A fan-manga based on the fanfictions Naruto: Drifting (https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8833703/1/Drifting) & Naruto: Maoyu

Written and illustrated by TheWriteFiction & TWF Productions
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GILF 2 and Family retreat is possibile publish them? Please

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@Oriandu - Most of the work on this site is fanfiction, shit heel.

TheWriteFiction does banger work. Stop bitching.

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Just his ribs?! With the sheer might, every bone in his body and his very soul must be turned into cosmic dust!

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Canon Naruto, Ninja Jesus, ought to take notes from this Gary Stu.

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@Xion Rabbit

Gary Stu who?

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@makutamon

Who else? Kid Naruto in this comic.

The masked guy solos an entire Hunter-Nin Anbu squad from Kiri (Anbu is the highest ninja rank below Kage, Kage being their leader), hypnotizes their Kage for decades, and finally, the masked guy, alongside Itachi, wipes out the strongest clan in Konoha by themselves. Yet they get soloed by Kid Naruto’s clones?

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@Xion Rabbit - First ANBU can include ANY ninja from Chunin to Jonin rank.

Second, Nothing of what Naruto has done so far exhibits traits of a Gary Stu, in this world of ninja where a literal kid canonically killed an Otsutsuki (this world's version of a God) with assistance. So, by Naruto/Boruto logic, even a God can get caught off guard.

Naruto only has raw strength, shadow clones, and a bit of fuinjutsu to help him (and a fox to help with tracking and guardianship). But if this was a one on one fair, open fight, both Itachi and Obito body him.

He managed to catch both Itachi and Obito by surprise (canonically, this can happen to both of them since they aren't omnipotent, and the best strategy to fight Sharingan users established by Jiraiya are to get them from behind), none of them knew he was even there AND neither of them are aware of what he can do with his new training.

For Itachi, Naruto had help from the Uchiha father pinning Itachi's foot down with a kunai, otherwise Itachi would've easily dodged him or countered his charge had he not been distracted, had one of his hands occupied, and was in the middle of a sword swing, thereby negating his ability to use his crazy fast hand signs to perform jutsu.

For Obito, Naruto used the seldom used stealth tactic in the show to catch his lacking. He trapped him with a fuin seal Obito had no idea was on the ground, and fuinjutsu canonically effects space time. It was established in Chapter 3 what it could do, and Naruto managed to cancel out his Kamui, allowing him to get the drop on him. Anyone who is frozen or paralyzed or unable to use their jutsu is a sitting duck, and Naruto has had plenty of time testing this skill pranking Jonin in his school to see how it works. Without his Kamui, Obito's combat capabilities are like any Jonin's.

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@NovaGohan

Look at the mental gymnastics you have to jump through to explain why kid Naruto's shadow clones can body 2 of the strongest ninja in the entire series.

Dude it is fine. Your world wont crumble just because you like a Gary Stu character. We all like those from time to time.

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@Xion Rabbit

Look, I know you're not exactly media literate, but it's okay two of your favourite characters got caught off guard. But everything I said completely invalidates your claim he is a Gary Stu. It's not mental gymnastics. All of this LITERALLY happened in the manga and in this comic.

Everything I just said took place in the chapter you just read. Try re-reading it again to make an informed comment next time.

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@NovaGohan

Media literate? It takes real media literacy to know all of TheWtiteFiction MCs are essentially Gary Stus. His Gohan stories, for example, are Gohan with a 20-inch dick, making every single girl that makes eye contact with him wet within 0.3 microseconds of looking at him. Which is fine, I read his comics for the entertainment, not because I'm expecting Kishimoto or Toriyama levels of writing.

Personally, I don't hate this type of content, I find it funny and entertaining, which is why my original post was a joke. What I find ridiculous however is the coping, wait no, I find that funny too. lol

@TheWriteFiction

No hard feelings, mate. I'm just being real.

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@Xion Rabbit

Okay, I can tell you have no idea what you're talking about, because you deliberately left out the fact most of the things you mentioned here comes from doujinshi that are straight hentai comics, and aren't part of the Golden Age comic story. You also blatantly ignored the fact it's not just Gohan in his comics, but also Goku and Sharpener with the exact same attributes.

You can wave off your dumbass comment all you want, but get your facts straight first before you claim 'coping' as your final argument. That's literally just catch all excuse to avoid or deflect criticism of your uninformed opinion.

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@TheWriteFiction

Sucks my opinion rustled your jimmies this much but oh well. Btw try to be less obvious next time. Upvoting your own comment 2 seconds after posting it on your alt gives the game away.

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@Xion Rabbit

No idea what you're on about. I don't speak internet. But it's a shame you can't exactly dispute any of the points I made, since your argument just crumbled to dust. It's also clear you're a bot as well, since no one camps on a story they don't enjoy reading just to spam perfectly crafted responses with no substance.

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@NovaGohan
User's local time: 13:46
@TheWriteFiction
User's local time: 13:46

Like I said, try to be less obvious next time.

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@Xion Rabbit - Typical bot strategy to comb through a person's profile to look for inconsequential details. Keep trying.

Still can't come up with a proper rebuttal, of course. Your code needs an update.

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@NovaGohan

You live in the same time zone. You're both active at the same time in this comment section, to the point you can upvote/downvote comments seconds before/after you post. Your only upload is a TheWriteFiction post (Probably for voting power). Your alt's name is related to your work. How naive are you expecting people to be, exactly?

Edit: Wanted to add, your first comment on this site is literally defending TheWriteFiction. https://e-hentai.org/g/2334257/46dffb421b/

Edit2: Seems like you made a new alt in the meantime. narusakuharemfan -> Joined: 13-February 25, same day I made these comments, same time zone as your main and your other alt. Quite a lot of fans you have in that time zone that join up just because of you at such coincidental moments, hmm?

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@Xion Rabbit

The bot is getting upset I see. I've hurt his A.I. Next you're going to move on to another Ad hominem unrelated to the topic. It's never occurred to this bot that people can live in similar time zones.

So?

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@NovaGohan @Xion Rabbit

Shut up! Both of you!

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@makutamon My hero ;D

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anybody got an idea what happened with the patreon? it vanished from one day to another

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