Ngl, the art looks quite alright, besides the weird eye in page 4, didn't notice anything weird. Though the writing still leaves a lot to be desired, I'm still laughing at "then it arrived" lol
Naming on these needs a tad bit of work. this is pt7, but the titlepage is pt4 of this specific sub-line. maybe "Slimy Accidents - [7] - Forever - [4]" or similar naming scheme is my recomendation
Honestly putting my distaste of AI-generated slop aside, do none of these people know how to do proper paneling, page layout, or word bubbles? You don't need years of art experience to tell that the text layout is absolute garbage.