I redid the First Part of Act 1 and will probably do so with the entirety of Act 1 because it just was full of weird mistakes and the purple color of the character and all.
Thats because I was pretty new to the program im using and now I am a bit more expierienced, so it should definitely look better then what I did first.
I know its hard to read on here, so if you wanna see it better, go to my
Patreon: https://www.patreon.com/posts/love-ahead-119803080

So...
For a remaster, I'm sorry, but there's still a lot of work to do... Where to start?

Staging, you really need to practice creating good backgrounds, have a good lighting setup, create background blur, and also pay attention to the saturation of your images.

As for the bubbles, I don't know what software you're using, but change it as soon as possible. Some bubbles are badly cropped (you can still see the white on the side), others are too thick around the edges, and watch out for the arrows!

Finally, look at the way the text is cut to clean up your bubbles, which are sometimes overloaded with text, and above all, never tilt your text!

Finally, it's a good idea to avoid writing that the site you're visiting is difficult to read. If you want people to come to your site, start by offering quality content.

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