I like, but you have to still check the grammar as some sentences require a little bit of check up, and try to use other fonts. I had the same mistake at the start. Which fonts are you using?
If you need any help I can re do them myself fixing the details. I mean I already translated CH 1 and 4
Base +5, TheJotaroKujo +7, wombatty +6, Light_Dragon +7
The hardest thing is doing the typesetting enough where it's readable. I learned a while ago that you have to leave space around the edges. Wild Words font is my standard speech font. Grammar could use some work but wrangling a free proofreader is hard. Still, good job regardless. Not completely unreadable.