of Mr God Stu didn't bother me that much, i guess my major gripe with the comic was always the corrupted designs for the heroines, since many lost their uniqueness so to speak. Which leads me to wonder what is the point on bringing sooo many characters and basically do nothing or sometimes even damaging them.

I get that DC has a massive amount of characters to use, but that doesn't mean you should use them. But if you do, at least try to be creative and maybe try a change of pace in the history, because as many people have already said, this feels like a re-run every 10-20 pages, and maybe that's being generous. But it didn't have to be this way. There was a lot of potential for interesting stories.

For example, when Constantine was about to banish Mr. God Stu, instead of making him an incompetent idiot, you could have make him complete his spell. Then since Mr. God Stu is too powerful, he doesn't die, but he and Constantine are trapped in another plane fighting, John trying to kill or keep Stu away, and meanwhile that gives time to develop a plan and defenses for the heroes, we can explore how the corrupted heroines work without their master, and that would not only refresh the story, but could also contribute to make the inevitable fall of Wonder Woman more climatic and intriguing.

Because as things are going, i can't honestly care about anyone, neither on the good or the bad side. I'll probably keep reading, because it takes a minute, but this comic has lost all the potential it could have, even if for some people was nothing.

Posted on 03 September 2020, 11:14 by: Hot544

Guess all the Amazon's are gonna be turned now.

Posted on 04 September 2020, 15:15 by: urbanvoid

Compare Donnas face in the last panel to the faces of Zatana and Mary in the first few panels, it's amazing how far their art has degraded.

Posted on 04 September 2020, 16:05 by: fightbos

@urbanvoid that's something that always seems to happen with longer comics like this, I guess it's artists getting bored/lazy

Posted on 06 September 2020, 10:44 by: fightbos

@BreedingGod you're just being silly now. Get that sand out of your vagina.

Posted on 08 September 2020, 06:06 by: TheKnightlyMinstrel

Ladies, ladies, you're both mediocre- let's focus on the real enemy here. The lack of Six Pack and Dogwelder...

Posted on 08 September 2020, 13:12 by: kaalsu

To think that the whole premise of this thing rides on Mary, someone empowered by Shazam, screaming “Zee behind you” in fright instead of using super speed to punch the shit out of The bad guy is kind of funny.

Posted on 08 September 2020, 14:56 by: PoorWhiteTrash

I wonder if we keep asking if Six Pack and Dogwelder will get a chapter. Gotta love those dudes. Or maybe the bad guy'll suddenly pull a mask off and it's really Bueno...

Posted on 08 September 2020, 16:16 by: cozzy121

Got to say, by this stage, the comments section is more entertaining than the comic

Posted on 09 September 2020, 06:17 by: urbanvoid

This is the most extreme case of online Karen syndrome i have ever seen. Imagine trying to call the manager on a porn comic LMAO.

Posted on 09 September 2020, 22:26 by: Vigil07

I'm reading a PORN comic--for FREE--about super heroes being corrupted by an H.-P.-Lovecraft villian knock off. I see no reason to complain.

That being said, with Power Girl now in (with her being popularly regarded as the most well endowed of all the DC heroes) I will be slightly disappointed if her corruption does not involve a little breast expansion... Just saying.

Posted on 09 September 2020, 23:57 by: tammygirlz

@Vigil07 Watch her be the only one who doesn't get corrupted. lol

Posted on 11 September 2020, 16:17 by: urbanvoid

Bro just stop reading it, you are acting really unhinged right now. The plot is silly and mostly a ploy to keep the fucking going but there are plenty of worse comics out there. To bad the art is so bad now.

Posted on 11 September 2020, 18:00 by: Ficfactor

You want people to boycott a free comic?

Posted on 12 September 2020, 07:37 by: lag85086

how did he know that?

Posted on 12 September 2020, 11:40 by: PoorWhiteTrash

If only the JSA used ReCaptcha they'd have caught her straight away.

Posted on 14 September 2020, 15:11 by: fightbos

Wait.. Power Girl? Is this a different universe? I thought supergirl was in this universe?

Posted on 15 September 2020, 15:29 by: fightbos

@BreedingGod she already returned to earth2 5 years ago in earth 2: world's end mate... She should be on Telos, or new-earth 2 . Unless this comic is somehow between the two events or in another universe entirely.

Posted on 16 September 2020, 05:47 by: Emphasis

@breedinggod, actually as of December 2019 with the release of the final Doomsday Clock written by Johns--and spoiler, spoiler, spoilers--the pre New52 Powergirl, JSA and Legion were all reintroduce in the climax to fight alongside Superman.

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Posted on 16 September 2020, 06:11 by: TheKnightlyMinstrel

@Emphasis You are sadly mistaken, I am here... to complain about the lack of Six Pack and Dogwelder; along with PoorWhiteTrash asking for it. Maybe one day we can see our heroes destroy this foul villain with the use of Beer, Unsafe Welding Methods, and of course Friendship.

Posted on 18 September 2020, 05:34 by: Gold-kin

Just to let everyone know BP has confirmed 31 chapters to this story on his discord. So if you hate this you might want to stop reading it now cause it ain't going anywhere soon.

Posted on 19 September 2020, 02:22 by: Gold-kin

@BreedingGod how is it going to get canned, he doesn't work for DC. He is free to do this for the next 10 years if he wants to. Also chapter 31 isn't the last chapter, someone asked when the female furies would appear and he said in this chapter. So he probably still has more chapters after this.

Posted on 20 September 2020, 06:18 by: MitchellTF

...The Frak can it keep 31 chapters? I mean, I'm genuinely confused...because there's no dramatic tension. It's 11 chapters in, the heroes have basically not moved from base, there's only sparing hints of BP having any weaknesses whatsoever, he's capable of making perfect, undetectable trojan horses...

So...why should we care?

Posted on 20 September 2020, 22:16 by: fightbos

Vagina door followed by poorly drawn main villain, I actually LOLed there.

Posted on 28 September 2020, 07:50 by: Marcath

The comments section is kinda hilarious. It is just corruption porn! Stop trying to make this a story.

Posted on 28 September 2020, 17:45 by: Leen

it would be if the author and i use that term loosely wasn't making it a story

Posted on 28 September 2020, 22:30 by: Salminar

@Marcath > You are just such a smart ass. So if there shouldn't be any story, tell me why the author bother explaining the origin of the evil and continue to try building a lore around? Yes your comment is the most hilarious of all cause it really looks like the kind of story you are actually used to.

Posted on 29 September 2020, 18:35 by: urbanvoid

Is there really a Japanese superhero called Judo Master in the DC universe? LMAO that's even worse than anything BP can come up with.

Posted on 30 September 2020, 08:56 by: Marcath

@Salminar I am just being realistic. It is a story about power fantasy and turning superheroines into sexy monsters. The evil is going to win, the heroes are getting stomped.

Posted on 04 October 2020, 03:57 by: Salminar

The issue is not that the villain will win, it's how stupid all the story is turning. It's like the last season of GoT where absolutely nothing have sense. Why make Constantine come around, almost kill the villain that is supposedly invulnerable, and have him die just like an idiot like this? Nothing related to the story here but only wanting to smear other's work at this point. I'm fine with heroine corruption but then he should stick to it if it's his only skill, but that's not what he does.

Posted on 04 October 2020, 04:21 by: BreedingGod

@Salminar It's not just that. It's also how LAZY this is and how the author (and I'm really testing the term) treats the readers as if they have an IQ of -100 and always spells out what will happen. Hell, even viewers of Dora the Explorer can tell where this is going and what will happen to every hero/heroine!

Oh and Jesse's not turned yet. How do I know? Well there's no crouch tattoo. OOPS

Posted on 04 October 2020, 06:05 by: MasterJaba

You didn't make an interesting villain, you made everyone else around him into idiots.

Fucking terrible.

Posted on 04 October 2020, 23:03 by: Gold-kin

@BreedingGod actually he has finished the Inner Joke, this series he has said he knows how it all ends but hasn't finished the details in getting there. He said yesterday that he just rewrote nearly all of ch 16 and told everyone what characters will be in there. And he has a lot of people on his discord telling him how much they like this series, so he ain't scamming anyone.

I agree the story is pretty dumb and inconsistent but given this is a porn comic, I was never expecting this to have writing on the same level as Alan Moore or Grant Morrsion. Hell I would say it isn't that far away from Chuck Austin's level.

Posted on 05 October 2020, 08:41 by: Dnight1138

The Inner joke is better than this story but sadly shorter :/

Posted on 05 October 2020, 17:11 by: PoorWhiteTrash

@Gold-kin "Hell I would say it isn't that far away from Chuck Austin's level."

Jesus Christ, nothing's that bad.

Posted on 06 October 2020, 06:31 by: Gold-kin

@BreedingGod While I agree with you this story is not that good I'm not going to start a flame war over a free porn comic. Feel free to join his discord and tell him yourself. The link to his discord is in the Inner Joke thread or you can go to his website and get it. I come here just to give info from his discord people here might want to know about. It may make you even more anger to know that he says he has planned sequels to this story. So he ain't stopping anytime soon.

It's actually ironic too, someone just ask him that is he going to give the heroes he hasn't corrupt or killed a chance to which he answered yes because without real conflict this will turn pretty boring. Chapter 16 looks like it might be a action pack chapter given who is in it. So we will see.

Posted on 07 October 2020, 02:17 by: MaximRed

@BreedingGod while yes, the story is lacking, and your points hold merit, I'm just curious, why the rage boner? You post every update and you pretty much the same thing. I'm just wondering what's driving you to be this mad about it all the time? what happened?

Posted on 08 October 2020, 19:34 by: lw123789

@BreedingGod. Dude, stop it, you clearly have a problem. There is a clear difference between simply disliking something and what you are doing. What you are doing is borderline crazyness at this point

Posted on 08 October 2020, 20:37 by: unlikelypanda

I have a theory that BreedingGod is actually BlackPharaoh's alter-ego. The author is fully aware of the flaws in his work, and instead of fixing them (assuming it's not on purpose, even), he comes to this board as BG to point them out, a subtle affirmation that he's not that bad, he knows what's wrong, he just chose to do it that way.

Think about it. BreedingGod comes here every single page to say how much the story sucks and nitpick on minute DC universe details that don't mean squat to most of the public ("Oh no, there are two Kryptonians, there goes my boner"). His zeal and insistence border on mania. He claims to do it "for us", so we don't waste our time having our intelligence disrespected, while he himself disrespects us and wastes his time defending a point nobody cares about - anyone who's dissatisfied with the comic either stopped or will stop reading regardless of his comments. When we point this out he lashes out with empty threats like "if I were you I'd shut your trap" to further fuel the pointless debate and generate even more comments. No sane hater has that much stamina and drive. It's either a very mentally disturbed individual, or a brilliant troll by the author, and I am confident it's the author.

So, my sincere kudos to BreedingPharaoh. You're turning a bad comic into a multimedia interactive experience by having us be entertained both by it and by the comments section. I hope to see this all in print someday - each page with accompanying comments below it, negative score and all. Keep it up, you're doing great.

Posted on 09 October 2020, 02:02 by: Salminar

The fact is, he missed the mark with Constantine and now he is going to give heroes a chance? That's ridiculous. He don't want to give heroes a chance and he never planned to.

On a very different level, he makes me think to George Lucas that was claiming all the details of the 3 trilogy of StarWars were already clear in his head when he released Episode 4 ... Now they are all released and we know it was plain lies and he was never able to do better than his first movies.
Here it's exactly the same, the first few chapters were slow but really fun, like the Inner Joke is actually fun. It wasn't trying to be epic, it was simply making decent porn comics with corruption and cute characters. (Even if i don't enjoy the ugly mouth they all end having but, it's matter of taste here.)

But as chapters went on he became incredibly pretentious trying to set a background for his "avatar" to redraw DC's world with his rule and make an "epic" story where he defeats everyone and that's exactly what goes wrong. That's not a story at all it's a big ego trip and nothing can go well from now on. As i said if he wanted to put some resistance and prevent the story from becoming boring he had the perfect opportunity a few times, and Constantine was really like that, but then he slaps your face telling you "Ahahaha heroes in this comics are too dumb to kill me even if they could" acting that nothing interesting will ever happen, because it's not meant to be.

Even the corruption is becoming incredibly boring, turning the slow few cute dishes from the start into a fat industrial fast food. I was waiting for the update at first, now i only watch once every now and there telling me "Ok let's check if something interesting happened" and after 2 seconds looking at it, i simply skip and go browse something else, no need to read, no need to really pay attention on pictures, all is going so low on quality that i even wonder if the thumbnails aren't enough in the end. That's sad.

The darkness rising comics are way more fun and they works on the same basic story, but it's not an ego trip. All the story do not resolve around a single character being the authors avatar, and that changes everything.

Posted on 09 October 2020, 03:01 by: BreedingGod

@Salminar Exactly! (Though in fairness, Lucas's plans for the sequel trilogy were shat on and torn up, which resulted in the abomination we got, but I digress.) What you just said is what I've been trying to tell everyone! And to top it off, as I said in an earlier comment, this guy targets women with rather strong willpower. WILLPOWER. Really think on the meaning. Is what we've been getting lately showing women with strong willpower? NO, they all practically fall before you could say "hypnosis" and it doesn't add up. If they really had strong willpower, then surely they can resist him for far longer, even after being transformed!

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Posted on 09 October 2020, 22:54 by: MaximRed

@BreedingGod maybe the plan is for Carol Danvers to pierce the heavens and save the DC universe

Posted on 10 October 2020, 02:28 by: BreedingGod

@MaximRed Don't count on it. I'm serious. Go to his website and look at his publishing calendar and you'll see she's screwed, both literally and metaphorically.

I take it back.I don't think this is one of those Marvel vs DC crossovers.

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Posted on 12 October 2020, 17:38 by: PoorWhiteTrash

If the bad guy just opens some kind of portal inside the vault I'll laugh pretty hard.

Posted on 12 October 2020, 23:10 by: Gold-kin

Dam that would be so funny, I'm actually hoping it happens.

Posted on 13 October 2020, 01:47 by: BreedingGod

@PoorWhiteTrash By this point I wouldn't be shocked, BUT considering how he turned most, if not half, of the women of the Justice Society already, I'd say it's more likely that Jesse Quick will be the one who opens it (and it's the most likely situation judging from the spoilers on BlackPharaoh's website) but it still doesn't make the story any better. Besides, there's no reason to take Michelle because she's the original Red Tornado's granddaughter (not to be confused with the robot Red Tornado we all know) and he already has Red Tornado's powers. Again, SIMPLE LOGIC.

Posted on 14 October 2020, 17:51 by: fightbos

Probably one or both of the other heroines are converted already. Rip Kara.

Posted on 15 October 2020, 01:06 by: Salminar

I have issues with this sentence coming over and over "It will give us some time". Ok but to do what? Hide and wait? Sure things will go better this way. That's what they are doing from almost the beginning. >.<

Posted on 16 October 2020, 01:10 by: BreedingGod

@Salminar Exactly. That's why I keep telling BlackPharaoh to quit it with this shit as we know what's going to happen. We weren't born yesterday. And this is facing the same problems as Drawn Together!: The Movie: it's tedious, it's boring, and it's quite frankly a good argument against combining plot and porn.

And as for the demons, well to be blunt, they don't exactly scream 'subtle' which brings us back to the bullshit with Constantine. Demon expert or not, not even he (or anyone with half a brain) would ever buy into any trick or seduction of any of those demons. Yeah, they may have powers, but still not an excuse, and their designs don't feed off their dumb, as there HAS to be something to draw them in. If anyone would want an example for how to have a monster play on their victim's stupidity, then look no further than Tim Curry's interpretation of Pennywise in the IT miniseries. They had Pennywise act silly to draw his victims in and then kill them. It's the same rule here. You want a good monster, you HAVE to have something draw them in. That self-insert OC couldn't lure children to a county fair.

Posted on 16 October 2020, 17:37 by: Leen

gee i remember a year ago i said they need to raid the FOS and get out of this reality because it is just stupid fucked. its also kinda sad that i like his Portraits of corruption and commissions more than the story and i like to read FF

Posted on 17 October 2020, 01:01 by: BreedingGod

@Leen Well this is precisely the reason why I think this is an excuse to have an ego jerkoff while doing commissions. He can do either commissions or he can do a story. And this is a clear sign he shouldn't do both

Posted on 17 October 2020, 02:22 by: nnnmmm

So I'll try to be as unbiased as I can with this. But this is about as much of a waste of talent as the Sunsetriders7 game that will never be finished.

The Good: 1)The art is great and the quality hasn't dropped throughout. 2) The scene of batman fucking the shit out of Wonder Woman is absolutely fantastic. The action, the angles and the transitions are all great and the scene lasts as long as it should. If this comic was that scene alone it'd be a 10/10

The Bad: Just about everything else.
1) The writing is not only bad but as said by others insulting to the intelligence of the readers. Even if it was well written the incredibly obvious self insert Overpowered OC who fucks all the heroines has been done before and it's almost never good. The Batman/Wonder Woman scene really shows off the waste of talent on display as If there were more scenes with other heroes and villians fucking each other due to his influence while slowly spreading it the story would be much better but god forbid anyone but this self insert get more screen time. What's worse is there will likely be no more scenes like the Batman/Wonder woman one as he's already killed or corrupted just about every other character.
2) Speaking of waste while I understand the idea of showing Visual corruption it completely defeats the purpose of using known superheriones in your story if you're going to drastically change how they look before they even get through one sex scene.
3) On top of that character consistency is non existent here. One of the cardinal sins of fanfiction is having characters act way out of character. I could spend all day giving examples but the Constantine one is so overtly asinine it boggles the mind and shows a severe lack of knowledge or respect for the source material. A perfect example of this being done well is Tracy Scops comics where while there's just a bunch of sex happening the writer shows a clear knowledge and respect for the source material that enhances the comics they write.

TLDR: The artist is incredibly talented and has wasted it on this shit show of a story.

Posted on 17 October 2020, 03:17 by: BreedingGod

@nnnmmm Thank you! And not to mention how 99.999999999999999% is just filler and how this was dead on arrival as as I mentioned, if the heroines really had such strong willpower, they would have done better at resisting that self-insert OC

Posted on 17 October 2020, 09:00 by: PoorWhiteTrash

Traditionally Alan Scott could beat any enemy who couldn't get wood.

Posted on 17 October 2020, 13:09 by: BreedingGod

@PoorWhiteTrash But now he and Maggog (or whatever he's called) are gonna die due to stupidity because the plot demands it.

And pretty much I can take Alan and Hal Jordan down with a number two pencil?

Posted on 17 October 2020, 18:00 by: PoorWhiteTrash

Alan, yeah. Hal's old weakness was the colour yellow, back in the day. Golden Shower Woman sadly failed to be a villain.

Posted on 17 October 2020, 23:38 by: BreedingGod

@PoorWhiteTrash I know but you tell me what outer color does an average number two pencil has.

Posted on 18 October 2020, 10:22 by: PoorWhiteTrash

Whoa, big brain time!

Kyle could have taken both of them at any time!

Posted on 18 October 2020, 10:58 by: fightbos

@nnnmmm I would argue the art quality has definitely dropped throughout. Very inconsistent.

Posted on 20 October 2020, 11:05 by: Kurisu_Makise

I made this comment by mistake and can't figure out how to delete it.

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Posted on 21 October 2020, 04:38 by: BreedingGod

@Kurisu_Makise I don't think there is a way.

And Darksied can easily kill this OP self-insert Mary Sue by trapping him in the Omega Sanction. For those of you who don't know, it's a life trap where one lives in a self-contained reality where they live out an infinite number of lives for eternity, but each life progressively gets worse and worse as it goes on, including how you die. Take a look at what happened to the third Mr. Miracle before he intentionally overdosed, and that was his first life in the sanction.

"Now we only have Grodd"

No you don't. Mr. Terrific can't be seen by any machines, INCLUDING drones, remember?!

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Posted on 25 October 2020, 01:10 by: DiroMustang

I really hope the good guys win this.
Villain has such negative charisma that even in a corruption comic I hope he loses.

Posted on 25 October 2020, 05:24 by: BreedingGod

@DiroMustang Well that's what happens when you create an OP self-insert OC and make a parody without any clue as to what you are doing.

Posted on 25 October 2020, 22:44 by: Gold-kin

BP says the series is 40% done. Another 60% to go.

Posted on 26 October 2020, 04:03 by: BreedingGod

@Gold-kin well as I said, he's a TERRIBLE liar and clearly has no idea what he is doing, regardless of his claims

....Well...that just got darker...I mean, Power Girl killing them? Come on! Even she would never do that!

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Posted on 28 October 2020, 16:51 by: Leen

personally i agree power girl wouldn't do that but its probably the better option than have their souls drained and turned in the the parody of the characters that he uses

Posted on 29 October 2020, 01:19 by: BreedingGod

@Leen Fair enough, but is there REALLY no boom tubes or teleporter they could've used and blow up sky high, controls and all? It worked with Arsenal in Young Justice. Either way, this is a prime example of shitty writing and situations being forced.

Posted on 29 October 2020, 19:27 by: Ficfactor

Since Powergirl will kill her own comrades rather than let them be captured, it's beyond clear that in-universe, there is no coming back.

Posted on 30 October 2020, 00:37 by: BreedingGod

And she wouldn't do that if the writer has any brains and didn't force the situation. Yeah, this chapter, like the rest of the story, is a huge asspull, from that probe seeing Mr. Terrific even though he clearly established that no machine can see him to none of the heroines being affected by that Mary Sue like he affected Killer Frost and the Teen Titans. And as I mentioned, he has no REASON for going after Power Girl since he already got Supergirl, a Kryptonian woman like her, and besides, Power Girl is essentially Supergirl from another reality, so by definition, that's redundant.

@eggows dislike my comments all you want. It's not going to change anything. Besides, you and i both know no matter what BlackPharaoh does, it won't change the fact he clearly has no idea what he's doing, never mind how to write a good story

Huh...that excuse that the self insert OC Mary sue said...would anyone be shocked if I said "that's also pure bullshit?" Somehow I doubt it.

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Posted on 12 November 2020, 21:59 by: fightbos

Oof these last pages remind me a little too much of pegasus, total self-insert cringe.

Posted on 14 November 2020, 07:12 by: BreedingGod

@fightbos to give pegasus some credit at least he isn't just adding more to the same comics and does each part individually

Posted on 15 November 2020, 01:07 by: Ilyia

The story being stupid is one thing... but damn, the way it wrote Constantine was just retarded. There is now way that Constantine would have reacted like that in ANY reality.
Fuck, what is next? Will Dream and his siblings job to this tentacle guy?

Posted on 16 November 2020, 05:28 by: BreedingGod

@Ilyia Don't jinx it. Heck even the Three Stooges wouldn't fall for that level of stupidity! Heck, she wouldn't even eat Curly. Why? Well in his own words

Curly: "You can't eat me! I'm too tough! I'll give you indigestion!"

Posted on 23 November 2020, 16:37 by: Bill Gray

I feel a bit out of the loop. Wasn't Kara converted fairly early on, in page 30? Wasn't she the one to kill Superman? How is she only being converted now in pages 280-285?

Posted on 23 November 2020, 21:14 by: BreedingGod

@Bill Gray Because Black Pharaoh is a stupid idiot since Supergirl and Power Girl are the same person, so yes, Power Girl is essentially Kara from a different reality. This is what happens when you write things without any clue what you are doing.

Posted on 24 November 2020, 06:57 by: Raou

What is the villains name I haven't seen it used at all?

Posted on 24 November 2020, 12:21 by: BreedingGod

@Raou It doesn't matter seeing as he's the worst self insert OC EVER.

Another shitty page. Dude, were you even paying attention to what you're writing? You said your self-insert OC was going to kill Green Lantern and Maggog himself, and yet, as anyone with half a brain can clearly see, that's the work of his slaves. And if this is anything to go by, your plot and plans for this story is stupid and lazy and so are YOU.

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Posted on 28 November 2020, 09:59 by: lw123789

Dude, you get a hate boner from that or what ?

Posted on 28 November 2020, 12:03 by: Leen

to be fair to breeding god in this comic if you are female you might as well kill your self because you are gonna be a slave and if you are male u gonna die painfully. and the oc is all freakin powerful

Posted on 28 November 2020, 21:12 by: Gold-kin

@Raou Black Pharaoh and everyone else in his discord just calls him the Master. As of right now I don't think he has an official name.

Posted on 29 November 2020, 12:23 by: Leen

i agree with u breeding god i was just saying that because IW123789 was asking if you have a hate boner or something

Posted on 29 November 2020, 16:52 by: BreedingGod

@Leen And for that, you have my thanks

Posted on 30 November 2020, 12:24 by: BreedingGod

@eggows Dude, no matter how many times you and your associates dislike my comments pointing out how terrible this parody is and how BlackPharaoh clearly has no idea what he's doing, it's NEVER going to change the indisputable fact that this is a terrible story and should never have been attempted.

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Posted on 30 November 2020, 21:43 by: lw123789

@BreedingGod Never said I was a fan of this whatsoever. Dude, I also get their are flaws to this, but you know what ? I get over it and only come from time to time, not every update just to rant on it just like you do since the beginning

Posted on 04 December 2020, 03:38 by: superjiayu123

I just wonder when this comic could end? Since 2017, more than three years passed and it's still ongoing...

Posted on 04 December 2020, 05:52 by: Salminar

@lw123789 lol i feel the same than you and i even come a lot less now, i must say even the inner joke i enjoyed is simply starting to ... Well it doesn't keep me hyped either and only comes every few updates to see if anything is interesting.

But i'm amazed to see BreedingGod posting comments every day and to a rate than 1/2 of the total comments comes from him lol.

Posted on 04 December 2020, 08:06 by: kain11

I hate when I loose consciousness.

Posted on 09 December 2020, 01:12 by: EscapedDreamerD

regardless of what a lot of people say in the comments I'm actually enjoying it since the beginning can't wait to see how it's going to end

Posted on 09 December 2020, 01:22 by: lw123789

@BreedingGod Huh ? What do you want from me ? I didn't talk to you for more than a week

Posted on 12 December 2020, 18:46 by: three_iron

The ultimate "up yours" ending ... Batman is the real big bad, the Black Pharaaaaooooooohhh is actually gathering an army to stop the even MOAR powerful Batmanbeast. Wonder Woman has to slob both negative energy knobs to save the universe.

Posted on 17 December 2020, 02:28 by: BreedingGod

@BlackPharaoh Having Cheetah eh? Implying a sexual relationship between Wonder Woman and herself? All right...I'll bite. What exactly do you have in mind?

Posted on 18 December 2020, 10:41 by: vevans0009

Always loved the more feline take on Cheetah, lately. Especially from Injustice 2.

Posted on 24 December 2020, 22:40 by: fightbos

@BreedingGod I think that was the author saying: NO FURRIES

Posted on 25 December 2020, 10:05 by: BreedingGod

@fightbos Tell that to Catwoman or that Portrait of Corruption he did of Cheetah and Wonder Woman. Textbook hypocrisy and more proof he has no clue what he's doing

Posted on 28 December 2020, 08:40 by: TheKnightlyMinstrel

Yet another update saddens me with Dogwelder and Sixpack not doing their best to save these corrupted souls... with the ability to weld dogs to people and drinking extreme amounts of alcohol.

Posted on 28 December 2020, 11:36 by: wolfman1933

This person got the characters personalities down pat

Posted on 30 December 2020, 18:35 by: EscapedDreamerD

I'm enjoying the comic but these just make coming here so much better.

Posted on 31 December 2020, 01:49 by: fightbos

Breeding you sound more angry than batman looks in the new pages (not posted here yet)

Posted on 31 December 2020, 16:26 by: PoorWhiteTrash

The bad guy wouldn't last very long with a dog welded to his face for sure.

Posted on 08 January 2021, 04:51 by: DiroMustang

Every now and then I open this one because I sincerely hope, out of all NTR and corruption porn I've read, that in this one, the bad guy loses.
Is that weird?

Posted on 12 January 2021, 12:33 by: lag85086

All fucked up in the end

Posted on 23 January 2021, 04:48 by: BreedingGod

So you're telling me his influence is spreading in their base even though most of them (ex. Mercy, Huntress, and Bane) didn't see him? Or is it because of Batman getting infected?

Posted on 25 January 2021, 15:58 by: fightbos

@BreedingGod it's because of wonder woman. She is infected and is basically emitting a weaker version of his aura inside the base.

Posted on 26 January 2021, 00:10 by: BreedingGod

@fightbos But I thought Batman was infected too

Posted on 29 January 2021, 22:05 by: Gold-kin

Batman is infected

Posted on 31 January 2021, 23:23 by: vevans0009

Wow, he looks like a organic Batman Beyond. 8o

Posted on 02 February 2021, 01:22 by: Gold-kin

You ask I told. Also Black pharaoh has drop small spoilers about what happens to Batman and has said he's infected, so that pretty much gave it away for me.

Posted on 05 February 2021, 13:36 by: KuromaruX

Be pretty great at this point if The Batman Who Laughs suddenly popped up and like, one shot the evil dude and took over his empire, I would get behind that lol

Posted on 06 February 2021, 06:14 by: BreedingGod

@Gold-kin Don't you know sarcasm when you read it?

Posted on 09 February 2021, 16:47 by: Hopfrog

Anyone else feel like evil Batman should've been the villain right from the start?

Posted on 16 February 2021, 06:45 by: BreedingGod

(Please note the following is sarcasm

Gee...I wonder how this will turn out? Out of ALL the possible outcomes, I honestly can't tell if Batman and Wonder Woman will get double-crossed.

Posted on 16 February 2021, 18:09 by: zhaowuling

the king in yellow! 黄衣之王！

Posted on 27 February 2021, 12:08 by: lw123789

"the critics with half a brain"

I kinda knew there was something missing...

Posted on 27 February 2021, 20:05 by: shaidar0

This is basically Superboy Prime Dark.

Posted on 28 February 2021, 06:53 by: AtotehZ

Would wish the faces of the women stayed cuter when transformed.. hard for me to get into demon on demon action.

Posted on 28 February 2021, 22:24 by: BreedingGod

@Iw123789 I do have ALL my brains. I only said that because ANYONE with half a brain can tell this is pure bullshit and BlackPharaoh clearly has no idea what he is doing.

As for this new page, when did the attack happen? How DID they kill Megan? And considering her biology and how well killing them went, this is clearly a trap to trick them and has me more convinced that M'gann's faking it. If not then this is more proof of BlackPharaoh breaking his own rules.

And when did Wonder Woman find out about the Titans and the Justice Society? Take note, writers, this is why you HAVE to establish things and think things out BEFORE you put them on pen and paper otherwise you'll appear to be a shitty writer who's too stupid to take a hint

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Posted on 01 March 2021, 10:52 by: Gale!

Gotta say that reading the comments about people actually trying to explain a storyline that hasn't been coherent from day 1 is about as amusing as fapping to the comic itself. Carry on comrades, I hope to see several full novels by the time this storyline actually concludes.

Posted on 04 March 2021, 08:40 by: mohammadodst123

Black Pharah, real name is Nyarlathotep, the Crawling Chaos

Hastur, the King in Yellow

Yog-Sothoth, the Eater of Souls

Evil vs Evil

Hazbin hotel/Helluva boss

Posted on 04 March 2021, 16:20 by: fightbos

I can't believe he just blatantly admitted the badguy to be a selfinsert just now...

Posted on 06 March 2021, 00:41 by: KuromaruX

@BreedingGod right there with ya my man. No way M'gann is dead. Who else remembers that these fuckers survived being dropped from orbit in the watchtower? Lol

Posted on 06 March 2021, 01:25 by: sexysolipsist

I'd love to see more detailed encounters with the men that lose their souls to those succubi

Posted on 08 March 2021, 23:38 by: torplane

Cthulhu? Do you want to add it, after hundreds of pages? Let's not joke, any great ancient would have noticed Nyarlathotep's activities long before the end of your fourth chapter and would have intervened accordingly.

Posted on 09 March 2021, 15:06 by: torplane

@BreedingGod Possible, but I am evaluating with Ra's al ghaul's phrase that black pharaoh is not the only adversary they have to fear. Provided that this time too he does not contradict himself.

Posted on 11 March 2021, 00:17 by: torplane

@BreedngGood Wanting to be good I would say from the third chapter. Does Ras'al ghoul have the necronomicon? Well, the moment he feels something strange in any house in any North American city (chap 1) He would have solved the problem before the idiotic intervention of Zatanna & Co and it is the black pharaoh himself who says that he could have been banished by a neo-corrupt Zatanna without having the necronomicon in his hand, you can immagine Ras with the Necronomicon can obtain the banished a great old. And I repeat before Zatanna arrives on the spot. The Trigon and daughter thing is just as idiotic, because if you say that Raven has the key to access the Trigon domains why didn't Trigon intervene long before the great ancient arrived at the Teen Titans' hideout? If Constantine had known that he was a great ancient of Lovecraft he would have sought allies to attack him in his domains. That way you say he wanted to commit suicide and that's enough to make the black pharaoh tremble with fear. It does not make sense.

Posted on 11 March 2021, 03:02 by: BreedingGod

@torplane Well one snag with chapter one as I said before: his statement is a joke as it's crystal clear she had no free will. And yeah, even him somehow winning girls over is textbook inconsistent. Hell he doesn't even do his homework on characters as established earlier

@torplane Shock and surprise, he contradicted himself...AGAIN

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Posted on 13 March 2021, 15:30 by: torplane

Chekhov's gun, a minimum of intelligence was really enough to avoid being fooled by such a narrative device. Do you introduce in chapter three a flashback with Ras and the Necronomicon? Well it is taken for granted and it is logical that the Necronomicon is used to banish the black pharaoh. He can't even say is but it was a red herring, because he really needed a weak point for his protagonist / villain.

Posted on 13 March 2021, 19:17 by: BreedingGod

@torplane But he never said anything about some sort of secret fish people being his other weakness either

Posted on 14 March 2021, 20:04 by: torplane

@BreedingGod The deep ones would have made sense if they had appeared in the first seven chapters, instead of making a useless and long flashback on how the watchtower fell which could easily be summarized or shown later if it really wanted to, it could show the first hostile acts of the deep ones and give a fatal flaw to Black Pharaoh and a reason that wasn't hey I want to dominate the universe at his actions. It's not a very difficult thing, it's just the ABC of fiction at the end.

Posted on 16 March 2021, 23:39 by: BreedingGod

Okay...well for the new page, I'm calling bullshit. Wasn't Starro confirmed to be from space and is NOT from the deep? And wouldn't Mera or ANY Atlantian notice and try to free Arthur? BUT....I will defend his appearance a little bit when I say where they hid him is clever as in the Batman Beyond Episode where Terry gets invited to join the Justice League, Starro did hide under Superman's suit

Posted on 17 March 2021, 21:38 by: KuromaruX

@BreedingGod pretty sure it's a knockoff starro. Im sure starro is tied to some other "ancient evil at war" calling that shit now.I also feel like Mera is supposedly one of the "pretenders" or whatever Ra's is talking about. I'm like half assedly paying attention at this point the comments are more fun lol.

Posted on 18 March 2021, 06:16 by: BreedingGod

@KuromaruX Considering how this is a half-assed, AWFUL, and the author clearly doesn't know what he is doing, I wouldn't be shocked. And I'm still saying M'gann's faking it

Posted on 20 March 2021, 20:10 by: Pvt. Fleshpound

If this isn't a passion project, then whoever is paying for this has to have some deep pockets and a very specific vision of what he wants to jerk off to. Maybe the artist is even done with this shit, but he still needs to make money and pay rent so he has to keep making this miserable comic. Maybe the artist is suffering alongside the readers and entirely agrees with them, but he simply has no choice except to keep drawing so he doesn't starve to death. A fate worse than death, I say.

Posted on 24 March 2021, 14:29 by: torplane

Aahahahahahahahahahha Batman is a guy who has always thought strategically and would never: a) break a radio silence for any reason b) Proposed a similar nonsense to Luthor c) the only minimum consistent with himself is Luthor in this cartoon . Seriously the idea of a certain evil entity in Batman would be the seed for several porn or normal stories that are interesting, but only if dealt with by people who know a character transformation arc.

Posted on 28 March 2021, 23:13 by: lw123789

@breedingod Why do you still come back here if you always know you will get disappointed ? Do you get a hard on from frustration ? Are you a masochist ?

Posted on 30 March 2021, 12:21 by: torplane

@breedingod His problem is that Lovecraft's Outer Gods function, narratively, better as looming threats behind the scenes than in the center of the action. If history had seen an evil entity within Batman that Bruce Wayne tries, in vain, to contain it would have been a thousand times better.But hey what I just said required a tragic story arc and such a thing is difficult to handle without knowing a minimum of the character transformation arc. Yes, I wrote some stories when I was a teenager.

Posted on 31 March 2021, 12:25 by: lw123789

@BreedingGod Man, your ego must be skyrocketing fucking high

Posted on 31 March 2021, 15:24 by: torplane

@BreedingGod I don't know if there are any neat articles on creative writing in English or something serious on youtube. I know for my mother tongue and that's it. I would advise you to point them out so that they understand what the storytelling problems of this parody are. Only this I would advise you, so that even those who defend him get an idea of the situation.

Posted on 04 April 2021, 10:03 by: PoorWhiteTrash

Shock page showing the eldritch abomination possessing Batman is Kool-Aid Man.

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Posted on 04 April 2021, 11:19 by: lw123789

@BreedingGod I still don't get why you inflict that to yourself though... and honestly, do you seriously think we are so inferior to you that we can't see this is a flawed story ? no one really cares, people are mostly here for the porn and the tropes

Posted on 08 April 2021, 15:06 by: fightbos

Wait.. you work for ehentai as a critic?

Posted on 08 April 2021, 16:51 by: hadorian

Here's Dagon, GOODBYE DAGON!

Posted on 08 April 2021, 19:37 by: earthjade

Seeing Booster Gold just makes me realize there are dozens more characters that can be used to make this story drag out another 7 years.

Posted on 08 April 2021, 19:55 by: torplane

@BreedingGod Yes, that's okay or at least I hope other people are clear enough. Surely this last cartoon with Dagon dead makes me laugh, you don't have to be Stan Lee or Jerry Siegel (since it is in the comic field) to say that it is totally contradictory with the previous ones as well andshowing how the author did not have the slightest idea of what the mythology of
Lovecraft. I repeat what I said the only decent idea he had for this comic remains that of the evil entity in Batman and on that he had to build his story not on a great ancient attacking the Earth.

Posted on 09 April 2021, 00:16 by: lw123789

@breedingod... A critic ? Seriously ? On a hentai website ? Man you need even more help than I thought

Posted on 09 April 2021, 10:24 by: lw123789

@breedingod Yeah, everything can be criticised, but what you are doing is going far further than criticize. Seems like you decided that trashing on this PORN comic is your sole goal in life and that's kinda sad

Posted on 09 April 2021, 14:50 by: torplane

@breedingod I'll be honest as I said I would have defended it all the way to the teen titans but from then on it collapsed vertically as a narrative. Both because it literally does not make sense that Raven is there if it is so important to access the domains of Trigon and because it really contradicts itself more and more from there until now that it contradicts itself within a few cartoons. @Iw123789 Well it depends on what you mean by your defense of this comic. Personally on the ehentai site I have seen both comics that do not have the slightest narrative structure and that do not claim to have it, finally they last at the end of the day at most 20-30 cartoons ... Both comics that were for almost half of cartoons this and they had a narrative structure equal to that of a Spiderman or Batman book, so to speak. I personally am of the opinion that the first two chapters are wonderful, but that when he saw success with this comic he decided to continue without having a minimum knowledge of how the narrative should be and for this he is groping in the dark... looking for anything that solidifies the narrative of this comic.

Posted on 10 April 2021, 05:48 by: KuromaruX

So uh, if I'm following the jumbled mess correctly, just send fucking Black Adam at the Pharaoh, Dagon was supposed to be pretty relative to him wasn't he? Or is the Pharaoh out of another "old gods" league because reasons? Also this is bugging me, you had Miss Martian and Raven, and fucking Ravager, that's two people with future sight and a character able to shape shift and phase through any- oh that's what this arc was huh? To try and quell the he should have won already issue? Miss Martian can look like anyone and mask her "makeover" get into peoples minds and shut them down, realistically getting HER was a bigger gain than Raven imo lol

Posted on 10 April 2021, 17:46 by: unemployed

for me i think the author is just trying to explore things that the main DC company will not do, in the world of hentai or erotic cartoon porn, anything is possible based on the authors perspective.. i am not a fan of marvel or dc comics so i could not argue with the fans of Justice league because they know what is the strengths and weaknesses of every character.. but please guys let's avoid the toxicity on this e-hentai community, we are here to release our stress and boredom, (hehehe, i am always here to release my sperm )

Posted on 11 April 2021, 22:28 by: fightbos

Black Adam can just travel back in time and kill the pharaoh before he gets minions.

Posted on 12 April 2021, 07:39 by: Leen

or kill the stupid morons who summoned him

Posted on 12 April 2021, 08:02 by: Redphantom41

BRUH THATS BULLSHIT BOOSTER GOLD LITERALLY HAS A ENERGY SHIELD STRONG ENOUGH TO ABSORB SUPERMAN PUNCHES BUT DIES FROM A SWORD LMMFAO ASS PULL

Posted on 12 April 2021, 16:56 by: hadorian

This comic is as series accurate as my ass is to mars.

Posted on 12 April 2021, 17:30 by: nalak1

@KuromaruX If we're going with actual Cthulu Mythos power tiers Dagon was not an outer god. It was just part of that mythos thing that there were entities so far outside of humanity that they would be gods to humans even if they weren't god. (Cthulu being the most iconic as it was just a priest to the outer gods and not a god itself) Assuming the black pharaoh is supposed to be Nyalathrotep, as that is one of the many monikers of the crawling chaos, then yes it would be an entity of far more power and ability than Dagon. This is of course if we're going with normal mythos tiers and such, which I'm pretty sure we're not since they identify Mera as Hydra and Hydra was another entity like Dagon as its mate which makes the humanoid Mera whilst Dagon not being humanoid a problem even if one handwaved it as an ability that just hadn't been demonstrated before. And of course assuming the Black Pharoah in this is meant to be The Dweller in Darkness and not merely the artists on OC.

I will admit one thing that would be kind of funny, one of Nyalthrotep's names is "The Father of All Bats." so I would be slightly amused if this had Bats turn into actual Nya to just end the Pharoah incarnation and reset this whole mess because its gotten boring for them.

And yeah Booster probably should have been included in that list of individuals killed before this became a "World lost" scenario just because he honestly would have done more good going back and ending this mess before it became this mess than trying to save anyone there.

Posted on 18 April 2021, 16:52 by: Smiling_Jack

I feel like the least they could do is come up with at least "kinda" believable deaths for the guys. I mean, are we really witnessing Martian Manhunter dying in Atlantis or all places? A place where there shouldn't even be any fire? What's to stop him from just phase-noping the fuck out of there now that WW is above water?

Posted on 20 April 2021, 21:51 by: lw123789

Let me guess Martian got possessed ?

Posted on 21 April 2021, 02:05 by: Oddball

This stopped being fun a long time ago.

Kill Kill Kill rape rape "oh no nothing we do works against this guy" Murder Murder rape rape rape.

Rinse and repeat

Posted on 25 April 2021, 07:12 by: RustyGizmoz

I don't care about the story. The art is great

Posted on 25 April 2021, 20:51 by: fightbos

Next page: Mercy is corrupt and sucks Robin dry.

Posted on 04 May 2021, 08:29 by: J0J0nnes

Oh, look. Our heroes have a new lead. Can't wait to see how that won't matter and more of them will be killed/raped.

Posted on 04 May 2021, 14:01 by: Salminar

Oh god and nobody sees Batman and WW are a bit corrupted even when they act totally wrong in the medical bay in front of everyone.

Posted on 12 May 2021, 12:14 by: lw123789

we can't delete our own comment here ?

Posted on 13 May 2021, 15:03 by: lapynheart

I think that, in the end, hte Black Pharao (Nyarlatotep) will be vainquish but... What will be the cost? Probably a Batman or a Diana even more corrupted than him.

Posted on 16 May 2021, 18:14 by: carnageforce

What is Bibi can anyone elaborate plz?

Posted on 31 May 2021, 14:17 by: Solipsist

Wth is M'kuu?
Seems to be Swahili for "supernatural" or something. But that can't be that's all there is to it.

Posted on 31 May 2021, 17:19 by: apopp

im sure we will find out soon

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Posted on 01 June 2021, 03:14 by: Ahdobo

*tips fedora* M'kuu

Posted on 03 June 2021, 19:08 by: Hot544

M'kuu? If this is kiswahili then it's a bit jarbled in translation understanding.

Mkuu translated to English could mean "leader" or "someone above you in status"

Maybe BP was aiming for the word Mungu, which means "God" seeing as the ladies are seeing batman as some sexual god or something.

But who knows? I'm still waiting to see how this all ends anyway.

Posted on 06 June 2021, 07:07 by: james088

Whats up with Batman? How did he become the demon bat thing?

Posted on 12 June 2021, 11:36 by: Smiling_Jack

I like how it's only once he's slept with another woman that Batman starts to think there might be something wrong with him. *sarcasm*

Posted on 12 June 2021, 15:09 by: PoorWhiteTrash

World's Greatest Detective asking the serious questions here.

Posted on 12 June 2021, 22:56 by: Kentyr

For those asking 'bout the meaning of "Mkuu" and "Bibi"... both words have many meanings, but here seems to be used as "Master" and "Master's wife/ mistress"

Posted on 13 June 2021, 19:09 by: Solipsist

So, yeah, all there is to is that for w/e reason Batman and Wonderwoman started talking in a foreign language for absolutely no reason?
Smashing

Posted on 16 June 2021, 19:53 by: lw123789

Oh hey, you're back !

wouhou..........

Posted on 16 June 2021, 23:46 by: BreedingGod

Yep. Once again pointing out how he has no idea what he is doing and getting disliked by his cult

Posted on 17 June 2021, 13:49 by: PoorWhiteTrash

Book 'er, Faust-o.

Posted on 24 June 2021, 19:15 by: lw123789

HAHAHAHA !!!

Holding a knife over his bleeding naked girlfriend : "This is not what it looks like"

Posted on 29 June 2021, 00:12 by: Salminar

And now cause of the blood staining the book, the only ritual that could banish the super evil villain is impossible to be executed properly!
Morality of the story let your girlfriend be sacrificed by a psychopath to save humanity!

Posted on 30 June 2021, 16:44 by: Lament1

It looks to me that Faust's blood actually revealed some new information on the book. I also like Luther's reaction where he is genuinely mad at Faust for being an idiot and not Adam for killing him.

Posted on 04 July 2021, 03:51 by: nnnmmm

As very little of the issues brought up in my initial review from almost a year ago have been addressed it bears posting again though slightly less harsh as there has been minor improvement

So I'll try to be as unbiased as I can with this. But this is about as much of a waste of talent as the Sunsetriders7 game that will never be finished.

The Good: 1)The art is great and the quality hasn't dropped throughout. 2) The scene of batman fucking the shit out of Wonder Woman is absolutely fantastic. The action, the angles and the transitions are all great and the scene lasts as long as it should. If this comic was that scene alone it'd be a 10/10

The Bad: Just about everything else.
1) The writing is not only bad but as said by others insulting to the intelligence of the readers. Even if it was well written the incredibly obvious self insert Overpowered OC who fucks all the heroines has been done before and it's almost never good.

2) While I understand the idea of showing Visual corruption it completely defeats the purpose of using known superheriones in your story if you're going to drastically change how they look before they even get through one sex scene.

3) On top of that character consistency is non existent here. One of the cardinal sins of fanfiction is having characters act way out of character. I could spend all day giving examples but the Constantine one is so overtly asinine it boggles the mind and shows a severe lack of knowledge or respect for the source material. A perfect example of this being done well is Tracy Scops comics where while there's just a bunch of sex happening the writer shows a clear knowledge and respect for the source material that enhances the comics they write.

TLDR: The artist is incredibly talented and has wasted it on this story.

Posted on 04 July 2021, 09:54 by: Salminar

@Lament1 It was irony. How lucky are all those stupid heroes that fucks up everything, spilling some blood on the pages reveals some mysterious things that will lead them to fail again against the mega villain. This is going for way too long and it makes less and less sense.

Posted on 09 July 2021, 13:43 by: J0J0nnes

At the very least, it looks like this shit show might soon be over, so that's good. What a giant waste of everyone's time.

Posted on 11 July 2021, 17:35 by: Predi12

Great Scott: Grimdark edition

Posted on 12 July 2021, 09:04 by: TheKnightlyMinstrel

Yet another set of pages, and our heros Dogwelder and Sixpack are still nowhere to be seen...

Posted on 12 July 2021, 18:12 by: Brisance

For those wondering, Batman's corrupted form has been going by "Mkuu" which means "chief" or "supreme" in Swahili. Wonder Woman has been called "Bibi" which is Swahili for "lady" or "mistress". Just thought that was interesting.

Posted on 13 July 2021, 18:28 by: ZIGMA44

I Like this comics, Thanks,

Posted on 17 July 2021, 10:53 by: Gold-kin

The comic is no where near over. Black Pharaoh has said this comic will not be finished until late next year. He also said he has 2 sequels for this story after this is done.

Posted on 20 July 2021, 17:19 by: tonyxxx

"He has become a dominant bat-like monstrosity with a never ending sex drive."
Batman: So what's new?

Posted on 22 July 2021, 03:40 by: Oddball

Every once in a while I click on this just to see how much dumber it's gotten since the last time I checked it out. I never fails to disappoint.

Posted on 29 July 2021, 00:59 by: KuromaruX

@BreedingGod since you mentioned Darkseid a while back. I'd like to point out he was there for the "Quarantine" of earth, and he is NOT the motherfucker to go "I'm just gonna wall em in" the BlackPharaoh would be dealing with apokalips by now and that means shit that all of his corrupted bitches can't hold a candle to lol So where's THAT fight? I'm eagerly looking forward to him bullshitting dude killing Darkseid lol

Posted on 29 July 2021, 12:35 by: torplane

Where is Batman shown fighting to stay human as he becomes more and more monster? It is not enough for him to ask himself what is happening to him in a cartoon(pag n.341), he must investigate and find out what is happening to his body and his mind. Not to mention his search for a temporary solution with the strength of his knowledge and intellect. In my opinion, at least seven or eight cartoons are missing to give depth to the slow corruption of the Gotham bat.

Posted on 31 July 2021, 15:50 by: lw123789

@BreedingGod... I don't think you have any right to call anyone stupid considering how you behave in here for I don't know what reason. Tell us, where did the author touch you ?

Posted on 01 August 2021, 18:00 by: lw123789

@breedingod, my god buddy, why do you keep getting here if it makes you that angry every time ? It's really not healthy

And seriously ?

>Besides, at this point it just seems like every new page is BlackPharaoh being like “I’m so smart because this shows how awesome I’d be if I were in the DC universe and how I’d win against everyone!” But no. He, and everyone encouraging this shit parody are actually idiots

You don't see the irony here ? Here, let me change like a few words...
At this point it just seems like every new comment is BreedingGod being like “I’m so smart because this shows how awesome I’d be if I were to write this fanfic of the DC universe and how I’d win against everyone not agreeing with me!”

And glad you don't consider me an idiot since I never praised or encouraged the author

Posted on 04 August 2021, 06:02 by: itsbeenawhile

hello there adventurer! Oh my quite the challenge getting all the way down here don't you think? why don't you take a break before venturing forth? Have a seat, read a book, warm yourself next to the cozy fireplace, ponder over what you have seen today, be what may I wish thee the best of luck

Posted on 04 August 2021, 18:27 by: fightbos

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Posted on 04 August 2021, 21:07 by: KuromaruX

@BreedingGod okay dickhead you misread something cuz I was saying why the fuck would Darkseid of all people sit back and "quarantine" this shit instead of one shotting this joke of a villain. I know comics too prick. So if I'm stupid I guess you're fucking illiterate

10$ says he somehow uses Carol as a Trojan horse. Breaching the barrier without anyone knowing

Posted on 05 August 2021, 00:54 by: sexysolipsist

Need moar death by snu snu

Posted on 05 August 2021, 01:00 by: lw123789

@BreedingGod you're a "critic" doing his "job" ? Criticizing plot in porn is a job to you ? Your job ? Get down your freaking damn high horse man, rest a bit and then get some help. You really need it

Posted on 08 August 2021, 20:59 by: torplane

@BreedingGod You are right about BlackPharaoh. But could you moderate the tone of your comments, please? For other users I want to be honest. By now I follow this series of drawings only for the comments, as a story well to say that it is mediocre is to make him a big compliment. In my opinion the choice of the villain is wrong, the deities conceived for Lovecraft's tales are too powerful for anyone. Actually Batman was much better as a villain and we know when he is unstoppable in such stories.

Posted on 12 August 2021, 19:30 by: whatamidoinghere2020

This is really good and I like it

Posted on 24 August 2021, 22:01 by: Sign Painter

Oh no... he's bringing in the multiverse into this? And are those OCs? I honestly can't tell. My penis is saddened either way.

Posted on 01 September 2021, 15:56 by: torplane

Ok, I've seen your "previews". I am wondering if he is writing the story drunk at this point, it is not possible to give birth to such a pile of contradictions for a person completely in himself. Actually every two cartoons contradicts itself and I am generous, here it is not a question of knowing a minimum of creative writing but of remembering what you drew and wrote ten days before.

Posted on 07 September 2021, 18:58 by: cozzy121

"arrogant sociopath" oh the irony....

Posted on 08 September 2021, 17:16 by: urbanvoid

Just too funny, you hate the comic and the author but you even go to his site to check out the previews. You should probably touch grass buddy.

Posted on 09 September 2021, 12:42 by: zapevery1

The only reason I check in here because @BreedingGod is the only entertaining thing about this comic.
So no, he doesn't need to go outside.

Posted on 10 September 2021, 20:53 by: urbanvoid

read the first 10 pages and then compare the faces in that to Donnas face in the last page lmao.

Posted on 12 September 2021, 05:22 by: urbanvoid

Dude, everyone agrees with you that the art has taken a nose dive, but they also think you are insane for caring about the lore of DC or the "rules" og a porn comic.

Posted on 13 September 2021, 01:17 by: Leen

i still agree with breeding all you have to do is look at 361 one panel artemis is shouting for her queen then skip one and shes naked and turned that is fast soul sucking

Posted on 17 September 2021, 13:35 by: cassandra112

it was established the females are having their souls metaphysically transmogrified. they can't be saved, because its their souls themselves, thats been remade. they only look vaguely human physically, their souls are now a writhing mass of tentacles.

The mens souls get eaten.

its odd so far, Death and the afterlife seems out of his reach. the fact Death is a sexy goth chick probably will become a plot point at some point. or I just reminded him, and gave him ideas..

Posted on 20 September 2021, 11:19 by: Gleonomis2

I remember when this was first added in here and my initial thought was could have potential. Somewhere during the second part I was thinking this is no material for my likeness. But now I am just here cause of the story, I am learning so much stuff about dc world that I didn't even know they existed. Un-fap-able for me but one of most well writen stories out there and the illustration is just top tier as well

Posted on 20 September 2021, 15:18 by: fightbos

Gleonomis what on earth are you talking about, you won't learn anything about the DC world from this comic.............

Posted on 20 September 2021, 17:19 by: torplane

Ah, so now he also raises the dead? Because in the previous chapters they said that Faust killed her but her body was not found. So the two heroines killed in Mr Terrific's base will be resurrected?

Posted on 20 September 2021, 20:05 by: nalak1

I mean fairness, Faust was a cultist, so lies and deceptions are an option, and "we never found the body, but nobody could have survived that" is practically a cliche in individuals not really being dead when they should be.

That said I mean a lot of the issues in this are ranging from the fact that there is really is nothing saying the author isn't going with the description that the outer gods of mythos were far more powerful than the powerless gods of earth, and that consequently so much of this story is kind of dull because you don't get the sense that there is any actual opposition possible let alone that there isn't a reason why the villain hasn't just snapped their fingers and turned the whole of the world into its slaves because that does seem like it should be within its powers at this point. So I get the complaints.

Posted on 21 September 2021, 01:52 by: KuromaruX

"The book has nothing to stop us now." Yeah!? What about a one handed man with a chainsaw and a shotgun!?! Lol

Posted on 22 September 2021, 14:59 by: torplane

@nalak1 Except that no one has ever completely trusted Faust's words. To be honest, now I expect everything from those who contradict themselves every two or three cartoons.
But in fact the problem is the choice of the villain.Then it doesn't have a coherent narrative.

Posted on 29 September 2021, 15:36 by: doteiji

> "Oh, 2 pages instead of one?! Maybe this will end someday after all..."

> Its a duplicate

> " Oh FFS..."

Posted on 01 October 2021, 10:10 by: Gold-kin

@nalak1 The master could take their souls by force but then the girl's bodies would be empty husks and could never be his slaves like they are now and he would not be able to absorb the soul's energies like he does when he has sex with his slaves after they have taken a soul, which would leave him in a weaken state. In order to avoid this, they have to willing submit to him and offer him their soul. Best example of this was when he took Raven's soul.

This is why he needs Wonder Woman. She is the only woman who can give birth to his child. Once she has given birth, that child will be his new body for this universe allowing him to use his full power. After this he will be able to impregnate any woman and conquer the universe. But Wonder Woman has to willing submit to him and since she is basically the Embodiment of truth, that's going to be really hard. Which is why he is letting her be corrupt from inside her "safe heaven". Its much easier for her to be corrupted by her friends and allies then it ever would be for him to do. At least this is what Black Pharaoh has said.

Posted on 05 October 2021, 15:08 by: windadept

A god-slaying armor?

https://youtu.be/W8gaZvgO9ac?t=29

Posted on 15 October 2021, 04:48 by: mugglensu

This comic realizes everyone's secret fantasy: seeing wonder woman finally get treated like the way she deserves!!

Posted on 20 October 2021, 22:21 by: lw123789

@Breedinggod... Come on, you seriously went back to a comment made 2 months ago ? How pathetic is your life for doing this to that extent ?

Posted on 25 October 2021, 03:08 by: wasd tt

Ok, I'll admit THAT I love JL's stories, especially about the sex of the female characters, we know Wonder Woman final having sex with master,but the timeline is too long,i wish have a fast-forward button, it feels like the master is raping my soul, too

Posted on 25 October 2021, 03:25 by: windadept

...Otaku was the best you had for him?

Weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaak.

Posted on 28 October 2021, 19:39 by: doteiji

Why are they calling him Kal? His name is Clark, especially to Diana and Bruce. He grew up on earth, as a human, and he befriended them as a human and a superhero. It would make more sense if they outright called him Superman. This author truly doesnt care about the characters and their history at all apart from the surface stuff.

He is the Zack Snyder of erotic fanfiction: all style, no substance

Posted on 29 October 2021, 20:53 by: doteiji

@BreedingGod I know his Kryptonian name is Kal El. But his name is Clark Kent. Thats how everyone who met him on earth calls him, aside frome maybe Supergirl, who alternates between Clark and Kal depending on the context and her mental state (for example when she is under pressure or stress tends to call him Kal). But neither Batman or Wonder Woman would refer to him as Kal. Even less when talking about him after his death.

Also the consistency of the writing is pretty much on the same level as Snyder's DCEU films. You might say he is consistent with his work, but this guy is also consistent in the same respect. They both keep screwing up their own stories and characters in the same consistent way.

Posted on 31 October 2021, 19:26 by: Leen

you know if that supergirl there shouting that shes kinda got a lot of nerve since she killed him

Posted on 08 November 2021, 10:46 by: kusanagisb_hole

@doteiji clueless

Posted on 13 November 2021, 06:06 by: EscapedDreamerD

I actually like this comic and look forward to it. who cares if the story is overused or if it has inconsistency he is taking his time to make a comic I'm pretty sure none of you are paying for so why so much hate. I mean it's not like anyone's forcing any of you guys to actually keep coming back and reading the new pages. but it seems like the same people always come back I guess they are truly fans even if it is absurd and their opinion either that or they are just truly masochist at this point.

Posted on 14 November 2021, 02:24 by: Abrion

omg so many patern:D first upload was at 2017-03-25 23:47 so
4 year and 7 month and 20 day :D so 1695 day D

omg so many patern:D first upload was at 2017-03-25 23:47 so4 year and 7 month and 20 days ago :D so 1695 day D
maybe i'm wrong, but i think its 363 patern D

Posted on 19 November 2021, 14:45 by: Neeckin

Oh no Lois look out, its NTRvember!

Posted on 21 November 2021, 03:37 by: TheKnightlyMinstrel

Another update and yet not a single image of Dogwelder or Sixpack. WHEN SHALL OUR TRUE HEROES COME FORTH!?

Posted on 24 November 2021, 21:24 by: urbanvoid

Lmao at those poses on Lex and Diana.

Posted on 26 November 2021, 17:25 by: fightbos

Lex leg broke and Diana is limbo dancing

Posted on 28 November 2021, 16:20 by: nigger0

This is... actually taking the DC comics backstories/continuities more seriously than current DC comics do (the pre-flashpoint one). As a comic reader, I'm VERY impressed.
As far as the porn goes, I'm less impressed, the corruptions happen too fast to be any fun. Raven's scene was about the only interesting one. I was actually looking forward to Stargirls and Cyclones scenes (Cyclone is super cute and has so little good porn) and they didn't get any. It was an interesting story twist but I'm disappointed.

And like the others said, there's no Section 8, Sixpack, Dogwelder and Bueno Excellente. Although to be fair, the last two could probably single handedly beat the bad guy: Dogwelder is an agent of Anubis and Bueno Excellente could out-fuck even this guy.

Posted on 28 November 2021, 21:43 by: vevans0009

Lois's corruption looks basic as hell. 8I

Posted on 29 November 2021, 21:36 by: cozzy121

OK are we now missing a cell, I could have sworn there was a different last page yesterday.

Posted on 12 December 2021, 05:59 by: El_Heffe

Alright, start the countdown for Zauriel fucking up.

Posted on 15 December 2021, 03:25 by: KuromaruX

Oh hell yeah finally someone that can stand up to the corruption and I'm sure he's not about to get absolutely fu- zzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

Posted on 16 December 2021, 06:09 by: three_iron

We haven't seen Etrigan yet ... there's someone who can save the day. Gone gone oh shitty text ... now we'll see who fucks up next!

Posted on 16 December 2021, 15:21 by: Ficfactor

Nice "The Thing" reference. I love former heroines being shown to be monstrous, disposable footsoldiers of the villain, who are dispatched by the heroes like any other horrible enemy.

Posted on 16 December 2021, 20:06 by: BreedingGod

Well TECHNICALLY they CAN’T burn in hell. When last I looked that self insert op Gary Sue has their souls in his…soul orb so they have to kill him first in order for their souls to go anywhere (but preferably with this ending with everyone being restored no exceptions). Also why the fuck is flash back? I thought he ditched to keep that Gary Sue from tapping into the Speed Force

Posted on 18 December 2021, 15:20 by: torplane

Good answer, BreendingGod. This is a stupid drawing.

Posted on 20 December 2021, 19:41 by: Kaobalist

Missing page 386?

Posted on 21 December 2021, 00:06 by: Hentairo1

P 387 referencing one of my favorite Lovecraft shorts. Sweet.

Posted on 01 January 2022, 11:08 by: fightbos

Did we miss something? How did Diana get teleported from the north pole to the BBEG?

Posted on 01 January 2022, 16:00 by: Porn Lover Yadomaru

@ fightbos I suspect she didn't. I believe this is another "dream", like when Cassie showed up out of nowhere a few pages back.

Posted on 16 January 2022, 15:22 by: fightbos

What is this now? Inception?

Posted on 21 January 2022, 03:45 by: Oddball

Ah, dreams... hopefully this means Morpheus is going to show up and either reveal this was al some warped dream of some pathetic madman, or he'll turn it into one and change everything back!

Oh, who am I kidding. If the Endless showed up, Evil Gary Stu would just turn Delerium and Death into more of his harem, after making them look weird.

Posted on 21 January 2022, 08:25 by: urbanvoid

OMG Popobawa! One of my favorite Dollop episodes!

Posted on 24 January 2022, 19:32 by: PoorWhiteTrash

Delerium already looked weird. Especially when she turned herself into one hundred and eleven singing multicolored fish.

...on the other hand with all the misery the bad guy causes in the world Despair must be having the time of her life! Hook in the eyeball fun time! C'mon hands up, who else sees her looking back from behind every mirror? Just me? ok then.

Posted on 31 January 2022, 12:49 by: urbanvoid

So is Luthor jerking of watching this or is does the smartest man alive not have cameras everywhere

Posted on 01 February 2022, 13:46 by: Solipsist

I can't even to describe how much I hate that "Mkuu" shit.
Going by the comments, there's literally no reason for it. It's just there.

Posted on 12 February 2022, 22:01 by: cozzy121

2 weeks and no update - it's it finally over?

Posted on 22 February 2022, 04:14 by: Salminar

I hate the Mkuu shit too, but having batman as the villain corrupting heroines is actually more fun than the self inserted godlike stupid villain that started it all. And corrupted Diana looks a lot sexier than the many slut with their face turning into a maw.

Now it's all over the place and it really looks like the author knows even less where he is going, but at least there is a bit more thinking about what he is drawing ... At least in my personal opinion ...

Posted on 22 February 2022, 22:15 by: minin43

Is it weird I'm most rooting for batman to come out at the end "victorious"? Fuck everyone else

Posted on 23 February 2022, 23:36 by: MadMrtvola

@minin43 Not really, I too root for demonic Batman. Corrupted Bruce, that is, not this Mkuu being in control. He and Diana at least have something resembling a proper corruption arc going on. That BF thing is too overpowered and boring to care, with his corruptions being far too brief and generic. The "heroes" act stupid, with Luthor apparently doing nothing despite clearly knowing of Batman's condition for some time. I mean, was it too hard to keep him isolated from the ladies? And, as per some vocal commentaries (not familiar with the setting myself), the whole thing is extremely OOC for everyone included, which is rarely a good thing.
From what I can tell, BF could write a decent enough story but this just isn't what we have here. Methinks he would have fared better with his Magnum Opus, if he made several connected episodes occurring in the same universe, focusing one one character at the time. And without that overpowered Marty Sue.

Posted on 24 February 2022, 05:49 by: three_iron

Soooo ... she lost her tail from one frame to the next on the same page (page 404)? Whoops, guess Bats just yanked it off in passion, eh?

Posted on 28 February 2022, 20:03 by: Salminar

Ok and now Luthor will fuck Diana to cleanse her from the corruption she got while fucking "Mkuu" ..? I guess it makes sense ... Sort of ..?

Posted on 17 March 2022, 01:45 by: Taufiq91

Why does this go one for too long? Just possess Wonder Woman already. Jesus Christ.

Posted on 20 March 2022, 13:35 by: windadept

"Yes, there are two cocks inside me."

Good to know WW can still count.

Posted on 30 March 2022, 15:59 by: jhcjr

I only clicked on this to see if it was close to being finished up. I'm done. End it already. It has gone from "meh" to 100% boring.

Posted on 08 April 2022, 15:42 by: PoorWhiteTrash

Mary's here to trade Pokemon cards.

Posted on 08 April 2022, 20:36 by: Leen

the other contradiction is if she can get here from another dimension then why can he leave and the gods barrier means jack worth shit

Posted on 14 April 2022, 21:56 by: grabeuh

@BreedingGod This parody IS poorly written. It is just a fact.
I never said otherwise, I never starred it, I never paid to read it, I don't support BlackPharaoh in any sort. Mind you: I haven't even read it in months. I don't give a fuck if it deserves a Nobel Prize of Litterature or a Razzy Award.. Nobody cares, actually.

I only dislike your "constructive criticism" because I can't stand arrogant jerks like you.

The more I read your comments the more I picture you as the comic book nerd from the Simpsons: "Boo! This character would never do that! What a Mary Sue! Worst parody ever!"

You could just ignore it and move on with your life but you seem to think you have such unspeakable knowledge that us puny mortals coud never understand: You took WRITING CLASSES!
And what better place to display your INFINITE WISDOM and lecture all the dumb people than a poorly written hentai parody comments section?
Obviously, you NEED to do it in the most aggressive and rude way possible, otherwise people would never grasp how superior you are.

Could you take a few seconds to reflect on yourself and realise just how ridiculous that stance makes you look?

I stopped counting how many hateful comments you wrote, how many hours of your life you spent complaining about how bad this comic is when actually nobody cares about it.
Why do you keep wasting your time reading somthing you despise so much?
Are you some kind of masochist who secretly jerks off reading shitty stories?
Have you been given a holy duty by God himself to smite the heresy from BlackPharaoh?
Do you come from the future to warn us that this parody will start WW3 and your only way to tell us without loosing your cover is to spit out your bitterness in the comments section?
Do you spend as much time protecting people from ALL kinds of scams? NFT bros? Fake voicemails from India? Nigerian princes kept captive? People who think Wrestling is real?
Why is THIS SPECIFIC COMIC so important to you that you will waste so much time and energy raging about it?

Think about it: there is no such thing as bad publicity. You are a part of his success!

Jokes aside: You said you are yourself a writer.
There is a proverb: "A walking idiot will always go further than a sitting genius".
Where can we find your work to appreciate some great Litterature instead of this shitty comic?
Neo / Morpheus style: "I know Kung-Fu" / "Prove it."
Or are you just sitting there and raging about that dumb BlackPharaoh who kept on walking for years while you stood still?

Posted on 18 April 2022, 04:01 by: Gold-kin

Spoilers.......................

Wonder woman will get capture and fucked by the Black Pharaoh in June or July and the sex between her and Black Pharaoh will be 2.5 chapters long

Batman gets a yellow power ring, makes a Futurama joke, and will be in a orgy with 9 of his girls

Hiro will fuck Cassadra Cain

Superman is not tactically dead and will show up in the sequel

As of right now we are at the half way point in the story. So the story won't end until some time next year.

New spoilers

This story will be between 800-900+ pages

There will be 2 huge battles;
One will be the final battle which will span between 160-170 pages, 3 chapters

And the Epilogue Battle, which will have 30 pages and 40+ characters

Doomsday will be in one of the battles, his fights scenes will be 6 pages and he will kill several nightgaunts himself.

Last edited on 19 April 2022, 07:24.

Posted on 20 April 2022, 03:10 by: KuromaruX

@Gold-kin Bummer if true. I really like Doomsday, he's just a rampaging unkillable monster but I usually like watching him go absolutely mental and tear things apart, and I absolutely know BP will somehow kill the unkillable monster. Idk how, and idc to be honest, but Doomsday's whole thing is he adapts to what put him down and it'll be a shame to see him beaten in some idiotic way that permanently kills him for his parody.

Posted on 24 April 2022, 11:22 by: IMAGELord6666

Man writing corruption porn aint really your strong point, I've read shorter stories that managed to do it a lot more engaging and actually interesting.

Posted on 28 April 2022, 09:10 by: Salminar

@grabeuh Like you said i don't give a shit about this comic, i come from time to time to see how it's turning and if maybe there is by chance something interesting. in france when something is really bad we says "on a misunderstanding it could still work" and it would apply to this. I don't read breedingGod anymore for like months, he is repeating always the same things, is really aggressive and spamming the comments, almost half the comments posted are from him trying to force everyone to think like him, juste do the same than i, simply skip the comments, it's much funnier to see other people's reaction than reading his spam.

@Gold-kin god i really hope you are joking and this is not coming from BP's website. Looks like the guy masturbating on how a genius he is and thinking his teasing will make everyone as hard as he is lol. Corruption isn't his strong point, but battles are even worst.

Posted on 28 April 2022, 18:23 by: neo54321

感觉不到什么刺激的地方，只是某个标签比较吸引人，甚至美感缺失

Posted on 28 April 2022, 19:57 by: babblingfaces

I love how BreedingGod has been angrily typing away at this comic for over two and a half years now.

Posted on 29 April 2022, 19:05 by: cozzy121

@babblingfaces I sometimes head to the comments section 1st instead of the new page! It's been far more entertaining

Posted on 01 May 2022, 00:14 by: lw123789

@babblingfaces Honestly ? It scares me. I feel kinda sad for him

Posted on 04 May 2022, 19:17 by: lw123789

@BreedingGod Dude, your comment makes no sense. Seek help

Posted on 04 May 2022, 23:11 by: MaximRed

@babblingfaces Honestly i think he's like a prophet, the comic wasn't THAT bad 2 and a half years ago, but lately it's really gotten bad. Still I come here to check the comments every new update.

Posted on 08 May 2022, 11:11 by: MadMrtvola

@Maxim Red, Honestly, on its own this comic mostly failed, since almost the beginning, as either story or entertainment, though it has its rare moments. Fortunately, BreedingGod covers the entertainment part with their "smarter-than-you" type of comments. I am curious as to why they are still so passionate about this, mayhaps it is but a hobby of theirs?

Posted on 08 May 2022, 11:19 by: lw123789

@BreedingGod nope, still didn't make sense. There was no connection between my previous comment and your answer

You are sick, dude. Get some help. You seriously need it

Posted on 08 May 2022, 19:40 by: MadMrtvola

@BreedingGod, To be fair, we are getting for free (afaik) here on SadPanda and the actual payers apparently like the thing enough to continue paying for it, else they would have stopped long ago. I am not familiar with DC, aside from some films and animations, but surely this story cannot cause any actual harm to it? I doubt most fans or any writers of DC know of its existence. We knew this comic is a butchery of all sorts months ago thus plenty of time to cool off and dismiss/ignore it for the mess it is. You can't, evidently, influence BPH to either improve or stop doing it, why prolong your own suffering? Is it a case of bile fascination and thus you simply need to vent your frustrations afterwards?

Posted on 10 May 2022, 02:04 by: unlikelypanda

Guys, I think BreedingGod has a point. Bad porn of something harms the original. In 1981, a short movie called "Star Whores" was released in VHS, and ruined Star Wars forever. Much like the public outright abandoned Pretty Cure right after the Summer ComiKet of 2007, all the bad doujin sank a franchise with so much potential. We can't let this happen to this up-and-coming small publisher, we HAVE to save DC from Black Pharaoh.

Posted on 13 May 2022, 01:20 by: lw123789

Gotta admit, you got me in the first half ^^

More seriously though, he may have a few fair points (yeah, it can happen...), but the biggest problem is his relationship to all this. It looks like an obsession, and quite fittingly is becoming "corrupted" just like those characters in the comics. It's a bit scary... He should seriously consider getting some help from a professional before doing anything stupid

Posted on 13 May 2022, 02:52 by: unlikelypanda

@BreedingGod Did you seriously just compare the impact of this comic to a movie that made $240 million in the box office worldwide? Is that how much credit you give Black Pharaoh? We all know you dedicate an unhealthy amount of time and energy to this comic, but wow...

Posted on 13 May 2022, 14:24 by: urbanvoid

He never stops, he's more OP than the comics villain.

Posted on 14 May 2022, 01:29 by: lw123789

BreedingGod calling others "idiots"........ Ironic

Posted on 14 May 2022, 08:39 by: cozzy121

@lw123789 it's the lack of self awareness that makes it funnier

Posted on 15 May 2022, 02:54 by: IMAGELord6666

dayum sometimes I come back here just to read the comments, its funny enough that the author can't write a proper corruption porn to save their life but the stuff you guys write here really are something.

Posted on 16 May 2022, 17:46 by: fightbos

Boy yall need to stop feeding the troll

Posted on 16 May 2022, 23:48 by: The Anax

I have read through your comic, Black Pharaoh, and as usual, I think you are talented on artwork (though I prefer color), but I think after seeing all this, if I may, humbly, make some suggestions? I know we talked before so you are familiar with my own adult content projects, and you know how my games have Bad Ends in them and I do them in sessions of 10, 20, 30, 40, or even 50 scenes, but usually in the 10 - 20 range? I would recommend that rather than put all your eggs into this particular basket, that if/when you finish this comic, for future ones maybe take only a few characters and do transformation/corruption/mind control in shorter, tighter stories.

I do not mean for this to become a whole giant essay, but since I have been producing this type of content for almost a decade now, I would hope my advice would be helpful. Of course, I don't know comic book characters, except for a few from Superfriends when I was a kid in the late 70's early 80's, so a lot of these characters, I never heard of. So, I'm ignorant on that front, but I think this tale may have gone in too many directions. Having focused, smaller comics would probably really help build up your fan base, especially if you, like me, do a wide range of corruptions and such. I like supporting artists (even if they do not build their own IPs) and I think you could be more successful. With all these characters I don't know, this story, while I feel like it is unfocused, also feels somewhat redundant to me.

Those "portraits of corruption" you sometimes do- those are absolutely my favorite. If you spent a month at a time making colored, focused comics based solely on each of those, I honestly think it would propel you to another level in the corruption communities. Anyway, this is my two cents as a fellow creator that is passionate about our muse and subject matter, and I hope I did not offend you in anyway. Follow your heart, obviously, but whether you consider my advice or not, I wish you the best, sir.

Posted on 17 May 2022, 07:52 by: lw123789

@fightbos At this point, it's no longer trolling, it's madness

Posted on 19 May 2022, 21:20 by: fightbos

Common sense would be to take your own advice and stop fighting this "losing battle" you speak of and move on.

Posted on 20 May 2022, 11:17 by: lw123789

That and you still got issues. You seriously need some help

Posted on 20 May 2022, 13:00 by: unlikelypanda

We the handful down here in the comments are well aware that this gallery is not a good parody, a good comic, or a good story. It is to DC what My Immortal was to Harry Potter. No one in the comments is questioning that. But there's nothing to change. That's the whole point.

With over 5600 favorites and a 4.5 rating after about 1400 votes, it's clear a lot of those who read this don't care about the quality or how true to the source material it is. And there's nothing wrong with that! Let people enjoy things you find questionable! If they want to see originally flat-chested characters with boobs the size of basketballs, heroines betraying their friends to fuck orcs and pigs, geniuses turning into dumb bimbos - let them! Shake your head in disgust, sigh over their foolishness, and go back to whatever it is you enjoy. I promise you won't change anyone's mind: you've been trying for literally years, and the 5600 favorites and 1000+ positive votes here are proof it's been futile.

Let people enjoy trash. It doesn't affect you in any way.

Posted on 20 May 2022, 16:29 by: urbanvoid

Explain to me how it's a scam.

Posted on 22 May 2022, 20:45 by: cozzy121

the reeeeeee is alive and well in these comments, keep it up Dark Pharaoh

Posted on 08 June 2022, 00:35 by: sexysolipsist

Ah that's better getting back to the death by snu snu <3

Posted on 09 June 2022, 14:57 by: urbanvoid

The free market decided bro, the only way you can stop the black pharaoh is to deliver a superior product.

Posted on 11 June 2022, 01:24 by: KuromaruX

Im...actually confused, is this still earth prime but with black superman, or are we universe hopping already? Someone explain lol

Posted on 11 June 2022, 04:47 by: BreedingGod

@KuromaruX I can answer that. Pretty much heroes from other realities are hopping over to Earth Prime and BlackPharaoh is having them lose lazily.

Also while I am still convinced this is just a scam, if SOMEONE can prove me this isn’t a scam…and don’t say ‘we get it for free on here’. Man has a Patreon so that’s where he gets his money

Posted on 11 June 2022, 15:08 by: urbanvoid

Surely you understand how patreon works. He's not making this for you, he literally doesn't care what you think because you are a not a paying customer, he's making it for the people on his patreon. It's the opposite of a scam, people pay money and get what they want in return. If they don't like it they cancel their patreon subscription, this is like basic stuff.

Posted on 12 June 2022, 09:43 by: fightbos

It's a scam when you don't know what you are paying for. Since his stuff is everywhere for free to review before you get his patreon, it isn't a scam.

Posted on 12 June 2022, 16:15 by: urbanvoid

I'm starting to think this breedinggod guy isn't all there.

Posted on 12 June 2022, 18:51 by: BreedingGod

@urbanvoid As a matter of fact I AM all there. And slander like that will get you nowhere

Posted on 12 June 2022, 20:15 by: John Doe xyz

dude this story is going slower than my grandma with a broken knee.
i think I'll die and come back in next life to see it still going on 😂

Posted on 13 June 2022, 06:20 by: EscapedDreamerD

man breedingGod you never fail every time I check the comments on this comic you are on here trolling people so hard it's not even funny anymore like dude why are you so invested in this if you don't like it

Posted on 13 June 2022, 21:36 by: fightbos

Im pretty sure he just has some screws loose

Posted on 17 June 2022, 09:30 by: lw123789

Not just some

Posted on 17 June 2022, 23:16 by: BreedingGod

@fightbos @Iw123789 once again you two show how wrong you are and have no clue what you are talking about. All my screws as you put it are tight and as I said slander like that will get you nowhere nor will it change the fact that this is a textbook scam

Posted on 18 June 2022, 01:22 by: lw123789

Once again, you are too stupid (or crazy) to realize how stupid (or crazy) you truly are and how all of this is just ridiculous for just some FREAKING FREE PORN COMIC.

AGAIN, you are not forced neither do you need to actually read it.

So... Did this comic become an addiction or some shit for you ? Please, go seek help
It's pretty clear you really need some helping hand to get you out of this

Posted on 18 June 2022, 17:20 by: BreedingGod

@Iw123789 look who’s talking! Once and for all he has a PATREON. Therefore people PAY him so by definition it is NOT free. And you are a stupid idiot who clearly has no idea what he’s talking about. And you are 100% wrong so therefore the only idiot who needs help is you. So thank you and never try to slander anyone’s mentality again since it’s crystal clear you have no idea what you are talking about. Oh and what I’m doing is being the voice of common sense to idiots like you. And considering the fact that past comments of me calling this out as a scam have been deleted has me convinced that I am right and BlackPharaoh doesn’t want it to be known as a scam.

In short Iw123789 think twice before making asinine statements like that

Posted on 18 June 2022, 22:41 by: fightbos

You talk as if people are forced to pay for his patreon... They are not. And he isn't pretending to be someone he isn't, anyone can check his work for free (and probably does so 100% of the time) before deciding to subscribe to him. You should look up the definition of scam because you don't seem to know it.

Posted on 19 June 2022, 01:01 by: lw123789

Man, you are so pathetic it's so sad... I beg you, get some help. There is clearly something wrong about you. There is no way around it

Posted on 19 June 2022, 01:24 by: BreedingGod

@fightbos Forced? No. Tricked? Yes. And a scam’s a scam. You don’t need to pretend to be anyone and no they can’t do that you dumbass

@Iw123789 says the idiot who clearly has no clue what he is talking about. How about YOU get help and take an actual course on psychology since it is 100% obvious you are talking out of your ass. And by this point you are proving you are in serious denial and are trying to slander others who see this as the scam it really is as insane.

Posted on 19 June 2022, 22:19 by: MadMrtvola

Honestly, BreedingGod, you lack characteristics to call yourself the voice of common sense and your behaviour here is a proof. Your arrogance is self-evident (even from your nickname), your rage is obsessive, you seem hellbent on making people confirm to your standards only and your actions are pointless to your proclaimed goal (or a possible trolling). After all, after years of your tirades BP continues to do his thing and gets paid for it, DC continues being popular and paid, while you impotently comment here to no avail. What, exactly, did you manage to accomplish? You also fail to realise that some people, for whatever reasons, like BP's works and are willing to pay for early access and such. They can unsubscribe at any point and if they did not so far, then they don't want to. And here you are, championing a cause nobody asked for, with no results at that. Is being the centre of attention worth it if people see you as a frothing madman? Agree to disagree with BP audience's tastes and move on already, apply your energy towards something productive. If anything, you can write, or draw, your take on this mess, show us how it should have been. P.S. I do enjoy reading your comments, if for the reasons you won't likely appreciate, heh.

Also, for fuck's sake, its not a scam. Scam - "a dishonest or illegal plan or activity, esp. one for making money". Pretending to be a bank worker and stealing money from old people is a scam. BP, in his Patreon description no less, says that this comic's pages are posted for free after few weeks. He explains what the rewards for subscription are and even has free samples for viewing. He does not promise some complex, non-OC story on the level of the DC comics, it is described as a fan fictional parody. Hell, if people can get to his Patreon then they surely can google this comic if they want to read it for free. So people are told what to expect and BP apparently delivers, ergo not a scam.

Posted on 19 June 2022, 23:05 by: BreedingGod

@MadMrtvola Says the guy who clearly doesn’t know a scam when he sees one and you have no idea how wrong you are on so many levels

Posted on 20 June 2022, 12:41 by: MadMrtvola

@BreedingGod Am I now? Blindly trusting your own assumptions will one day bite you. I, at the very least, provided arguments to support my opinion that you can't or won't refute. All you can do is essentially go "No, you" route which is childlike. If you are trolling, you honestly should put more effort because this is pathetically boring. If you are serious, well, hopefully you outgrow this phase of yours for your own sake.

Posted on 20 June 2022, 17:41 by: grabeuh

@MadMrtvola No matter how hard you'll try to communicate with BreedingTroll, his only answers will always be "you have no clue" or "you prove me right" like a broken record.
No argument, no proof, nothing at all.
The only thing he is capable of is find a new way to be more arrogant, pedantic or rude than before.

Don't waste your time, just ignore him and stop feeding the troll, it's a lost cause.

Posted on 20 June 2022, 20:19 by: Gleonomis2

It's been 5 years since this started and still the story only grow. Nice

Posted on 20 June 2022, 21:45 by: MadMrtvola

@grabeuh Oh I knew that, but I was bored and it seemed a fun idea to attempt a proper argument. The results were obvious, but not without some entertainment.

Posted on 21 June 2022, 00:19 by: lw123789

@BreedingGod Man I have no idea how you get those conclusions about me...

"you are in serious denial and are trying to slander others who see this as the scam it really is as insane."

1) I'm not slandering anyone except you

2) It's a scam ? Yeah no. You read it for free and those who pay for it kinda dictate what they want in it, so hardly a scam.

3) Whether people like it or hate it, I don't care. Even if it's a scam or not... But YOU... YOU keep coming back inflicting to yourself something you HATE and trying to destroy the fun any one could have reading this comic. I mean, come on... there are some licking this comic (I'm kinda indifferent to it, but still come back to see how it goes) and who would like to talk about it in a friendly way to maybe discuss about the upcoming pages and what's to come, but you actually punish those people by ruining their fun and forbidding any possibility for anyone trying to say something different than "AuThOR = bAd". Come on. that's boring and annoying

4) You seriously need help. I beg you, get some

Posted on 24 June 2022, 22:04 by: vevans0009

Selina makes one hot catgirl!

Okay, this fight got me interested. 8)

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Posted on 30 June 2022, 03:33 by: Indiana Jones

Page 340, 386 are missing. Can you please upload these missing pages?
Only two pages in a separate upload. Thank you so much!!

Posted on 01 July 2022, 15:45 by: vevans0009

Nasty slashes to her face. 8I But, alas it will take more than that for the turned catwoman to brought down. 8o

Sexy acrobatic fighting

The Bat and the Cat fucking?

YAY!!!

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Posted on 08 July 2022, 19:23 by: PoorWhiteTrash

Sword in the back time?

Posted on 08 July 2022, 19:55 by: tsubakimk4

@lw123789

"But YOU... YOU keep coming back inflicting to yourself something you HATE and trying to destroy the fun any one could have reading this comic."

Okay, I was content to just let this comic be bad, live and let live, all that, but I must say this. You are just dead fucking wrong. People come to this website to enjoy themselves, and I'd bet my right hand (my dominant one) they have tags at the ready to look for the newest art with the specific criteria they enjoy.

And instead, they get this juggernaut of bloated manure coasting on the single merit of being comic book related. "but you actually punish those people by ruining their fun" Yeah, you put it exactly right, brother.

It wouldn't be so bad if not for one simple reason :BlackPharaoh is actually a good artist, and he's wasting his talent with this. God, man, give us more The Inner Joke or Live Lewd, Dwell Evil. Those are goddamn great ! This is not. Move on, to something greater ! You can do it ! I hope in my heart of hearts than you will ! You are being wasted !

Posted on 08 July 2022, 22:00 by: fightbos

@tsubakimk4 you realise these comics are commissions? If you are such a big fan of him and want him to do "greater things" why don't you commission something? Entitled prick.

Posted on 12 July 2022, 20:39 by: vevans0009

Pierced during mid-coitus. ;P

Posted on 12 July 2022, 20:48 by: Gold-kin

BP says he is actually doing a sequel to Live Lewd, Dwell Evil. He hasn't decided yet on whether to do a prequel or a sequel to the Inner Joke and he has a Black Caanary story coming out after the Allowance, which will also have a sequel. FS is his bread and butter though. As this story still has another year before its finished and it will have I think 2 sequels.

Posted on 12 July 2022, 21:04 by: PoorWhiteTrash

Sword in the back time.

Posted on 16 July 2022, 21:04 by: doteiji

page 76: "...and consuming their souls in an irreversible transformation."
page 77: "This isn't some possesion (...)Their souls have been stripped and twisted..."
page 243: Constantine is holding in his hands the souls consumed by Nyarlatothep, including Zatanna, reinforcing the fact that the heroines get their souls removed from their bodies.
page 442: Katana attacks Selina with her sword, which absorbs souls, and what happens? the real Selina somehow speaks to Bruce. Even though her soul should be right now part of Nyarlatothep, and if it isnt by some unknown reason, it should have been absorbed along the Nightgaunt Selina.

Fuck it, who wants continuity anyway...

I know many people enjoy this comic, and feel free to continue, but we have reached the point where the author is actively contradicting his own work.

Posted on 16 July 2022, 21:39 by: cozzy121

a new BreedingGod has arrived...

Posted on 16 July 2022, 23:06 by: urbanvoid

she says "free me" implying her soul is still trapped

Posted on 17 July 2022, 05:38 by: tsubakimk4

At this juncture, I'm fairly certain I could write the ending of this endeavor and have it be more satisfying than the entirety of its run.

Posted on 17 July 2022, 12:40 by: cassandra112

"This is Katana, her sword traps the souls."

But yeah, "real selina" being underneath seems to contradict continuity. Idk, could be Nightgaunt Selina pretending to be restored, to get Bruce to attack Katana and destroy her soulsword.

Posted on 17 July 2022, 17:36 by: vevans0009

Well, that happened. 8I

Posted on 18 July 2022, 06:51 by: kain11

You know what I really like in my porn? People just disintegrating into dust. I especially enjoy it when the artist can't even fucking draw muscle. It looks like she just develops awful sores.

Posted on 18 July 2022, 17:13 by: urbanvoid

yeah the quality of the art has really declined since the first pages.

Posted on 20 July 2022, 17:58 by: Vigil0

So... are they just going to ignore the fact that, that katana just killed one of the infected? Permanently.

The whole story the nightgaunts have healed from everything, and the closet that came to dealing with one was Constantine, and this sword just dusted one easy-peasy.

I mean, yeah, Batman is infected/possessed and probably not at his game, and/or focused on getting what he needs and GTFO-ing out of Gotham before more enemies arrive, but I would think there would be some reaction to something that could put down one of the monsters.

Granted Selina was a normal human--corrupted and granted enhanced strength/agility--but baseline durability, so she could be stabbed. Soul taker probably wouldn't work on any corrupted wtih extra durability. Might be able to kill super girl and power girl, since they have a baseline weakness to magic, but not sure if it would count.

Posted on 20 July 2022, 20:54 by: cozzy121

jesus, more pseudo breedinggods are appearing daily

Posted on 20 July 2022, 21:11 by: doteiji

@cozzy121 So any criticism, even if polite or coherently written and thought is equal to a new BreedingGod? What a standard to live by...

Posted on 21 July 2022, 06:18 by: IMAGELord6666

Ignoring the dogshit plot of this comic, this is getting shittier by each update, the paneling sucks ass, the way the angle shots are drawn and positioned are so stiff that scenes looked like they were drawn by an amateur, and the way the artist writes corruption porn sucks. Cant feel jack shit when your fav super heroine gets turned into a sex addicted slut demon, only disappointment of how laughable its been set up in this story, seeing as I've seen shorter and better drawn comics/doujins that manages to capture the "corruption" part in their stories more so than this...

Posted on 21 July 2022, 15:37 by: urbanvoid

His new shit is also using the same art style and it looks even worse with color.

Posted on 21 July 2022, 19:34 by: cozzy121

Im sorry @doteiji I guess I miss that crazy little bastard like you wouldn't believe.... that and it's an adult comic parody

Posted on 24 July 2022, 18:46 by: Leen

no offense but most of you yelled at him for any criticism and down-voted any thing he said and up-voted anything praising BP so what are people supposed to think then they provide a opposite opinion.

Posted on 24 July 2022, 21:47 by: fightbos

Yeah she's corrupted and leading batman to the BBEG

Posted on 24 July 2022, 22:16 by: urbanvoid

It's gonna be the Joker right?

Posted on 25 July 2022, 11:35 by: Maryu

This Shit is a Master Piece my friends. Thanks.

Posted on 27 July 2022, 20:51 by: cozzy121

None taken @Leen, but please don't imply that his "criticism" wasn't anything less than deranged ranting at either the artist or anyone else he turned his crazy eyes on in the comments section

Posted on 28 July 2022, 08:32 by: Lady-Labia

You know what the funny thing is about this? These characters have been through so much, their comics being so wide reaching, it genuinely feels like this could be a rogue comic by some of the writers. The writing doesn't have to even be good, I cannot remember the last time the official writers were very good anyways.

Posted on 28 July 2022, 10:51 by: grabeuh

@Leen We did not yelled at BreedingTroll for his criticism, we yelled at him because IT NEVER WAS criticism.
He was either just a (bad) troll or an angry little man using criticism as a pretext to spit his hate on every occasion he could, in the most arrogant way possible, making false claims and insulting other people.

Criticism is always welcomed, but just rage like his, again and again and again and again, is not criticism. It's just wasted time for everyone.

Posted on 29 July 2022, 04:22 by: IMAGELord6666

Where is BreedingGod anyway? it has been awhile since I saw him around and without him its kinda boring without him stirring up some new drama each update.

Posted on 31 July 2022, 09:54 by: PoorWhiteTrash

"just one more thing" Batman's been possessed by Columbo all along! I always knew he was getting laid left right and centre.

Posted on 04 August 2022, 23:25 by: lord_foebane

My money is on Katana being a sleeper agent, that story of them surviving sounds way too sus.

Posted on 08 August 2022, 06:19 by: Gold-kin

Doteiji and Vigil0, BP explained that Katana's sword is able to kill the Nightgaunts. They do not posses a soul because it's inside the Master, so when the sword strikes them the sword's power breaks them free of the master but because they have no soul their body disintegrates cause their's no soul to absorb. But before they died they have a moment of clarity or freedom if you will. That was his explanation anyways.

Lord Foebane, BP has said there is a traitor in Lex and Batman's resistance group but hasn't revealed who it is, only that they work for the Master. But he has said Katana is not a traitor and she will be in the sequels.

Posted on 08 August 2022, 20:13 by: doteiji

@Gold-kin That is a fair explanation. It is believable that Katana's sword can kill the Nightgaunts, although the fact that their body desintegrates because there is no soul to absorb is a bit weak.

That still doesn't explain my main criticism, which is the fact that Selina talked with Bruce before completely vanish. According to the author's work (and your own explanation by the way), the Nightgaunts do not posses a soul, and the souls of the corrupted heroines are at the very least trapped within Nyarlatothep. And if it's not, it should have been absorbed by the sword, not released. So that scene is not possible.

Posted on 09 August 2022, 20:21 by: Gold-kin

Doteiji I don't really understand your criticism. I agree with you about Selina's body disintegrating, but I don't understand why her talking to Batman for a few seconds is wrong.

The soul keeps her alive it doesn't give her the ability to speak. Unless you are thinking that as soon as the soul is absorbed they should instantly die. If that's the case then I understand but that's not a universal rule. My thinking is that once the Master took her soul he basically shot her, but she didn't die right away because his power was keeping her body alive. Once Katana struck her his power over her dispelled and she died slowly from her wound. You can still speak when you are shot and that's how I interrupted that scene.

Posted on 10 August 2022, 09:27 by: doteiji

@Gold-kin we could start a philosiphical debate over the nature of the soul, and its implications, but ill keep this in the context of this comic.

During the confrontation between Nyarlatothep and Constantine, we can clearly see the soul of Zatanna trapped and speaking within the master. By that logic every corrupted heroine is in there as well, and their awareness and ability to speak their mind is tied to it.

So if Selina is able to speak to Bruce, with her original personality just before she vanishes, there is a clear break in continuity. Or retcon. Or copout. Call it whatever you want.

And if what you are saying about Katana' sword dispelling the power of Nyarlatothep is correct:

A) It is a new ability the sword has without any setup or explanation
B) It did so while they were god knows how much distance apart
C) It renders the whole God Armor they are trying to construct pointless since the sword will do just fine

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Posted on 12 August 2022, 09:14 by: Porn Lover Yadomaru

Pg. 452 is missing.

Posted on 17 August 2022, 05:57 by: Gold-kin

@doteiji I think I see where you going with this, but there are a few things you should know. BP has said the Master didn't just absorb their soul, he will in time digest it like it was food. The Master won't say when he has digested the souls but I guess there will be a scene in the story that will make it clear the souls are gone.

Now as for the girl's souls and their bodies, as I said before there are no rules set in stone that one has to follow for this to make sense if you will. From what I'm getting at you seem to think that once the soul is gone from the body then it's nothing more then a empty husk that can't move, speak, or think for itself unless the soul is returned to it's body or the body is being controlled by some other power. If I'm wrong in anyway let me know.

What BP has said that once the spell or control the Master has over the girl's is broken that they are given just a small amount of time of freedom before they die because they have no soul. The soul doesn't give them the ability to speak or have a personality, its basically the body's life force that happens to mirror its body. Its basically if someone were to rip your heart out you wouldn't die instantly, you may say a word or two before you die (I'm not a medical person so if I'm wrong that's fine, I'm just going by what I've seen in media), I think that's where BP was going at. But we can agree to disagree.

As for Katan's sword I'm a Marvel guy not a DC one, so I wouldn't have any idea how her sword works. But BP is a very big DC fanboy who actually knows a lot about DC. You can always go to his discord and engage with conversation with him. He is very polite and engaging with others. If you ask him why he did this and this in his story he will answer and explain himself to you.

Posted on 19 August 2022, 14:16 by: fightbos

Look at you all trying to make sense of a low-writing corruption story mess.

Posted on 24 August 2022, 17:30 by: jhcjr

Is this crap ever going to end? I keep clicking on it hoping to see an ending.

Posted on 05 September 2022, 13:21 by: Oddball

This isn't even fun to make fun of anymore.

Posted on 10 September 2022, 14:07 by: MaximRed

This isn't the same without BreedingGod, hope they come back soon.

Posted on 13 September 2022, 19:55 by: cozzy121

@maximRed wherever he is, I'm sure he's frothing at the mouth somewhere

Posted on 16 September 2022, 05:08 by: TheKnightlyMinstrel

It has been an age, but I still see a lack of Dogwelder and Six Pack, not even Beuno Excellante. This disappoints me on a spiritual level.

Posted on 01 October 2022, 14:36 by: z415214820

不知道有没有兄弟看着看着感觉人物的样子好像都是一样

Posted on 17 October 2022, 04:52 by: minin43

The moment I've been the most curious about. Will Batman's corruption in some way fuck up whatshisface's corruption of diana?

... does anyone care at this point?

Posted on 17 October 2022, 20:10 by: cozzy121

@minin43 I reckon we care about as much as the author

Posted on 20 October 2022, 19:14 by: vevans0009

HOPE WW's corrupted form is creative.

Posted on 25 October 2022, 13:31 by: lw123789

Oh boy, I just saw that I had that sitting in my mails since June...

If you guys missed BreedingGod... Well, clearly this guy got a serious problem in his head. Got that from him :

Since I was banned from the comments I am going to say this to you: everything you claim about myself and the parody is wrong. You are in textbook denial that it is a scam. And you CLEARLY have no idea what you are talking about in terms of psychology. If anyone needs help it’s you and you alone. Thank you and NEVER try to practice psychology again. Oh and the parody is the definition of a scam. For example, him claiming to give the heroes a chance. What an incredible lie. How about you use that brain and ACTUALLY think?
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Soooo... Does anybody know a good shrink ?

Posted on 25 October 2022, 19:06 by: Elveran

So, he want to kill his father ? Sorry but this now have only one ending. They all are annihilated by Azathoth by a mere thoughts. Sorry but no amount of followers or sex will ever make Nyarlathotep a danger to the Supreme Lord and Creator of All Things. Nyarlathotep cannot even harm Azathoth as all things, even Outer Gods, he is merely a part of his dream.

Posted on 25 October 2022, 19:53 by: cozzy121

@lw123789 the most amazing thing about that, to me, is you can get banned from the comments section here! oh well..

Posted on 26 October 2022, 00:22 by: lw123789

Yeah, I didn't even know it was possible to get banned for comments here either.

I mean... How low or wrong can you get to get BANNED on a... HENTAI/PORN SHARING WEBSITE ???

When I said this dude needed help, I might have been not far from the truth

Posted on 26 October 2022, 22:07 by: hagscrud

@lw123789 Dude lacks some self awareness and meds.

Posted on 05 November 2022, 12:07 by: Salminar

God for a second i thought we were going to the end of this. I mean WW captured and turned, we were waiting for it from the cover, so i was expecting, ok we got her turn into a ugly demon and we can leave this with no remorse ...
But no ... There is another chapter cutting what could have been fun and delaying it again ... Oh man ...

Posted on 11 November 2022, 22:27 by: MaximRed

I want breeding god back, unban the bean, he was half the entertainment of this collection

Posted on 22 November 2022, 18:05 by: cozzy121

man, this is a bad month for updates..

Posted on 28 November 2022, 16:43 by: cozzy121

.. Saved by 5 pages worth of updates in 1 go!

Posted on 30 November 2022, 17:00 by: vevans0009

Curious how much Cheetah will change? Right now, not so much.

Posted on 30 November 2022, 23:37 by: kenbazzo

strange plot😆

Posted on 02 December 2022, 19:37 by: tjackson41

....Is Breeding God Really Banned? If so, Your Telling me that you can get banned from giving comments? ... Wow, I Used to get annoyed seeing his/her Comments, But After a while I came here just to see what he/She said... because they actually were pretty entertaining....I guess I miss Breeding God

Posted on 04 December 2022, 04:30 by: IMAGELord6666

#FreeBreedingGod

Posted on 10 December 2022, 20:04 by: MaximRed

#FreeBreedingGod

Posted on 13 December 2022, 05:01 by: SarienFates

#FreeBreedingGod

Posted on 13 December 2022, 22:49 by: sexysolipsist

Need more male death by snu snu with gallons of cum, more drawn out. This new panel with the cum covered ladies is great.

Posted on 20 December 2022, 05:50 by: nalak1

Okay the text scrolling across Diana is a nice change of pace in the designs, I'm guessing its supposed to be a getting turned into a necronomicon varient or whatever. I'm iffy on the line about the shadow of the mother of a thousand young since following it up by calling it the start of the age of nyal seems to imply the author thinks those entities are the same, but if it keeps listing others that can be overlooked.

Posted on 30 December 2022, 07:40 by: 天空之境

https://e-hentai.org/g/2408511/c046aff7f6/

Posted on 12 January 2023, 05:55 by: nalak1

You think he knows you can't chant a libation since libations are explicitly drinks? Probably not.

Posted on 12 January 2023, 06:19 by: kain11

Who knew corruption could be so damn boring.

Posted on 15 January 2023, 02:57 by: hagscrud

If you still care about BreedingGod, just like lw had a message in a box and decided to see how it will go with messages for some time. Had a small hope for reason, but ultimately it was not so different than above section.

We will see what he's gonna say once he get unbanned, as comic is still going.

Posted on 18 January 2023, 12:37 by: yu_10_10

This really pollutes my ntr feed. Zzzzzz

Posted on 19 January 2023, 13:06 by: poz

@nalak1 I will be really surprised if she will not turn out ugly as fuck in the end

Posted on 20 January 2023, 17:45 by: vevans0009

Hope her new form won't be generic.....

Posted on 24 January 2023, 08:03 by: Angel71090

I...honestly don't get all the hate here. Is this the best writing in the world? No. Is it consistent with canon? No, but then again DC canon has been bent over a barrel and fucked by DC itself so many times that I'm pretty sure it could outlast Tep here (so not gonna say he's full name here. The art is nice, the creator is trying to tell a story, and while it might not be the most coherent, it's still not the worst I've read, but dear God. With the way some of you go on you'd think this guy was the fusion of Shadman and Pegasus ffs.

Seriously, I don't get it, why the hate? I've seen and read so...SO much worse on here and afar before.

@BlackPharaoh I'm sorry you have to deal with this crap. While I agree the story has many places where it can improve, (pacing, character development, and generally a bit more coherency come to mind), I also think you are trying your best and you have a story here, and back it up with good art. I am interested in seeing how this ends, but if I might make a suggestion?

If/when you make a follow ups to this, try and tone down how many characters are involved. You are pulling a RWBY and having too many people on screen at one time that either get shunted off to the side and aren't really seen again, or get killed off so fast it seems like it's a waste of time for them to be there. You do better with smaller casts. Allowance and Inner Joke prove that.

Also, consider a rewrite of this at some point, and have someone else help you write it, preferably someone who's writing style you really like. I get having an idea that's hard to put into words and on paper in your head. I have disgraphia and can't draw worth shit even on my best day, so you easily one up me there, but as you yourself admitted, you aren't the best writer. Get a friend with a good sense of writing to help you put your ideas into words, and you should be able to make this thing a lot better.

Anyway, I'm in this for the long haul and will keep an eye on it. Im interested to see how this goes.

Also, just for shits and giggles, you should toss in those guys they keep asking for here, Dogwelder,Sixpack and Bueno Excellente at some point. Not like have them drained or something like that out of spite, but as a background thing or a quick joke. That's one thing that would perk this up on occasion, a bit of humor and levity to offset the depressive and apocalyptic nature of what's happening.

Posted on 24 January 2023, 21:18 by: PoorWhiteTrash

Me, commenting way up page in 2018 " if the mighty Sixpack, Bueno Excellente and Dogwelder can't stand them what hope has humanity? "

Me, commenting way down page when it's finished in 2027 "Wow, I still can't believe it was Detective Chimp who saved reality and went to Disneyland to celebrate."

Posted on 24 January 2023, 22:13 by: MadMrtvola

@Angel71090, I can't say I am outright hating this comic. Heck, I am not even a reader of DC. That said, there are many reasons to dislike it.
To begin with, the main antagonist feels like an overpowered self-insert of the author, which is rarely good or interesting. He is literally a sex god, can almost instantly corrupt any female, can take on almost anyone with naught but his tentacles and cocks, is almost invincible and his minions are immortal powerhouses in their own right. Entire pantheons and all kinds of entities repeatedly fail to meaningfully oppose him. Secondly, the very process of corruption of side characters is far too quick, repetitive and unimaginative; BF defeats women, she cannot resist his aura and succumb to the pleasure in a few minutes. The issue is worsened by the sheer amount of corrupted women. Corruption benefits more from the quality of it, not the quantity. What we have here is unexciting repetition on multiple levels, from the acts to the plot advancements.

Ironically, the corruption of Batman and Wonder Woman is instead far too slow. It took about six years (!) of real life for that particular plotline to reach some meaningful fruition and its is not even completed yet. While the idea of their slow defilement is sound in principle, its realisation fails to impress. Black Pharaoh's other works show that he can make a decent story but this one is too large of a scale for its own good.

The good side is repeatedly shown to be OOC levels of stupid (looking at you, Constantine), with, for example, Demon Batman explicitly being allowed to roam the base and demonise the survivor heroines at his leisure. At the same time, the heroes can do nothing to cure WW or Batman from their affliction despite all the magic and technology they should have access too. From what I gather there are also multiple cases of mischaracterisation, which is rarely good.
In the end, Forsaken Souls not being the worst of its kind is not enough of a reason to like it. Yet it can be more than enough to despise it.

Posted on 24 January 2023, 22:57 by: The Anax

My work has sometimes been compared to Lovecraft, though I do not know much about him. He was apparently quite racist, and I was surprised here to see whoever that girl is in the current final panel say "Niggurath" which obviously sounds like you know what. But I looked it up, and it appears it's a female deity. It's some incantation to resurrect the dead. I've always made up my own characters and universe, rather than take them from other IPs, and this appears interesting. It's comic book people (granted I hardly know any of them), mixed with that Lovecraft guy. I always check every few months to see if he's moved on to another project, not yet, but this seems to be coming (maybe?) close to the end.

Posted on 25 January 2023, 17:17 by: lw123789

"My work has sometimes been compared to Lovecraft,"...

BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

@hagscrud : got a second one in november apparently (I just checked after reading your comment) : "And with that you just proved that you’re an idiot with no clue what you are talking about. First off I am of sound mind. Second of all I know a scam when I see one and this is one "

Man, the dude is the complete opposite of "sound in mind". The worst part ? It means he still come here, even though he hates the comics and can't comment...

Hi Breedingod ! How is it to be that "sound in mind" ? You ok buddy ?

Posted on 29 January 2023, 22:51 by: fightbos

"black goat of the woods is coming" so another chtulhu outer god is going to show herself, or is he turning Wonder Woman into Shub-Niggurath?

Posted on 04 February 2023, 23:24 by: The Anax

@lw123789 - You are a fan of mine? It does come up doesn't it a few times a year in the Discord or the adult game forums. I tried to read one of his books, but it was rather boring to me and definitely seemed asexual, but I think the folks that say that my work is like Lovecraft's are probably talking more about my Outer Darkness stuff you think? Usually I either hear it regarding my Infectulon aliens and then the Dark Gods I made which are all obviously based on real-world religions like Nergal and my Nergalian Demons. I don't know. Anyway, glad you like it! I certainly do not knock Black Pharoah for only using other intellectual properties besides making his own, and like I said, I think it is interesting.

I am certainly looking forward to seeing what Black Pharoah will work on next after this. My hope is much shorter tales (like the commissioned Bad Ends I make, maybe 50 - 60 panels long at MOST), and I am hoping they will contain less characters. As a professional author, if you have too many people it is hard to keep track, develop characters, or have reader's create attachments. And, of course, it is unwise to put characters in that serve no point (which this tale here seems to bring people in just to have them instantly killed off, again though I know very little about comic books). So, I think shorter novels, even if they use characters from tv shows and cartoons and such, will be a lot more stimulating erotically while also being much easier for the readers to enjoy.

Posted on 05 February 2023, 04:27 by: Hentairo1

On the latest page (492), I think you mean 'depravity.'

Posted on 06 February 2023, 16:43 by: lw123789

@The Anax... Honestly, I was just making fun of someone daring to say his work was compared to Lovecraft, then saying something as dumb FREAKINGLY STUPID as " Hur DUUUUUUURRR Niggurath sOuNDs LiKE ThE N-WoRd Hur DUUUUUUURRR"

Posted on 06 February 2023, 22:29 by: The Anax

Oh, I misunderstood! My work actually often is compared to his though, so it is not daring for me to say that. But, while immaturely stated, I respect your opinion.

Posted on 09 February 2023, 02:52 by: shouthedreamer

At this point I'm just sticking around to see where this train wreck of a story goes.

Posted on 09 February 2023, 14:57 by: doteiji

@shouthedreamer i disagree. The trainwreck was years ago. At this point is just us passing by the scene and wondering why there are still pieces and stains all over the place when it should already be clean.

Posted on 10 February 2023, 18:52 by: cozzy121

Just when you'd think you'd miss the crazyness of breedinggod in the comments section, a new challenger appears. Everybody give a forsaken souls welcome to The Anax

Posted on 12 February 2023, 12:43 by: Neeckin

The Anx at the very least has several completed works under their belt, I'd be interested on their thoughts about the story, seeing as how some of the stuff has run into the same general corruption vein.

Posted on 12 February 2023, 23:04 by: The Anax

@Neeckin - I appreciate you! Please don't shoot the messenger if you disagree with any of my thoughts as Neeckin asked me lol And also, Black Pharoah, again, I think you are doing well and are in the process of learning and I totally support you and feel free to pop into my Discord Server to chat or DM me there in Discord if you want any advice, anytime, as I love to support the community and artists/writers. I have now almost a decade of experience making corruption content with a heavy slant towards story. I think personally that the idea Black Pharoah had was sound. The transformations are good, the art is good (and he gets better over time), but what I think happened was that he was completely new to creatively writing a story. As you might know, I am almost 50 years old, and in the course of my creative writing I am sure I have written tens of millions of words over thousands of stories (even just my corruption content over the last 10 years is more than 1.5 million words of content), and what he did here was something I did back in middle school when I first started writing stories. For my time it was He-Man and the Masters of the Universe, and the story I wrote tried to bring in every single character on both He-Man's and Skeletor's side. By the end of my 8th grade year, it filled up an entire notebook lol

This gives me that vibe that when he started, it was based, like my own work, on some fantasies he had. Then he began to bring in more and more characters. He found that he was making decent money on Patreon as well, and part of his possible reason for the tale going so long is because he might be scared to finish it up. Same thing happened to me on Slugs and Bugs. When I finished the first one, I was worried no one would patron me for Call of the Cursed One- but they did. And now, look at me, creating content is all I do, I don't even have a "real world" job anymore. But, I know that fear I felt was real. In black Pharoah's case, I have mentioned to him many times that he is good at what he does, great at some of it, but he needs to focus. Right now, like in my middle school days, he's been all over the place. If he would keep his comics to less than 100 scenes (I'd probably aim even lower), only use 6 or less characters, and make each tale about different corruptions, I think he would actually become more financially successful. Many of his "Portraits of Corruption" as you have seen follow a lot of Anaxverse type scenarios and are awesome.

In this story, he was not focused enough, and much like my prattling on this subject, the story never ends. Now, I do not know comic books stuff well, but I do know story telling, and bringing characters in to just instantly kill them off makes no literary sense. Usually stories also have things like character development, but here it's essentially a hodgepodge of "bad ends" for one female character after another. That works well if they are separated, like in my projects, but all in one story with essentially the exact same fate repeated can make even the erotic side of the story become eventually boring. Part of good corruption fetish writing is building up a good character- and watching them slowly succumb. In most cases of this tale, the corruption is instantaneous. Again, quick transformative corruption CAN work, and does in my bad ends, but if it was a long story like this one, it loses the appeal after a few times.

He does some are neat things that pop up which are different, like whoever the mermaid lady was in, I think it was Atlantis? She was cool, but that whole part was brought in without any rhyme or reason and disappeared as quickly and abruptly. Another was a cyborg guy and there was a woman that got infected with nanites. That was pretty hot, but again, it was gone. These type of things as stand alone tales would really be far more erotically arousing, but here they came and went as fanciful thoughts that served little or no real purpose to the story. In fact, much of what happens here has little impact on the overall tale and is very similar and repetitive. I will add that one CAN have a virtually indestructible villain (like me, The Anax), but even I have limitations as you know from the novel centered on me as the antagonist. To have a Mary Sue in a story, it will ruin it. And, I think that here his main evil character (and please forgive me as I cannot even keep up with the names), might be a bit too overpowered. There needs to be some rules and structure and at least some possible threat to the baddie, regardless of how powerful they are. In my tale, in regards to me, sunlight is a big factor, but my skull and stopping Evelyn from obtaining it is my major weakness, and the combination of the two, is how I am defeated in the end. This tentacle guy with the many eyes, feels a bit "too" much to me, just an opinion.

TLDR: I'd sum it up by saying that I would humbly suggest with my extensive knowledge on this fetish and subject, that Black Pharoah does one of two things after he finishes this story. I'd suggest that he either take his "Portraits of Corruption" and turn them into colored comics that are no more than 100 panels long (aim for 60) with only a few characters in each story. OR I would suggest that he do the art and hire writers/volunteer writers/commissions only work where a decent creative writer does all the story (or most) and he does the art. I think he is getting good practice though, his spelling as improved over time along with his artistic abilities, but I won't be able to see how much his writing abilities have improved until he finishes this.

P.S. By the by, I would add that I would also suggest that he only work on ONE project at a time. I think that would also help him focus better, if he has only one story in his mind at a time. I would do patreon as he does and share my work as he does, but once I finished each colored comic, I would also sell them with something like a pin or stickers or something else as a perk and for more support. To reiterate at the end here, please don't shoot the messenger if you disagree with any of my thoughts as Neeckin asked me lol And also, Black Pharoah, again, I want to say that I think you are doing well and are in the process of learning and I 100% support you and feel free to pop into my Discord or DM me there if you want any advice, anytime, as I love to support the community and artists/writers.

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Posted on 14 February 2023, 18:33 by: tjackson41

I'm The Antjack & I Totally Support The Anax.....

Posted on 16 February 2023, 17:48 by: vevans0009

Hope she is not another pointy elf chick. Lets get crazy with her entire bod, please!

Posted on 17 February 2023, 09:08 by: femboydoomervapegod

You can see the shadow of what she'll become on page 138. Then on pages 210 and 211 you can see her from the front. The horns and the crest on her forehead are identical in both images. It'd be disappointing if that's what she looks like post-transformation. She's presumably becoming an outer god so her new form should be pretty freaky. The only way that such a generic appearance would work is if it was merely a humanoid form she could assume to hide the truly eldritch thing beneath that's revealed later.

Posted on 21 February 2023, 03:52 by: Mekoruu

Are we there yet?

Posted on 21 February 2023, 10:49 by: l4chuga

Goddamn... This transformation time puts DBZ to shame.

Posted on 21 February 2023, 17:15 by: Pyr00tje

That last page feels like a nod to the Dinaranger manga. Still... RIP Dinaranger, you were cancelled when it got good. :(

Posted on 21 February 2023, 20:32 by: vevans0009

Encased? Okay, okay this is different so far. 8o

Posted on 22 February 2023, 18:57 by: cozzy121

@Mekoruu not far now!

Posted on 08 March 2023, 08:38 by: doteiji

Hey, the comic is now 500+ pages long! Congratulations!

To celebrate this milestone, here is a fun fact: There are right now 501 pages published here, but according to the number located in each page, last one published is 508. This means there are at leas 7 pages missing.

But wait, if we go back to the beginning, the first 3 pages are the front cover, the back cover, and notes from the author, and this ones are not numbered. So if we take those into account, it means that in fact there are 10 pages missing.

Now let me propose a challenge. Be the first one to read the whole comic again without looking at the page numbers and try to guess the numbers of the pages missing. Surely such holes in continuity would be enough to pinpoint easily. First person to get all right gets a cookie.

Posted on 16 March 2023, 20:59 by: vevans0009

Monster-Batman PAWNCH!!!

Posted on 20 March 2023, 20:12 by: Iscandar

这玩意似乎是长期更新的？

Posted on 21 March 2023, 01:54 by: lw123789

Grandmother ???

Posted on 27 March 2023, 05:19 by: Destichado

Yeah, Damien is Bruce's son. So if June says Bruce is a motherfucker, then it's Damien's grandmother she's talking about.
Also, I want Demon-Bruce to win.

Posted on 02 April 2023, 11:35 by: fightbos

Everytime the story gets somewhere he seems to get bored and start a new story within the story.............

Posted on 05 April 2023, 22:52 by: MaximRed

and just like that, bruce gets cured, let me guess, some bullshit will undo everything that happened to wonder woman too eh?

Posted on 22 April 2023, 00:29 by: cozzy121

fuck me, this had been going for 6years,

Posted on 28 April 2023, 18:39 by: N00bisZed

We were at the “get on with it” phase of this comic 2 years ago, AND WE’RE STILL HERE.

Posted on 29 April 2023, 16:17 by: vevans0009

Oh hey, Lashina shows up. Wonder what her "Gaunt" fomr would look like?

Posted on 04 May 2023, 19:50 by: apopp

Oh look its a new Young Master(Any female hero) waiting to get slapped down...

Posted on 04 May 2023, 22:52 by: lw123789

Well... That was fast

Posted on 05 May 2023, 00:08 by: Salminar

At least it's something a bit different than all we see for ... Years now? But yeah character introduced now don't even survives 3 pages ... It's worst than Games of Thrones.

Posted on 06 May 2023, 04:18 by: poisonace_

Holy fuck, I wonder what other obscure ass character that had 13 total pages of comic expose BlackPharaoh will pull up again. Like let's pick the villan Superman's nutsack was in a 86 mile proximity once during the early drafts for the comic back in the 1980's

Posted on 08 May 2023, 16:51 by: vevans0009

Parastic control, eh?

Posted on 08 May 2023, 17:27 by: tonyxxx

At-least once a year I check this comment section just to see if it's still salty and it always is, without failure, it's just funny and endearing at this point.

Posted on 12 May 2023, 16:28 by: nigger0

I kind of expected Darkseid's furies to last a bit longer than that.

Posted on 13 May 2023, 03:03 by: Nyctelios

5 pages of Darkseid's best warriors and the last one there is not even a struggle...Is this becoming a rush job?

Posted on 16 May 2023, 18:51 by: NewDoggy

I've read this comic... and for the most part, every scene is essentially a re-write of Camp Crystal Counselors showing up each summer utterly clueless of all the death and mayhem of the previous summer. Every single person is a complete dumb-shit, vacuous and self-absorbed, utterly unprepared and ill-equipped for the coming, inevitable ambush.
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It's so freakishly stupid how everyone behaves... and the story is essentially Battlestar Galactica's "Who is Baltar Fucking This Week?", only they swapped out Baltar for Batman.. *shrug*

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Posted on 16 May 2023, 20:03 by: nigger0

@Nyctelios: I suppose it could be explained with the fact that the bad guy has grown power significantly.

Posted on 21 May 2023, 05:51 by: hermit20

Jesus Christ, this shit is still going?

Posted on 25 May 2023, 04:00 by: Oddball

At this point, I think we all need to accept that nobody in this story is going to act the slightest bit competent, nobody is going to be able to put up a fight against God Mode Mary Sue Self-Insert, and the story will never ever end.

Posted on 25 May 2023, 05:33 by: apopp

Confirmed, this is a series where only the strongest heros struggle to hit double digits IQ. Barely.

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Posted on 25 May 2023, 05:50 by: cozzy121

lol, someone got this comic flagged "offensive to everyone"

Posted on 25 May 2023, 16:19 by: PoorWhiteTrash

Anything with specific tags gets that flag - usually content that is more controversial like snuff - which is what does it here - but also guro, scat, and Welsh.

Posted on 04 June 2023, 16:29 by: vevans0009

Dem Batty hotties!

Posted on 08 June 2023, 17:13 by: jhcjr

This is still moving forward? It has gotten way boring. Sh!t story...

Posted on 28 June 2023, 06:18 by: kain11

Put your bets on demon chick having been corrupted somehow and going wild and ruining this moment with the sword. The English is getting worse too, as has the actual speech bubbles. Wish I could do such shoddy work and make money.

Posted on 28 June 2023, 14:58 by: cozzy121

Half a cell is considered an update? fucks sake

Posted on 04 July 2023, 19:20 by: TheKnightlyMinstrel

Yet another turn of the sun, our heroes Dogwelder, Sixpack, and Bueno Excellente are nowhere to be seen. Dark times are upon this comic. Dark times for all.

Posted on 10 July 2023, 17:53 by: nigger0

"our heroes Dogwelder, Sixpack, and Bueno Excellente are nowhere to be seen."

The main antagonist knows better than to mangle with them. Dogwelder was already shown capable of welding dogs even to 4-dimensional creatures living between the empty void of universes, and Bueno Excellente could single handedly turn the tide by taking control of the demon concubine army using his powers of perversion.

Heck for all we know the bad guy might BE Bueno Excellente in disguise.

Posted on 13 July 2023, 05:48 by: PoorWhiteTrash

Heh heh heh... bueno...

Posted on 15 July 2023, 09:36 by: fightbos

What a wholesome ending. /s

Posted on 16 July 2023, 17:45 by: Salminar

It's not an ending it's a dream ...

Seriously this trick should be forbidden in any comic, book, movie now. I'm fed up with this trick of "Oh wake up nothing changed" "Oh wake up again the dream was a trick to make me think reality wasn't how it looked".
You lack inspiration, then use time travel or dream ...

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Posted on 16 July 2023, 18:52 by: MitchellTF

Ah. "It's all just a dream. NO WAIT THE DREAM IS A DREAM!".

Posted on 16 July 2023, 22:22 by: Easy Expert

lmao, what was even the point of trying to pull a super obvious 'false sense of hope' red herring when you can't even keep it up for more than a page?
At this point, actually just ending it on "it was all just a Doctor Psycho fever dream, lol" would've been a vast improvement

Posted on 17 July 2023, 19:08 by: PoorWhiteTrash

After page numbered 146 with the current Lord of Dreams making his appearance I was hoping for a few more dream sequences tbh. Maybe even a Mervyn Pumpkinhead cameo or two. I mean, someone's gotta mop up the dream jizz, right? Merv's your pumpkin.

Posted on 23 July 2023, 02:20 by: Mads228

Just wanted to add a different opinion. I see a LOT of people asking for longer corruption arcs and I get that, I really do. Those can be great. But the all-powerful being of psychological corruption creating a harem of helpless lieutenants is kind of my FAVORITE thing and I struggle to find content that portrays it in exactly this way (which is perfection as far im concerned) so i dont mind at all seeing that framework play out many times in different permutations with different characters, and pretty much keep looking for those parts throughout the series. Totally get what people are saying, just wanted to offer my opinion and say that I’m loving the work and am so appreciative of how prolific it is.

Posted on 31 July 2023, 20:12 by: cozzy121

6years @Mads22, 6 years. How long of a corruption arc do you need?

Posted on 12 August 2023, 16:34 by: Salminar

Yeah was coming back to see WW's corruption cause let's be honest it's been years now of various random corruption with secondary characters you sometime don't know before and don't recognize after (needing a tag over their head to know who is who) and you know, on the cover you have a WW corrupted ... So it's basically why most people are coming right?

But nope, I guess we will have to wait one full year again for that, as this time you have many filler pages of random fucking with no interest at all before finally getting what you want ... This thing is just a scam, even skipping full years of content makes it still feel sluggish and at the same time rushed and uninspired. At some point you should know when to get to the end ...

Posted on 17 August 2023, 12:47 by: Synlidwirh

I have been reading this for while since the beginning almost and I am all for a slow burn story. When everything turns around in five to ten pages is boring but.... damn this is really stretched out and moving at a snails pace.

Posted on 17 August 2023, 17:13 by: zigmut

Chuck Norris read this fanfiction to the end (even the sequel)

Posted on 17 August 2023, 19:16 by: The Anax

I am thinking of making a new Anaxverse villain called, Pharoah of Darkness, and he traps the Anaxverse heroes in a groundhog's day scenario, where they are almost always corrupted, but never are, and all the side characters are corrupted incredibly easy lol I am kidding with you! You should do you. If this is how you think it should go, you're the artist. I'll sound repetitious (this entire project and even this comment section are the epitome of repetition lol), and just say, once you do finish this, if you take you "Portraits of Corruption" and make each one a comic with a more reasonable number of panels, I think you will gain a lot more patrons and fans (and you, yourself will probably have more fun as an artist anyway). Variety, and Taco Villa, is the spice of life!

Posted on 20 August 2023, 17:30 by: itsbeenawhile

I respect the artist for the commitment, but also question the necessity of it being so damn long and slow

Posted on 28 August 2023, 19:11 by: NewDoggy

*sigh*
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546 pages of whomever being a complete submissive dumbfuck... if they're male.. they die quickly and pathetically.. woman.. they roll over and can't get enough... was hoping we could get to the actual story by now....

Posted on 20 September 2023, 10:28 by: vevans0009

Looks like WW is finally caving in. 8D

Posted on 26 September 2023, 09:57 by: cozzy121

@vevans WW "caved" back on page 482, the author is just rinse and repeating instead of moving the fucking story on..

Posted on 28 September 2023, 18:02 by: Salminar

This cmic is really starting to look like the villain in those bad movies that just don't fucking want to die and comes back again and again ...

Posted on 28 September 2023, 21:44 by: Technomagus

I'm pretty sure if page 543 (by page numbers, 536 in the gallery) was just a smash cut to "And they all lived happily ever after, the end", it would be an infinitely better ending than whatever is happening now..

Posted on 01 October 2023, 00:35 by: windadept

Still trying to determine if this is a dream or not...or if it would better if it was.

Posted on 03 October 2023, 02:56 by: wombat75

Gannnggggbaannngggg!

Posted on 04 October 2023, 19:34 by: The Anax

@windadept - It is essentially her psyche. While her body is gestating and mutating, he is manipulating her mind, the only real part of her that had resolve. So, I guess you could say a dream, but it is a long corruption sequence. I think once her psyche "accepts" or even enjoys this scene, it will ultimate be the final wall come tumbling down, and I assume (hope? lol) we get back to the story. As an author, I am wanting to grab Black Pharoah and lift him up and teach the padawan the ways of the Dark Side of corruptive writing! But, experience is the best teacher, as Wonder Woman is currently discovering.

Posted on 06 October 2023, 00:15 by: tjackson41

Anax..... you are one of the few Grownups in the room...Theantjack.. greetings

Posted on 06 October 2023, 22:30 by: doteiji

I don't understand why you guys are complaining about the pacing of the story.

Clearly this is an intentional design by the author to make us feel for Wonder Woman, since like her we are trapped in a horrible nightmare with no end in sight.

Truly a masterpiece of meta writing

Posted on 20 October 2023, 14:11 by: Salminar

The only thing I feel after years waiting for the end of a story where nothing can happen to the villain and the outcome had already been written 200 pages ago is boredom.

It makes me feel like the end of hunger games now, it was supposed to be one single movie, but hell, let's make 2 so we can make more money, and you end with something really shitty with no consistency (Even if consistency wasn't the strength of this comic from quite sometime).

It's starting to be a parody, I come here just to see if there was finally any progress and I could finally see WW as the corrupted queen, only thing I'm waiting for and I guess people people are waiting, and I just look at the thumbnail and "Ok still no progress". If you like it so much, don't worry, it can still last for years, now he corrupts her psych through a dream, then he can make the memories, age regration, no matter what he wants we are not even more in this shitty DC universe he butchered.

On this website you can check Pegasus comic involving Dark Seid and it's shorter and much better. Yes the drawings and art art better here, but hell, the story is consistent, you have an ending on each chapter and it's so much more enjoyable.

Posted on 22 October 2023, 18:34 by: cozzy121

@Salminar do you mean a "Pegasus Smith" comic?

Posted on 27 October 2023, 12:44 by: Porn Lover Yadomaru

@cozzy121 There's a guy on here goes by "Pegasus" - not "Pegasus Smith", just "Pegasus". About 10 years back, he posted a couple of short JL and X-Men porn "comics" that were very obviously traced over the work of a Japanese doujin artist called Izayoi Seishin. The JL ones involved Darkseid raping Wonder Woman, Power Girl, and Starfire. I think these are what Salminar is referring to.

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Posted on 31 October 2023, 20:26 by: cozzy121

@Porn Lover Yadomaru thanks

2 weeks since last update? it might be over!

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Posted on 05 November 2023, 21:27 by: Queen_Azshara93

Is there a colored Version of this? :O

Posted on 07 November 2023, 14:32 by: Porn Lover Yadomaru

@cozzy121 No problem.

On another note, it bothers me that Page 530 still hasn't been fixed. It's just a partial preview instead of the complete page, even though the complete page has been up on BlackPharaoh's website for ages.

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Posted on 16 November 2023, 23:02 by: Salminar

@cozzy121 yes I was simply speaking about pegasus and the original WW vs Dark seid that was awesome. The remake is a lot less fun with more gore and killing and less sex but well ...

For the rest I think I'm done with this sh*t, all this waiting for this lol. WW is looking even worst than the teasing made 100 pages earlier, now I know I have nothing to wait from this anymore and will fail everything it is trying to achieve. Have fun.

Posted on 17 November 2023, 14:38 by: theCircle57

Big Barda looks like she needs a Mega-Rod up her Mother Box.

Posted on 19 November 2023, 18:06 by: vevans0009

Welp, dat buildup of WW turning into something unique went out the window. Her look is the same as the other horned chicks. My first disappointment from this comic.

@Salminar I so agreed with you. Waited for so long to get to see what WW turned into and it she looks lackluster.

"Free from my human shackles" - Wonder Woman

Bitch, you look EXACTLY like the other horned chicks we saw earlier. Least the Gaunts that look more creature was more interesting.

Disappointed is what I felt.

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Posted on 28 November 2023, 22:29 by: The Anax

I do not know much about comics, other than the things from when I was a kid like Super Friends or Spiderman and his Amazing Friends, out of curiosity, who is the woman with a hammer hitting Wonder Woman, and why does she seem so immune to the corruption? (Not sure if her boyfriend will be as immune, he might be getting killed or converted while she is fighting.) Anyway, thank you in advance!

Posted on 29 November 2023, 03:47 by: ArtifactChair

The woman with the hammer is "Big Barda" and her husband is "Mr. Miracle". They're both New Gods, so they rank pretty highly on the power spectrum. However a handful of other New Gods instantly lost on the Watchtower a few scenes ago, so that may not count for much. They're often depicted as having an exceptionally strong bond as husband and wife. I want to say that it was one of those forbidden love tropes since Barda is from Apokolips while Scott is from New Genesis. They basically ran away from their respective families to live together on Earth.

Posted on 30 November 2023, 22:19 by: The Anax

Thanks, ArtifactChair! That helps me put it more into perspective. It will be interesting to see how it goes. If it was one of my Anaxverse games, I would probably have it where when she just swung the hammer and smashed Wonder Woman in the face (the scene where her horns are flying off) I would have her beating down Wonder Woman further. And then have Wonder Woman laughing behind Big Barda. Big Barda would turn and see Wonder Woman fine and gloating, and then turn back to see that Wonder Woman had screwed with her mind, and Big Barda had actually beat her one true love, Mr. Miracle to death. That would help crack her mind and resolve for sure. We'll see where Black Pharoah takes it, though! Thanks again for answering me!

Posted on 01 December 2023, 03:41 by: ArtifactChair

He is an escape artist who is the god of freedom and escape. So there is a non-zero chance that he might actually be able to weasel them both out of this. His name is "Scott Free"

Posted on 01 December 2023, 14:58 by: theCircle57

@ArtifactChair
Unless he's Tom King's Mister Miracle in which case he's yet another King-style emasculated pussy who'd rather kill himself instead of actually trying to escape a perilous situation.

Posted on 01 December 2023, 15:43 by: jhcjr

This has gotten to the point that I am clicking on it to see if it is finally over... but at the same time...boy is it wearing me out. Same exact stuff different hero. He's going to have to start getting into the lesser known heroes if he wants to keep this, now, boring and 100% predictable story going. Or he'll have to do a cross over and bring in Marvel.

Posted on 02 December 2023, 05:24 by: MadMrtvola

@The Anax, that would be a timeless classic. I would, however, argue that your scenario does not take the full advantage of the "true love" bond the two share. Were it up to me, the pair would miraculously manage to escape the WW but not before she infects their souls with her corruption. Said corruption would attempt to overwhelm their minds so that Barda turns into one of those demons while Scott would wither and die. The duo manages to resist it by indulging into each others bodies to remainds themselves of their love, which actually works; instead, the curse only erodes their humanity and empathy, while amlifying the pleasure. At some point, the two decide to revel in their impending fall together and accept the damnation, but when WW finds them again the two are still together. Demonised Barda retains most of her looks, while demonised Scott loses his human form by transforming into an entity that doubles as Barda's new clothes/armor/weapons; both still possess their sentience and identities but are corrupted enough to join WW's side. WW would be grudgingly impressed by their defiance while her hatred for Bruce would intensify because his love was not enough to save her.

Posted on 02 December 2023, 05:43 by: The Anax

@MadMrtvola - sure, we all have our ideas, but I will say if Black Pharoah goes with your drawn out idea, none of us might live long enough to see the end of the comic! Mwa ha ha ha!

Posted on 08 December 2023, 21:32 by: Gleonomis2

Page 581 it in the middle right panel it look like almost it was A.I generated because the swollen/close eye

Posted on 09 December 2023, 17:07 by: NewDoggy

Here is the problem.... in order for readers to support and enjoy a comic, it has to have characters and/or stories they can appreciate. While this HAS all the characters you know and are familiar with, none of them are even slightly related to their original, heroic selves... everyone is a caricature, waiting for the plot to demand either their immediate submission or utterly pointless death. At this point the readers are just kind of ... waiting....

Posted on 14 December 2023, 09:41 by: doteiji

So we went from page 571 (578 in the image) to page 572 (580 in the image)...

Editing typo? Missing page? Does anyone truly care?

Find out next time on "The inexorable passage of time will lead us to another underwhelming disappointment"

Posted on 17 December 2023, 22:32 by: highstakes45

Which part did Melkor mancin draw here?

Posted on 18 December 2023, 18:37 by: jhcjr

Wash, Rinse, Repeat. Good girl, fights bad girl... bad girl corrupts good girl. Bad girl kills good guy. Repeat. I'm sorry, but this has just gotten boring. It was fun for a while but, man, he is running out of good guys.... I guess he is going to have to do a cross over and start bringing in some Marvel characters. Same ole-same ole... just different dialog.

I do have to admit, I do really enjoy his style of artwork. The good girls are hot... and the bad girls are creepy Sexy!

Posted on 29 December 2023, 01:04 by: TheKnightlyMinstrel

Almost six hundred pages, we are without the true heroes of the world; Dogwelder and Bueno Excellente- with their pal Sixpack. It is a dark and shitty comic indeed...

Posted on 30 December 2023, 15:39 by: apopp

Comic? i thought this was a moving bookmark so you can tell what's a recent release...

Posted on 01 January 2024, 09:23 by: NewDoggy

I have a question... what is that little 'Score +#' on the upper right corner of each post?

Posted on 08 January 2024, 19:12 by: pej92

"it is virtually impossible for the enemy"

famous last words.

@NewDoggy

score is based on people voting up or down a comment adding or subtracting their own score

I don't remeber how base score of each user is calculated (probably a mix of account age and activity or stuff like that)

Posted on 16 January 2024, 22:48 by: nalak1

*sigh* For a moment I was relatively excited because they've all shown up to a showdown with the New Gods and my mind went, "Well we established early on that all these entities knew they were fucked in a fight so that means this whole thing will finally be over in 5 or 6 pages. Maybe a couple after for the big harem orgy victory scene" Then I remembered there's still the whole group on Earth and my god this is taking too long.

Posted on 17 January 2024, 07:58 by: Bruce335

Could someone finish this comic now? please, is taking forever...

Posted on 18 January 2024, 18:29 by: pej92

when did this start ?? 2019 ?? We will soon see it's 5 year anniversary xD

Posted on 22 January 2024, 08:41 by: doteiji

@pej92 2019? Brother, the first comment in this page is from April 2017

Posted on 22 January 2024, 18:42 by: pej92

my bad

I guess the story will finish when it will be able to vote at this rate xD

Posted on 22 January 2024, 20:16 by: John Doe xyz

@pej92 I'll pass it on in my will for my future generations to find out the ending.

Posted on 29 January 2024, 10:02 by: Crimson Soul

Good on the artist for being so committed. I'm astonished that it's still ongoing.

Posted on 29 January 2024, 10:39 by: cozzy121

ffs it was finished years ago, he's just posting it out - one agonising cell at a time..

Posted on 31 January 2024, 07:43 by: Predi12

Only one man can save this doomed world.Bueno Excellente.

Posted on 01 February 2024, 04:08 by: nigger0

oh shit, it's Starro the Conqueror. That's some obscure material there. Only problem is that his life goal was finding someone who can kill him, so maybe he isn't the person you want on your side when trying to fight off the end of the world.

also at this point I want the series to end, having Darkseid + Orion + Lobo + Starro go down like chumps would be a pain to watch.

Posted on 08 February 2024, 22:34 by: Porn Lover Yadomaru

There's a page missing in the latest update.

Posted on 14 February 2024, 02:26 by: pej92

Wasnt staro in the suicide squad movie or something like that ?? I also remeber seeing it in the superman and justice league animated series so I don't think he is "obscure material" xD

Posted on 21 February 2024, 10:03 by: Sparks22

Really Lobo? The main way the corrupted heroines suck the life out of you is through sex, so the smart thing to do is... Put your dick out? Smart move huh? 🤦🏻‍♂️

Posted on 22 February 2024, 15:21 by: fightbos

@Sparks22 It's Lobo, the guy literally has plotarmor. He's going to fuck her to death.

Posted on 25 February 2024, 08:54 by: NewDoggy

Is it frustrating that Darkseid is literally the only character who didn't just lay down and take it like a bitch through this entire comic?

Posted on 27 February 2024, 03:15 by: pej92

Seeing another comic with bat-mite/mister mxyzptlk I wonder if they will make an appearance as deus ex machina

Posted on 29 February 2024, 20:47 by: AlbaNader1976

I think I'd like for this comic to end with Diana being a Lewd/Eldritch Sex Goddess who kills "The Master" taking control of everything/everyone herself...

Posted on 07 March 2024, 20:35 by: cozzy121

@AlbaNader1976 I think I'd like it to end.

Posted on 09 March 2024, 07:52 by: yu_10_10

Sigh. End.

Posted on 09 March 2024, 16:52 by: nigger0

Please let Lobo save the day by fucking the bitches so hard that they turn on their master.

Posted on 10 March 2024, 18:32 by: jmqs9999

在黄漫里面都不敢让达叔这么轻易吃瘪（）

Posted on 17 March 2024, 11:57 by: nigger0

Another consideration. Lobo used to have an ability to grow full clones of himself from every drop of blood he shed in battle.
The nightgaunts could just slash and bite him, and then the drops of blood turn grow into full lobos in seconds, gangbanging the nightgaunts.

So yeah, I won't forgive the author if he makes Lobo lose at this point.

Unless it is so Section 8 can save the universe (Dogwelder alone could beat him, not to even mention Bueno Excellente).

Posted on 27 March 2024, 10:02 by: Nurse Bimbo

You think the writer knows that Darkseid is just an avatar and actually infinite because the real power is in a totally different reality? Like so what if this one dies the next will be back soon.

Posted on 01 April 2024, 02:14 by: NewDoggy

SO... rather then the Wisdom of Solomon... Mary was blessed with the stupidity of Jim Varney?

Posted on 01 April 2024, 06:14 by: phyrena

The villain has only gotten so far cause of the stupidity of some characters. It gets tiring, really.

Posted on 01 April 2024, 18:39 by: pej92

it's not the villain it's the protagonist and they have plot armor so yeah it's annoying as would any such story with deus ex and stupid plot armor would be

Posted on 09 April 2024, 02:32 by: NewDoggy

Well, that was disappointing...now I'm guessing all the other females have been running a train on Lobo and he's gonna be all shriveled & puny quick enough... this comic has gotten kind of sad.. had hopes for Darkseid.. but ah well

Posted on 12 April 2024, 20:57 by: Sparks22

Oh, I wonder what's gonna happen - (*powerful hero/villain starts to fight, gives a glimpse of hope only to get sucked out of their lifeforce and lose*) - next ? I'm really curious, this story is so unpredictable, isn't it?

Posted on 17 April 2024, 20:35 by: PoorWhiteTrash

On the plus side, we don't have to see Granny Goodness in a string bikini. Maybe in another one!

Posted on 20 April 2024, 22:08 by: fightbos

Lobo finally finds a girl able to keep up with him, and they join forces to destroy the bbeg then live on forever as goth biker chick/dude?

Posted on 20 April 2024, 23:47 by: EvolutionSelene

LOL Lobo is the true Superman of this story.

Posted on 21 April 2024, 02:29 by: pej92

let me guess she will try to dominate lobo but when it wont work she will use omega beams and will erase lobo and our hopes of an interesting twist to this story, is my guess

Posted on 21 April 2024, 03:18 by: Primus0

Of course Lobo is seemingly invulnerable to their powers. He’s so dead.

Posted on 21 April 2024, 18:35 by: pej92

oh, no better even, the hero will take possession of lobo's body/fuse with him to become an even stronger and sexual entity and lobo will agree because it will let him fuck more girls ...

Posted on 02 May 2024, 20:48 by: cozzy121

Hopefully it's all over now.

shit, it's not...

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Posted on 10 May 2024, 09:26 by: Nurse Bimbo

Pharoah I hate to admit it but at this point I'm actively wanting good guys to win. There isn't development it's I'm not even certain who's alive at this point. Like the draw was the corruption seeing magic turn others into sluts and the different forms were interesting but who even died to omega beams, who even was fucked by Lobo. At this point it doesn't seem to matter. Let it end and start a new project all good things must end and those that refuse to, well they often end up spoiling the ride. Ask yourself who is really left and organically able to help do anything useful. Your style is great but this story ended a while ago. Give yourself a chance to try a new story.

Don't take this post as negative, your art is great and your passion is noticed in this but I would rather see you tell a new story. You have potential and it's clear that you put your heart into this. I just can't help but wonder what other stories, what other buttons you can push, how else you might improve once you're away from this trap you have written yourself into.

Posted on 12 May 2024, 05:42 by: 是贝贝哦

每次翻到这个漫，我就知道新更的就到这了，跟个分界线一样（哭笑）

Posted on 12 May 2024, 17:51 by: pej92

in 3 years with 100 more pages after the bad guy won we will learn the whole story is just batgirl writing smutty dojins
THE END

here you can skip the rest now

Posted on 14 May 2024, 01:03 by: NewDoggy

So, Orien turned snively cuck, despite him being far more powerful than Darkseid when he surrenders to berserker's rage... *meh*

Posted on 16 May 2024, 18:38 by: wasd tt

Admittedly, it's a loooooong story, but if you put it together, this comic will serve as a guide to DC's super heroine bitch

Posted on 18 May 2024, 11:09 by: fightbos

Ohh absorption vore, nice

Posted on 25 May 2024, 16:38 by: PoorWhiteTrash

I'm gonna be honest. I think the chances of a Six Pack and Dog Welder appearance to save the day are now vanishingly small. But I loved how Lobo was portrayed. That was some funny shit.

Posted on 30 May 2024, 18:06 by: yu_10_10

I hate how long and pointless this is.

Posted on 31 May 2024, 20:13 by: cobra88king8

blew their load way too early on killing off heroes.

Posted on 01 June 2024, 04:34 by: three_iron

I think it's painfully obvious at this point that we're heading towards Diana being the big bad and destroying the Crawling Chaos to usurp him. Now whether she does this to restore everything to what it was or to start her reign of darkness ... who knows? Regardless, the comments tend to be more entertaining than the comic these days ... it really has gone on too long.

Posted on 01 June 2024, 20:18 by: unlikelypanda

"I'm not corrupting you, I'm erasing your existence and rebuilding you anew, to be pretty much the same as all the others."

Posted on 03 June 2024, 19:18 by: cozzy121

@unlikelypanda the rinse and repeat approach to corruption... and to storytelling

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Posted on 05 June 2024, 17:16 by: pej92

Oh no who could predict that evil corruption incarnate wouldnt keep his world

I am shocked, SHOCKED

well not that shocked

shit writing tho

Posted on 11 June 2024, 23:23 by: nalak1

You know the corruption of Mary at this point could have been made slightly less boring if it changed things or meant anything. Or heck if the method or reveal of the betrayal weren't so dull as well. Have Chaos point out the deal was with Diana who lacked the authority or permission to speak for it (that whole thing was off screen because this guy's plot armor is absurd it would change nothing) or heck they established earlier just being in the room with this thing caused women to be overcome with desire and need why not do that. Instead of the painfully boring inevitable betrayal why not have it cut to her trying to leave and dropping because of this crap then eagerly trade in her own deal to get fucked when it mockingly points out that they had a deal that it wouldn't do anything to her or her world. I mean my idea is stupid too, but at least its something slightly more interesting than "Yep its evil and won't honor deals, don't know why you thought it would Mary."

Sorry just needed to vent a story edit that came to mind.

Posted on 29 June 2024, 20:21 by: SilentOption

Are the Marvel Heroes next? I like to see females members of the X-Men and Avengers being corrupted

Posted on 30 June 2024, 07:32 by: yu_10_10

Could have written multiple comics that had an actual plot worth caring about. Smdh

Posted on 08 July 2024, 22:06 by: MitchellTF

...So, in 29 chapters, has Black Pharoah been revealed to have ANY weaknesses whatsoever?

Posted on 08 July 2024, 22:54 by: nalak1

@MitchellTF I mean supposedly Constantine was a threat, but it was hardly clear if that was a "weakness" that only existed at that time or if it was a thing that no one else has known about to potentially take advantage of. And I think they've been trying to Zuriel or someone as having a magic sword that can theoretically purge it and its influence, but the most we've seen on that is that it supposedly made Batman just a human again instead of a corruption monster undermining the group. (How effective it is also being called into question since its not like they used it to cleanse his victims.) That said the viability of any of these weaknesses is minor since apparently its been getting stronger throughout all this shit (Its been stated or implied, but since we've not seen it have to exert effort for really anything its not like we can gauge results) and its minions were already able to casually take down the the top of the power structures regardless of who they were to begin with so even if there were weaknesses in play that could be exploited it seems unlikely they'd be able to be used in a viable manner.

Posted on 09 July 2024, 06:51 by: PoorWhiteTrash

Chair bell dings and chair blows up. Next page to show the bad guy stepping out of the room and adjusthing his tie?

Posted on 13 July 2024, 04:28 by: Oddball

This thing has run for over 600 pages and it still feel like it has less plot than you'd find on the back of a box of Count Chocula. And quite frankly, it has less characterization as well.

Posted on 17 July 2024, 22:10 by: vevans0009

The faces look samey in the xeno flesh cocoon panel.....

Posted on 20 July 2024, 00:42 by: Drake544

Just saw the animated crisis part 3. At this point, the anti monitor should just step in and destroy this universe.

Posted on 06 August 2024, 04:46 by: minin43

I like coming back and seeing just how many more comments are now below the threshold. Currently 969 (nice)!

Is this the most discussed post on this site?

Posted on 09 August 2024, 01:47 by: MitchellTF

Another thing that doesn't help is that the difference between uncorrupted and corrupted is rather...yeah. Like, there's not much tension in a corruption work if everybody on the "Uncorrupted" side is already "Dickslut whores".

That said...you do have to admire the effort put in. Though "We managed to lit the forge"...*Snickers*

Oh, and that we can't trust any exposition, because the big bad corruption is undetectable. (And the heroes are not genre savvy at ALL)

Posted on 05 September 2024, 19:35 by: NewDoggy

I've read deeper plots on a Bazooka Joe bubblegum wrapper

Posted on 17 September 2024, 11:51 by: Cyndrus

Something this repetitive has no business being this fucking long. All the sex scenes are the same vanilla shit, all the heroes act like morons, all the women are sluts even before the corruption -which is way too damn easy, there's WAY too much dialogue and exposition dumps, and for a guy that seems to know a lot about DC he somehow wrote everyone so that no one acts in character. Get it the hell over with already.

Posted on 17 September 2024, 23:13 by: hadorian

BULL FUCKEN SHIT TRIGON WOULD LOSE LIKE THIS, WHAT KIND OF FANFIC GARBAGE...GAH

Let this fanfic end, pls.....

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Posted on 01 October 2024, 21:15 by: Nyctelios

I like how this story started but as time went on, it went one way had has not looked back. I keep reading, hoping that we will get some turn around events but every time the end result is the same.

We now are seeing the corrupted Raven fight her father.......Could this be a turn around event? The answer is most likely it will end with Trigon losing to Raven, the same results we have seen every time. I just want to see a hook, a change, something that makes me same "DAMN..." like I did at the beginning.

I wont complain much as this is a free comic book but if I was paying for this, I would have stopped reading/buying this some time ago.

Posted on 01 October 2024, 21:22 by: kain11

Oh hey. Another couple panels of people with magic and other super powers are just going to punch one another. I don't even care about the sex or the boring storylines. The fights are bland as hell.

Posted on 05 October 2024, 19:31 by: oddali

Lmfao is this shit still going ?

Posted on 16 October 2024, 07:19 by: zhaowuling

seems like the end of [sea tiger II]
maybe the next page will be the man's head is caught by the women's hand

Posted on 16 October 2024, 23:21 by: kain11

Wow that last page is...

Really bad. Like really bad. Has Black Pharaoh ever seen a penis? The art is getting sloppier and sloppier.

Posted on 19 October 2024, 16:43 by: Neeckin

Oh, well rip Raven I was hopping to see her come out on top, shitty she died

Posted on 28 October 2024, 16:31 by: yu_10_10

Is this purgatory? This shit just keeps going.

Posted on 28 October 2024, 19:44 by: apopp

@yu_10_10 We all died in covid, this is purgatory now

Posted on 28 October 2024, 21:18 by: kain11

Oh, that's Wonder Woman now? All the women look the same at this point it was hard to know who that was even supposed to be.

Posted on 31 October 2024, 14:23 by: El_Heffe

Clearly we need to call upon the Booty Warriors.

Posted on 03 November 2024, 14:24 by: daman007

@kain11 I agree. They all look and act the same after their TF, it's kinda boring.
The same thing happens over and over, making it kinda repetitive.

Posted on 13 November 2024, 05:21 by: negifreak

This has grown far too repetitive and boring. There's never any variation and the author completely disregards every characters personality at a whim whenever he realizes the good guys would actually win so that he can drag it out longer.

Posted on 13 November 2024, 14:58 by: daman007

Yep, the appeal was they were able to match the style and vibe of the original comic.
But now that seems to be gone and it's just more of the same.
Would be nice to see some twists and more interesting character design.

Posted on 17 November 2024, 08:55 by: advert

This one is really depressing, which is the last thing a porno should ever be. Presumably every single man in the universe bar the big bad is just getting turbomurdered? that's like the most un-arousing thing ever

Posted on 19 November 2024, 10:43 by: yu_10_10

Page 669
Omfg this is so stupid.

Posted on 05 December 2024, 06:03 by: Saiyanchadd26

I wish we coulld get these more frequently

Posted on 05 December 2024, 18:12 by: cozzy121

@Saiyanchadd26 it's been going since March 2017! this is as frequent as it's ever going to be!

Posted on 07 December 2024, 20:54 by: RamboPicos

pg-49 even in here my batgoat has plotarmor

Posted on 28 December 2024, 19:54 by: SilentOption

On the last page who did Black Pharoah killed

Posted on 28 December 2024, 23:26 by: Replica_Moon

Demon Harley Quinn

Posted on 31 December 2024, 21:46 by: KuromaruX

Wait are we sure? I swore it was Fire...

Posted on 01 January 2025, 12:50 by: CarnalJester

It was Fire that was just killed.

Posted on 05 January 2025, 21:08 by: kain11

A woman numb from the waist down? Can't have that in a poorly written sex comic! We've gotta cure her so she can be fucked stupid in a single panel and be corrupted in the next.

Posted on 07 January 2025, 20:03 by: CarnalJester

The sad part is he properly thinks this is good writing when its only getting worse, guy needs lessons.

Posted on 13 January 2025, 13:39 by: Keksimus1234

Waiting for the day when BP finally finishes this so it stops shitting up my search results.

Posted on 13 January 2025, 23:34 by: kain11

If this gets any dumber it'll be voting for Trump.

Posted on 21 January 2025, 03:49 by: TheKnightlyMinstrel

YET AGAIN, OUR HEROES, SIX PACK, DOG WELDER, AND BEUNO EXCELLENTE ARE NOWHERE TO BE SEEN! WHEN WILLL THIS TRAVESTY END GOOD VIEWERS!? WHEN!?

Posted on 16 February 2025, 18:58 by: cozzy121

Thank the gods, he's stopped writing it....

oh for fucks sake, it's back

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Posted on 05 March 2025, 22:05 by: CarnalJester

The strange thing is that the writing on his other stuff is getting better while this one is getting worse, make it make sense.

Posted on 06 March 2025, 15:16 by: lw123789

You forgot some pages buddy

Posted on 07 March 2025, 05:23 by: PoorWhiteTrash

I'm not up on the costume designs for DC these days, just don't have the time sadly - far left in the group panel with Grodd is that Dr Phospherous? Mr Bones? Someone I'm not thinking of?

Posted on 09 March 2025, 07:53 by: Salminar

Oh sh this is still going on ..? I love how someone rage the story is shit but complain his favorite heroes are not inside. Personally I'm happy he isn't in the marvel universe, I would pissed off to see my favorite heroes in this non-sense made comics. We already have the movies doing a good job at wasting all their potential lol.

Posted on 12 March 2025, 16:44 by: 周承孝

这个有汉化版本吗

Posted on 19 March 2025, 19:23 by: CarnalJester

Non-sense made story yet there is somehow going to be a sequal, so it's going to get more dragged out and yet some of the other comics he have had better writing recently, or maybe this will get better soon? We can only hope.

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Posted on 29 March 2025, 13:12 by: ggotou23

i look forward to where this comic will stop getting updated so i dont have to keep seeing it when searching monster girls. Western artists have some of the WORST story arcs on this site

Posted on 29 March 2025, 19:12 by: doteiji

the end is never the end is never the end is never the end is never the end is never the end is never the end is never the end is never the end is never the end is never the end is never the end is never the end is never the end is never the end is never the end is never the end is never the end is never the end is never the end is never the end is never the end is never the end is never the end is never the end is never...

Posted on 30 March 2025, 21:41 by: cozzy121

@doteiji Q.E.D

Posted on 01 April 2025, 03:04 by: CarnalJester

You are going to be waiting a long time for that.

Posted on 08 April 2025, 03:29 by: MitchellTF

"I don't dare releasing these two"...*Blinks*

Posted on 08 April 2025, 03:42 by: CarnalJester

And just like that. This got even more stupid. That take talent.

Posted on 08 April 2025, 05:06 by: kain11

The art keeps getting worse. Look at those faces. What the fuck.

Posted on 08 April 2025, 14:16 by: CarnalJester

Right? He should focus less on story and more on art because both are slipping down hill at record pace and the story was only passable to begin with.

Posted on 08 April 2025, 15:08 by: Note11

Once upon a time this was an awesome mdom corruption story. Now we're at a point where its been 16 pages since any sex, 38 pages since any dom sex, and 77 pages since any mdom corruption. Its become a story with completely different themes and fetishes, and its lost me along the way. It's a shame because the writer's other stories have stayed so good, and this one started so so strong, but it lost its identity in a really bad way and just kind of flounders around not even being hot anymore.

Posted on 08 April 2025, 21:22 by: CarnalJester

I wouldn't even say that the others have stayed good. Some of the recent stuff had improved but the others were let down by weak and obvious stories.

Posted on 13 April 2025, 16:08 by: yu_10_10

Mind control is a huge failure of mdom and corruption.. it's an easy button.

Posted on 17 April 2025, 21:50 by: Salminar

@CarnalJester Yeah his other stories are better, probably because they are also a lot shorter. When you aren't very good at story, keeping it short helps a lot. Here it's since chapter 2 he doesn't know at all where he is going and the story never stop falling, even the transformation and all the rest feels like he is completely out of ideas but wants to squeeze the very last drop out of it.
I personally would prefer him to stop that and put his energy into something else and shorter, like the wonder woman stuff he did, or also some of his arts. There is one art I love from him is about Samus Aran being corrupted by one of the metroid attached to her skull, that would be a very good idea for a short story but well ...

After all if people continue to pay for it ... Just i hope they won't complain about another movie sequel at their cinema, cause it's this kind of behavior that leads to no effort stories in games, movies and even books, if people buy sh*t why bother doing quality.

Posted on 20 April 2025, 01:28 by: CarnalJester

@salminar yeah like Inner Joke was great, Live Lewd was good, the twist was obvious but it felt like it was meant to be like you know its her, You Should't be Here was alright but just a lead in to Live Madam Evil, Also what is with that awful title? The Allowance was ruined by thar terrible obvious reveal, i had my money on it being Superboy beneath the mask, that Pages of Mad Obession for it's format is good though it isn't my thing, I am sure it is for others and Hearts & Minds is great for far as well, but Forsaken Souls feels like it should have stopped 10 Chapters ago, like I came for the sex & corruptions not the B-side story with humans characters I don't care about.

Nah I am sure they won't complain if they stuck around this long, though he isn't going to take any advice here, I am sure he doesn't even read the comments here anyway, to many real opinions,

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Posted on 25 April 2025, 04:41 by: 我永远喜欢申鹤

没有中国人看吗

Posted on 25 April 2025, 06:52 by: money_qwq

喜欢看，但是没翻译，很难受，而且很久没看见那个古神，有点看不懂了

Posted on 18 May 2025, 04:53 by: yu_10_10

这个故事情节对英语使用者来说更加痛苦。这是一个愚蠢的故事。

Posted on 21 May 2025, 17:04 by: nigger0

>toastmaster

oh man this guy is better at keeping up with DC continuity than DC themselves.
iirc the toastmaster an all-too-powerful invention of Steel, before he became a superhero, and the guns made it into the black market which is why he donned his metal suit to crack down on the source.

Posted on 21 May 2025, 18:36 by: cozzy121

this is an EIGHT year long yawn....

Posted on 23 May 2025, 00:41 by: CarnalJester

And another EIGHT years to finish.

Posted on 26 May 2025, 22:17 by: MitchellTF

The issue with this, is besides the Glacial pacing, is that it doesnt' really have plot DEVELOPMENT most of the time. It feels very much like the 'core' plot is designed to be on pause, and someething that can be ended at any time, with all the 'episode' plots basically interchangable.

Like, what progression has REALLY been done on Bat/Luthor/Etc's end? Or, for that matter, Batman's 'Corruption'...And, it gets 'samey' after a major point. It's really just The Corrupted doing a long victory lap.

Posted on 26 May 2025, 23:50 by: kain11

I can't believe the writing got worse.

"A word. SNAFU"

Everyone else: DEAR GOD.

Absolutely brain dead.

Posted on 01 June 2025, 23:47 by: CarnalJester

@kain11 This really isn't a surprise anymore is it?

I mean even if people told him how brain dead this was and how terrible it has become, Pharaoh clearly isn't listening, just look at a majority of these comments, we are still here, watching this train wreck is slow motion.

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Posted on 02 July 2025, 23:08 by: kain11

The anatomy is somehow worse. Where is Cheshire's arm for her hand to be like that?

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