I apologize in advance for some odd looking text placement. The speech bubbles were quite slim and I had to work around them. (In hindsight, I should have just modified them but I don't have the heart to go back and do that now).

Same goes for all the onomatopoeias. I translated the ones I could and kept most of them. First, because, while I love pain, I'm not that much of a masochist. Second, because most of it is part of the art I want to preserve it as much as possible.

Lastly, if some of the English sounds off, it's because I'm not native (and because I took some liberties cause it's fun).

Did you tag it as translated? You admitted it's a rewrite in the uploader comment.

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Yeah I did press the "Translated" option. I consider it to be a translation even if I have to modify some words. I didn't change any dialogue nor any characterization. I'll change it to rewrite if I need to tho

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English translated by Hornypanas
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The other version seems more accurate, TL-wise.

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Just checked the other one (it came out the same day, we must share a brain cell or smth). They did a great job ! We made a few different choices but I can assure you we're both very close to the original text. They just kept the "chan" and very obivous japanese style phrasing ("I'll enjoy my meal" which isn't really used in english, which is why I made a joke with "Bone Apple Tea" to fit the mood of the dude who's supposed to be weird).

Their version is WAY better on the clean-up/ caracters tho, so congrats on that !

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"MTLs are bad because they never get properly translated"
*a few moments later*
"here's two eslmonkey TLs for the same shitty doujin spaced hours apart"

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