Hello all, this is a gallery that combines NT00's works for Yumi in the "There's Something Loose In Her Head" series that incorporates the Complete Edition alongside works that occur later in the timeline, as the order of events can get confusing to follow. Note that this gallery replaces the original 30 chapters with the Complete Edition and will be updated with new Yumi content.

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Page 1-702: Complete Edition
Page 703-1194: Continuation from 2021
Page 1195-Current: Continuation from 2024

Note on canonicity in this series: After messaging with NT00, he has stated that the new Yumi/Yura chapters in 2024 are omnibus chapters that are loosely canon in the series but do not strictly follow a timeline. This is so he has the freedom to do new scenarios, new characters, as well as possibly reintroduce Jun-senpai into the series. However, these events have loose continuity which fills the gap between Complete Edition and Epilogue as well as leads to the Epilogue of the Complete Edition.

03/30/24 - March Update
04/27/24 - April Update
05/28/24 - May Update
07/01/24 - Netorase Penalty Game #1 Prologue
07/31/24 - Netorase Penalty Game #1 Additional Scene
08/31/24 - Netorase Penalty Game #2 Part 1
10/01/24 - Netorase Penalty Game #2 Part 2
10/31/24 - Netorase Penalty Game #3 Part 1
12/01/24 - Netorase Penalty Game #3 Part 2
12/31/24 - #IF: My Christmas With Her
01/18/25 - Sadistic Yura-Chan
01/31/25 - Netorase Penalty Game #4
02/27/25 - Sadistic Yura-Chan 2

we only got chastity cage scene for february? i was hoping we could get more jin and yura...

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@bakahaito

No, that's from January. February was just an update for Mina-senpai. NT00 said we'll get Yura (maybe with Jin) in March but NT00 said for monthly updates he'll either update Yumi or Mina.

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NT00 really went: "now that the vanilla route is complete, time to do what I actually wanted to do and continue the NTR route"

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Yumi is too hot! 5 stars and favorites for this delicious cover, and 1200 images must have been a lot of work, thanks man.

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@steveyolo80 The most recent Yura chapter is actually from February 12.

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@Hurray456
Oops got my dates mixed up, you’re right. End of January was when he released the epilogue for Complete Edition and then 2/12 the chastity cage scene.

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画的倒是不错 不过看不太懂英文就差点意思

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judging by how quickly this shit makes me cum I'll finish reading this series by next year

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I'm happy you are back @steveyolo89 ! I thought we lost you and your amazing work <3

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Does NT00 have plans to make something connecting the Sena and Yura stuff with the new complete edition timeline? Reading everything again in one sitting it feels like Sena just spawned out of nowhere and decided she wanted Haru's creampie ... Thinking about it the chastity cage stuff seems like Yumi is the one that wants Jin's creampie and that's clearly not the case... Maybe her plan is to leave Sena with Jin in the end. There's no mention of her on the epilogue but they do mention that Jin creampied Yumi more than one time in some occasion so maybe not.

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This serie already ended ?

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Wait, is this an official compilation or a fan made one? What is this compared to the Kanzenban version?

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@DatMedBre
Honestly no idea if he plans to do more stuff with Sena. Sena never really played a big part even in the original 30 chapters but coming in for threesomes with Yumi and Haru in the 2021 spinoff/continuation but he might not want to do more stuff with Sena after backlash from Christmas chapter in 2022 where lots of fans were angry about it just ending with a threesome with Yumi and Sena with Jin escalation/creampie only in an IF timeline.

@Aniimey
Nope still ongoing, next update will be something with Yumi at end of March.

@GenerationKamenRider
Read the uploader comment for a full explanation for this gallery. NT00 never made an official compilation. All material in this gallery is official by NT00, I just ordered it into a timeline so people are not as confused when they see “complete edition/Kanzenban” that is only the remake of the first 30 chapters but do not know where all the content from 2021-2022 fit in. That’s why this is a “Complete+” edition where we’ve got complete edition + all the other stuff that should come later after the first 30 chapters without people getting confused with multiple galleries.

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Why would people get angry about them having a threesome for Christmas? Its Christmas. Haru already missed one with Yumi, and for standing up for his himself and setting limits on his enjoyment of cuckolding he gets two creampies! That's like the best ending one of these stories could ever have, AND the NTR lovers still get the art they want too. What does it matter if it wasn't real? This story isn't real in the first place.

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Wait wtf? Why is NT00 still doing the IF creampies when this is the post-creampie timeline?

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@EHCASUAL

No, I think this is continuing off the canon route from Christmas where Haru had sex with Sena and Yumi and no creampie with Jin happened. (Also I'm just considering future chapters all "loosely" canon as NT00 has never stated additional chapters after Complete Edition are canon but they obviously build off each other and now we are building to the Christmas referenced in the Epilogue of Complete Edition - where something risky happened which may involve Jin).

Also it's understandable that the chastity cage chapter may have led people to think we were in the IF route but the events of this March update obviously don't make sense with the IF route. For now, I'm assuming we are NOT in the IF route and the only person who could provide definitive clarification is NT00 himself.

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@steveyolo80

This is confusing me. Why would this bathroom stall chap still be in the "good ending" timeline after NT00 did such a conclusive ending to the "good" route? He made it seem like that route had ended. He even gave it 2 alternate good endings to really nail it in that the good route is completed.

And then after that we have been shown the continuation of the "bad ending" since then.

This bathroom stall chap would make no sense if it is still in the good ending.

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@EHCASUAL

After messaging with NT00 more, he says that he plans to make these future Yura chapters "omnibus" chapters where they are not fully canon but allow him more freedom to write about various scenarios, introduce new characters, perhaps bring back Jun-Senpai. So in one way, readers could interpret all future chapters to be their own separate thing and not a part of any timeline at all. However, he also said that it's likely these new omnibus chapters fill in that gap left in the epilogue which I assume to be the gap between Christmas 2022 and the Epilogue.

This latest bathroom stall chapter if it had to fit in any timeline - it would be the one after the Christmas chapter in 2022 as there, Haru did not let Yumi have a raw creampie with Jin. Why? In this chapter, Yumi does not have raw creampie with Jin at all and only does so in a delusion - following the Netorase pattern we've had this whole series. You could argue "but that doesn't mean it's after the good timeline" sure, but narratively that makes less sense, and you would expect Yura to straight up get the creampie and try to cure Haru of his netorase fetish if this was after the IF ending, not doing more acting to satisfy his fetish as well as having normal, loving sex with him in the stall after she revealed she was acting.

Please tell me if you have any further confusion because the canonicity of this series is just thrown up in the air a lot of the times and many readers have the same questions of "Wait where the F are we in the story". I've updated the gallery comment to reflect NT00's comments so readers know more about the state of these new chapters.

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riki……😰

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@steveyolo80

Ok we got a solid explanation from NT00 then, thank you for asking him.

I am interested in where this will go now since the timelines are not gonna limit NT00's potential ideas.

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Thank you for sharing this manga man,appreciate it.Its quality is very high and it finally makes me know what i really like and want.If i am haru i will not accept yumi whether she told me what happened to her past.Appologize for leaving this kind of comment under a ntr artwork,just thank you again and god bless you.

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Hopz it's not the end

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What's the reading for all of this? Do I start here?

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@Aniimey
The series is ongoing, not ending yet.

@Endigo2447
Yes, start here, as it has all parts of the story + updates.

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sooo if I'm getting this correct, NT00 remade the original to make the timeline more clear, and now this extra stuff no longer has a clear timeline and the canonicity is just up in the air. What exactly was the point of the remake then if he's just gonna ignore continuity in the end anyway? I can't say I'm a fan of this direction. Don't get me wrong, I still think this series is hot, but I did like that there was a storyline. But if all the new Yumi/Yura stuff is just gonna be Haru getting cucked from now on, it'll lose its main appeal for me. I also just hate the whole ambiguously canon thing in general, especially if he's also gonna throw in actual canon that fills in some gaps in the original story. It just sounds so messy. I hope this doesn't mean the storyline of "fixing" Haru's fetish that was established before isn't just dropped.

I hope we do eventually get some Haru x Yumi stuff that isn't just text that says "and then they had sex" after every cuck scene.

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@Hurray456

Yes, I agree with the idea that the whole series really should have had a more solid canon. The problem comes from the fact that NT00 really only considered the original 30 chapters as canon and then the chapters that continued in 2021 was just "bonus material" that had random scenarios that were not canon, BUT this slowly changed as we got more Jin chapters and the Yura development that was so story-focused that it seemed canon but was apparently STILL NOT TECHNICALLY CANON, which is a shame really as NT00 could have easily made them canon.

Instead, the Complete Edition comes along trying to refine the characters and the story but only for the first 30 chapters, as I don't think there was intention to really clean up canon/continuity of anything after that. Now we are in this slightly ambiguous space of "loose continuity" where the only saving grace was that there was the Epilogue. This way at least these "omnibus" chapters while perhaps not making 100% sense (an example is the chastity cage chapter where it feels slightly out of character), can at least be assumed to be events leading up to the Epilogue while allowing NT00 more creative freedom (which I think is the main reason for the loose continuity).

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Short but interesting chapter.
For May and June, this is what NT00 said on Patreon:

In May, there will be no posts with dialogues due to personal reasons such as medical checkups
In June, only the Yura series will be uploaded

I like how there is at least a progression despite the length and am hopeful that June's Yura-Only month will have more development.

Last edited on 27 April 2024, 18:50.

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Good update, but loses its impact knowing that this might not have even actually happened thanks to the ambiguous canonicity. Big mistake taking this direction imo.

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@Hurray456

Yep ; the christmas chapter was insane , but now it's lacking too much tension/intensity

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And he fucked up Yura anal with Jin, without condom, i mean he can do like 2-3 chapter about this but he just throw it, like nothing, holy moly where are we going =(

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Teasing dialogue is nice but the art is completely whatever at this point. He shoulda just done mina. Nice translation as always

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They sould have made the christmas creampie canon , and to continue going harder and harder (since she only do it for him and isn't really fond of it herself) until the mc finally understand and still end into an happy ending

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Why was this changed into the webtoon category? It's not and never has been.

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@WoolCat

It's so weird that it was yumi who contacted him to show it too... Why it wasn't Jin and where's the Yumi pov? Also anal should've been the answer for the condom ring raw sex, but he instead decided to make that retarded christmas "series finale".

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It does disappoint me that we don’t have that solid canon but at this point maybe NT00 just said that so he can play around with more ideas/have more freedom. Maybe I’m just coping but the extra chapters themselves after original 30 chapters were also always meant to be “extras/not canon” but the progression/Yura and Jin plot points sure felt story-driven and canon. I’ll just say it’s loose canon that CAN happen, doesn’t mean it never did. Plus he still has to connect it to Epilogue which is canon (might just be me inhaling copium, lol).

@valesauce
Thanks for the kind words, appreciate it. Been working on this series for a long time and I’ll continue to do so until the end one day.

@Kileraa
Correct, this has never been a webtoon. Someone mistagged.

@xilero3 @woolcat
Ironically, you could say it’s character progression for Yumi who’s getting more comfortable doing the whole netorase play and getting more corrupted. Real life answer: We’re getting these mini chapters because NT00 is basically working on multiple things each month: 3 fanarts, a Mina chapter, and a Yumi chapter. If it was JUST Yumi like we had 2 years ago like for the curtain play or interview chapters then we’d get way more development. Silver lining is he will focus more on Yura in June so MAYBE we get a longer chapter then.

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@steveyolo80
As far as I know it seems NT00 only (or mostly?) releases in JP & KR. If so, are these 1200+ pages fan-made translations by you, alone? It's such a clean translation! You even translated the sfx as well :D Thanks for releasing this!

Oh, if it's alright could I ask some questions?
- This complete edition is essentially a rework of those 30 chapters yes? are there any big differences between them or just a smoother artstyle?
- Are Yumi & Yura the same character or different people? I've only took a quick look at everything, haven't read everthing in detail yet.
- It seems some of the scenes are haru's delusions number x. Either I missed something or are there some scenes missing? (like, it jumps from 9 into 14 suddenly?)

I wish more artists make recurring OC and story arcs rather than one-offs or parodies and done. Such a lengthy series allows for more story and dialogue, for us to get invested in the characters. Makes it all more memorable.

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@JJroger

Yep, been super dedicated to translating this series since I discovered it 3 years ago always nice to help new readers discover this gem.

- Overall the Complete Edition's plot is largely unchanged, just the art. Very subtle differences in Yumi's characterization and the glasses/megane senpai was retconned out such that the only sexual partners Yumi had were Jun-Senpai and Jin before Haru. I would still check out the original if you have time but plot was largely unchanged.

- Yumi and Yura are the same character. Yura was originally thought up by Jin as an alternate persona for Yumi to "act" like a girl that was Jin's sex friend and not Haru's girlfriend as a part of the netorase play to make Haru more jealous and excited at the same time.

- The delusion scenes are numbered based by chapter, which is why you can see jumps as some chapters just don't have delusions and then they pick up on a later chapter. No missing delusion scenes.

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@steveyolo80 I noticed that NT00 has been including English translations in his Patreon posts ever since he released the first Yura update after the Epilogue. Does that mean you've been helping him directly since then?

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@Hurray456

Yes, that’s correct. I offered to give him English translations to post for his Patreon supporters since it seemed like the fair thing to do as well as many of his Patreon supporters being English speakers.

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this would be 1/5 if yumi wasn't hot.
netorare no tami 1000000x better.

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So yeah, the May update is just the one page. NT00 said he had less time this month because of a medical checkup. Next month, he said only Yura so perhaps it will be a focused (maybe longer hopefully) chapter.

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FYI this update was community voted, where the other options were bunnygirl and a scene with senpai. I was hoping she'd actually be wearing the black dress in this version since that's what the poll said, but I guess it makes sense given the little time NT00 had this month. I hope he does end up making a bunnygirl Yumi one day, though.

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real hero dude

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NT00 update today: In June, #Yura and Netorase penalty game (Temporary title) will be posted.

Looks like we’re gonna get a spicy chapter next month.

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What do you think the next chapter will be about do you have any potential insights?
Also I saw on patreon that Nt00 uses #Yura for the most part instead of Yumi is that done to show that she is engaging in netorase or just as a way to label them

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@Watertellers

Yeah I wouldn't read too much into Yura/Yumi just like you said that he uses "Yura" more whenever it's more of a netorase play/get Haru more turned on by adopting that alternate persona.

As for insights, honestly it could be anything but I'd guess this would be the first chapter with "real" progress in the netorase play in literally 1.5 years since the last Christmas event, and that's why I'm extremely hyped for it. Even though NT00's talked about the whole wishy-washy canon thing, I'm thinking this chapter will bring an escalation to the netorase that is at least "believable" and not just a random IF or Delusion event.

At this point, Yura has let Jin do raw anal, but there will def be buildup to a potential raw creampie chapter. This is all speculation but looking at "penalty game", we've seen in the curtain chapter/buildup before Christmas chapter that Jin made a bet with Yumi about how he should have raw sex with her because Haru didn't stop them. Also, the actual Christmas chapter was also sort of a game where Yumi let Haru have the choice of stopping her from using the ultra-thin condom with Jin (which was revealed to be a trick cause she and Sena were already there and Jin wasn't even at the hotel).

I'm guessing now there will be another bet/penalty game where they revisit this raw sex/creampie with Jin where if Haru fails something or fails to stop something he'll get that "penalty". Also, very low chance of this happening since we're focused on Jin, but he could reintroduce Jun-Senpai as we've never seen him involved in netorase play and NT00 has said to me before that he would like to possibly reintroduce him into the story.

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It could be related to whatever incident Yumi referred to in the epilogue.

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@Hurray456

Possibly, I’d say this will be the beginning of a buildup period before the actual incident.

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So would it still be an omnibus chapter then I'm assuming. I do hope that it doesn't go too far as it seems like we have gotten a lot of very aggressive Yura and not as much softer Yumi scenes or seeing where the characters mind is at. Like is Yumi fed up with the Netorase at this point or just teasing Haru (although if it is an omnibus story it wouldn't really matter I guess).

Also has NT00 said anything about the continuity yet or is it still up in the air. Correct me if I'm wrong but the only things that are canon are the first 30 chapters or has that changed or have you heard anything?

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At this point I doubt we're ever gonna see more of what Yumi's thinking anymore, since it seems like NT00 is kinda done with that story in general outside of these essentially omake chapters and putting in more focus on Mina's story now. It's disappointing, but I've come around to accept that. I do miss seeing more of Yumi's teasing, too, so I hope we can at least see more of that.

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@Watertellers
NT00 has said nothing further on continuity yet. Just assume it is loose continuity, but to be fair all those Yura chapters after the first 30 chapters were also at the same level of canon in that they didn't strictly happen but you can tell from reading it is meant to follow the first 30 chapters, and we even now have an epilogue that is 100% canon that references some "incident from last year". So...it's not canon but it feels like canon, at this point I'm just here to see any interesting storytelling as long as it's not lazy.

@Hurray456
Yeah, it's a bit of a shame that Yumi POV was only in the first 30 chapters, seeing her thoughts would add more depth, but also it's understandable why it's left out to leave the reader in suspense and experience the uncertainty/excitement that Haru feels. However, I sincerely hope he isn't thinking of "phasing out" Yumi because that's what a majority of his fans want to read and if it's not at least done justice, that would be disheartening.

Last edited on 31 May 2024, 14:02.

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She did it raw without asking him first ? Seriously it's just like Netorare no Tami at this point 😂

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Okay everyone, NT00 just posted the first chapter of “Her Netorase Penalty Game” which is going to be an arc the NT00 will update every other month. It is 59 pages! Will take me 1-2 days to translate.

Here is what he posted on his Patreon:
Her Netrase penalty game will be posted every other month. I'm planning to be 「Mina Senpai」 + 「Fan art」 + 「Penalty Game #1 Cut scene」 in July.

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@steveyolo80

Sorry to sound like a broken drum but is this something that is canon that might lead up to the epilogue or is it still a more omnibus thing. Because I'm not quite sure where it would take place.

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@Watertellers

I actually don't have a good answer for you, as if we strictly go off of NT00's words on his previous posts, these chapters are omnibus chapters. To me, they clearly are chapters or events that lead into each other and I'm ASSUMING DOES lead into the epilogue which to me at least justifies that they are at the very least canon, or as canon as all those chapters that came after chapter 30.

Problem is NT00 never said those were canon either but we clearly see Yumi referencing past events that happened in the original 30 chapters. There are arguments for either side and this is just my take that these are canon since (again, I assume) they lead into the epilogue. Could I be wrong and could you argue everything that came after 30 was NOT canon? Absolutely. So really it's a "read it for yourself and take it how you like" situation. Again, sorry that I don't really have a good answer for you or anyone wondering about this topic.

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Hey at least here, Yumi is actually happy doing what she does, and not a miserable, crying depressed mess like Hinako is in "She is Targeted"

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@EHCASUAL
LMAO, I also love reading Hinako and am waiting for her to pull out a 4D chess move that she was actually faithful to Yuichi all along. I'm not coping at all /s

But yeah, just uploaded "Her Netorase Penalty Game" first chapter as the June update. I'll be honest, this has gotten me super excited for Yumi for the first time in a long time and even though the next big chapter isn't coming until August, we will still get a small scene regarding Game #1 in July, along with Mina content.

My guess is that Game #1 - August, Game #2 - October, Game #3 - December and these chapters would perfectly lead into what was discussed in the epilogue - which kinda feels good for "canon" because it all still kinda ties together and makes sense - NT00 totally cooked this month in introducing this format - though I'll be blown away if those future chapters are just as long and high-quality as this first one.

Also, even better is that a specific event in this latest chapter (Yumi's plan for kissing Jin) is where she talked about how she DID kiss him before, but just halfheartedly and not a "true" lover's kiss so that actually helps to reinforce canon by tying back to past events! (NOT that this is her first time kissing him again). I'll be on the lookout for more of these plot points that tie back to past chapters.(muh CaNOn)

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The handjob with the tease into the cream pie when he's at his peak is about as good as it gets.

Actually acting any of that out tho is a nah. Last 4 pages is a hard pass and artist appeasing his ntr fans as usual.

Good translation, fast too. Have to admit tho the tease of making the only limit whatever he decides it is and then stopping is kind of cool. She probably wants to stop so that's why she made that clause trying to accelerating it and stop playing around, and just accept whatever he decides is enough. Honestly best sequel chapter is her calling it off and being like sorry I changed my mind. There's not enough wholesome in these chapters to draw me in.

Yea this series kind of lost it's spark for me cuz it's not about yumi and haru anymore. She could have made it easily work just domming him out of it.

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Thank you for the fast English upload for end of June ❤️

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@steveyolo80 Thanks for the work as usual. Do you get the chapter in advance from NT00? You re so fast and it seems you said you guys talked about the translation before.
This chapter is excited. Yumi, once again, shows that she is not addicted to cocks ( Shout out Hinako lol) and everything she does is for Haru.
I think this new games are going to keep things spicy but also make him learn to kind of control his fetish. This is what kind of lost me before on this series. I felt that Haru was getting controled by his fetish and Yumi had no idea what to do and would just say yes to everything Jin says. It was a bit ridiculous. But clearly this penalty game is a nice answer where she actually really thought about how to balance and help Haru. So I m super hyped.
@valesauce you said before that she could just dom Haru and that will be the end. I totally disagree. Yumi just dominated Haru may work a few weeks and then his dick is not hard because the femdom does not provide him enough delusions.
Since the very beginning their relationship is based on communication and hidden desire. That s why it took them so long to get together. And the conclusion of the canon story is: they are both fucked up in the head… and a wholesome loving couple.
Haru loves both Delusion Yumi and Real Yumi. She can just make that disappear by domming him.
She is the Goddess of sex who actually does not mind fucking dudes because it s not that important to her. He is a guy in love with his genuine girlfriend and the girl in this delusion. And because she is not emotionally attached to sex, she can provide him with his fantasies without betraying him. That s the core of their story! And I hope that s what the penalty game is going to bring back !

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1305 translated images, that's really impressive. Thanks for your hard work, steveyolo80.

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Yea some good thoughts there.

I figured she seemed to enjoy sex with haru but I guess because the love makes it actually feel good for her. She seemed like she didn't care because her trauma with senpai getting her drunk and raping her and him lying about being haru twisted something inside her, especially after she found out. Since he just likes being teased by her I figured it should have been enough to just have her lead, like it's the feeling of powerlessness in the face of the object of his desire that should be the main trigger as opposed to the actual porn she makes for him, just being a layer of it that is a simple medium to enhance it. I think delusion yumi is more just a seductress and a tease, cuz that's what she does for haru and it's a persona she made to try to cater to whatever fantasies she got him to open up on.

Idk the draw of nts to me is the pillow talk and none of the other stuff.

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@valesauce The last 4 pages are just the same delusions we've been having since the beginning man, nothing wrong there.

I'm personally not super into using the same bull all the time, it feels a little like actual NTR even if she stays with her partner in the end since she's staying so much time with him and letting him use her freely, and that is one of my pet peeves with the "She's being targeted" series, but unlike there, Yumi is obviously not into Jin like that, she's not losing to his cock or any trope like that, and she's not hiding anything from Haru for the sake of NTR-baiting the reader, like with the "She's being targeted" series...

I'd say you're safe reading this, we're not heading towards another NTS into NTR story, but do keep in mind that the story ended already and we're still going, so even if Yumi says she pretends to stop escalating at some point, we all know that's not true, not because she's going to leave Haru or because she loves Jin, it's just that the action needs to escalate to keep engagement.

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@valesauce @mahboytoy @Aiboru974 @karmazynowypiekarz

Thanks for the kind words everyone! I always strive to translate as fast and as accurately as possible because of my love for this series. Also, I get the chapter the same time as everyone else on Patreon/Fanbox (Go support NT00! He also has extra content like PSDs and MP4s!) which is perfectly fine as I'm sure NT00 is also working on chapters up until release anyway.

Love the discussions! Personally, I feel like this new series will be almost like a redemption and I'm hoping/expecting that the raw creampie that was foreshadowed but ultimately not done on Christmas 2 years ago to be done this Christmas but we will see!

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Yea he should have continued Mina a long time ago cuz it was like parallel enough but also a bit different. That would be a slut who is comfortable being a slut falling for the shy dude and enjoying teasing him. Wonder if nt00 gun shy tbh.

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Wow you get it as the same time as us and you re that fast! GG you re a beast! @steveyolo80

To finish on the talk with @valesauce. I think Haru is traumatized by the fear of losing Yumi as you said and his fetish started from that. But after talking with her through texts at the beginning and experiencing the excitation and pain of not knowing what was going on with her sending sex video with other men. He felt in love with the woman in his delusions. A version of Yumi that does not belong to him and submit to men for pleasure. And Yumi knows it and created Yura who is much less hardcore than Dark Yumi. So thanks to that she can provide the plays and penalty that allows Haru to love both sides of her. Anyway that s how I interpreted the story. I may be wrong.

I think the difference between « She is targeted » and here is the role of sex in the relationship.
Hinako never had sex with somebody apart from Yuichi and so the all game was using the imagination of her boyfriend to tease. And also he had a very small cock and can t please her. So when she found real pleasure she lost her mind.
Yumi is the opposite. She started by having sex with the ultimate bull Jun senpai. And then she realized that sex without love is just a basic temporary need. She is more excited by getting kissed by Haru than having sex with somebody.
That s why we know even if there is a creampie it does not matter at the end.
The fact that pissed me off at the time of the Christmas chapter was everything seemed to be : Haku is regressing as a boyfriend , Yumi does not know what to do, Jin can ask everything and the couple will say yes. It was really the author saying I don t know what to do anymore.
If there is raw sex and creampie in the context of the penalty game and it is coherent with the characters! Let s fuuucking goooo

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I feel the conclusion of the penalty game may ultimately lead to the end of the Yumi/Haru storyline if it does tie into the epilogue scene that Yumi referenced. However, Yumi is NT00's main source of revenue and why most people are probably subbed to his Patreon so its a weird situation to be in if I was the artist. It would be nice to go full blast with the Mina storyline or create entirely new characters and start from scratch but this is not my livelihood so idk. Either way Yumi/Haru's story has been going on for over 3 years at this point and at some point there need to be an end or just continue to make random what if chapters.

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@Aiboru974
I get why Hinako does it on "She Is Being Targeted", it's just that the author keeps creating new branches in the story, changing past events and making works canon or not depending on backlash. I'm into NTR too so that's not the problem, but the back and forth of did this really happen or when does this take place is jarring.
This whole talk of Yumi wanting to cure Haru, when it will maybe never happen because of reasons outside the plot, and the vague canonicity of these extra chapters, could create the same effect here in the long run for those that like to follow how the story is developing. But hey if you're here for the art and teasing, you're the one in the right, this is porn after all lol

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We already know this isn't going to turn out to be NTS to NTR because we already know the ending of this story. All NT00 is doing now is filling in the gaps, along with just random scenes with vague canonicity because he needs to eat.

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@Breaker478

or he could make some chapters/artworks that features more of haru and yumi's pegging to each other, and those mp4s that he makes are really good quality i hope people come buys it more.

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Needs the 'pregnant' tag because Yumi is pregnant at the end (images 686-694).

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July's additional cutscene has been uploaded. It is an additional page that references a past scene that also foreshadows the "2nd netorase penalty game". I'm looking forward to the 1st game which will be August. But yeah, otherwise this month is more of a Mina month.

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I really like how I can see NT00's art improve overtime in this gallery :)

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There's nothing new... Its the one from last month....

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After looking at the preview and rereading through the whole story I have to admit I'm a little conflicted and I can say that if this is canon I this goes a few routes.
To start I really don't see the story ending in NTR I see it sticking with the teasing from Yumi but ending the same as the epilogue where they are together.

Now before I start the one thing I hope is that we can get an inside view of Harus mind and Yumis. After all these games are made to push Haru to make a decision. Kissing Jin as a lover is not something that Yumi is going to like as she is doing it for Haru once again. The shower scene is something that will probably impact Haru alot as he has never seen it in person (and the only time he was there was behind a curtain). Now to the final game the raw sex this is where I can see it going a couple ways.

The first would be it not happening at all. Now this is the route that I would like best as quite frankly I'm on the side of pure love and not to much into the ntr although the NTRS is hot. I'm worried that this route would negatively impact the couple and make it more strained than needed. I see the appeal for drama but besides that it seems more like a cheap moment. (Also because I would somewhat view this as Yumi giving into Jin when she never did Jun who would have been able to convince her more). Now this is just my opinion but you are free to disagree. Also it is important to note that Yumi said that it was raw sex not a creampie but hey that's where the story could lead where Yumi has raw sex and it's up to Haru to stop the creampie.

The second option is the raw sex but no creampie which is a possibility and it could be that Jin was close to cumming in her and that was the risky day mentioned in the epilogue.This would be a route that pleases both sides as it would make it so Yumi finally does the long teased raw sex but doesn't upset the pure love side of a creampie. I can see this route and it could work with the characters as Haru would no longer be controlled by his fetish and Yumi would see that Haru cares for the real her and not the delusion. And it wouldn't break the canon epilogue.

The third option would be raw sex and creampie and delusion Yumi or Yura takes over. I don't like this route at all honestly, sure it would be hot but it in my mind would ruin the story. It would be too much like the Himiko one and it would betray the characters. Now I understand that the creampie could happen and thus could be the final thing that snaps Haru out of it but I don't like what that would do to Yumi. She held out for love for so long and to do it now would just feel bad, even if she did it for Haru I feel like that would hurt her character and mind set as a whole.

Now I could be dead wrong about all of this and this is all omnibus and not canon ( what I believe). That being said if this is canon then NT00 is free to do what they like, I just thought I would put my thoughts down and see what people thought. If you read all this thank you and feel free to let me know what you think down below. (I might edit this later if I have another idea or more accurately for grammar)

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@Watertellers
As for the second option, the risky day mentioned in the epilogue had to do with her becoming pregnant, you know, when woman have ovulation they call that risky day.

For me the creampie announcement was Haru's illusion in the epilogue. All the illusions in nt00's work were after the event happened. Haru gets a picture of yumi and imagines unprotected sex with creampies, video and again raw sex with creampies. We always have a fact on the basis of which the delusion is built.
Then the question is what fact gives him the illusion that Yumi is telling him that.

I don't understand how creampies affect the transition of manga from nts to ntr. but for me it's strange to see the wain about it, people write about pure love, but what kind of pure love can we talk about when Yumi has Jun's dick in her mouth periodically.
Guys relax and enjoy this work, it is beautiful in its own way.

Sorry for my english =

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@Woolcat
For the most part I can see your thoughts process but the dellusion one in the epilogue seems more like his old fetish popping up after seeing her pregnant belly. Now it could be because of the fact that she got creampied (although I'm in the camp that thinks that she won't) or just his fetish popping up and Yumu dealing with it. After all there is the chance that the raw sex happened but she never got creampied or this will be what shocks him out of his fetish.

Now when I was saying risky I was referring to the idea that it would be risky for them as a couple. Now although they end up together in the epilogue and that's the canon end the idea of risky in my mind was their dynamic changing. After all the raw sex part was where Yumi said that at this point Harus fetish was controlling him and he prefers the fake Yumi more than the real her.

Overall we will just have to wait and see I was just putting my thoughts out there. Also side note when I spoke about pure love I was referring to the good ending path that the author wrote I believe. Or I'm wrong either way we will just have to wait and see what happens.

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Honestly the teasing in that last chapter is the ideal. Wouldn't actually want any penalty game or whatever but her teasing is what made any of her story good. It showed that she was starting to figure out how he's actually wired when she doesn't make him cum until he's balls deep inside her. At the end of the day all she needs is to understand how to play with his vulnerability in just the right way. She doesn't even need to fuck another guy and let his mind do all the work. She could legit just go out and spend time with some friends or just read a book at home and then act like she did something as yura and say he doesn't get to see idk. Most of his arousal comes from his own imagination and the fear of losing her she clearly thinks the other dudes she's fucked especially Jin are kind of disgusting but she has like no self esteem so she let it happen. With haru at least she could put it to good use to get him off but eventually realizing it's not about her being a slut so much as just him being a sub and her needing to learn how to Dom him.

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Her Netorase Penalty Game Ch. 2 is out! It's 41 pages, will try to translate and get this out asap!

For September:
NT00: Video call scene for「Penalty Game#2」and delusional scene work for purikura

Update: August update released!

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Oh, so we're still getting a Yumi update next month? I thought it was gonna be every other month. Unless since next update still counts as part of the same penalty game, the next part of it will be in November?

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@steveyolo80 thank you for translation as always. Please check your PM, I have a personal question for you. Many thanks

@Hurray456
Yes. Next month is gonna be extra content for 2nd PG as @steveyolo80 wrote above. Next part must be in October, not November

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@Hurray456@witd

Yes it looks like second half of the chapter will be September, for now it looks like he may skip Mina for the month as he hasn’t said anything about her. I anticipate it will then go straight to chapter #3 in October with the final chapter #4 in December.

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@steveyolo80 same here. But it's important to keep in mind that the second part is in fact the first :D
Also, am i the only one who have a "strange" feeling about last page?

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Also FYI for everyone reading the latest "Her Netorase Penalty Game" chapters, the numbering can be a little confusing:

Ch.1 - Prologue/Setup (06/2024)
Ch.2 - First Penalty Game (08/2024) 2nd half expected 09/2024
Ch.3 - Second Penalty Game (ETA 10/2024)
Ch.4 - Third Penalty Game (ETA 12/2024)

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I waited 1 month just for that ?

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I clicked for the nipple piercings in the cover but there was nothing here =/

Went back through the artist's work and found them in this gallery instead: https://e-hentai.org/g/2826643/9c846c6dfa/

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@Snittzi

This gallery is mainly for story and does not contain all CG variations. For looking at all CG you can find them pretty easily with the Nt00 tag or by the Japanese galleries.

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@Aniimey

I'd like to think it's gonna start pretty slow with a lot of teasing until we eventually get to the raw creampie. Regardless of that, this chapter was very good, idk if it's just me but i like the teasing Yura does, it's hot.

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Nt00 low key taking notes from ntr no tame and making 70% of his chapter black screen with yapping. Honestly he's completely lost touch with what made his story sexy in the first place. It would be 10c sexier to be nts reporting with single frames either on a phonr screen or a flashback to match the imagery on text at most. Like the after story he originally made where they were in a relationship and jin wasn't in any if the frames outside of delusions or the occasional photo, and majority of the frames was yumi teasing with some comfort weaved in. Idk I just don't get it cuz this stuff isn't secy at all. There was like a few good pages showing her in her outfit and then a little bit of her texting like asking if he wants to stop. The rest is haru yapping in his head black screen and rehashed frames from the past. It's like he put maximum 3 days of effort into it.

Even his Mina stuff has been completely uninspired.

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What's different in the 01/09 update? It has the same number of pages

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I'm sick of this Jin guy... Wish NT00 would introduce new characters or have her do stuff with Senpai.

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@valesauce

Hey, different strokes for different folks but I disagree with the opinion that NT00's gotten worse or that he's lost touch with what made his story sexy. After all, his most popular chapters were when he ramped up the netorase plays with Yumi and Jin back in 2022 and fans come for the netorase and possibility of NTR but that ultimately concludes with Yumi's love for Haru. This chapter honestly shows a return to form with Yura and Jin escalating the netorase play.

It seems you overly criticize him whenever the netorase side outdoes the loving/vanilla moments between Yumi and Haru but this really isn't that type of story where it's single frames of nts reporting between pages of vanilla. The after story chapters you mentioned where netorase doesn't play a major part were not engaging to me either because a majority of his fans are into the netorase aspect, not reading 10-20 pages of vanilla sex between Haru and Yumi and then a passing mention or single frame of Jin pertaining to netorase play (now that would truly be boring).

"3 days of effort" is honestly kind of disrespectful because the original Yumi chapters or the early After Story chapters had an average of 10-20 pages per chapter but now Ch.1 of the new series had 60 pages and Ch.2 has 41 pages, all with improved art. You might say that most of those are black screens or rehashed frames but a better indicator is by number of PSDs (main poses/art with variations) and older chapters maybe had 1-2 PSD at best and the past 2 chapters each had 5 PSDs. It may not be your cup of tea, but most of your criticisms seems directed at the genre of NTS/NTR not appealing to you and then criticizing him for not portraying Yumi the way you want, assuming he's ruining the character when this story is 90% NTS/NTR and 10% Vanilla and Yumi is acting perfectly in line with giving Haru what he wants with netorase play with "out of character" moments just her acting and hamming up the Yura personality.

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I think the reason I prefer this over the majority of other netorase like NNT is the fact that Yumi actually feels like a realistic person rather than a woman written as a hentai character, at least most of the time. It barely ever feels forced and her love for Haru is more realistic than a lot of other couples in the genre, where it's usually more shallow. I'm also a fan of how since it already canonically ended, there's no risk of it devolving into actual NTR out of nowhere. We've seen the end and are just seeing the gaps in-between get filled with content, so it's comforting to know that they're going to have a happy ending no matter how far any of the netorase goes.

Realistically, I don't think Yumi would ever be interested in Jin in any capacity. Haru is literally just a better pick weirdly enough, and has far more connection and chemistry with her. The fact that she gets just as much, if not more enjoyment while having sex with Haru over Jin is interesting as well, since in the majority of these stories the MC tends to be physically inferior for ham-fisted plot reasons. Meanwhile, Jin is literally just used as a tool for their fetish, and in some ways is the real cuck here since she'll never love him, lol. That's why a lot of the post-Senpai "IF" scenarios don't really make sense, especially when involving Jin. I don't think cheating is in Yumi's character at all - maybe she'd be more inclined if Senpai comes back, but that's a very big maybe.

With all that said there could be a few twists thrown in, but they'd all be pretty lame imo. This whole netorase penalty game is obviously leading up to a tie-in with the aforementioned "risky day" in the epilogue, so there's the possibility that Yumi could've actually gotten pregnant from Jin, but I mean... come on. It'd be unnecessary and dumb. Now, despite the fact that we're already locked into a happy ending, it's still impressive how NT00 manages to upkeep the suspension of the story despite us already knowing how it concludes. It's not like he's been grinding out a bunch of meaningless, boring storylines to milk the series for purely financial gain. You can tell he cares, especially in the constantly improving artwork.

Personally though, I believe that the netorase penalty game should be the last arc and then he should wrap up the series as a whole. I'd be totally okay if he finished it but decided to start going for AU bad endings and NTR routes, but I'd really like for him to move on to another group of characters entirely. New series, new setting, etc. I'm interested on whatever he'll work on next, aside from Mina's story of course.

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@steveyolo

Honestly fair enough. Not saying it has to all be vanilla just idk. Ever since the Christmas special and the following reboot the story just sort of lost it's glimmer for me. Nice translations as always BTW you're a hero.

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@valesauce

Hey all good man and we all wanna see good Yumi content. I’m a big fan and even I was waiting for a long time after the Christmas chapter and remake for some spicy new developments. We all know at the end of the day it ends vanilla for Haru and Yumi so honestly I’m looking forward to some more netorase play, especially with the anticipation of raw sex and creampie on the third play.

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First of all, thanks Steveyolo80 for the translation as always you re awesome. A lot of people lost their patience with NT00 after the long reboot which honestly apart from the good drawings were very much giving us nothing.

Someone on NT00 s Patreon was complaining this new chapter are doing stuff we already saw in 2022 and they wanted the Christmas follow up. But I disagree 100%. The issue with 2022 was with that Yumi and Haru regressed. They were as lost and not communicating as before they were a couple. The Netorase Penalty play and the teasing from Yumi (it s not Jin sending the messages but her). This is what I wanted. This is the evolution of their kink in a way that don t send them back . Jin is probably still pushing for some stuff and getting a very good deal. But at the end he is just a dildo. Even in the dialogue Haru is not hesitating to ask for more.
I just hope that Nt00 will not go back to his old bullshit and keeps with this concept.

Also Yura is so fucking hooot in this outfit. I wanted more scenes of her doing naughty things dressed like this. Nt00 drawing is so much better than before it s crazy!!!

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@melumisium at this point idk if NT00 will ever wrap up the series considering Yumi is his most popular OC. Mina doesn't seem to pull in the numbers as much, and even if he wanted to retire Yumi and focus on Mina, I doubt his patrons will stop asking for more Yumi content.

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@Hurray456 Fair point and I agree, I'm just hopeful that he doesn't feel inclined to continue Yumi once he thinks he's done all he can do with it, since I wouldn't want to see the quality degradation if he burns out. I know that he hasn't been constantly pumping these out year after year which is important to note, and honestly I'm fine if he continues Yumi into 2026 or later, so long as it's something he actually wants to do. I love this story, so I'm fine with some more milking - I just think he could make some really cool things aside from this especially with how good he's gotten at anatomy and detail.

And, honestly, I can see why Mina isn't popular since it's just kind of a rehash and lacks a lot of the substance and character writing that makes Yumi interesting in the first place. It's not bad, but certainly lacks the oomph of why this is so popular. Mina as a character just isn't as engaging as Yumi so far, imo.

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@Kuuderere Jin's face really is annoying, and I can't shake off the feeling that he doesn't deserve any of this, he's too much of a real character with a backstory to be "just a meat dildo", but doing it with Senpai or other guys wouldn't make much sense by now, this is just filling the gap with "maybe-canon" stories (they are canon don't bullshit us NT00), so introducing Senpai again knowing Jin would have to come back at some point would just bloat the story with cheap NTR-bait

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Waited 2 months for this ?

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New update today is Past Yumi with Senpai.

Update TOMORROW for Penalty Game #2 Additional Scene!

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There needs to be a BBC version with this girl

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I waited 1 month just for this ?

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@Aniimey

At this point you should probably stop waiting then, RIP bozo.

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I feel like this series was either really poorly planned or they need to milk the ever loving crap out of it after it got popular

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@Tintern

At this point I just hope it goes out with a bang and Yumi is not just abandoned after the netorase play chapters. I will complete the new chapters translation in a couple hours.

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goated series, wish author would focus more on chastity play and denial

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I admit I can't put my finger on it exactly why, but for some reason I find this rebooted version less enjoyable than the original comic.

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Pardon the wait, just released the second part of Chapter 2! NT00 will release Chapter 3 (2nd Penalty Game) at the end of October. The way this is shaping up, the next two chapters have the potential to be some of the best in the series! It's a great time to be a Yumi fan.

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I noticed a really nice detail, when Jin asks if Yumi can stay overnight, she instantly takes her hand off his neck and tells him "It's all for the play, so no" but then she looks at Haru and goes insta Yura mode, she puts her hand on his neck again and agrees. Very well made, NT00 maybe slow but he delivers.

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Not bad. She focuses on eye contact with haru and breaks character when Jin tries to get sassy. She makes it clear her focus is on doing what makes her boyfriend happy and that it's an act, and that's hot. She's clearly not yura, but has a good idea of how to act like yura, for haru.

First time in forever I've had something good to say about nt00s work lmao. Now to see what happens with the next chapter and if he keeps it "pure". I really wanna see yumi step into her femdom role and actually take charge with him so she can start dictating their sex life on her terms, which I'm assuming she eventually does when she realizes he's an addiction and that she needs to also be responsible sexually for him so that it isn't all on him and so she doesn't feel like she's constantly degrading herself and their relationship. I like the idea that she doesn't like it beyond just the physical sensation of a dick entering her and how she's been ducked by strangers enough to not be bothered by it and just have it be a physical thing, but I also like her not liking it in her heart and having it be something she sacrifices to pleasure haru. It's true to her character how she let senpai take advantage of her so long so she grew accustomed to seeing her body as something to exploit for a man's pleasure, and she continues it for haru where every time she does nts she is letting haru exploit her body out of genuine love since she likely understands if she doesn't then she doesn't deserve him since he treats her better than senpai therefor deserves to exploit her more than he ever did, which comes down to not only fucking him however he wants(which unlike with sensation she enjoys), but in basically becoming a porn star that records private porn for him as an actress, for free. It's a sexy angle for me cuz it shows her sincerity but it's also a sexy angle that when she's had enough she will take more charge in her relationship so they can have a healthier sex life that doesn't revolve around her degrading herself or harus addiction.

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This is more of what we've been needing, actual story direction and properly written characters. It's always nice seeing Yumi put Jin in his place whenever he tries to assert himself, which we've been sorely missing. Haru actually seeming into it and willing, and wanting to push it further to a reasonable measure. It finally feels like Yumi is doing this for Haru again rather than her doing it for Jin and herself.

Yumi even said, "Sex without love is only a simple physical act for a small amount of mutual pleasure." I'm glad to see that the author is actually caring for plot and characterization again, because even the curtain play and following Christmas were lackluster in terms of writing. Here's hoping we continue like this. Nothing better than a healthy, realistic NTS relationship with a communicative and happy couple.

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Really good chapter this time, I don't quite get the penalty game still... He's going to let it go to the end anyway, that's not a mystery, or maybe not, because that would interfere with the Christmas creampie plot, who knows.

@valesauce Femdom could be a nice direction to go, it's not ALWAYS a good thing to add because what's the point of femdom if the author is going to make her lose to cock, but since that's not the case here it would be a fresh take since after the unprotected sex we're getting next chapter all they can do is creampie really and that won't happen until after the christmas chapter on that one year time skip where she probably did it, it would explain why they stopped too, Haru clearly will just keep going if Yumi allows it, so I can only see them calming down if she's the one making the call.

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In terms of sexiness and netorase, the chapter was very good. But there's no hiding the fact that he used the final CG of August, made a bunch of variations, and called it a September update. I very much enjoyed the update, but still, he very obviously didn't create any new cgs outside the delusion one and flashback one. Maybe netorase penalty game is just, procedural for him? He already drew the October CG and we've already seen it. So I have a feeling he'll do this again.

Take a CG we've seen before, add some variations to it, add some dialogue, and call it a month.

That said, if the Nov/Dec update is incredible, he can do whatever he wants in October.

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I kinda hope she ends up vetoing him and realizing she wants to keep like raw and cream pie and the rimjobs to only haru. It would cheapen her too much for me. Would be better if the risky stuff happening is her realizing earlier on to deny him and the contention around it, maybe a falling out with jin on her and harus end since she never liked him to begin with but he was safe and easy and harus choice as well, and knowing he's gonna mostly be a good boy because she has an absolute monopoly on the pussy he gets, let alone her being yumi the campus queen. I'm interested in seeing how far the author goes to satisfy the nts fans to the chagrin of ntr fans or corruption fans in general.

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I think people underestimate how much Yumi enjoys Jin. We haven't really seen her thoughts on him specifically, but it's safe to assume that if she didn't like it she would tell Haru they need to find someone else.

The recent date and that playful interview they did together to send to Haru during the main story was a nice glimpse into how comfortable they can be around each other, which is a really nice touch to the story imo because it shows Yumi and Jin getting along well while leaving 0 doubts that she's still only doing it for Haru.

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Hey all, today's update was Chapter 3 Part 1/2 of the Netorase Penalty Game. The second part will be released next month in November with the final 4th chapter being scheduled for December (Likely as the yearly Christmas chapter!). We're almost at the end of the year and the end of this mini series with Yumi. Hoping for there to be even more Yumi afterwards, this has been a pretty good year so far, so let's finish strong!

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Good and quick translations as always. See i liked the first 5 pages or so for the tease but the rest is like ehh for me. It's basically her scene with senpai right before she started chasing haru which I guess is an interesting coincidence since after this series of games she's likely going to take control in the relationship saying she's done with it, it at least that's what I would like to see her do. Regardless it's dull coz it's not putting enough on haru/the viewer or letting us know yumi inner dialogue. The last chapter was sexy but this one was mostly a miss. Hopefully part 2 will close it out well and the finale will be satisfying. I'd rather she embrace his fetish and go all in in being a porn star for her boyfriend or reject it if she doesn't like it and close the relationship back up and stick to just pillow talk. Is that the end of November it's expected to be released? Feels like some really minimal work on the authors part.

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the video call during the toilet act is a bit weird , because there's no camera or phone in the image , how did they took that lol

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I'm surprised it was Jin that stopped the sumata because he might've slipped it in. I figured he'd be the type to push things, but he surprisingly has self control.

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Hey Steve, it is possible to upload the movies that came with this new episode?

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I wished there was more sumata, but the lovey-dovey blowjob is the second punishment game I guess.

We're like what, 2 updates? away from the third punishment game, and getting to another "how far are you gonna let this happen" question point.

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@Shurys

Sorry, the website isn’t compatible with MP4 video uploads. Also there wasn’t an mp4 that came with this months chapter, NT00 is planning to release one this month but it hasn’t released yet.

@44inf
Yup, also November update will probably detail the rimjob and shower sex Yumi talked about before.

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@NTRENJOYER07

Yeah, so much for actually seeing the act in person like she said before, I wonder if NT00 did that because Haru would've came and ended the game right there if that was the case (those are the conditions right? Or that's only valid when she's teasing him?)
But that's not a complaint, really helped since the gallery updated after it was already November in my timezone XD

@44inf

>another how far are you gonna let this happen question point
I'm following this with the headcanon that Haru approved of everything already, because why would they stop? NT00 wouldn't be doing this for nothing, specially since it looks like we're building up towards the Christmas chapter.

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thx bro,真的太棒了

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u didn't write rewrite story again steve? i've always been waiting for that extra delusion story u put

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Newest chapter done! Now we wait for the next and final chapter of the "Her Netorase Penalty Game" series which will probably be a christmas chapter most likely. Can't wait to see how it concludes!!!

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Fast translations as always.

Honestly this bathroom scene sort of scrubbed yumis personality out. It breaks the 4th wall that it's clearly the author just making porn scenes for the ntr fans. The closeness between the couple is basically not there at least for me the hot scenes was when she was teasing him. The actual sex scenes do nothing for me. It's not even yura or yumi in my opinion being portrayed there's no teasing haru just here's a sex scene and here's a pov with a penis being jerked off.

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I agree with valesauce but, the main story concluded a while ago so what did we expect? Netorase Penalty game is just for fun.

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A little disappointed to see the new chapter reusing a lot of the same positions from the last update with minimal changes. I feel like the 2nd penalty game could've just been one update.

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Yumi says multiple times about how Jin isn't going limp and how much semen he has stored up.Maybe she wants to extract all the semen before no con sex so that he only shoots blanks and no risk of creampie.

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So due too last NT00 report, we again have if scene?

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Just a quick report on NT00’s Patreon announcement today:

December update will be a short story set after the events of the IF in chapter 13 of complete edition. This is the timeline where Yumi never found out about Haru and instead stays as Senpai’s woman. The final chapter of the Penalty Game will be released next year instead and is not the Christmas update. For now, I’ll update the gallery with the preview image for how Yumi will look in the new IF chapter.

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Makes sense to do a Christmas themed story this month instead of the penalty game, but can't say I'm not a little disappointed that we'll have to wait an extra month for the conclusion.

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So we currently have 3 Christmas Stories and are about to get a fourth.

The first Christmas was Yumi fucking Jin as part of a deal for help winning Haru's attention.
The second Christmas was Yumi fucking Protag, with an alt-version of her fucking senpai.
The third Christmas [the best one] involves a potential Jin Creampie if Haru doesn't arrive to the hotel in time.
The fourth Christmas.... coming soon!

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@Hurray456

I'm a little disappointed too about needing to wait.
The penalty game could be themed with christmas too (Imagine Yumi tricking Haru that she got a pussy creampie but it was actually a anal creampie as a christmas present lol), but maybe NT00 want to do this short IF story because they want more time for the 3rd penalty game, at least that what i'm hoping for because the last update was kinda average.

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@jwdsp I think that scenario would be too similar to last year's Christmas update, which may be why NT00 decided to not go that route.

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@Hurray456

Yeah, it's indeed similar, but in this scenario, it would end up being a real creampie, even though it's actually anal creampie. But anyway, we won't see that and tbh I don't care much about IF chapters so I will have to wait for the 3rd game, I just hope that the 3rd penalty will be a banger :P

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Its really the best it's genre. Can anyone suggest me something similar to this

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@schneijel

Ngl it's really hard to find good netorase, most of them start as netorase and end as netorare or they keep as netorase but the MC is humiliated and cannot have sex with FMC which I don't like. Unfortunately I still didn't find any other netorase as good as Yumi, there might be some that is good out there butI didn't found it yet. Hopefully someone have some suggestions.

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@schneijel

Yeah, finding an actually good netorase story is borderline impossible, and I think netorase H-games usually serve that role better. It's such a shame that pretty much every NTS transitions to NTR in the most boringly predictable ways, to the point where the majority of it feels insanely forced. Yumi is in all honesty the best long-form manga that ticks all the boxes of good NTS, Even though it's kind of had NTR bait in its own ways. Especially with these newer releases that have lost some of the charm due to backtracking to fill in the in-between of the timeskip to the pregnancy/marriage.

While Yumi as a series isn't perfect, you at least know that it's pure love mixed in with some good NTS that'll head to a vanilla ending (Unless there's going to be some dumbass retcon/plot twist pulled.) But, you don't get that sort of quality assurance for other manga. Even the "She's being targeted" series fell victim to this, lol. I'm rambling, though. The best you're going to get out of proper netorase is from checking out random netorase one-shots, honestly. The artist "k8on" does some good occasional netorase work as well, and there's a decent enough long-form series called "Netoraserare". As for games, I'd recommend "Secret Care Cafe", it's free on Itch.io, purely netorase and has probably the best writing of the genre.

On the topic of Yumi itself, having to wait until next year for the potential finale of the penalty game is kind of crazy if that means a January 31st release, especially with how lackluster I've found the past two chapters. Getting a Christmas mini-episode is kind of cool and I'm all for the IF chapters, but I'm not a fan of senpai and I'd rather it be related to the ongoing penalty game, tbh. I'm sure the real next chapter is going to be good, though. Just feels a little milked lol.

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Happy New Year everyone!

IF christmas has been uploaded. Hope everyone enjoys the chapter!

Next month will be Netorase Penalty Game Chapter 4!

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Dang that was probably the worst Christmas Chapter he's made. All three prior Christmas Themed Chapters were waaaay better.

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Best Christmas Chapter. Hope he stood with the senpai and not Jin.

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The dichotomy of the two comments above me lol

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idk, I liked this chapter. Story-wise not as good as the rest, but the art was really good and I think this is Yumi's best Christmas outfit. It was a waste to see her take it all off in the sex scenes, though. I think that's a problem NT00 has a lot, actually. He gives Yumi a hot outfit, and then she removes it all during sex.

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Still can't understand why Haru should care about Yumi and senpai at that point when he was only briefly interact with her once. They was just a stranger to each other. How is that supposed to be NTR?

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Yeeeeah. Haru had a greater connection to Senpai in the original since its implied he stayed in photography club. Also in the original, senpai sent pics of various girls he fucked [not just Yumi]. Also, Haru was more of a rival or contrast to senpai since in the original Yumi called senpai "Scumbag" and actively disliked him, but that was removed in the remake in 2023.

In the remake Haru and Senpai should be borderline strangers. So this Christmas chapter was weird. The other Christmas chapter with Senpai [He asks Yumi to break up with Haru and be his girl] felt more in-line with the writing of the series.

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Waited one month for this ?

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Nice fast translation as always.

Wtf tho how lazy is the author lmao. There's a real part 2 right?

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Am I crazy or something because how are people acting like this chapter was lacking content? We got 6 high quality drawings, each completely different from the rest without reusing the same assets, and the drawings themselves are some of the best ones we've got. You can tell NT00 has been working on improving his art. Sure, this update didn't progress anything at all in terms of story since it's just a non-canon "if" scenario, but the quality of the content itself is really well done. I get that NT00 is not immune to criticism, and some of the critiques he's gotten are well deserved, but damn it sure does feel like some of you won't be satisfied with anything he puts out at all.

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Thank you for the translation as always. Very hot chapter. I love older Yumi's design.

@Thaitop_EH My take (WARNING I MAKE QUITE A FEW ASSUMPTIONS):
Haru cares because he still loves her even in this alternate timeline. The "connection" between Haru and Yumi here does feel forced but the timeline somewhat makes sense if this Yumi still found out who Haru was after her initial corruption, but decided to stay with senpai instead of cutting him out of her life and pursuing Haru. This Haru was also in love with Yumi since the college party (like the original timeline) and has been getting these texts from senpai for years while having no direct interaction with Yumi herself. His only interaction with her has been by proxy via senpai's sex updates, so the last 2 pages commenting on the snow falling outside seem to imply that he's still in love with her years later and has had his sexual desires warped by her and senpai's messages just like the Haru in the original timeline. But since this Haru can't be with her, he's chosen to stay a cuck whose feelings will never be reciprocated and settled for the next best thing in his twisted mind which is senpai sending him pics and vids of him blowing her back out.

@sam9758 I think you're placing too much emphasis on the differences between the original story and the remake. These post-remake chapters have always felt loose canon-wise, and I doubt NT00 cares enough outside of the "IF stories" to determine which story elements are truly "canon" and which ones aren't.

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this last chapter was a "WHAT IF"? creampied wasn't cannon right?

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Ok, so. I'm confused about something.

That last chapter doesn't have pubic hair. All the ones before do. (Unless I missed something.)

Are there 2 versions with and without? Or is this one special somehow because it's an IF and Jun had her shaved or something?

I'm confused, because, if there's 2 versions, I'd definitely want to have both. I can't be the only weirdo that prefers no pubic hair around here...

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It’s because it’s an IF and Jun had her shaved as his preference.

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So one more episode and punishment game end? Pretty good choice will be if he do 2 episode again, i mean jin cum 5 times in a row so its abit too much i think if he do episode #4 right in the hotel,Would be nice if they go too haru and yumi house, setup good tease like first half of PG#2, and then we got hot raw sex(im pretty sure its gonna be anal).

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I think Netorase Penalty Game all happening in one single day was a mis-step narratively, but visually its obviously very hot.

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@sam9758

I agree, a day or more between games imo would be better because seeing Yumi teasing Haru is the best part of the story. Having three games in one day with minimal interaction between the two isn't that great. But yeah, the art is getting better and better.

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Just uploaded a mini-chapter, "Sadistic Yura-chan"! Penalty Game chapter 4 coming end of this month, so just 2 more weeks!

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The interaction between yumi and haru is what was sexy for me. Anything she did with Jin was lame. Her teasing him was Anything good about the story.

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At last the Yumi footjob, I can't believe it took so many years

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Just posted Netorase Penalty Game #4!

NT00 plans to release an extra/omake of Penalty Game #4 as well as fanart in February, and then Penalty Game #5 will be the final chapter and ending of this mini-series planned for March!

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Damn we still gotta wait until March?

Also, I guess we now know this is likely the risky day that Yumi mentioned in the epilogue. Can't wait for the conclusion.

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this is still going?

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@Hurray456 Idk about that chief. The epilogue implies they are no longer in college and the pregnancy between Haru x Yumi was accidental and not planned. Nothing about Jin even alluded to, nor would it make sense since they're all still in college. These are just side stories, not related to the chapter entries.

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@sam9758 Nothing in the epilogue implies that the pregnancy was accidental, but either way I'm not sure how that's relevant. Yumi mentioned that they had a risky day a year before, and we know that NT00 wanted to draw whatever that risky day was. With this new update, Yumi says today is her risky day, which is why I'm assuming this is probably the day she mentioned in the epilogue.

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NT00 sprinkling sph fetish in this comic as well...not my thing, but understandable. Not out of place.

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@sam9758
Yes, the epilogue suggests that they are no longer in college, but that does not mean that they weren't in college "last year". But only time will tell what really happened.

But imo, Yumi is saying that it's a risky day just to tease Haru, it's not actually true.

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@jwdsp or maybe it IS a risky day but she'll take a morning after pill. The dialogue before NTRS Penalty Game implied bare was only on safe days and there was never a mention of hormonal birth control so that could be a whole angle. Going on it for Jin's sake, not for Haru's. Though I honestly have no clue what NT00 plans.

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Waiting two months until March for the conclusion is honestly sort of insane, especially after last month's What-If chapter. This is a good chapter, though -- and Yumi with glasses is extremely cute, I just wish she actually wore them beyond a few instances. The small penis humiliation thing is honestly just kind of funny considering the fact that Haru is just barely smaller than Jin, lol. I'm a fan of whenever Yumi slips from the Yura act when Jin says stupid shit, "What a dumb thing to say," and she has to call him out on it before getting back into the Yura character for Haru.

Not really sure what's going to actually happen with the raw sex. I'm going to be immensely disappointed if this ends with any sort of actual NTR/cheating, especially if she gets pregnant from Jin. I'm betting something is up and this is secretly in her control, since I wouldn't think she'd even want to risk pregnancy with him, but I'm not really sure how this is going to go where it's satisfying both narratively and erotically. Maybe she's just lying about it not being a safe day, maybe there's a Plan B pill and/or she's on birth control, who knows. I'll keep trusting NT00 not to ruin it.

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I don't think she's telling the truth about it being her risky day either, but I do believe this is still the day she was talking about.

@evaluv3r999 The sph did kind of catch me off guard, too, since it was never implied Haru was smaller, though I guess there was never a reason to bring it up since the size difference isn't that great. But I also remember in one of the older chapters, you were actually able to compare their sizes from one of Haru's delusions and they were the exact same, so NT00 actually changed it for the sake of sph fetish.

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I don't like Haru's dick being smaller when it was always the same size as Jin's and specially because the chapter before this (not counting the what-if) features Haru's dick in every page and it looks significantly bigger, feels artificial, but that's just a detail.

But it being her risky day is not just a detail, she's definitely lying, in what world Yumi would bet her womb on Haru not coming to a NTR fantasy? She knows he's losing.

Maybe her plan is making Haru finally draw the line (Wasn't this the whole purpose of this game?) And after he draws the line she reveals it was fake all along and they have unprotected sex on her actual risky day.

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I'm guessing I am alone in this but I always assumed Jin was a bit bigger than Haru so this wasn't surprising. You could say it comes down to delusions but if you look at page 1213 they look a bit different in size. If anything I expected that there might be a slightly bigger difference between the two. Though not to the degree of Senpai

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@trickjames tbf this wasn't always the case, this was a recent change. Haru had a bigger dick in the older art compared to now.

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The actual highlight for me is page 1637 where she unexpectedly aludes to Senpai's cock being her favorite, puts Jin in his place and makes her look like an even bigger slut, that was some good shit. As for the risky day, Yumi actually having a brain and a heart is what's been holding this thing together for so long (all other 3 guys are typical NTR characters), so I'm also betting on it being a ruse just to make Haru finally snap.

HOWEVER! If getting knocked up is on the table for her, she may actually let Jin creampie her but then reveal to Haru that the child is actually Senpai's, Haru gets cucked knowingly, Jin gets cucked unknowingly, and Senpai knows he can have all of Yumi's body but never her heart. The ultimate cucking hat-trick where everyone wins (kind of). God, I love Yumi so much.

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@CxHxA Never Cook Again.

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Introducing senpai back into the story to impregnate Yumi and retcon the epilogue would be one of the worst possible outcomes, and also totally out of character for Yumi. I don't think even Haru would go that far.

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My impression after watching the latest episode is that nt00 wants to make their previous "what if" Christmas story into an official tale.
If that's the case, I think I can kind of understand what Yumi is thinking and why she's acting this way.

Yumi would have expected Haru to play the final penalty game, and Yumi herself would have thought that everything was going according to plan up to that point.
However, I think Haru's actions in the final punishment game were a gamble for Yumi, so I'm curious whether NT00 will end in the same way as an if story, or if it will end in a way that readers can't predict.

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@0721nt The outcome will be as we expected. The artist is not dumb enough to kill his golden eggs laying goose. That's the reason why "what if (route)" exists, because he can't risk losing his big income.

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one question, does Sena know about Haru and Yumi's ntr game?

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Is Sena even canonical post-reboot?

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@Thaitop_EH
Certainly, if that what-if story were to become the official version, many fans would be disappointed and would stop subscribing. I myself would be saddened by how meaningless the actions and feelings of the two characters in the main story were.

However, although the situation is different between the previous Christmas and this penalty game, the final turning point is the same. What will Haru do when Jin and Yura (Yumi) try to have sex without a condom? If Haru had acted the same way as last time and had a happy ending, it would have ended the same as last time, which nt00 thought might not be well received by readers, so I think that this time the what if story he wrote last time might become the official story.

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I think that the next update with the final chapter of netorase play could be the “end” of the story with Yumi, because after some reflection, I think that in fact all this netorase play is there to make the link that was missing in the complete edition with the epilogue.

We know that Yumi wants Haru to give up this netorase fetish, and all this netorase play has done is increase the intensity of the mental pressure Haru may have towards the cuck fetish, and several elements align to the fact that this last netorase play will be the one too many for Haru.

What makes me think this is the dialogue in the epilogue. On page 693, which seems to be a flashback to 'that one risky day last year', where Yumi says that Jin probably cum inside her more than Haru during the “unsafe day”, and as luck would have it we have here on this last netorase play Jin and Haru together to fuck Yumi during a “risky day”. Also on page 690 we have the information that the couple have stopped with the real/physical netorase, because after teasing Haru a bit and he couldn't help himself with his “strange delusion”, Yumi says she's going to keep emptying Haru all the night until he “stops having any more of those bad thoughts”, implying that now real netorase is no longer an option in their sex life.

My prediction is that since the author needs 2 months to make this last netorase play, we're going to have a long chapter where the author will try to finish the story well by satisfying his ntr fan readers and also the fan of the vanilla between Haru and Yumi.
The chapter begins with the raw sex between Jin and Yumi, a long, hard fuck in which Jin ejaculates a lot and several times in Yumi and at same time with Yumi speaking/teasing a lot Haru with her dialogues, while Haru, passive in front of this scene due to the penalty game, finish by finally losing all excitement and completely breaks down emotionally (I don't know maybe for example he will collapse in tears), Yumi seeing this will seriously panic and stop the sex with Jin, reveal that the risky day is a lie and that given Haru's reaction it is perhaps time to stop netorase. Haru agrees and some lovey-dovey sex between them ensues. Then comes a final scene later where Yumi and Haru are in lovey-dovey sex again, where we learn that the netorase is really over, and that Yumi is really on a risky day this time, Haru sends a lot of sauce inside her, which will inevitably make her pregnant, and presto it makes the link with the epilogue.

Or maybe I'm just talking shit and it won't be that at all haha, we'll see.
But in reality it would allow the author to close this story well and then be able to finally resume his story with Mina.

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@Arthas75

Out of every theory I've seen, this one definitely makes the most sense. Or, at least, it aligns most towards my own thoughts and therefore I'm biased in its favor, lol. May as well theorize a bit since we've got two months until it happens.

This whole netorase play arc was made by Yumi for, probably, three reasons: Indulging Haru's fantasies one last time, forcing him to realize that this fetish is only detrimental to their relationship and that she's far less into it than he is, and removing Jin from their dynamic. The creampie idea is going to be her method of making him understand that this cannot continue for either of them, especially with the threat of pregnancy. This obviously works, as concluded in the epilogue.

Also, this is probably pedantic of me, but the whole, "Unsafe day" dialogue was had in one of Haru's delusions, all she said was that there was a risky day last year. Also, it was written in a manner which implies that they both creampied her on the same day, not just Jin. Maybe it's one of those NTR tropes where they both creampie her "to see which seed is stronger," but that'd be dumb as hell. Or, maybe I'm just talking out of my ass here, who knows. Also, the epilogue seems to imply that the father is up in the air, even to Haru, for some reason. I wholeheartedly believe that this current "Risky day" is a lie and she's on birth control or something, and it's just a fib to further convince Haru. I'd also bet that Jin doesn't know this either.

NT00 already sideswept everyone years ago when he originally gave this a happy ending, which is why I'm not too concerned that he'll appease the NTR supporters now, especially since it would retcon the original story. My only concern is that he might reveal something at the end of this which doesn't retcon the epilogue, but sneaks in an element that makes it NTR/cheating, like Yumi still seeing Jin on the side, or the child being Jin's -- both of which I'd absolutely hate. On the topic of what's after, though, I truly hope that Yumi ends here, maybe with some occasional short scenes sprinkled in from the pre-epilogue content. NT00 has been working on this story for like, half a decade at this point, so I really think it's time to finally branch off and go onto something new, even if it is just Mina. (Maybe with some cameos from Yumi.)

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Guys the first problem that Yumi is main work wich make money fot nt00, so he probably wont stop here.
The second moment, there so many plots for future yumi release. Right now he can split story, like after #5 punishment yumi ask haru about what next and haru decides to stop netorase play and we got cannon ending. Or haru ddecides too keep going and we got huge IF arc with tons of NTS and NTR moment.
Nt00 can throw Jin away or limit nts plays with yumi like once per months wtih haru control with or without creampie. He can add another guy or sempai(actually he note him pretty much) will comeback, there are so many possibilities here for future release.

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@WoolCat

At risk of commenting too much and obnoxiously yapping, I've just got to go ahead and agree with you. This guy is going to be drawing Yumi for as long as he possibly can because the series is such a money printer, no doubt about it. My only hope is that they're explicitly non-canon and or flashbacks to earlier parts of the story after this is over. I'd actually be very happy with a lot of IF scenarios, just leave the canon as is.

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So what do we suppose the chances are that Yumi is already pregnant and that the week delay was really to get an accurate pregnancy test?

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To everyone watching this story, Jin and Yumi have raw, creampie sex, but would you be satisfied if Yumi and Haru had a happy ending in the end?

I think that would be a bad ending. The Yumi series has consistently depicted two people confirming their love for each other at the boundary, without crossing that boundary. I think that's what's good about this series, and what makes Yumi and Haru's characters so appealing.

If they officially crossed the boundary, I think the goodness of the series would be lost, the character images we've had up until now would be ruined, and the characters would become unattractive - a woman who has raw, creampie sex with anyone, and a pathetic man whose brain is destroyed by a sex fetish.

Last edited on 07 February 2025, 14:04.

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@0721nt
I would like too post my comment one more time: For me the creampie announcement was Haru's illusion in the epilogue. All the illusions in nt00's work were after the event happened. Haru gets a picture of yumi and imagines unprotected sex with creampies, video and again raw sex with creampies. We always have a fact on the basis of which the delusion is built.
Then the question is what fact gives him the illusion that Yumi is telling him that in epiloge.
So if you want too know answer too your question, would i be satisfied after yumi and jin creampie sex? I will say yes, if this is what nt00 need too move this story further, let him fill Yumi pussy with thick Jin semen.

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@0721nt

Personally, my opinion is that it would be even more of a letdown if this event that has been built up for years by this point is not acted upon. Christmas 2022 was when it was teased for months but Haru said "someday I might cross that line...but not today". I'd say it's a great point to the writing and NT00 that Raw sex and Creampie were built up to be a hard boundary line because now, it has stakes, and people actually care now that it is very likely that boundary line is crossed.

I actually disagree with your point that the series and characters would be ruined with this, and that is because we've literally seen how their netorase play and relationship has evolved over time, and how with each step they have taken, their relationship remains strong. The epilogue hints at this because Haru and Yumi have probably done even more depraved acts but by the end "they understand each other more than anyone else" and "the two of us are very happy together", showing that despite escalating acts or "crossing the boundary", the fact that they are still together despite only shows how much stronger their love for each other has become. That, I feel, points to the true essence of Netorase where theoretically there is no limit to how "bad" the actions are as long as the two lovers still emotionally connect with each other and strongly believe in their love, whatever the actions may be.

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@0721nt

I agree with you that it would a bad ending and a betrayal of the narrative.
My reading of the story is that Haru will overcome his fetish, his love for Yumi ultimately winning over. I would not be so sure a creampie from Jin is set in stone, despite how clearly Haru appears to be losing his battle over excitement. I think when Haru sees Yumi have sex with another man, this time not on a phone screen or behind a curtain, the Yumi he thought 'beautiful' might begin to fade or feel drastically different, I think it is a point of significance here that will be explored next chapter. 'Reason' over 'excitement', that is the purpose of Yumi's punishment games.

I have opinions on how exactly all of it will go down, perhaps another time i'll share. I commend NT00 for keeping this short story not entirely predictable and having us guessing, it's good writing and I would hope to keep it that way.

Will we see Haru cross that boundary? Absolutely, just not in the canon route in my view. For me personally, a 'happy ending' is overcoming a hardship, the way the stage is set right now, could allow that to happen.

Something that would annoy me though, assuming we're getting a canon and 'IF' split situation, is for the 'IF' route to get more content and more weight than the canon one, like last time's christmas chapter. I don't wish for that this time (and i'm a big NTR enjoyer). NT00 needs to show more love making between lovers for balance.

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@Kingslayer7

What you're describing is literally the exact events that have already played out in the Christmas 2022 chapter with no creampie in canon, creampie in IF view.

I'm not really sure how that's good writing if they literally do the same thing as 2 years ago, other than you get more vanilla and lovey-dovey moments between Haru and Yumi, which I enjoy a lot, but it would not be good to bait readers with promising raw sex and creampie TWICE now, in the span of two years, only for Haru to deny it in the end, because it would "betray the narrative".

If what you're talking about actually goes down it would likely not satisfy anyone but the pure vanilla enjoyers, which often seem to be the vocal minority.

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@steveyolo80

I think it's dishonest to call these events the exact same as Xmas 2022. This time Haru is taken to the very edge of his sanity, and there are stakes now that are much more impactful which you say yourself, as Haru is led to believe there is a real threat of pregnancy.

Personally, I dislike meta arguments like "baiting viewers for X years so Y must happen, else we're gonna be really disappointed!" or "X is the majority of readers so Y won't satisfy them". For me, that is the opposite of what good writing is. What I care more for, is for the story to be consistent and for the characters to act with integrity (yes even for a porn story). I think 'promise' is too strong a word here to be used in regards to viewer expectations of the story, to my knowledge NT00 has never promised us anything, string us along for months and years sure, but never a clear cut direction.

Now it could happen, Haru might really allow Jin to creampie Yumi, knowingly that it will likely impregnate Yumi (whether Yumi was lying or not about it being a risky day for her doesn't matter) to satisfy his fetish, but Haru has to bend over backwards to do that. I don't believe that is what he truely wants or he's going to be dragged to the point of realisation that this really isn't one of his delusional fantasies. This is what I mean by it being a 'bad' ending because it means Haru disregards everything, and in my opinion that would make this penalty game story pointless.

I'm all for more depraved acts of NTR, just seperate from canon. It makes the most sense if we're talking about appeasing all viewers. On that note, what would really be spicy for me if there is a 'IF' route, is for Yumi to straight up dump Haru and becomes Jin's girlfriend for real with only a single thread connecting back to Haru with pics/videos. That would be a great point of continuation leading to a 'bad end' visual novel style. After seeing the latest Xmas with Jun senpai, I think that's what NT00 will do with all the 'IF' routes and content involving Yumi moving forward.

I actually want this story to end, more content added sure, but I want the canon story closed for good and left 'pure'. I want Mina's story to continue. To my point, we know Haru and Yumi stay together anyway but having no limits to Haru being cucked just leads credence to a never ending story.

Last edited on 08 February 2025, 12:02.

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Thank you to everyone who responded. Everyone is mentally strong, but I spend my days miserably with my heart aching just thinking about #5, which is likely to cross the line.

I'm writing about my current feelings, so it's long, so I'm sorry if it's hard to read or understand.

The content of this story is about remembering that day in the epilogue, and if it's a story that leads to the epilogue, I personally think that the ending of this story will be about Haru returning to his senses and overcoming his sexual fetish. However, if he overcomes his sexual fetish, there will be no cuckold play, so the Yumi series will end nicely. The question here is, will nt00 draw a story that ends the Yumi series? That's it.

I don't want to say bad things about the author, but nt00 relies too much on Yumi's popularity. This is because he is aware that Yumi is the main content and the cash cow. nt00 declared that he would create a story with a new character called Mina-senpai and update it alternately with Yumi, but currently Mina-senpai's story has stagnated and he is only updating Yumi. I guess it's because they can earn a stable income by continuing to update Yumi.

If raw vaginal cum shot is necessary to create a happy ending that leads to the epilogue in #5, I can understand it, although it's a complicated feeling. However, if raw vaginal cum shot is drawn to increase the number of things that can be drawn in the future, and it doesn't lead to the epilogue and becomes like a Christmas what-if, I can't accept it at all.

The reason I don't want to cross the line is because it could be thought that I can write anything, ignoring the characters and story settings. I think there is a limit to continuing to draw the line, so I think it's inevitable that raw vaginal cum shot will be lifted at some point, but I can only hope that the author doesn't go astray because of it.

Thank you to everyone who has read this far. I feel a little better after writing my thoughts. I used a translator, so I'm sorry if there are parts that are difficult to read or don't make sense.

I've been a fan since the beginning of the main story, and it was nice to be able to talk to other fans. Thank you.

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@Kingslayer7

You call it dishonest but different stakes, same outcomes. In your view, you want Haru to not go through with the creampie in canon, but allow it in the IF. What happened in Christmas 2022? This.

Here's my more nuanced take, besides "meta arguments". I can totally see NT00 writing Haru to witness the creampie but then not want Jin to impregnate Yumi and also perhaps regret his actions. It would NOT be good writing for the creampie to never occur because it's likely with the way the story is going that the creampie does occur, but Haru regrets it/stops the netorase or Yumi already has safety measures because she would never realistically want to have Jin's baby. Also yeah, it's a copout the canon event would literally be just Haru almost witnessing it and then backing out, which would be the exact same events as two years ago. Circumstances may be different but for the outcome of a whole arc to remain the same is just a dumb outcome. Sure, he didn't "promise" it, but baiting readers and stringing us along is functionally the same thing.

No, Haru can regret and go back on his choices after realizing the full consequences of his actions. I am also tired of readers not trusting that the literal author of this series knows how to write his characters. There is no world where Haru completely disregards all morals or Yumi becomes a complete slut, that is character assassination, but it does not mean we literally cannot have the creampie happen. NT00 would obviously somehow work it into the story but have it make sense. Like, Yumi could easily be lying about risky day, or she's taking a pill, or she's already pregnant with Haru, like come on, having the creampie happen doesn't automatically = Yumi is a slut, Haru is braindead cuck, there's nuance to be made and NT00 knows how to write his characters.

Also I know you're just letting everything happen in the IF route but want the canon route to remain spotless and boring but guess what, most people KNOW the IF route is supposed to be out of character so it's pointless to get excited about stuff that you know isn't actually canon, but in the world of make believe.

I'm not gonna talk any more on this because it's obvious we are both steadfast in our viewpoints, so let's just wait for NT00 to write the actual story.

Last edited on 08 February 2025, 17:14.

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@0721nt

I appreciate you sharing. I agree with your sentiment that, if the creampie from Jin were to happen, just as a means of continuing even more 'serious netorase', I feel that would be a bad outcome for the story and really degrades any believability that Haru and Yumi really love each other. It has the same story beats as NTR, and would be such a departure of what the story currently is. We know this already exists in Xmas 2022 'IF', it makes more sense to me to continue from there as another addition to the story rather than twist the narrative even more making it canon.

@steveyolo80

It's those specific differences in stakes that I was refering to that make it different to Xmas 2022, sure one can be just reductionist and just say same decisions same outcomes, but you might even say theres nuance to how Haru made those decisions, and if anything acts as a point of relevance to Haru's character. It's not my main point of contention so I'll grant you if we're going to complain that the outcome is just the same, well yeah, that would be consistent with the story. Which I strongly claim is the utmost importance to a story that's good, regardless of it being called a let down.

Here's why I think having the creampie happen is 'bad', because it removes agency from Haru's character. A "braindead cuck" might actually be better descriptor of his character if we just accept he will disregard Yumi completely to satiate his fetish. We're now at a point again where Haru has to ask himself what matters more, yes just like before, and make a moral decision / prove his love. If we are to believe Yumi and Haru trusts each other, Yumi should expect Haru to choose her well being at the climax of this penalty game.

What I think is the core of our disagreement, is that on my side we hope Haru will actually have a redeeming quality about himself besides just drinking some beers, and yours, simply reduced as a character to serve as our OWN excitement, cucked endlessly for the better porn. 'Happy ends' ARE boring, they're supposed to be, because its less about porn and more about adhering to the story narrative.

NT00 is one of my favourite artists now, that doesn't mean I have to suck the guy's dick and not be allowed to criticise, thats all this is if the story turns a certain way. Not shitting on the guy at all, just respect.

That said, I fully understand why you think the creampie should be the ultimate punishment for Haru, I just think it's the wrong way, as I mentioned I think it should be an innate redeeming quality within Haru that teaches him this lesson and to think critically before it happens. I say this because it falls back on what the punishment game is supposed to be about, and the narrative that Yumi wants netorase to end (it's open that she might not, she has her own fetish). Is Haru supposed to feel punished with guilt, or immensely rewarded now that the line had been crossed when he allows it? It is my own bias speaking that the canon story steers toward an end, and not open for more continuation, story development wise.

And so we arrive to the assumption that all of this connects with the epilogue. Here's my issue with the proposed theory that raw creampie sex is ok, because Yumi has a safety measure in place. Key issue being, she says there was something that was "risky";

If she was lying that it was a risky day for her during this punishment game, how can it be "risky" for her in the epilogue?

If she was already pregnant during the raw creampie sex, how can it be "risky" for her in the epilogue?

If she can just take a pill, and everything is right as rain again (by the way, if you want to know what the cop out would actually be, it's this), what message does that teach Haru about that line being crossed? 'Just keep having raw creampie sex and take a pill'. Haru would have learned nothing and makes the narrative pointless. Is this what "risky" days boils down to? Just taking pills? This can only spiral down, you yourself would say is character assassination.

The only answer is that she LITERALLY risked pregancy with Jin or that it almost happened.

Here's a summary of what you want if i'm not mistaken, the raw creampie happens (the art would probably be amazing), Yumi is lying about it being risky for her (cannot connect with the epilogue), Haru feels regret, the raw creampies continue with escalating netorase with no end in sight, satisfaction that the essense of NTS is upheld that Haru and Yumi love each other no matter what can happen, there is no line or boundary (now that's boring as fuck if you ask me).

I reject all of that and consider it a 'bad' ending because of the removal of agency for Haru as a character, the removal of any kind of redeeming quality about him and it removes the importance of having a boundary line that the story's narrative was MADE to be about.

I won't go into whether viewers would be satisfied with 'IF' routes, because that is entirely subjective, and for me personally there is no lessening of excitement about them.

I think it's interesting to see different viewpoints but I totally understand if you don't feel like replying. Let's wait, see and enjoy regardless. Gonna touch some grass now.

Last edited on 09 February 2025, 19:15.

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@Kingslayer7

Yep, I think we've arrived at a fundamental difference in opinion, which I concluded when you said this,

> "What I think is the core of our disagreement, is that on my side we hope Haru will actually have a redeeming quality about himself besides just drinking some beers, and yours, simply reduced as a character to serve as our OWN excitement, cucked endlessly for the better porn. 'Happy ends' ARE boring, they're supposed to be, because its less about porn and more about adhering to the story narrative."

Well, okay then. Your version of a happy ending could affirm that the characters love each other, but I'd argue they're more complex than that, and their love for each other isn't flimsy enough that just having a creampie goes against their characters or their love for each other. Read from the beginning of the series and you realize that Yumi has become desensitized to sex and she loves Haru so much that she's willing to go to immense lengths to satisfy his fetish, often without caring much about the sexual acts she does with others. She fully expects him to lose because she knows that Haru is so deep in the fetish, do you really think she set those conditions without thinking Haru is likely to fail each one and progress to the last game from the beginning? No, she fully realized at least the possibility that Haru would cave in to creampie. So at least for this, it is completely in-character for Yumi to push for the Jin creampie to ultimately satisfy Haru, and she's doing it of her own volition because she loves him (not secretly hoping Haru wants her to stop, or "to choose her wellbeing")

Now Haru, sure I can see him rethinking it and changing his mind at the last minute, not going through with it, sure. That's because he actually did this Christmas 2022. Sure. But could he also just let it happen since he's so excited and also in the past he literally said, "Someday I might cross that line, but not today". Sure, that's why this possibility is also possible. That's why you basically saying it's against his character does not make sense, as it can literally happen, he also thought in his head it could happen too.

Let's agree to disagree because we both want the story to go a certain way. But also, I am looking at this through the lens of a porn cuckolding story, so seeing Haru call everything off while it may appeal to some fans that cannot stand the slightest bit of infidelity, will definitely be a letdown and a disappointment to everyone else. Sorry, people are not gonna wanna read a porn where nothing happens, or stuff only happens in a make-believe timeline, with the only argument often being "their characters would not act like this/ the author is butchering their characters" all the while the characters are acting perfectly in line within their characters established and the author has a clear idea of their development.

Okay, that's officially my last comment on this, also gonna go touch some grass now.

Last edited on 09 February 2025, 21:16.

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Haru's losing half an inch each passing chapter, spread awareness about the tragic disease afflicting significant others in hentailand known as Netoraretcon

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Omake #4 tommorow?

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at this point Haru's dick size exists on a spectrum and varies depending on what is convenient for the author

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The Yumi footjob is real!

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@DatMedBre Tragically, for each half an inch he loses it is evenly distributed between Jin and Senpai

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My bet is that there's no way NT00 actually commits to the NTR, for all the bluffing and baiting with Yumi pretending to actually like sex with Jin and Senpai and maybe potentially quite possibly falling for their advances, it's been made clear time and time again that she only really likes, no, loves Haru. Yumi doesn't give a shit that Haru has a smaller dick, or that he gets hard with the netorase play, she loves him, and we've seen that she goes out of her way to please him and also receive creampies from him since day 1 of fucking.

If I had to guess, there's a really good chance that Yumi won't do anything to stop Jin because she wants Haru to intervene, and in that way, Haru might finally break away from the netorase play. Haru has to be the one to stop the play, and Yumi already said that if he intervenes, then the game's over.

If it does actually happen, and NT00 makes Jin creampie Yumi, definitevely cucking Haru, then I'm going to be extremely disappointed because that wasn't the story I signed up for all these years.

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@N1FP
I'm afraid the original Haru and Yumi from all those years ago don't exist anymore. Original Yumi managed to resist Senpai until he caved in and introduced her to Haru. Current Yumi succumbed to him and only through Mina's intervention found out about Haru.
Original Haru was a shy and hesitant guy that got cucked through inaction and unlucky circumstances. Current Haru pushed Jin onto Yumi in hopes of getting cucked by him. Originally Yumi was the one who initiated the contact with Jin to get closer to Haru.

Creampie has already happened once. It will happen again.

NTR guys have won. Accept it and move on. NT00 isn't going back to the original dynamic.

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So what is the next set of images based on. Is it a teaser or is it just something random

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@Watertellers
It says Yumi (Omake). I think it's just extra/bonus.

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Next play is anal sex guys .. remember that Chat with haru .. where she do anal sex with jin .. i think this event is before that Chat .. she never said it gonna be vignal sex

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Bro any one have video file?

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"Creampie has already happened once. It will happen again."

Has it? I thought she's only had it raw with the MC?

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Nothing new ?

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@44inf

Yumi's never had raw sex or creampie with Jin before, only with Haru.

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Yes it has happened before. Christmas before the remake. Yumi got creampied by Jin, not during a What If or Delusion, but an actual canon event.
It was intended as a routesplit., but it still was actual raw creampie sex with Jin. We're back to that point right before the creampie currently. NT00 has done it before, it's likely he'll introduce it again into the story. Now with the excuse of the epilogue being happy to appease vanilla fans, he can give the ntr group the canon creampie, like he tried before

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@Suntar

"not during a What If or Delusion, but an actual canon event."
No, that was the Christmas IF chapter, the entire chapter was an IF so it's not canon. You are misinformed, but that's okay, the series can get confusing.

I actually want the creampie to happen canonically, but it's possible that it's relegated to an IF route again because NT00 has always given the canon side a full vanilla ending, so we will have to see.

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Personally, I would dislike if there were to be a canon creampie. I know a lot of people probably don't agree, but I much prefer this story not slipping too deep into NTR territory and instead staying as netorase/vanilla -- I'm more than okay with leaving all the NTR/extreme NTS as What-Ifs. It's what sets it apart from a lot of other NTS stories which tend to have a very flimsy definition of what NTS is and decide that it's just NTR but with coerced consent from the male partner.

I wouldn't hate for it to happen, and it's not like it wouldn't still be NTS. But, if it did happen, I'd like for there to be a finale afterwards with vanilla Haru/Yumi content which ties into the epilogue with them leaving the NTS lifestyle and marrying, basically expanding on it for a more satisfying finish. I think that offset would be perfect for both sides of the viewerbase, since it would satisfy both spectrums without being another What-If for those who don't care for pure vanilla. My only firm sentiment in this is if it retcons the earlier established epilogue with surprise NTR and/or if Yumi is actually telling the truth and she just lets Jin knock her up and have the baby -- I don't think these scenarios have any chance of actually happening, but that's the line for me.

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@steveyolo80

Canon was perhaps not quite the right wirding. However, that Christmas IF wax fundamentally different from any other what ifs. It was an actual possibility, nit an ingerently impossible "What If" scenario. Here's what NT00 said at the time:
"In this IF, the relationship between the two does not change, It is a new type of IF where the story can continue."
He was trying to create a storybranch, or route, where Yumi in fact did get canonically ceampied. I believe he's doing it again. That's what I meant with creampie happening already and likely to happen again. He's already implemented wriggle room with his "omnibus" claims and the Epilogue.

Creampie will be "non canon" but still be the only "route" that gets continued.

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@Suntar

That's still an IF, so it's not canon. That's how he has structured all the IFs so far, just look at Yumi actually dating senpai in the Complete Edition if she didn't find out about Haru - the most recent Christmas chapter was set in that IF route too. They are actual possibilities in different timelines but still not canon since it's not happening in the main one.

@melumisium

Yeah at the end of the day whether it happens or not, I doubt the epilogue will be retconned, which means nothing crazy will actually happen in canon like real NTR or Yumi getting pregnant by anyone other than Haru. It's just some that consider "creampie" too far / equating it to NTR / out-of-character when it has been built-up towards for a long time and is not mutually exclusive from a vanilla ending. That line of NTS --> NTR seems pretty arbitrary and differs for everyone according to personal opinions.

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On that note, NT00 may as well do a poll to see if people would be interested in a parallel story, where an IF route continues for a few months. Though, he has fans on so many platforms, it may be difficult to poll them all.

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Now this is the good stuff! So good I nutted FOUR TIMES to it. It’s so hot and somehow wholesome(?!) Yumi is like the perfect cuckolding gf, I love her! Only wished she went through with the chastity cage denial, it’s one of the best ways to spice up that relationship.

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Absolute Peak incoming...

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@steveyolo80
Today?

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Writing this based on from what I can translate on google, so my interpretation might be a bit wonky, but I think I've got a good grasp of the story here and overall I am satisfied with how this punishment game ended.

While not being exactly how I imagined it being done, and I was pretty sure of myself that it would not turn in this direction (made big posts about it, won't repeat myself), it is at least respectful to the viewer and most importantly is trying with best efforts to show that Haru and Yumi's romance prevails.

Here's what I liked about it; the facial expressions. The expressions on Yumi really did sell the idea that Yumi was not enjoying the situation all to much, showing hints of regret, and to my surprise, even sadness.

I think Yumi really did plan a lot of ways for Haru to call his 'out', even before this, speeding up her handjob on Haru to relinquish all his excitement, to think again with reason, but ultimately it was not enough. And we even had a little moment where Yumi realises nothing will work, and reassures Haru that she isn't leaving him no matter what he chooses. Haru is truely helpless and brainless for us.

As primarily an NTR enjoyer, watching Jin pump into Yumi was arousing but I got to say, the whole fuck just felt sad, more than anything else, like it was a feeling of pity for Yumi because she really is putting on this act to satisfy her lover, at her own displeasure. We don't see her face all the time, but we don't need to. When Jin finally pulled out of Yumi, her facial expression was perfect.

Haru says that it's enough, no more, which was also good, perhaps when he saw Yumi's saddened expression showing the creampie did he realise he could no longer see fantasy, only reality. In the context of netorase play ending, this was an important moment (at least for now).

We see Jin play up his usual NTR fantasy spiel but it has all been played out now, not much he can say or do to spice things up anymore and it was fun seeing Yumi outright shutdown his delusion. I think Jin has no more plans of attack, at least on his own.

The wholesome moments were great, I'm relieved it was with the most weight in this chapter.

So more Yumi content it is then, potentially more netorase play with Jun-senpai, mixed feelings about that, would like it to be 'IF' route continuation as to be in line with 'IF' epilogue. Because frankly, I think Haru and Yumi deserve to be happy now, and like Haru, I want see more of Yumi's real smile for a change.

Edit: Also want to add that we still don't know what exactly was "risky" that was mentioned in the epilogue, it's confusing because Yumi calls this a safe day.

Last edited on 31 March 2025, 22:16.

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@WoolCat

May not be today as there are 80! Pages to go through as well as NT00 has not put the finishing touches like sfx or motion lines so will probably be shortly after the final version is posted.

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@Kingslayer7

Yeah, I agree with every point you've made after likewise translating it myself. I'll probably make a larger comment about my thoughts once the English version is completed. I'm pretty satisfied with this conclusion, and I'm glad the actual creampie was done well enough. I also love how so not into it Yumi seemed, which really reinforced that her entire Yura persona she built around cucking is just a character she made for Haru out of love, rather than her actually enjoying Jin for more than just the sex which she has for Haru's own gain. Fuck Jin, btw.

The wedding ring reaction from Yumi was especially cute and I'm glad we got a good vanilla ending scene again, though I do wish it was longer and showed bits of the actual wedding, and then the final sex scene would've been of them making the kid that Yumi was pregnant with in the epilogue.

I can certainly say that I agree with wanting the possible Senpai NTS play to be specifically non-canon. I'm not interested in such a thing at all besides a few IF scenarios regarding it. I don't like Senpai as a character and I don't see a point in bringing him back, and I 100% don't want anything canon to be changed regarding post-marriage plot. I'd very much rather NT00 finally end the series for good and begin a new story, but this is his cash cow, so I'm sure there'll unfortunately be continuations down the line.

All-in-all, I'm glad I was correct with my guesses on the end balancing out with good romance content, even if I wish it felt a bit more substantial in terms of wholesome scenes.

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Hey everyone, I've uploaded the rough version of the last chapter of the penalty game! Please wait for the final version as this has the main story and dialogue but not all sound effects or details yet, I will update it once NT00 sensei has published the changes. Enjoy!

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Well, it's NT00ver, Jin has been finally disposed of, but Senpai is coming back with a vengeance. If only NT00 made no mention of him and ended it there for now, anything further could easily be ignored for those who don't want to see Senpai again, but it is what it is. Yumi looked miserable during her last time with Jin so at least with Senpai, Yumi will get fucked nice and good again. Only thing I'm hoping for is that they tone down his douchebaggery, Jin was annoying for the longest time and Yumi wasn't even enjoying it, now she can enjoy herself so it'll be great if she can rein him in so no one has to endure another asshole. The fact that she was the one who brought it up gives me hope that'll be the case.

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Well, it didn't go as I expected, but it was still good. I thought that the raw sex would be longer, with more positions, but seeing Haru reluctance wall being broken and him allowing the creampie was kinda great. Even when reality hit, he was still hard , which gives me hope that more sexy/hot stuff and raw sex will come, which, for me, is a good thing. The ultimate netorase will always end with raw sex and creampie (with consent, of course).

We also see Yumi expression about what is happening. It seems that she was not entirely satisfied with doing that, but because she really loves Haru and he wanted it, she went all in. I would really like to see the background behind why she allowed the raw anal back in the day (unless it was an "if" and I didn't see the warning). Because now, during the raw sex and creampie, she appeared uncomfortable. It would be nice to know more about that.

At the end, seeing Yumi talking about Jun, even though I don't like Jun, I think it’s a good thing. The reason is that, in my opinion, when you are doing netorase, the girl needs more than one guy to fuck, so seeing this rotation happening is good, it keeps the story flow better imo. But yeah, if it were a new character, it would be better, in my opinion. Jun is a douche, but oh well, let's see how it turns out.

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Well, looks like author want to strech it more longer.

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Finally some new pages...

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Not really a fan of how Jin went out here. The entire story made it seem like he was just going along with the play because it was free casual sex with a hot girl, but unless I'm misunderstanding it seemed like he was genuinely surprised that Yumi wanted him gone once she decided the play was over. This also makes no sense because they've ended the play in front of Haru before and back then Jin actually did just silently leave like he was supposed to.

Also congrats to the NTR fans who have done nothing but bitch about wanting Senpai to come back. Looks like you finally got your wish.

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oh man to be honest, I kinda don't want Jun-senpai to get involved. Please let it end here

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That's a very boring ending for the penalty game considering that if it didn't have all the delays and months with almost no pages it could've ended last year, a lot of build up saying they're going to test their limits only to find no resistance at all so the status quo can continue, feels like I'm reading this only because of inertia by now.

@jwdsp I agree NTS with only one guy feels more like NTR, but bringing back Senpai only for him to be the only bull again isn't going to fix it, this is just going to be a repeat of Jin, starting with a date and Haru worrying she's falling for him again until we get to a creampie situation again next year and she's on the pill this time.

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Tbh it was a good thing how she immediately stop and sends him away. I didn't like the scene I thought it was lazy but at least she showed her colors. Nice and quick translate as always

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@MariSetogaya

Jin has always wanted to steal Yumi away from Haru. I'd argue he is even in love with Yumi, but it's purely a physical type of love, that's the trope, he is the contrast to Haru which we know loves Yumi unconditionally.

Every step of the way he has been trying to escalate the netorase play, giving Yumi 'advices' and is the catalyst for Yumi's A-list acting career as a pornstar.

Because to Jin, he is living the life like the home invader in one of his favourite NTR eroges. Just like Haru, Jin is delusional, we've seen it.

And so it really did all come crashing down for him when he finally thought he had won, completing the final stage and his conquest (just like NTR eroge), only to be coldly shutdown by Yumi. Jin's utter disbelief in that moment was warranted.

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Kind of funny that so many people are speaking out against a possible Senpai NTS sequel, which I totally get. It would add absolutely nothing to the story and just be a total rehash of what we just saw. Sure, there could be some unique moments due to it being Senpai, and Haru and Yumi being married, but overall there'd be no point. It's important to note that the NTS punishment epilogue takes place earlier in the timeline than the original story epilogue, since Yumi isn't pregnant in the last page, so bringing Senpai in would technically fit without changing or going beyond the original ending, but there's nothing of substance there aside from milking more money from Patreon supporters by hamfisting the NTR aspect.

Senpai is just a boring character, anyway. At least Jin had somewhat of a personality, even if it was the generic delusional NTS supporter role. I'd personally prefer a "True Love" continuation with small bits of their marriage being shown up until the original epilogue, with maybe some flashback chapters of previously unseen NTS scenes with Jin. But, even if it does happen, I'm not expecting NT00 to pull a Netorare no Tami move and make a "fake" NTR scenario later on with Senpai like the Gouda debacle in NNT's series. NT00 has proven that, despite milking the series and not putting as much effort into the story as before, he actually cares for these characters and the story they have. Which is something I very much respect from a hentai artist.

Overall, I'd say I'm pretty middling on the NTS punishment game as a whole. The only parts I'd say were worthwhile were the beginning -- especially since the fake date was the best NTS play of the arc -- and the very end with the creampie and marriage reveal, which again, was super cute. After being stuck with Yumi acting as Yura for so many months without any good Yumi-Haru moments, it was great to finally see her act normally again, even if for a few panels. And good on Yumi for actually telling Haru about being contacted by Senpai. You don't get loyalty like that very often in NTS stories.

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Jin finally gets to creampie Yumi but instead of it opening a door to depositing loads inside her frequently, we get WILL YOU MARRY ME!

Say what you will about what comes before and what comes after, but the marriage proposal felt completely unearned.

If it happened in 2022 when Yumi and Haru had tons of solo chapters of their relationship with netorase as supplementary, it would work.

But in 2025, especially with the removal of Sena and other misc. plot points; Yumi and Haru's relationship is like 70% Netorase and 30% each other.

I loved the art. Loved many things. But that marriage proposal felt completely unearned.

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He grew enough of a spine to propose, will he manage to stand up straight and stop Senpai for inserting himself back into this story?

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That was nice. I feel like the text carried this chapter, didn't like the visual aspect of the sex scene much (i undestand, is supposed to be Haru's POV).
Still, i'm satisfied with this ending, the proposal was cute.

Don't really know what to think of a Penalty Game with Senpai, but more Yumi is always nice.

Thanks for the translation, steveyolo80.

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Good, now please NT00 start a new series already instead of milking this into oblivion. Let it end already.

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Well either he will continue with the librarian girl or he will make something new. We shall see.

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The marriage proposal was earned because even while the dude was fucking her she never lost herself and assured haru just tell Me what you want and I will give it to you don't hold back. She gave him the encouragement to let go and test her for his fetish, he let go, and she rewarded his faith and courage when the moment he said that's enough there wasn't a hint of resistance or regret she sent Jin packing immediately and showed him she's his through it all. Basically she's his girlfriend and is willing to be his favorite porn star too, and will try to be whatever he needs whenever he needs because she belongs to him with her whole heart. She's basically his bitch and wants him to keep her, and she will do whatever it takes. So when he said stop and she stopped and asked him if he enjoyed it and apologized for maybe taking it too far even though he asked for it, he realized that was his wife right there.

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Nice end for this penalty game series. However, I don't believe it's a great idea to reintroduce Senpai if it continues from here. Letting in the man who deceived and took advantage of her would feel bad not only in relation to the characters but, possibly, for a good chunk of readers too (I don't speak on behalf of all of us). She dropped his sorry ass for a reason. If she had any respect for herself or Haru she wouldn't even suggest anything that had to do with him. It is definitely a plotline that could be explored in an "if" setting just fine though. I feel like going forward there either needs to be an introduction of new character(s) that can pick up the mantel or something along the lines of shorts that feature Yumi/Yura in various situations with different men until nt00 can cook up a new story arc or even something new entirely.

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@VNino

Yeah, I agree about Jun. He basically raped her in the beginning if you think about it. It's what I said in my comment, her talking about doing that with Jun is a good thing, but it's because in netorase the rotation of guys who can fuck the girl is imo good for the story. Introducing new characters would be better because if NT00 doesn’t change Jun behavior, we all know he will 100% try to convince her to ditch Haru, even though we all know she won’t leave Haru in canon, and him trying that might be a bit boring idk.

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NGL, the way Yumi looked like she really didn't want to go through with it was a real boner killer. But hey, at least she got to be an actual character again.

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Ending got me thinking this series will reach Yumi [Complete++ EX Shippuden The Finale Remix]

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I had a negative idea about Creampie, but after watching the ending I was happy to have a good story like the main story.
I think this story ended in a beautiful way, so I hope the author does his best in a direction that is not dependent on Yumi, such as Mina or new works.
This is my personal opinion, but I hope the author stops thinking if he is thinking of recreating Junsenpai from the epilogue.
There are two reasons. If Yumi and Haru's relationship doesn't change even if they give Jun-senpai instead of Jin, I think the ending will be the same as this time, so it's boring to repeat the same story.
Another reason is that the authors can destroy the stories created so far so that they do not unfold the same story.
As a fan, I hope it lasts for a long time, but if the story doesn't work, I think it would be better to finish the Yumi series once, as I'm happy with this beautiful ending.

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So next episode IF scene with Jin? After we go back too sempai, i would like if he dont restrict him self with count of games like last one!

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Not gonna lie, the perfect ending now would be Yumi off-handedly telling Haru all about her first time with the senpai asshole, my guy Haru realizing what had gone down, and then that asshole ending up in jail to get his asshole torn wide open forever more. He straight up roofied her (which is literally the reason Yumi doesn't care that much about sex itself, her first time was getting raped).

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@fuckalfie is right but I don't know about the prison rape ending, that might be a bit too heavy.

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@sam9758 Yeah, hyperbole aside, I think the best and only way to pull off a return with Senpai would be to have Yumi and possibly Haru secretly plan for it to end in Senpai being punished by the end, whether it be by themselves or, even funnier, actual law. Blackmailed, arrested, humiliated, etc. I agree with the takes I'm seeing that bringing Senpai back doesn't really make sense -- I get that Yumi wants to spice it up for Haru, but... Senpai literally raped and manipulated her in a toxic relationship? I know rape and abuse are taken fairly lightly in hentai, but still, it feels a bit gross. @VNino explains this perfectly. It doesn't even feel like something Yumi would do at this point, imo. But obviously, if this is all for an IF, then it's perfectly fine, because logic in those alt stories never really make sense anyway lol.

Also, I find it kind of funny that this potential NTS play with Senpai was never even mentioned in the original epilogue, so it's coming out of nowhere and is clearly going to be pretty inconsequential to the story, unless NT00 wants to rewrite it for some reason. The delusion scene in the epilogue even referred to Jin instead of Senpai when Haru was imagining Yumi teasing him about their pregnancy, so... I'm not really sure who this Senpai arc is even trying to appeal to.

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This is like the 5th time we've gotten a title drop lmao. I think we got it at this point.

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Posted the final version of Netorase Penalty Game #5!

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I guess, in the end...
There is something loose with their heads 💀

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Can anyone torrent the newest version please? Thank you.

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