so whats happening in the new chapters?

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whats knew in this chapter. from what I can read. she is making a video for youta again and she does all her NTR acting, you know, the same shit as before. talking about his cock is better, she is going to fall for him, and shit like that. the last 2 pages are of her being convinced into raw sex with creampie, which has already happened multiple times by now, and the guy is still trying to get her to leave her boyfriend, and she says the same shit as the first chapter. she doesn't like him at all, and she is only doing it for her boyfriend.

Sidenotes : now, some constructive criticisms. its just feels like Terasu is trying to tap into the untouched mega pool of netorase fans that have been growing in the background of the doujin community, but it feels off. after all, terasu is a netorare artist by nature. this is what he has spent his life training on, and this is the result of him trying to make something that he has not much experience in. the endings are nice for someone who does not regularly read or watch netorase media, but to be honest. that's the only thing that feels forced. i understand the idea of conflicting interests when it comes to kinks, but the problem with this one in particular is that he is seeing it differently that what netorase fans see it as. he is trying to go for the netorase idea, but just because you add, "teehee i was just acting for you". It does not make it netorase. its still very much NTR, and his best bet would be to just go with the netorare, instead of the netorase he is trying to force. Don't get me wrong. I love the idea of more netorase artist in the world. I hate NTR personally, and love netorase, but you can't just throw everything you trained yourself on, out of the window and try to do a completely different genre of media. otherwise, you end up with this kind of result. NTR with forced netorase that feels lack luster and full of unnecessary contrivances he is a great artist and could make something amazing... but forcing netorase into a NTR work like this is not it.

my bottom line is thinking, he just wanted to try to make something like netoraserare. (which in my opinion was one of the worst representations of netorase in animated media) he wanted to make something that was similar in a way. hoping that the NTR fans would like it, as well as adding those little sad endings that lack any real feel of netorase, in hopes that netorase fans would like it, just because it says it's a "netorase" doujin. if you ask me, I just say he sticks to what he is good at. its sad to admit, but you can't un-train yourself from what you spent a long time training for. that's the same reason some fighting styles aren't allowed in certain combat sports. because it's almost impossible to not act on what you have become so used to.

but i digress, if netorase is really what he is trying to go for. he would need to do a lot more studying. there are some great sources out there for this, and he is a native Japanese speaker, so he would understand the material much better. if i could come up with a list, id suggest in no particular order: ([みじいし (漫画工房)] 真実の愛 ～入門編～ "really anything by mijiishi. [F.W.ZHolic (FAN)] 高嶺の花への告白成功率はゼロの訳 [英訳] [DL版], [ファルコン115 (ふぉれすた)] 寝取らせ夫が誕生したかも. And many more. as well as RPGM and VN games. there is a lot of material he can learn on, but I doubt he will. but hopefully he sees the error of his ways and can course correct his route.

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life training?? what evidence do you have to support that? That sounds like you're just trying to be cheesy

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@bonerdragon
He's trying to say terasu is dipping his toes on the netorase genre, something he obviously has zero exp on because he spent his whole life writing johnny somali fanfics and nothing else.
This is his attempt to trick netorase readers into reading his cuckslop, sadly for him it's not really working out as much as he wants to.

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