(cry) sums it up all right.

Base +6, philerix +4, Wolf Mann +6, MeMeBigBoiii +6, DeltaX +11, icesonic +8, Ouroboros186 +6, Psychotic Pastry +6

Translation's a bit shit, multiple moans left untranslated (minor nitpick but fuck you I'm picky), constant jumbling of names and pronouns, and the lack of a back page makes the ending feel abrupt (is that even the end? I don't see END or おわり anywhere)

Base +6, DeltaX +11, Soltis +7, Tawp15 +6, icesonic +8, silv1 +6, philerix +4, randomname12131412 +7, DitzyBimbo +7, Der Fuhrer +11, fardy0five +3, ForgottenHonor +6, thebeginingoftheend +7, and 3 more...

Really liked it for the story and art but like Volttekka said, the translation is pretty rough. And the typesetting is really annoying, especially for those black thought bubbles. A little clean up would go a long way with this one.

Base +10, philerix +4, randomname12131412 +7, Ouroboros186 +6, thebeginingoftheend +7, 10tonbrick +6, m42a +18

兄弟你好香

Base +6, HinaMahoko +6

>contracts a succubus (best friend)
>Gets sucked dry
If only he could have predicted this!!!

Base +7, Hardart +6, PKMNSFW +6