This is my first comic :3 Enjoy

Remove netorare, Continue another Danny Phantom comic.

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Not bad, looking forward to your next project!

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hello psychopathrage!!! I LOVE YOUR MADDIE FENTON ART!!! 10/10

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damn the cover page looks great but the rest?! thx OP good start hope to see more mom NTR

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Love you guys <3

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Wow this is so out of character it isn't even funny. For starters when I heard the bully line I instantly thought it would be something along the lines of a Maddie/Dash fuck feast but we didn't even get Dash. We just got the typical faceless bully.

But also even if we did get Dash, unless Danny was without his ghost powers any form of Cucking him would make absolutely no sense because he as mentioned before has powers where his bullies don't. Danny could wreak any bully messing with him or his family easily.

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This is my headcanon where maddie fenton is a disgusting failure of a mother who loves cock more than her own son, and danny's powers aren't enough to beat the bully who has achieved ultra instinct by training with whis and goku, as such he must watch his mother get penetrated like a complete cow until the bully decides it's enough <3

Last edited on 07 July 2024, 19:10.

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your first and hopefully last comic because goddamn this is ASS

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Really good, even more if that's your first comic!

If you are looking for constructive criticism though, Maddie's boobs are much bigger on the cover than in the actual comic, which is kinda strange unless this is an ongoing comic and you plan to make them bigger in upcoming pages. The only other thing (for me at least) would be that Danny's face looks a little unpolished (? sorry, english isn't my first language) compared to Maddie's. Other than that everything looks great, and just to point out, the cover in and of itself looks awesome; it's just the size difference that kinda seemed weird (to me)

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^ Thank u h_neko, l'll keep what you said in mind :3

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